Needs more polishing, the parts reading the computer are too quick and limited in view, actor rubs his face and eyes too many times in too many scenes, overacting to present a point, same thing when falling asleep and jerking back to wakefulness, doesn't look real enough to be believable. Otherwise, good story. Oh, and some scenes where the main actor should obviously have seen the figure present in his view, his reaction was as if not noticing it. These scenes would be better if he either took a second glance or had a reaction as if seeing his own shadow, but I expect directing thus actor would cause him to overact then as well. He needs some lessons in acting.
I….didn’t understand. Was it his imagination?
Needs more polishing, the parts reading the computer are too quick and limited in view, actor rubs his face and eyes too many times in too many scenes, overacting to present a point, same thing when falling asleep and jerking back to wakefulness, doesn't look real enough to be believable. Otherwise, good story. Oh, and some scenes where the main actor should obviously have seen the figure present in his view, his reaction was as if not noticing it. These scenes would be better if he either took a second glance or had a reaction as if seeing his own shadow, but I expect directing thus actor would cause him to overact then as well. He needs some lessons in acting.