No offense to the folks who like the serial killer/torture/dismemberment stories but I greatly prefer these Twilight Zone type stories. I really like these surreal ones. Loved this one. ❤
Same. Also, vampires AND werewolves are SO two centuries ago. My wife was of the Gothic persuasion when we first met, and was friendly-or at least acquainted-with nearly every other Goth in the city between the ages of 18 and 35. (I was strictly from dark psychedelia-Jim Morrison, Blue Öyster Cult, and that lot.) I can tell you, from meeting with her friends, that if you can imagine vampires doing it, a story has been written in which they do it. That keg has been tapped dry. Lovecraft offered us a way forward with no limits. Whatever we may feel about the man personally, to ignore his work and the potentialities it opened for trippy, dreamy, existential horror is like deliberately placing yourself in fetters and chains. The best horror written in the 21st Century has been cosmic/existential, and I imagine it shall remain so for the foreseeable future-for as I’ve stated, via cosmic horror all things are possible.
I’m so bored of the typical slasher and monster creepypastas. I hate the wendigo, slender man and other cryptid stories, they are so lazy usually. I love lovecraftian, cosmic horror, alternate dimension, liminal space, and other surreal stories with unique concepts involved.
@@warframeees8013 You’re a kindred spirit, mate. I’m right there with you. So many of the story types you’ve listed are incredibly predictable, unimaginative, poorly-written, and exhaustingly dull. I don’t understand how the authors can feel they’re of sufficient quality to even release to the public-I’d be embarrassed. If I still had the inspiration I did 20 years ago, I’d write better ones myself; alas, though, good LSD is not so easy to find where I live anymore-especially at reasonable prices. See, you know you’re writing good horror when your subject matter scares the shite out of you, the author. As long as you’re not completely unrelatable, you’ll find people in the world that agree with you. I was always tormented by ideas of isolation and insignificance when I was young, and I wrote about it poetically, and at length. My skills as a writer are still there; unfortunately, I’ve learnt ways of dealing with those feelings because they were literally driving me dead unhinged. Thus, when I try to write with the same urgency of horror I did in my younger years, I find myself blocked by the defence mechanisms I’ve set up to mitigate that terror. I sometimes think if I were to take an high dose of LSD it might recreate the experience temporarily, as my mind is very well attuned to psychedelics-particularly LSD and mescaline-as devices for stripping away all but my deepest unconscious. At higher doses they strip away my ‘self’ completely, which is an useful experience, periodically, I find, but at that dose I’ve gone too far to reach the stuff that makes for good writing. Indeed-an ego death feels as though you are empty of all contents; in fact there is no longer even a ‘you’ that can be distinguished from the rest of the Universe. Anyroad, I’ve gone off the rails, here. Point is-one of these days, i’m’na get myself sorted and write a couple of new stories in my old style. Shake things up a bit. The creepypasta community has gone bloody stagnant.
Gone. Gon. Go. G. …it’s a wonder why persons never listen to their intuition. It’s a natural built-in warning system! Thank you, Doctor Creepen, for narrating this tale! ;-D
I was in a really mood....until Ilistened to your storh. You can always pull me into your stories. That takes me away from my whatever......and I get lost in them. Thank you so very much !!! You and a few others have become my personal antidepressant. Sounds weird, I know, but I'm a little weird.
Alternate reality-related stuff is absolutely my favourite type of tale, be it horror or not -though, if it’s a well-written horror, it’s absolutely my favourite. Thanks for reaching under the bar for a dram of the good stuff.
Any Evening we can spend with the Good Dr. Is a wonderful day. You know What they say. A creepypasta a day keeps the doctor away lol 😆 Thanks for another awesome narration my Friend
You're voice is so soothing to listen to. I put you on to fall asleep to. So between your voice and the stories it helps. I wonder what you look like. A face to the voice. Anyway thanks for a great listening experience.
It's been a while since I listened to a story where the main character actually irritated my spirit and makes me want to punch them🙄😅 Good story and great narration as always. 🙏🏾
I love when it's aliens and you don't know it's gonna be aliens until it starts looking like it might be aliens. I'm not saying it's aliens, but it's aliens.
