A husband's journey Part 2, reddit story, audio story

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  • Опубликовано: 25 окт 2024

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  • @LostLoveChronicles
    @LostLoveChronicles  4 месяца назад +4

    part-1, ruclips.net/video/ESNXmIEAgBI/видео.html

  • @tangotango256
    @tangotango256 4 месяца назад +6

    Wow 6 hours !!! What a long eventful twist of situations!! Great ending
    As well 😊

  • @elizabethbottroff1218
    @elizabethbottroff1218 5 месяцев назад +18

    She cheated on her long-time boyfriend that was technically her fiance. She was in a long distance relationship without telling anyone in the office in France. He didn't know anything about this until after she had jumped into bed with him, her boss, and was already planning to leave to go back to that guy. And she didn't leave that guy, she got dropped by him. How on Earth does this guy think that the gal is a good option for a partner?🤦‍♀️

    • @Rune-Thorne
      @Rune-Thorne 5 месяцев назад +2

      She's Scandinavian, very different outlook on dating and fidelity over there. I spent 20 years in Germany, but I was married in Denmark, which is the vegas of Europe when it comes to marriage, but if you want your partner to be exclusive you really have to vocalize it, because they don't start getting serious about marriage until they're 30+. I loved my time over there, but they looked at me as a prude because of my outlook on sex and fidelity before being engaged, and some even for sexual displays in public that would never have flown. You would really have to live there to understand, but it is so different than what you experience in New York and New York is fairly international and flexible.

    • @blacksunday4231
      @blacksunday4231 4 месяца назад +1

      ​@Rune-Thorne so then these two sound pretty incompatible.

    • @sonny0888
      @sonny0888 4 месяца назад +4

      Did you expect better character judgement from a man who falls for the best friend of his psychotic wife and his previous sworn enemy?

    • @Rune-Thorne
      @Rune-Thorne 4 месяца назад

      @@blacksunday4231 I would say that marrying a European depends a lot on where your politics lay if you're American, but in no way are the 2 cultures the same, or even similar enough that you don't have to work extremely hard to reach compromise and understanding...that being said, the sex was fucking amazing.

  • @stevebowman421
    @stevebowman421 5 месяцев назад +21

    Hmmm so this guy is a VP? Guess you don’t need to be too bright.

    • @tangotango256
      @tangotango256 4 месяца назад

      I've met VPs some dumber than a bag of hammers, in saying that the author had to seem realistic as to the perview of the main character Joe being he was not a cop and the ability to describe Bernie as close to a real NYC cop his demeanor, situation and loss of his marriage ... besides the Albany Hospital confrontation in the way he illegally cuffed and incarcerated Joe for stepping on his toes in their power struggle .... Long story short is was well thought out imho and I enjoyed the story till the end 😊

    • @joeyjones1271
      @joeyjones1271 4 месяца назад

      What does being a VP have anything to do with what he is going through? He got the Vp position because he is good at his job.

    • @robinkelly1770
      @robinkelly1770 3 месяца назад

      It's money. All it takes is greed and crùelty

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +11

    As a left leg amputee myself, I know the emotions Amber is going through, it's not a fun thing being on your own, but you learn to deal with it 😞

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +13

    Aaahh, Sheila is showing her evilness from the get go 😊

    • @bratty1851
      @bratty1851 5 месяцев назад +1

      OMG pure EVIL 😈

  • @computermariom
    @computermariom 4 месяца назад +8

    Plot has more holes than a block of swiss cheese...

    • @DeathclawJedi
      @DeathclawJedi 4 месяца назад +1

      I am very disappointed with this and it's part 1 video. Overly convoluted writing with nonsensical plot twists and surprises that went nowhere and made little to no sense. The wife is about the only believable character Batcrap crazy from start to finish. (oh I know she had a slight grow up moment before she died but she was still a nutter) The Girlfriend/ best friend was so here there and everywhere in her personality traits that believing anything about her defied my logical capacity for connecting with the character. Plot at the start was simple dumb best friend hates Joe dumb best friend falsely accuses Joe and gets the ball rolling on Crazy wife's actions.
      Crazy wife doesn't dial it to 11 she dials it from 11 to 25 with her "revenge". Then dials it down to 17 when she finds out she is wrong. That part I understood.
      Heartbroken angry and confused Joe moves to France starts to rebuild...... and then the story just goes Wonky with extra unnecessary characters plot twist after plot twist ad infinitum. Culminating with a revenge plot on best friend by jilted boyfriend that ... Included Crazy wife who not only Saw Crazy boyfriend from her car window in his car as it sped by her but he saw and recognized her too? Pull the other Leg! Oh and he is associated with Terrorists too. Jebus Tryhard in a Pick nick basket! I am not mad with the chnl I know they are trying but this whole story just felt so forced. Take a holiday and come back out swinging LCC I know ya got better in y'all.

