Don't Be Silly Billy - Thomas and Friends Rewritten
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- Опубликовано: 19 окт 2024
- When Billy, a new engine, comes to the island, Percy has to do his best to keep Billy out of trouble!
Engine Roll Call by Headmaster Hastings!
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I love that Billy's made into more of a fool here! He deems himself an "important engine", which would make sense when Gordon says it, but he's only a tank engine, and the same size as Percy at that!
So much better than the original episode! Billy seems so much more of a character in this. Great job!
Thanks mate!
@@BrendamProductions I love how Billy is basically a standard-gauge version of Sir Handel.
This is well-rewritten, given of which Thomas doesn't always need to be in the spotlight 24/7. Glad to see the dynamic between Percy and Billy for a change.
Duck could’ve suited this Episode aswell I think but yeah.
And the gimmicky episodes can be given to the roads because the stories for Sodor’s roadways are one-offs themselves.
Thank god I didn’t have to hear “YOU are bossy engine!” even once
This was so much better than the actual episode. Your Billy voice reminds me of Spud from Bob the Builder in some parts.
Thanks! Also I think spud was part of the inspiration for that voice haha!
It reminded me of Nigel Thornberry imo
Pity they never gave this character a second chance in the actual series. Probably would've been fun to hear Rob Rackstraw's (the voice of Spud and many other Bob the Builder characters) performance as a Thomas character.
@@retrogamelover2012 didn't he voice James?
He reminds me of a snorty voice Matt Rose
Man I love the little middle finger to Charlie at the end there
This felt less like a rewrite and more like an original story with Billy, but even so it was fantastic!
Thomas Blue The main thing I focused on this one is that Billy is an arse who won’t do what anyone tells him. Then the original story didn’t really have much to it so I made a new one focusing on his character haha!
@@BrendamProductions It's very creative, and I like it immensely!
@@Thomas__Blue aww thanks!
By now we don’t even need Mattel’s pile of crap, we need this!
Aww thanks!
Maybe if the reboot comes out
Maybe adapt and fix the episodes?
@@BrendamProductions I think the intro and roll call is a lot better than the one from season 22
This was a good rewrite. Better than the original by a long shot. I liked how you foreshadowed Charlie at the end.
GodOfSmash 64 thanks!
Speaking of Charlie, I’m making a rewrite of Charlie and Eddie
@@RWSfan2024 oooo?
We don’t need a rewrite of Play Time, do we?
That already exists
"They hoped they'd never have to meet any brother of Billy's"
F
This was super and it was very different to the original one. I liked your voice of Billy, it really did work for him. Well done on this video 👍.
Thank you!
He's even more self-absorbed than Gordon! Imagine if those two happened to be in the same shed together, the insults would be hilarious!
Throw in James, and we'd pretty much have a show-off version of the three stooges, here.
What about Spencer?
And just add Murdoch and it'd be absolute chaos
@@akintolashekoni4600 With a little Duck seasoned on top.
This is so much better than the original episode, Billy is actully hillarious, and I can tell what the moral of this is. I also love the cliffhanger for Charlie at the end of the episode.
THIS, and you're rewrite of "Edward Strikes Out" are favorite videos on your channel!
Ayy glad ya like em there will def be more to come!
Hey could you rewrite Edwards new sheds
@@BrendamProductions NICE NOT HORRIBLE! GOOD NOT BAD!
Now this is how Billy should have been portrayed!
Thanks!
6:22 Oh, Thomas & Percy... if ONLY you knew...
Fantastic rewrite! Billy is a much more "likeable" character now that he doesn't berate the main character 4 or 5 times in a row. Feels a bit odd giving him the pompous, snobby personality, but it's certainly loads better than his actual personality.
This remake certainly does have Billy being as pompous as Gordon, if not Spencer. Could've sworn he sounded posh. ;)
Haha perhaps
@@BrendamProductions I'm thinking whether I should do a rewrite of this myself. See if Duck or Oliver could be a lot more assertive towards Billy than Thomas was, show him some Great Western discipline. 😜
Really nice job on this! I love the part where Billy apologizes to Percy for being bratty. 😄
Thank you!