All those(as of meow just under 800) viewers BETTER comeback with their favorite drink empty, and friggin make that like button listen to you click the shit out of it. Or I'll come for ye and Im a breed of the Wendigo.
Ah, interesting lineage. Still might appreciate a visit and interesting conversation. I tend to have many curious friends and allies. Being a child of the Wild Wood has perks for sure, right? I smash that button regardless for one if my favorite narrators. Got to show support for those who give such wonderful performances and atmosphere. May you continue to be blessed in the best and most beneficial ways.May your journey continue to be inspired. AyA!
To the author: this is remarkably well-written in an age when the average person cannot assemble a cohesive-let alone coherent-sentence. However, I think an exercise that would serve you well would be to read the piece out loud to a voice recorder (say, on your phone), wait an hour, then listen to it . All sorts of things will stand out to you; I know this will work for you because you are sufficiently talented and practised to have an ear for the music of language. For instance: you’ll notice that early on, you overuse the noun , ‘disquiet’ to describe the protagonist’s anxiety and apprehension. Good word, but REALLY sticks out when overused. There was a particularly egregious spot where you used it, as well, when you were describing how the town’s extreme silence, the dread quiet (I am, of course, paraphrasing) amplified or increasingly fuelled the protagonist’s ’disquiet’. You made an unintentional pun, and I don’t think you were aiming for levity. Anyroad, I’m a fan. Just offering the advice of a guy who’s been around the block a few times. (More accurately, I’ve meandered and skulked my way up and down every dark alleyway in the entire city, by this point. More importantly, however, I’ve spent nearly 30 of my 40 years writing about what I found there.) Ultimately, my point is to suggest you give my revision trick a try…and please keep at it! You’re one of the most promising written voices I’ve heard in a long while. Nice work! -Rip
the beginning of this story and I have not finished listening yet ... but the beginning gives me black and white TV early Twilight zone vibes. 2 episodes specifically. The guy who wakes up in an empty town with no memory of how he got there or who he is. And the second one is of a crew of space travelers who land on a very strange planet full of "frozen" people.
Well! Yung Seti you’ve done a marvelous job with this piece and I cannot wait until the next installment. A special thanks to Dr Creepen for his excellent narration, to which he never falls short. I truly enjoyed this and I hope that the next one is even better! I’m getting the feeling that there’s something in the air in that town that may have changed the way they think. It’s only a small thing, but for a friend such as his to push him to go on such a trip to help with his recent divorce, then all the sudden have such an outburst of negativity at him, it just doesn’t seem right. Although I have had it happen to me! But hey, high school sucked. So I’m just giddy in preparation for the next one. Don’t make us wait too long! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🏆🏆🏆🏆
Very well narrated and well written as well. I am curious if I am the only one, even though there are very obvious narrative differences, did anyone else get a little bit of the same vibe as the movie Nope by Jordan Peele? no idea if there were similar inspirational sources.
who in there right mind would force there way into a barricaded restaurant that's in a deserted town instead of driving straight threw?!? NOBODY that's who😂
Lol the main character is the exact person you leave behind in horror movies cuz theyre the person who wants to run towards the danger n investigate the obv strange stuff 😂😂😂
I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks this but I swear at some points your voice sounds like Lennie James from Fear the Walking Dead, I just thought that was kinda cool, love the stories.
You're always amazing no matter what you're reading! Don't ever second guess yourself over a few thousand views. A lot of us would listen to you read a nutrition label if that's what you decided to do for the day. Keep up the amazing work, Dr!
"Home Depot" is NOT a "Local Hardware Store"!!! It is however a big name chain, that shuts down local hardware stores!!! I always shop local stores when possible. I've not even been into a big name chain stare for a good bit now. I don't order much offline either. I always have local stores order me what I need and pay the small mark up to help keep them in business and able to raise their families. Chain stores suck!!! They have no soul. They aren't there to help you, they are only there to make you part with as much of your hard earned money as possible. That's it. Local stores on the other hand have soul. They do (in most cases) care about their customers and communities!!!