    • @stormtrooper1972
      @stormtrooper1972 4 месяца назад +1

      At least holes in swiss cheese makes sense.

    • @RaizelSX
      @RaizelSX 4 месяца назад +2

      It's insane how much details this story has only to basically miss important point smh

    • @yzskick
      @yzskick 3 месяца назад

      @@DeathclawJedi i agree its was all over the place and alot had no reason to happen when they first mentioned gary i had to think if he was ever mentioned before that point but i did understand about ambers change she almost died and realised she didnt like being who she was that truly can happen to people who come close to dying they think of their life and if they were happy and alot do change drastically so that was fine for me. The whole Joe being the prime suspect for shielas death (or just suspect) was just batsh*t crazy they stated earlier they put an officer outside both shiela and ambers rooms so how did it become Joe being a suspect they would have known he hadnt been there for days since his last (and only 2nd) visit that made no sense just a novice authors attempt to create drama. Then the terrorists part was completely unnecessary once again a novice author inclusion to facilitate excess drama.
      BTW LLC doesnt write these stories and most if not all come from a website called literotica (loving wives category) ive managed to find a few by searching, like another story where main character is called Tommy Boy that story was literally called Brownwood:Tommy Boy written by DFWBeast. I dont like it when people praise a channel for writing a story when the channel doesnt acknowledge the real author if they put a comment about the author i wouldnt have any issue but they never do. (said this a few times before just for my comment to disappear).

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +8

    Some of you have to understand, when op was cheated on, his mind no longer works on logic, making him seem stupid thoughtless, I know from experience that you don't think very intelligently and your emotions take over 😊

  • @samedward5480
    @samedward5480 3 месяца назад +3

    Alternative version: Sheila does not died. Instead, she and Amber are able to reconcile through supporting each other through their healing processes. After which Shiela is able to come to terms with the fact that she cannot undo the hurt she caused Joe, so gives Amber her blessing to be with him so that her loved ones can find happiness in each other.
    You took creative licenses that I would not have personally would not have; however, since you introduced the pairing of Joe and Amber, I “ship” them.
    Perhaps this is an idea you can flush out when you’re looking for more content. Happy to storyboard ideas if you decide to do so.

  • @randysmith9636
    @randysmith9636 5 месяцев назад +41

    I am concerned about the mental health of all three of them actually.
    The only ones that seem to be stable are her parents.
    With the husband's (X) ability to get "lost" in his thoughts and seems to be all over the place im shocked he can hold a high level job.

    • @MerlotWines
      @MerlotWines 5 месяцев назад +6

      I came here to say that! He is pretty immature and shoukd be able to control his actions. He definitely wouldn't risk getting arrested. Then on the other hand, there are squrrelly executives in the news all the time.

    • @blacksunday4231
      @blacksunday4231 4 месяца назад +4

      Looks like I'm not the only one who found Joe to be very unlikable.

  • @chrismoore9997
    @chrismoore9997 5 месяцев назад +18

    Almost 4 hours in the first part and almost another 4 hours in the second part. WOW.
    It's a good story so far.

  • @wereguy18
    @wereguy18 5 месяцев назад +5

    GOD DAMMIT I HAVE TO STOP WATCHING FOR THE NIIIGHT!!! FUUUUUUUU-

  • @roaminglycan1491
    @roaminglycan1491 4 месяца назад +2

    Why do people only miss and regret when they lose what's important to them.

  • @RedRipperDragon
    @RedRipperDragon 4 месяца назад +5

    Ah yes, this road is made of road...

  • @BigCharles5970
    @BigCharles5970 5 месяцев назад +7

    Whoa, pack a lunch time!