@@BrendamProductions Anytime! 😊
Much better then the actual episode
Thanks!
Brendam Productions you’re welcome!
Hey, I’m the spirit of rewriting episodes, the Unlucky Tug has recommended a way to fix BWBA. I recommend watching his video and seeing if a giant colab is possible to fix the series and do well by the fandom which has supported Thomas and Friends for 75 years. An excellent rewrite episode, and a great thing you did by using Headmaster Hastings’ theme in this episode.
Heyo, I saw his vid and liked it although I think whenever I get to rewriting BWBA I'm gonna use my own ideas so that the videos/ episodes I make with it are personal to me and my channel!
Brendam Productions No, definitely, do your thing, I was thinking along the lines of a huge colab with all the other channels like Thomas1Edward2Henry3, Kanefan701, EnterprisingEngines93, and Victor Tanzig, life a colab to end all colabs in order for the entire fandom to get involved and show support for 75 years of Thomas.
@@gallantcavalier3306 Getting that many people involved sounds a little impossible to me haha I think it's better if everyone does their own version of what the franchise (books, tvs, ect) means to them on their own channel. We all have our strengths and weaknesses and seeing multiple people working on their content from their different backgrounds and experiences is more fun to watch to me. That being said I'd be down to collaborate with others but I'm usually too busy wrapped up in my own stuff to ask myself haha!
Brendam Productions That’s fair reasoning, and that would be a good idea as well. I guess we’ll see what the future holds and what happens.
I am currently in the process of rewriting BWBA based on tug's ideas.
I think what Billy was trying to accomplish was independence, He just wants to prove to everyone that he can do everything by himself.
That was a great rewritten episode when Billy gets more attention than the original episode when Billy tells Thomas to stop telling Billy what to do. Glad Percy is helping Billy out on the railway. You did a great job on that rewritten episode, keep up the good work on more rewritten episodes from the original
Now THIS is how i would rewrite the original episode, very well done!
A really good story indeed, I think it might actually be better than the actual episode, makes more sense. Also, I do still like the HiT era song but am I the only one who wishes that they should have also included Duck, the Twins, and Oliver as well??
I thoroughly enjoyed this and your Billy Voice was Marvelous- I think the best part about this was that it lacked Thomas and I really like the animated Pencil(Nice touch there
Thank you!
Watching the original episode and how god-awful it was, I had my doubts about the rewrite, but you actually did a great job with it.
Thanks!
Yeah.. I mean, if I was in Thomas' situation, I would've made sure that Billy couldn't steam off straight away by pretty much switching lines and stopping in front of him , thereby pretty much sandwich-ing him with the trucks.
That, and with the whole "bossy engine" thing, I'd reply with; "Well, if you hate taking orders from someone who likely knows what they're doing so much, then why did you come to this railway in the first place?"
Brilliant work. Im very glad I got to score this awesome rewrite!
Thanks I'm glad I got to work with you on this video!
The one dislike is from Billy.
It's at 6 dislikes now - perhaps the other dislikes are from some of the troublesome trucks.
Now 11
Maybe Mattel Employees Disliked It.
_Much_ better than the original episode. This feels like it'd fit right in with the classics!!! Thanks for making and uploading this gem to the internet, I love watching these custom thomas episodes. 😁
Thank you!
Billy's unused shocked face at 4:46
This was so much better than the original episode!
Thanks!
That was great, and nice little reference to Charlie at the end
Thanks!
PLEASE rewrite Thomas and the New Engine, Mighty Mac, Molly's Special Special, and all the other New Series character introductory episodes!
I did mention that Mighty Mac could've had something like one of the other Skarloey engines, kind of be there as like a guide of the railway, as well being the one to break-up their arguing in places. Could've even been a bit of a throwback to Bulldog in places.