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I’m in the stall grooming my horse but still listening 😊
That's ...what she said.....🤔😳😳😳
That's the coolest thing I've heard anyone say all year 😊
@@GoGorgeousGo I finally made my life-long dream of having a horse come true. I got him in April and he’s wonderful. 😊❤️
Cringe
@@puertoricanpapi1356rood
No offense to the folks who like the serial killer/torture/dismemberment stories but I greatly prefer these Twilight Zone type stories. I really like these surreal ones. Loved this one. ❤
Me too❤
Same. Also, vampires AND werewolves are SO two centuries ago. My wife was of the Gothic persuasion when we first met, and was friendly-or at least acquainted-with nearly every other Goth in the city between the ages of 18 and 35. (I was strictly from dark psychedelia-Jim Morrison, Blue Öyster Cult, and that lot.) I can tell you, from meeting with her friends, that if you can imagine vampires doing it, a story has been written in which they do it. That keg has been tapped dry. Lovecraft offered us a way forward with no limits. Whatever we may feel about the man personally, to ignore his work and the potentialities it opened for trippy, dreamy, existential horror is like deliberately placing yourself in fetters and chains.
The best horror written in the 21st Century has been cosmic/existential, and I imagine it shall remain so for the foreseeable future-for as I’ve stated, via cosmic horror all things are possible.
I’m so bored of the typical slasher and monster creepypastas. I hate the wendigo, slender man and other cryptid stories, they are so lazy usually. I love lovecraftian, cosmic horror, alternate dimension, liminal space, and other surreal stories with unique concepts involved.
@@warframeees8013 You’re a kindred spirit, mate. I’m right there with you. So many of the story types you’ve listed are incredibly predictable, unimaginative, poorly-written, and exhaustingly dull. I don’t understand how the authors can feel they’re of sufficient quality to even release to the public-I’d be embarrassed. If I still had the inspiration I did 20 years ago, I’d write better ones myself; alas, though, good LSD is not so easy to find where I live anymore-especially at reasonable prices.
See, you know you’re writing good horror when your subject matter scares the shite out of you, the author. As long as you’re not completely unrelatable, you’ll find people in the world that agree with you. I was always tormented by ideas of isolation and insignificance when I was young, and I wrote about it poetically, and at length. My skills as a writer are still there; unfortunately, I’ve learnt ways of dealing with those feelings because they were literally driving me dead unhinged. Thus, when I try to write with the same urgency of horror I did in my younger years, I find myself blocked by the defence mechanisms I’ve set up to mitigate that terror. I sometimes think if I were to take an high dose of LSD it might recreate the experience temporarily, as my mind is very well attuned to psychedelics-particularly LSD and mescaline-as devices for stripping away all but my deepest unconscious. At higher doses they strip away my ‘self’ completely, which is an useful experience, periodically, I find, but at that dose I’ve gone too far to reach the stuff that makes for good writing. Indeed-an ego death feels as though you are empty of all contents; in fact there is no longer even a ‘you’ that can be distinguished from the rest of the Universe.
Anyroad, I’ve gone off the rails, here. Point is-one of these days, i’m’na get myself sorted and write a couple of new stories in my old style. Shake things up a bit. The creepypasta community has gone bloody stagnant.
Nobody cares just enjoy
Gone. Gon. Go. G. …it’s a wonder why persons never listen to their intuition. It’s a natural built-in warning system! Thank you, Doctor Creepen, for narrating this tale! ;-D
I was in a really mood....until Ilistened to your storh. You can always pull me into your stories. That takes me away from my whatever......and I get lost in them. Thank you so very much !!! You and a few others have become my personal antidepressant. Sounds weird, I know, but I'm a little weird.
Thanks for listening
Alternate reality-related stuff is absolutely my favourite type of tale, be it horror or not -though, if it’s a well-written horror, it’s absolutely my favourite. Thanks for reaching under the bar for a dram of the good stuff.
Totally agree!
Any Evening we can spend with the Good Dr. Is a wonderful day. You know What they say. A creepypasta a day keeps the doctor away lol 😆
Thanks for another awesome narration my Friend
We always appreciate your hard work, dear Doctor! ❤
Always
Your collaborations with Dark Somnium are awesome. Can't wait for the next one. 😎👍
It must be nap time if the good doctor uploaded, there is no better way to settle down than a good narration and some hot tea.