  • @alessandrolozio5373
    @alessandrolozio5373 3 месяца назад +1

    LLC stories are always good.
    Regarding the story, we immediately notice that everything that happened was caused by the absolute lack of communication between all the protagonists, both husband and wife, and the various friends, relatives, acquaintances and assorted protagonists. It was enough for people not to speak to each other to trigger a series of more or less serious accidents that could have been avoided. Divorce, revenge betrayals, accidents, injuries in hospital, etc., etc., this lack of dialogue was enough to trigger all this, combined with the climate of suspicion, distrust, lack of trust.
    As I have done previously, I point out the usual problems.
    1) Often the story "stagnates" by getting lost in useless details and making the story unnecessarily long and then ending hastily
    2) Often the very "colourful" language prevents those who are not native speakers of English from understanding certain speeches. Even with the translator and RUclips subtitles it is difficult to follow the dialogues
    3) Part 2 would be useful to split because after 3 hours the translator with RUclips subtitles stops working. Therefore, based on what I reported in point 2), it is quite complicated to follow the dialogues. You are forced to select the "Show transcription" button and "copy and paste" with the Google translator. So a one-hour story becomes two hours! The suspense of the ending is totally killed!
    4) Last but not least, as usual, the plot is missing in the information box.

  • @samedward5480
    @samedward5480 3 месяца назад +2

    Makes me think of how I met your mother. The whole time you are led to believe
    the story is about Ted journey to meet the mother when an actuality it’s his journey to be with Robin.
    The question remains is Bridget meant to be Joe's "Victoria" or "Tracy"?😂

  • @jazzie-sanbelle99
    @jazzie-sanbelle99 4 месяца назад +1

    Holy cow smh. Dog gone 😢 queen hussy in another's bed. Unexpectedly quite a ending.
    ❤ 😲 😱 the story of course keeping me coming back for more listening. Lol

  • @joeyjones1271
    @joeyjones1271 4 месяца назад +2

    Funny how they scorned him for not visiting , but she cheated. Nobody thought JoHn the lover?

  • @andreirigafereu
    @andreirigafereu 4 месяца назад +3

    I don't understand the attitude in many of the comments regarding Joe's reactions. Imagine (I mean the married ones) receiving the video that Joe received. Just how shattered will your insides be? After that, just imagine how big the garbage tray needs to be to pick you up from the floor?! And how many questionable decisions will you make after that?
    LLC, I for one really liked this adventure, except for the ending.
    I didn't expect that after all the pain they went through, Amber would also leave him with eyes in the sun. I know Amber has been through a lot of trauma, but it doesn't seem like the way she treated Joe was fair play or justified.
    But it seems that Hank and Joe will be even easier to confuse in the future, because they will both have blonde life partners.
    You did a good job, LLC! Again...

  • @williamlenderman387
    @williamlenderman387 5 месяцев назад +1

    Well, part two didn't disappoint. It had lots of twists and turns and, for me, a very unexpected but satisfying ending. Nicely done LLC. Nicely done 👍🏻👍🏻...⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and an A-plus

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +3

    Man, what a twist 🤣

  • @erasus0307
    @erasus0307 5 месяцев назад +3

    Cops arrest the wrong people all the time lol

  • @Wool94
    @Wool94 4 месяца назад

    I have come to thoroughly enjoy your stories. I loved the length of this one.
    It's hard when the main character has a conflict with every single person in the story.
    I still don't understand the animosity between Joe and the detective.
    Thanks for the story anyway. It made my long shifts at work, bearable.

  • @blkameripat8232
    @blkameripat8232 4 месяца назад +2

    Ok, I think that I’ve established that I’m a big LLC supporter. So, when I offer critiques, it comes from a good place. Generally, I’ve noticed a lessening in the quality of your videos, particularly in the longer ones, over the last several days. This video is a good example of some of the main problems: 1- Riddled with plot holes as so expertly detailed by the previous poster 2- severely overwritten and bloated with unnecessary scenes and details 3- A meandering, and tedious pace- 4 Plot twists that seem more gimmicky than organic 5- A wholly unsatisfying ending.
    I trust that you’re not getting burned out by trying to do too much. You obviously work very hard to produce a hefty output of vids, for which we are very grateful. I just hope that quantity doesn’t lead to a pattern of lesser quality. Thanks for considering these observations and be well!!

    • @LostLoveChronicles
      @LostLoveChronicles  4 месяца назад +2

      Thanks for the feedback, I will try to get better. I agree some more effort is required. We promise to get better

    • @blkameripat8232
      @blkameripat8232 4 месяца назад +1

      @@LostLoveChronicles Thanks! The way you are so open to fair feedback and the humble and gracious way you always respond is one of the main reasons people like me are such devoted supporters. It's truly the icing on the cake of your superior content. Thanks again, and continued success!!

