Achilles IV | A Sci-Fi Horror Creepypasta

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    Story: Achilles IV | A Sci-Fi Horror Creepypasta
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    Hello, I am Magnetar. I reside within the Void where space and time become indistinguishable. It is here, too, where I can hear tales from all across the multiverse. Tales of horror, future technologies, AI, Aliens, cosmic horror, world-ending catastrophes, apocalyptic events, space, and more.
    So, if you're brave, join me in the Void. Listen to their screams, their pleas, and their stories.
    But remember - Astrophobes be warned
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    What is a Magnetar?
    Magnetars are some of the most mysterious of all heavenly objects and only one in ten supernovae create these dense cosmic dynamos. Out of more than 3,000 neutron stars discovered to this date, only 31 total magnetars have been confirmed, making their strange existence extremely rare.
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    Astrophobes be warned. #Scifi #creepypasta #space
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Комментарии • 116

  • @joshquivey6990
    @joshquivey6990 2 года назад +33

    ONLY Eleven security breaches?
    Sounds like a normal day at Foundation Site 19.

  • @magicpyroninja
    @magicpyroninja 2 года назад +62

    To be completely honest I don't find any creepypasta stories scary.
    It's more like I like to see what creative new things people can come up with since Hollywood is creatively bankrupt at this point

    • @bkup1332
      @bkup1332 Год назад +2

      I agree, less scary, more creative.

    • @louisbrugnoni7639
      @louisbrugnoni7639 Год назад +1

      No one gets scared but we enjoy the stories.

    • @andreamccaffrey9891
      @andreamccaffrey9891 Год назад +1

      @N why? yup ted the caver, thought to be one of, if not the first creepypasta. Really really good. There are a few others tho. The hidden webpage would definitely be one, it’s absolutely terrifying. And u can definitely find lots that aren’t necessarily “scary” but very dark and disturbing

  • @joecarr6985
    @joecarr6985 2 года назад +40

    Magnetar.... excellent Narrator , stories are gripping full of horror & wonder couple of my favourites are"We built a Gateway to a star" & Proxima Centaury is not a star" ...... Outstanding MAGNETAR.....thank you..

  • @harryrundle7897
    @harryrundle7897 2 года назад +6

    that ending was cathartic as hell

  • @magicpyroninja
    @magicpyroninja 2 года назад +6

    I think it's entirely possible that the planet landed on that just had piles of resources laying around might have just been a regular planet at one point and the expanse ate everything and left nothing but piles of inorganic material

    • @magicpyroninja
      @magicpyroninja 2 года назад +1

      And then further into the story I'm validated by the main character😂

  • @nookleer
    @nookleer Год назад +3

    Ok that story was dope. I almost wish it was longer. This would make a tense movie.

  • @warrenreid6109
    @warrenreid6109 Год назад +7

    Great story. Had me captivated all the way through. So glad I found this channel.

  • @BearPawification
    @BearPawification 2 года назад +2

    I love your branded intro. It reminds me of old school Toonami.

  • @ma.carmensarmiento7661
    @ma.carmensarmiento7661 9 месяцев назад +2

    The story reminded me of Alien. I was rooting for this guy, like I did for Ripley.

  • @flappy7373
    @flappy7373 2 года назад +13

    the background magic is really nicely, smoothly done. i barely notice it's there, it just kinf of floats in my awareness somewhere, making the tension/action/fear moments feel more.. visceral or engrossing maybe.

  • @windegoeq2
    @windegoeq2 2 года назад +5

    Can't wait to listen and nap

  • @SamiKotiranta
    @SamiKotiranta 2 года назад +6

    Friday and Magnetar... Oh the absolute bliss😍🙏👍

  • @Leon187.
    @Leon187. 2 года назад +6

    thanks for this long creepypasta

  • @thomaslowe4774
    @thomaslowe4774 2 года назад +2

    If only the Goonies were on the ship! This brave man could have lived!

  • @warrencromwell4282
    @warrencromwell4282 9 месяцев назад +3

    Outstanding!!!
    Really dug it!!
    Captivating!!!!
    More, please.......

  • @evazauner
    @evazauner 2 года назад +12

    when i hear a new story from magnetar, i automatically give a thumbs up!