Ok, so i've had a couple of beers during this story lol, but it's starting to sound a bit like Poltergeist as it nears the end lol.
You're voice is so soothing to listen to. I put you on to fall asleep to. So between your voice and the stories it helps. I wonder what you look like. A face to the voice. Anyway thanks for a great listening experience.
Listening to you is more therapeutic than any of the programs I do at the VA Dr. Creepen. Thank you so much, this old jarhead appreciates all you do.
😮😊 0😮😊
You are very welcome
I'm only 20 minutes and and I'm already loving it 😈
Combination of your narration and a good story 😊
As soon as that voice started calling, all I could think was “ ANGLER FISH! ANGLER FISH!”
It's been a while since I listened to a story where the main character actually irritated my spirit and makes me want to punch them🙄😅
Good story and great narration as always. 🙏🏾
As always, well told and a great story thanks Doc 🍻
My pleasure
They should have lit up a joint. Firing up one in public in a small town like that is GUARANTEED to make a cop appear out of absolutely NOWHERE!! 😋
That's the truth, ironically even in states where it's been decriminalized. Must be conditioning.
Loved this one
Great video. Im loving all these sci-fi stories that are coming out lately!
More to come!
I love when it's aliens and you don't know it's gonna be aliens until it starts looking like it might be aliens. I'm not saying it's aliens, but it's aliens.
After all these years you are still my favorite.
I'm looking out my window and checking the skies!!
Very nice. Lucid dreams with these are awesome. Superb narration combined with a well written story is such a treat. Thank you ❤
Glad you enjoyed it!
The good Doctor is back with another great story!
All those(as of meow just under 800) viewers BETTER comeback with their favorite drink empty, and friggin make that like button listen to you click the shit out of it. Or I'll come for ye and Im a breed of the Wendigo.
Ah, interesting lineage. Still might appreciate a visit and interesting conversation. I tend to have many curious friends and allies. Being a child of the Wild Wood has perks for sure, right? I smash that button regardless for one if my favorite narrators. Got to show support for those who give such wonderful performances and atmosphere.
May you continue to be blessed in the best and most beneficial ways.May your journey continue to be inspired. AyA!
To the author: this is remarkably well-written in an age when the average person cannot assemble a cohesive-let alone coherent-sentence. However, I think an exercise that would serve you well would be to read the piece out loud to a voice recorder (say, on your phone), wait an hour, then listen to it . All sorts of things will stand out to you; I know this will work for you because you are sufficiently talented and practised to have an ear for the music of language. For instance: you’ll notice that early on, you overuse the noun , ‘disquiet’ to describe the protagonist’s anxiety and apprehension. Good word, but REALLY sticks out when overused. There was a particularly egregious spot where you used it, as well, when you were describing how the town’s extreme silence, the dread quiet (I am, of course, paraphrasing) amplified or increasingly fuelled the protagonist’s ’disquiet’. You made an unintentional pun, and I don’t think you were aiming for levity.
Anyroad, I’m a fan. Just offering the advice of a guy who’s been around the block a few times. (More accurately, I’ve meandered and skulked my way up and down every dark alleyway in the entire city, by this point. More importantly, however, I’ve spent nearly 30 of my 40 years writing about what I found there.)
Ultimately, my point is to suggest you give my revision trick a try…and please keep at it! You’re one of the most promising written voices I’ve heard in a long while. Nice work!
-Rip
I’m back Doc!
Yay. Late to the party but enjoying your company while I make boxes and deliver cookies 😅
the beginning of this story and I have not finished listening yet ... but the beginning gives me black and white TV early Twilight zone vibes. 2 episodes specifically. The guy who wakes up in an empty town with no memory of how he got there or who he is. And the second one is of a crew of space travelers who land on a very strange planet full of "frozen" people.