    • @LostLoveChronicles
      @LostLoveChronicles  4 месяца назад +2

      @@blkameripat8232 If people like you tell me that you are supporting us, i think, i have been sucessful. Loads of love for you. Plase continue giving us feedback, that only helps us make better content.

  • @kennethbarkley1491
    @kennethbarkley1491 23 дня назад

    Joe needs to move on from Amber and all of them. He is in a no win situation, they are all hosed up.

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +12

    Hope I got enough beer 🍻😄

  • @WilliamWood-vu8bx
    @WilliamWood-vu8bx 4 месяца назад +1

    It's sad that Sheila dies of a broken heart.

  • @kevinhoran5253
    @kevinhoran5253 5 месяцев назад +2

    Part two well worth waiting for. So much clever content and so many unexpected twist and turns. Had me hanging on every word. I'm sure this is one of the best. Thanks LLC.

  • @kaljlowe
    @kaljlowe 5 месяцев назад +5

    I went from caring about OP then until the whole police office scene. OP completly acting like an obtuse fool. Made me want to stop.

  • @kaskl5403
    @kaskl5403 5 месяцев назад +7

    Better than an audiobook

  • @SuddenUpdraft
    @SuddenUpdraft 4 месяца назад +2

    I love these longer stories! Thanks for a great tale.

  • @dustysimpson7864
    @dustysimpson7864 5 месяцев назад +2

    So you buy a place then you loose it in the divorce.

  • @ChristineMarino-t7x
    @ChristineMarino-t7x 5 месяцев назад +2

    Wow!! So many red herrings!! Plus mental health problems!! Thought poor Sheila, was the one!! But a well crafted story line!!

  • @rbishop9062
    @rbishop9062 5 месяцев назад +1

    Very good story. If LLC keeps up with stories this good I will have to subscribe.... wait I did that months ago.

  • @BigDawgBingo
    @BigDawgBingo 5 месяцев назад +2

    Anyone else getting ads every 30 seconds???? It’s like I spent more time watching ads than the actual video, crazy considering it’s over 3 hours !

    • @4eightyvolt
      @4eightyvolt 4 месяца назад

      You know there are solutions for that problem. Idk about iOS but if you have an android based phone, tablet or media player there are options
      Really good options.

    • @BigDawgBingo
      @BigDawgBingo 4 месяца назад

      @@4eightyvolt I’m on iOS. I heard there are ad blockers but only for the RUclips website . I’m all ears for solutions and will start looking for more. Thanks for the reminder

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +3

    😂 c'mon Mimi 😂

  • @seshasatyakrishna5016
    @seshasatyakrishna5016 5 месяцев назад

    One moral:
    When severe negativity, things can't get positive... We can hope but practically not possible at all

  • @elsaflood6393
    @elsaflood6393 4 месяца назад +2

    For one bit of information revealed, you have to listen to at least 15 minutes of wordy descriptive sideshow which just stretched the story and still dont give much information.

  • @jonathanzoellick8602
    @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +8

    OMG 😱 I just realized 4 hours,😮 I might have to crash before then 😂

    • @mimiturner51
      @mimiturner51 5 месяцев назад +2

      Yeah!! I might have to break it up too!! Gotta work tomorrow! 😞

    • @jonathanzoellick8602
      @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +3

      Sorry, I'm retired, but I don't stay up late myself, maybe midnight 😜

  • @batrn7236
    @batrn7236 5 месяцев назад

    Good golly, what a roller coaster. Surprized at the ending but glad Joe got some happiness. Thanks, LLC.

  • @jorgethegreat3098
    @jorgethegreat3098 5 месяцев назад +6

    Joe is annoying yo

  • @ACNordstrom
    @ACNordstrom 4 месяца назад +3

    So wait Amber also left him?

    • @whyask5461
      @whyask5461 4 месяца назад +1

      So much for her declaration of love as she lay dying in the street. It turned into "I can't be with you because I'll think about my dead friend too much." What a load of bull, she obviously didn't actually love him all that much.
      Worse, they never even made love once, so she never even gave them a chance to connect on a deeper level. 😢

  • @wperkins1728
    @wperkins1728 5 месяцев назад +1

    WOW! That's about all I can say.

  • @slimguy94
    @slimguy94 Месяц назад +1

    Ending was annoying. Story was mid.