As for Emily's Rubbish, Brendam Productions did say that he was kind of not as familiar with that episode, as with others, so I guess that's something for him to see for himself. Though, I did mention that he should probably keep the peppy, cheerful, "don't care what others think of me" kind of attitude that Whiff seemed to have in the episode, and have that be taken more advantage of, regqrding exchqnges with Emily and all that.
I like thomas & the New engine
@@annanowak2868 I did to be honest until I realised that like half the characters were out of character I think, I don’t like that Episode anymore personally but yeah.
This looks WAY better than the actual episode! If only Percy had Thomas’ role.
Thank you!
This shows that Billy's personality is pompous. This is better than a short, "stop telling me what to do. Nice rewrite
This should be Much better than the original episode
This was amazing far better than the actual episode
Alright percy. You saved billy.
Excellent job! And I agree with the majority of the comments here that this IS better than the actual Season 11 episode!
Thanks!
@@BrendamProductions You're welcome! ;)
Excellent. You transformed another mean-spirited episode into an enjoyable one!
Swag-A- Dellaman thank you!
Honestly, the episode in question was more frustrating, if anything.
and once again it is proved that fans can make better episodes than Mattel
Aww thanks!
this is a great rewritten episode
Thank you!
Billy sound like spud from bob the builder lol
Great work, This is miles better than the original.
I can only imagine how hard it will be to fix charlie
I meeaaan he'll prob be easier than Charlie
I can.
B I L L & B E N
If Sharon Miller was never hired...
Dude, since these are like pure masterpieces, you should really make more!
Thank you I certainly do plan on making more. For now they’re mainly gonna be sub goals until I get to the hit era with my remakes :)
@@BrendamProductions good luck
Well then again if Sharon Miller wasn't hired we wouldn't have gotten the Andrew Brenner Era, plus the fact that after Miller stopped writing for the show she became a voice director from Seasons 17-24. And she was also the voice actress for Queen Elizabeth in Thomas and the Royal Engine.
If Sharon Miller was never a writer
So we turned billy into a snob, I guess his teeth are just the London look
Amazing Rewrite. Much better than the original episode.
Idea for another rewrite: Emily in the Middle
Changes: Replace Donald and Douglas with Bill and Ben
I feel bad for Thomas and Percy not knowing who Billy was talking about
Salty sounds like Hagrid and Billy like Snape
This is amazing and really gives Billy an edge, but you could have said Percy knew the line like the back of his buffer, not his hand.
Well done you even improved engine roll call
logan wirth Id say more of the credit for that goes to headmaster Hastings haha
In this version Billy has the personality of a tender engine like Spenser posh pompous ego engine
This is like a classic series
No classic series episode
@@sarahgammon869 thank you!
I like this Billy than the actual Billy in the show
What does it say that a fan of a show can write a better episode then the ACTUAL writing staff of said show?
I like the original Episode of this personally but I do think your Episode was a lot better and yeah, it’s a lot better to see how Thomas doesn’t always have the staring role all the time, Duck should’ve had more staring roles aswell, in my Rewrite Series of this Episode, Duck will have the main role and play a trick on Billy.
Thanks and good luck on your own rewrite of it!
@@BrendamProductions you’re welcome and thanks.
@@BrendamProductions actually, I’m thinking differently now. Fergus will have Thomas’ role in my Rewrite Series of this Episode because I think it would be good rivalry between Fergus and Billy if Fergus was always saying do it right and if Billy always told Fergus to stop telling him what to do.
Fantastic episode: 100/100 (A+)
Please do more of these! They are brilliant!
Thank you! I certainly have plans to do more but until I get to the hit era series they're mostly done as thank you for subs thing. So the next will be at 5k!
@@BrendamProductions okay!
Excellent work Harry! This is better than the original! :D
Thanks!
Very cool! I kinda wanted to rewrite the episode and replace thomas' role with gordon
And this would have been Oliver's only appearance in season 11.
You know, if you ever adapted other character introduction episodes from seasons 8-16, like Emily's Rubbish, I'd suggest keeping the peppy, cheerful, sort of "I couldn't care less about what others think" attitude of Whiff, and maybe use that as a means for some interesting character interactions, regarding how Whiff puts up with others making fun of him, and him passing a few bits of advice over to Emily.