  • @dchardinaycole5944
    @dchardinaycole5944 Год назад +3

    I’m so happy I found this guy❤ I have so much to binge listen

    • @elypowell6797
      @elypowell6797 5 месяцев назад

      Yeah he is good but check out Viidith22 when you get bored then check out Dr Creepen. Lighthouse Horror is really good too.

  • @johansomeone1948
    @johansomeone1948 Год назад +2

    That nano tec sounds exactly like a alien nanobot weapon.

  • @mastertek383
    @mastertek383 2 года назад +3

    MAGNETAR!!! My man.

  • @nevasoba5953
    @nevasoba5953 2 года назад +8

    This is a well written story, and ur are reading it superbly.

  • @morticialechatnoir6884
    @morticialechatnoir6884 2 года назад +6

    Wow, you have the best voice for this kind of stuff!

  • @ronway7280
    @ronway7280 2 года назад +2

    Your simmering rage covered with complete condescension at the end was magnificent!

  • @tknight6132
    @tknight6132 2 года назад +3

    1am should be sleeping but I have to know the story ends love it 👍

  • @cecilbennett2549
    @cecilbennett2549 2 года назад +3

    Yess! Two days in a row!! I'm stoked!!

  • @fredericramstedt545
    @fredericramstedt545 2 года назад +5

    Magnetar, you incredible bastard, this was yet another fantastic narration. Thank you!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      So happy you enjoyed it! 👾

    • @elypowell6797
      @elypowell6797 5 месяцев назад

      Magnetar, you're a good ole cock knocker! Love the stories.

  • @MrsCaranAmy
    @MrsCaranAmy 2 года назад +3

    Just a marvelous space travel story. Great plot and ending. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend.

  • @friendlyman9032
    @friendlyman9032 2 года назад +2

    This was beyond great...just so good..hit it out of the park.

  • @legendteller4893
    @legendteller4893 2 года назад +4

    You killed this, dude. Loved this story ;D

  • @jessem.burnside8584
    @jessem.burnside8584 2 года назад +2

    Wow. Excellent Sci-fi.

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Год назад +2

    Hey Brother thanks for another awesome narration. Hope your weekend is going well and good

  • @chadp363
    @chadp363 2 года назад +4

    Yyeeeeeeee. I like this one a lot. Thank you sir

  • @kevincaruthers5412
    @kevincaruthers5412 2 года назад +2

    Pretty good.
    Thanks for sharing!

  • @grimreaper6557
    @grimreaper6557 2 года назад +4

    Nice act of Defiance. Great story and thank you Magnetar for posting it =)

  • @robertgoode6713
    @robertgoode6713 2 года назад +2

    Reminds me of the last time we visited lv-426.

  • @Krigarkaj
    @Krigarkaj 2 года назад +3

    Whoopity whoop! 😅 Good thing to wake up to.

  • @zyrxom
    @zyrxom Год назад +2

    For reason I think this Jericho company has already been taken over by AI

  • @TheNerdCorporation
    @TheNerdCorporation 2 года назад +2

    Great job as always magnetar! 👌😀👍🏻 and thanks for not announcing something at the end 😘 keep up the good work! And btw i was wondering if you know about if there are alot of good deep ocean horror stories that has never been narrated? Cause those and stories like this are the best ones 😏

  • @jonny_gage
    @jonny_gage 2 года назад +5

    I love sci Fi horror stories!

  • @mjskinner9288
    @mjskinner9288 2 года назад +3

    Thanks for blessing us with another story. You and yours stay safe👾 🤙

  • @richardhamilton9223
    @richardhamilton9223 Год назад +2

    This channel go hard. Magnetar you different in a way thats needed Salute my brother 💫👑💪🏾💯

  • @Spectre1776
    @Spectre1776 2 года назад +12

    Magnetar I've been really enjoying your take on the Breach series but this is one of my other favorites can't wait to listen to it man 👽

    • @lexecomplexe4083
      @lexecomplexe4083 2 года назад +1

      Wait this is a series? :O

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +1

      @@lexecomplexe4083I think it's 12 parts

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Achilles isn't a series, Breach is @Lexe

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 2 года назад +2

      @@MagnetarYT dude Achilles was an awesome story

  • @SHADOWXIXX
    @SHADOWXIXX 2 года назад +3

    Jericho a subsidiary of Weyland Yutani

  • @srmj71
    @srmj71 2 года назад +3

    Awesome! Again!

