Yeah! Finally a f-ing story were the human/alien mc's actually ends up together. So far, in alot of them, it has ending without them becoming a couple or many times she died or lately becomes a liquid. Really unsatesfying, sh!ty endings. Great to have a really great ending for once. 😊
88 I liked the story it had some meat to it. But you might want to go through the text sometime and define whether its spelled Xentauri, Centauri, or Zentauri. I also noticed various spellings for the female character- some times Jew sometimes Ju. U may want to check that to. Just to give it a little more coherence. I think its a great storyline.
You can tell (branded) AI fabrication so quickly. The repeated phrases, the same adverb use repeatedly. There is no added expression until a human actually writes something it can consume. This is not originality it's cut pieces glued together in a multitude if ways waiting for us to determine whether it's good or not. Certainly not intelligence, just fast, repetitive function. No more than any other computer...
Enjoy listening!
Zentraedi - Robotech
Centauri - Babylon 5
Zentauri - this story.
Any closer and the Universes will start merging...
what a great story. well done
Well done! Honestly one of the best short stories I've listened to lately.
Glad you enjoyed it!
In many ways, things that don't seem real can be real.
You would think that someone who had an "inside" would know how it worked! So having twins, I guess she figured out how he got inside of her!
*His.Eternal.Majesty* 🕊️ 👑
The story are getting very interesting getting a new dimension
I Think I Like The Green Alien Than The Blue.
Yeah! Finally a f-ing story were the human/alien mc's actually ends up together.
So far, in alot of them, it has ending without them becoming a couple or many times she died or lately becomes a liquid. Really unsatesfying, sh!ty endings.
Great to have a really great ending for once. 😊
88 I liked the story it had some meat to it. But you might want to go through the text sometime and define whether its spelled Xentauri, Centauri, or Zentauri. I also noticed various spellings for the female character- some times Jew sometimes Ju. U may want to check that to. Just to give it a little more coherence. I think its a great storyline.
Not overly mushy. Well done.
You can tell (branded) AI fabrication so quickly. The repeated phrases, the same adverb use repeatedly. There is no added expression until a human actually writes something it can consume.
This is not originality it's cut pieces glued together in a multitude if ways waiting for us to determine whether it's good or not. Certainly not intelligence, just fast, repetitive function. No more than any other computer...
The "transcending of boundaries" speech gets really old.
Why does this have to be some damn game?....better to deal with a reality than a game...
Haptic or holographic let's make up our mind shall we
"Rapt" attention.
"Steeling" himself.
uh well what does that usually mean lol.
well apparently not in this story.