Probably would at least made the episode a bit tighter in its writing, and probably give a more wholesome feel towards the two major characters in the plot, too.
I'm not sure with a lot of these what direction I want to go with them until I revisit them. I'm planning on rewriting any episode I think is a bit naf but I can't remember a lot of the hit era episodes so for now we're both in for a surprise to see what I'll do with whiff :D
@@BrendamProductions Well, I'm sure Mighty Mac might be a good contender as well, if you're not able to do Whiff.
Who knows?
Maybe it might give other Skarloey engines some more purpose to the story, as kind of like the one having to break-up their bickering, in places?
Maybe even a slight Bulldog homage in places, too.
@@BrendamProductions You know... Looking back at a few episodes and themes from the classic series, I could even imagine a scene from Pop goes the Diesel also potentially being an interesting call-back, during a rewrite of Mighty Mac where an argument between the two ends turns so sour, that it actually ends up leading to them admaging themselves by accident.
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I mean, listening to this made me think of a possible scene, where one end was trying to get on with work, but the other end protested their plans of doing so, by slipping on their own brakes, causing the other to keep straining in order to try in vain to drag their other half along with them.
And then, whilst the driver and fireman were figuring out how to get the brakes unstuck through some fiddling of the controls, the engine suddenly lurches foreward, knocking the two of them off their feet, and causing one of them to accidentally yank off a part of the controls, whilst desperately finding something to grab onto, and end up rendering both ends of the engine unable to move, causing them to spend the rest of the day sitting in the sheds, whilst the inspectors look as to what broke, and the thin controller gives them a stern talking to, and how this may upset their chances of actually being able to work on this railway again.
(While Billy Was In The Siding He Heard Someone Coming)
Billy:Who….Who’s There?
Zira:Hi There You Must Be Billy.
Billy:Yes I Am.
Zira:My Name Is Zira,Heard Your First Day Didn’t Go Well.
Billy:When Sir Topham Hatt,Knows I Misbehaved I’ll Be In Big Trouble.(Starts Crying)
Zira:I Know A Place Where,He’ll Never Find You.
Billy:Where?
Zira:Let Me Show You.
(Then Lady Arrived,She Coupled Up To Billy,Zira Climbed In,They Left The Coal Yard And Went To Zira’s World)
Zira:You’ll Be Safe Here Billy.
(Billy Was Happy And That Moment Forward Billy Lived There With Me And My Siblings For Good)
How can Billy think he’s the most important engine when he’s even smaller than Percy and that he was only pulling a goods train? He even said so when Oliver passed by with a much more important passenger train lol.
Because Billy was full of his own self importance as he was brought to the island and figured that made him a big shot :)
Brendam Productions Wouldn’t Billy know from experience that bigger engines like Gordon and Henry have more important positions than smaller engines like him?
@@jaanshersaeed4541 Billy is new to the island and has never seen either engine. Hence why he doesn't know about the express ect
Brendam Productions But shouldn’t he have seen express and heavy goods engines at some point on the Mainland, or is he just newly built?
@@jaanshersaeed4541 I think the lines I was going with was Billy is use to seeing big engines everywhere so when he sees a lot of small engines at the docks he figures that on sodor he's really important.
Percy would have had a leading role in the actual season 11 episode instead of Thomas.
Thomas: Aw Shit, here we go again
And the Charlie came along.
Excellent Job!
Ta!
Its Official, This Is The Canon Version In The Gojiverse (My TTTE AU), Btw In My AU it takes place in 1977
This is still 3 strikes, but it is still A LOT BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL
You should do a rewrite of Thomas and the New Engine.
I agree, that would be a good idea if a Rewrite of Thomas and the New Engine was done but yeah.
5:00. The brake coach is backwards... I don't know if this counts as a production error or not, given the model series often made this mistake.
Yah, that was so much better.
Thx
WAY more tolerable than the original episode.
Only tolerable? Oof what do you think would have improved it?