  • @johnfromdownunder.4339
    @johnfromdownunder.4339 2 года назад +3

    Awesome 👽👽👽

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y 2 года назад +2

    Great narration excellence story🔥🔥

  • @squidlipssupreme168
    @squidlipssupreme168 11 месяцев назад +2

    Really cool story

  • @luckyrobinshomestead
    @luckyrobinshomestead 2 года назад +4

    I heard this one before a long time ago, but I think you did a better job with it, because last time I thought it was like the story-teller couldn't get into it. I never feel that way when you read them. Thanks for the hard work you put into these.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Glad you enjoy, thank you for your support 👾

  • @damirserbanovic
    @damirserbanovic 7 месяцев назад +1

    this was amazing!

  • @nielsjensen9771
    @nielsjensen9771 2 года назад +3

    Awsome story

  • @0therun1t21
    @0therun1t21 2 года назад +2

    Jumped right on this!

  • @novaremix3412
    @novaremix3412 2 года назад +2

    thanks! this video helped me finish my project that due tomorrow:D

  • @bubbafrump74
    @bubbafrump74 Год назад +2

    Ensign = en-sin...sorry. it just sounds really Goofy if you've been in the military, and chances are, alot of your listeners are vet's. I love your narration, and I'm not trying to be a jerk at all. Thank you very much for the story's. You're my favorite of all of all the creepy 's on RUclips. You do the most scifi too. Thanks again.

  • @adamfox1669
    @adamfox1669 2 года назад +2

    Excellent!

  • @susanhorn6401
    @susanhorn6401 2 года назад +1

    Outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @0therun1t21
    @0therun1t21 2 года назад +3

    At least they're not Tribbles.

  • @dchardinaycole5944
    @dchardinaycole5944 Год назад +1

    Thanks!

  • @justindunlap1235
    @justindunlap1235 2 года назад +2

    dang that was a great story, and some top notch narration as well.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      Thanks for your support 👾

    • @justindunlap1235
      @justindunlap1235 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT no thank you. I just took a peek at your library and I think I may have found my new favorite creepypasta channel.

  • @WALKUREX
    @WALKUREX 2 года назад +2

    Love it

  • @lastofthe4horsemen279
    @lastofthe4horsemen279 2 года назад +2

    Love stories told from the logs of a crew member and this one didn't disappoint. Great job Magnetar.

  • @cherryclarke4704
    @cherryclarke4704 2 года назад +2

    SUPERB 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @indigobreeze2138
    @indigobreeze2138 Год назад +2

    Wow, honestly too realistic as far as distpoian corporate protocols are concerned.

  • @kphizzle9569
    @kphizzle9569 2 года назад

    You're on fire lately.

  • @johnhoon7069
    @johnhoon7069 2 года назад +1

    Yeah that could be any large corporation in the world and some countries that I can think of

  • @michaelsurber2923
    @michaelsurber2923 2 года назад +1

    I was just waiting for Samus Aran to show up and save the day

  • @evolution031680
    @evolution031680 2 года назад +2

    Gelatinous Cubes are always a pain in the ass.

  • @jackabsolute5525
    @jackabsolute5525 2 года назад +1

    Reminds me of the movie Life. But about 10x better.

  • @pelgervampireduck
    @pelgervampireduck 9 месяцев назад +1

    I'm confused by the ending. was the ship and the expansion thing destroyed or not?. maybe I should listen to it again.

  • @henriqueribeiro8167
    @henriqueribeiro8167 Год назад +2

    Cargo comes first and the life of the Crew second for the corporate overlords? Is this based on a real story or what?

  • @johansomeone1948
    @johansomeone1948 Год назад +1

    Right the cargo came first indeed, right in your corporate faces.