  • @0mtrebellcyury993
    @0mtrebellcyury993 5 месяцев назад +5

    Bittersweet but I guess it’s a good ending tho. It’s to bad that amber dumped him but atleast she didn’t cheat on him. But I guess it’s better that way for Shelia and amber to be out of his life let’s hope bergit( French girl) can do a better job than his ex and late wife did

    • @Sheppard3rd
      @Sheppard3rd 5 месяцев назад +5

      was Bergit not the Norse girl?

    • @jonathanzoellick8602
      @jonathanzoellick8602 5 месяцев назад +3

      Yes, she was from Norway 😊

    • @blacksunday4231
      @blacksunday4231 4 месяца назад

      Amber and Joe just didn't feel right as a couple. I'm glad they didn't end up together.

    • @janenorwood1614
      @janenorwood1614 4 месяца назад

      oh no... he ends up with Bergit?! That would be stupid. No need for me to listen to the rest of this then.

  • @russ3080
    @russ3080 5 месяцев назад

    These are a fantastic journey! Great uploads!

  • @chorepa
    @chorepa 5 месяцев назад +3

    Ok 8 hrs consecutive (that means one right after the mf other as kat Williams kindly explained) that was a good story. The ending wasn’t what I expected it was a good story

  • @creed5248
    @creed5248 17 дней назад

    Amber was a really weird one - besides that - the whole story was a really weird one and had my mind twisted ... like ringing out a dirty dishrag ...

  • @bratty1851
    @bratty1851 5 месяцев назад +1

    Shelia give me the chills 🥶🥶😈👿☠️☠️☠️

  • @lpoerscatalya8914
    @lpoerscatalya8914 5 месяцев назад +2

    This one is a crazyy crazyy 304 😮😮😮

  • @elsaflood6393
    @elsaflood6393 4 месяца назад +1

    Birgit struggles with english language in the story is a bit too much in the end.

  • @IOSARBX
    @IOSARBX 5 месяцев назад +2

    Lost Love Chronicles, This is great! Let's be friends and have fun together!

  • @abel3100
    @abel3100 5 месяцев назад +1

    Worth the wait and length for the story

  • @dougnowak4205
    @dougnowak4205 24 дня назад +1

    Amber had a higher body count than Jack the Ripper though in a different way. Sounds like the juice isn't worth the squeeze.

  • @SuddenUpdraft
    @SuddenUpdraft 5 месяцев назад +1

    Can’t wait for part three!

  • @mimiturner51
    @mimiturner51 5 месяцев назад +3

    ❤!!! Yay!

  • @Tessa_Kamoda
    @Tessa_Kamoda 4 месяца назад +1

    barely a meh, way too long explanations, describing circumstances. ruining the story.

  • @RaizelSX
    @RaizelSX 4 месяца назад +1

    Thia story is frustrating. There are way too many unnecessary details on things that hold up the story as if its just filler to elongate it, and then then Joe is a frustrating person who is constantly making good and bad decisions at a wim even if he knows there are better options.
    I get emtions are high, but as a successful person he succumbs to volitily too easily
    2:55:04 this point right here shows tbe mc is illgocial and wild, he went from barring dude from doing his job to making very just logical thoughts to the point if i was the cop i would have simply told him, "do as you've veen doing and figure it out yourself" since he actually needs the cop more than the cop needs him

  • @grahamcochrane6809
    @grahamcochrane6809 4 месяца назад +1

    Poorly written and far far too long. Information supplied that wasn’t required and appeared to be nothing more than padding, presumably so more ads (every 10 minutes for goodness sake) could be crammed in. Generally I enjoy the content from LLC but nearly eight hours!!!!! It actually helped to spoil the flow of the story. The same thing could have been displayed on DVD in a couple of hours.

  • @jrvon8688
    @jrvon8688 5 месяцев назад

    Not sure what to think about this story , maybe a little more on the ending

  • @stevenmazza9462
    @stevenmazza9462 5 месяцев назад +2

    @LostLoveChronicals I own a channel and write my own stories... I don't know how you are doing what you are doing. I wrote and produced 37 videos and just want to know how your doing this

  • @yaokuanhuang4816
    @yaokuanhuang4816 5 месяцев назад +1

    Shealla is one du loo loo chic!

  • @curtiswilliams8664
    @curtiswilliams8664 5 месяцев назад +2

    Where's part 3?

    • @jimmadden6406
      @jimmadden6406 5 месяцев назад

      this story needs some more closure

    • @blacksunday4231
      @blacksunday4231 4 месяца назад

      ​@@jimmadden6406what more does it need?

  • @crimsonjack8617
    @crimsonjack8617 4 месяца назад +1

    No warrant to search...typical.