@@BrendamProductions If the original version of the episode did have Billy be disciplined by Sir Topham Hatt for disobeying orders, it would have been fine in my opinion.
BTW, the voice given for Billy on how the episode could have been rewritten does suit him. ;)
@@BriceInkling138 Ah fair and thank you!
@@BriceInkling138 Or heck, why didn't Thomas think to just switch tracks, so that Billy ended up being sandwiched between him and the trucks he was sent to take?
Or when he kept ragging on about how bossy Thomas was, I'm surprised Thomas didn't just loose his patience and just reply with something like "Well, if you hate being told what to do so much, by someone who knows their way around the island, then why did you come to this railway in the first place!?"
@@retrogamelover2012 Well, he was understandably upset with Billy for how selfish Billy is.
Don't Be Silly Billy (Done Right)
I Love Billy, i don't understand why everyone consider him as the worst character from the franchise
He's just really annoying and doesn't have any good traits to balance that out
@BrendamProductions very good mate 👌
Bloody brilliant
Ta!
Where’d you find the Billy model?
Very good job too
Well sorry Thomas and Percy but Charlie's coming
Really enjoyed these rewrites! Can you do Day of the Diesels or any of the BWUBAH episodes
Those are certainly things I will do in the future but as of at the moment I’m more looking at doing them chronologically also I’m glad you’ve enjoyed these!
@@BrendamProductions can you maybe do a Thomas & The Magic Railroad Rewrite aswell at some point in the future please?
@@Sam_Brunt I have been collecting ideas about how I would rewrite TATMR for a while now. I've looked at all versions of the film and will be combining and rewriting these for the film. It might even be the next film I begin to concentrate on once Railway Dysfunctions is out! However I don't think it will have the word Rewritten in its title and will just be Thomas and the Magic Railroad (although based on my ideas I might change the name).
@@BrendamProductions oh right nice I see yeah, so it’s gonna be a little bit of a combination of everyone’s Rewrite’s so far sort of, nice I see that makes sense, fair enough thanks yeah so you might change the name of the Movie, I see.
@@Sam_Brunt Not rewrites just the different cuts. So like old drafts of the films screpts ect. Also yeah I might depending on which ideas I go with :)
This was awesome great job
Thanks!
Beautiful just beautiful
This is my favorite Mighty Mac sorry 😞
@@scaryfun200 mighty mac sorry?
Thanks!
Mighty Mac likes the episode sorry
6:14 Billy mentioned Charlie
You really need to rewrite more hit era episodes
This video is a big improvement on the original
Billy Schmilly
6:15 They Foreshadowed Charlie
Fabulous rewrite
EXCELLENT!
Thanks!
In my version I used Edward as the main character instead of Thomas
I feel that if Billy was reintroduced, he could make a great comedy duo with Phillip, annoying the boxcab who annoys most of the audience. Could allow for both of them to grow as characters.
Oh god that might be enough to kill me!
He means what is rerided personality
Not everyone hate Phillip unlike Billy there's only one Billy fan and that is Billy 123
It a great story for a character that fan members hates. I got a video idea for you. A backstory for Murdoch. Like why do he don’t like loud Noises, and he is painted Orange.
Hes painted orange? That's a very specific colour haha although Id prob just use the sodor workshops one. But that idea does sound interesting! And since I have an origins thing planned I'll be sure to add that to the list of characters to do one for
Brendam Productions thanks. I got a theory about Murdoch. He have PTSD form a Sabotage on the main land.
TenShine1 Productions made an episode where Murdoch was saved from scrap or something and arrived on the Island of Sodor. He scoffed at Henry, James and Diesel before taking a long goods train up Gordon's Hill. When he stalled Henry had to help him up by pushing from behind.
Evan Clarke can you send me the link
@@gamerfan8445 ruclips.net/video/dHSt5ZmjRZY/видео.html
Very okay
Fantastic Job!
thanks!
Charlie is Billy's brother. So charlie might be worse.
I like this billy because he's more a character I hate the official billy
Billy is still kinda a jerk. This is why he never appeared in another episode (besides him only being made for toys).