  • @ETOILEPHANTOME
    @ETOILEPHANTOME 2 года назад +1

    That’s a dumb computer. It shut the entire crew with a deadly organism, has the video footage of their deaths and no more interactions of any kind with them and still doesn’t understand that they’re gone.
    18:49 what happened to priority to the mission?

  • @lokilockness2970
    @lokilockness2970 2 года назад +2

    So far Amazing can you do the Alian books

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      I have been thinking about that, but I don't think they're in the public domain.
      With that said ... I could risk it for my fans? 😅

    • @lokilockness2970
      @lokilockness2970 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT risk it for the biscuit as we say in Australia. Much love this sorry is epic it’s nearly finished and I’m so sad about the guy :(

    • @lokilockness2970
      @lokilockness2970 2 года назад

      @@MagnetarYT just finished it I like to think the ship is gone

  • @stubones
    @stubones 2 года назад +2

    Excellent story but I felt end was a bit of a let down.

  • @jystme2437
    @jystme2437 2 года назад +1

    Of course its a great story and narration ❤but I've been looking for I and 2 and 3 🙄 there is none why use 1V so cruel 😌🦋

  • @kzrlgo
    @kzrlgo Год назад +1

    10/10 reading. 4/10 writing.

  • @mrdeer111
    @mrdeer111 2 года назад +1

    💖💖💖

  • @CNinjaa
    @CNinjaa 7 месяцев назад +1

    All your base are belong to us 👽

  • @BTSensei
    @BTSensei 11 месяцев назад +1

    ⭐🙂👍

  • @BlueSkyCountry
    @BlueSkyCountry 2 года назад +1

    There are no words in the English language that I absolutely loathe more and look upon with nothing but scorn, than "wish", "hope", "positivity", and "positive vibes". These are words only uttered from the mouths of lazy and incompetent idiots. Awesome story by the way. Military and space sci-fi is among my favorite genres.

  • @jimmyshrimbe9361
    @jimmyshrimbe9361 2 года назад +1

    ☀️🌚☀️

  • @user-jl8mp6lg4i
    @user-jl8mp6lg4i 6 месяцев назад

    Friendly ?

  • @godemperorletoatreidesii7457
    @godemperorletoatreidesii7457 2 года назад

    Didn't Dr creepin do this story too lol

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      Damn, I didn't realize stories could be read by only one person.
      Lol, fr tho, so what?

    • @godemperorletoatreidesii7457
      @godemperorletoatreidesii7457 2 года назад +1

      @@MagnetarYT it's wasn't criticism just a comment for the sake of the algorithm 😂

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад +1

      😅😜

  • @chocolatefrenzieya
    @chocolatefrenzieya 2 года назад

    Double check pronunciation of "ensign". Or watch some Star Trek. :)
    Also check "aberrant".

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  2 года назад

      There is the American and English version of ensign. So. 🤷🏽‍♂️

  • @Michael_Breiter
    @Michael_Breiter 2 года назад

    What moronic company gives such low priority to the TECH SPECIALIST? Is Jericho a subsidiary of Weyland-Yutani? The UAC?

  • @privateperson5054
    @privateperson5054 2 года назад +1

    Yea ... Another story without an ending. Who is going to give me the weak ass excuse that its better and leaves things up to my imagination ? Play a table top RPG when you want that.
    Lazy author just not finishing the story. This style was cool in the 30s 40s and 50s but just like smoking we know better now.

    • @Jester123ish
      @Jester123ish Год назад +1

      Re-listen to the very first intro, it gives you a pretty good clue how things go.

    • @privateperson5054
      @privateperson5054 Год назад +1

      @@Jester123ish
      Things are "left to the imagination" a good indication is not good enough its just lazy.

    • @jaredbryant8297
      @jaredbryant8297 Год назад

      @@privateperson5054 grow up

    • @privateperson5054
      @privateperson5054 Год назад

      @@jaredbryant8297
      How is that juvenile, exactly ?
      You claim to know so lets hear this tid bit of "wisdom" we all know will be lame. But go ahead basement troll share your marvelous insight.

  • @garywhite3209
    @garywhite3209 Год назад +1

    That was good. 👏

  • @westcruz3878
    @westcruz3878 9 месяцев назад +1

    No death benefits for my mom but your mother dead from cancer 😬 great story