Every upload is a thrill for me, I always look forwards to your amazing narrations Doc! Looking forwards to the new content!!! 😁
Well! Yung Seti you’ve done a marvelous job with this piece and I cannot wait until the next installment. A special thanks to Dr Creepen for his excellent narration, to which he never falls short. I truly enjoyed this and I hope that the next one is even better! I’m getting the feeling that there’s something in the air in that town that may have changed the way they think. It’s only a small thing, but for a friend such as his to push him to go on such a trip to help with his recent divorce, then all the sudden have such an outburst of negativity at him, it just doesn’t seem right. Although I have had it happen to me! But hey, high school sucked. So I’m just giddy in preparation for the next one. Don’t make us wait too long! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🏆🏆🏆🏆
Very well narrated and well written as well. I am curious if I am the only one, even though there are very obvious narrative differences, did anyone else get a little bit of the same vibe as the movie Nope by Jordan Peele? no idea if there were similar inspirational sources.
Now I get it. From what you were doing in the graveyard
who in there right mind would force there way into a barricaded restaurant that's in a deserted town instead of driving straight threw?!?
NOBODY that's who😂
Lol the main character is the exact person you leave behind in horror movies cuz theyre the person who wants to run towards the danger n investigate the obv strange stuff 😂😂😂
I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks this but I swear at some points your voice sounds like Lennie James from Fear the Walking Dead, I just thought that was kinda cool, love the stories.
It's a wonderful day in the neighborhood but something is making folks disappear and that's not good
Kudos to the narrator and author 🎉
Loved this one!❤
Heyyy Doc! Heyyyyy y’all!! Happy Friday 😃🌹
You too!!
Sending love 😘..are you single ?
I can see it now, in my barn you could add cats n dogs and a stray hen or two nesting in the corners of the stalls. 😂
You're always amazing no matter what you're reading! Don't ever second guess yourself over a few thousand views. A lot of us would listen to you read a nutrition label if that's what you decided to do for the day.
Keep up the amazing work, Dr!
Sending love 😘...are you single ?
@@charlesrobert23 🤣🤣 nah. Just had a baby, mate.
@@ChiaChinchilla92 Can we be friends?
Your voice makes me think of actor Ben Daniels from the Exorcist TV series and Foundation.
🖤loved it🖤
I'm listening to this story thinking "Am i the only person who knows what an angler fish is?"
Thank you!
"Home Depot" is NOT a "Local Hardware Store"!!! It is however a big name chain, that shuts down local hardware stores!!! I always shop local stores when possible. I've not even been into a big name chain stare for a good bit now. I don't order much offline either. I always have local stores order me what I need and pay the small mark up to help keep them in business and able to raise their families. Chain stores suck!!! They have no soul. They aren't there to help you, they are only there to make you part with as much of your hard earned money as possible. That's it. Local stores on the other hand have soul. They do (in most cases) care about their customers and communities!!!
Well this sounds interesting
I'm with clay, sorry disembodied Vague voice, your on your own.
This reminds me of The Langoliers...
thanks doc!
I should focus on the bigger narrators. IF you ever need and mp3 file, let me know.
When your town is a pirated Nintendo game and they notice.
I think it was a giant dryer ball hence all the static.
Some women in Portugal love horse glue. National Guard
Academic year? Are you a teacher or professor? Your voice fits lectures very nicely haha
I hate how people have to explain 100 diff ways before getting to whatever point they're tryin to make in there story....
Reminds me of the creature in Nope
The only imagine i get of dr creepen is Jeremy irons idk y sounds so similar 😂🎧
But Dr I can’t sit back and relax with my favourite drink
My granny bladder can’t take it I will be up 7 times pissing 😅
Sending love 😘..are you single?
m0re high strangeness ~ yippee🙄
Reminds me of the nope movie
😎👍
Creepy af. Takes the exploration out of you...
✅
🫢
Firsty
Firsty it's nice to meet you. My name is Blake lol
Hi Firsty, I'm Thirsty..
For more of these amazingly narrated stories 😂
Thirdy
Sorry, but that was ONE OF THE WORST STORIES I'VE EVER HEARD!
OF COURSE NOT BECAUSE OF THE NARRATION, simply because it was a TERRIBLE STORY.