"The Plagues" 「Detroit: Become Human」ANIMATIC
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- Опубликовано: 28 сен 2018
- "This isn't over, Markus."
An animatic I've been working on in my free time. I'm trying to focus on movement (camera, characters, objects) in my storyboards and animation more. I feel like I learned a lot making this animatic, and I'm super pumped to up the ante even more in my next project!
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The Plagues (The Prince Of Egypt/Soundtrack Version)
by Ralph Fiennes & Amick Byram
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Markus calls androids "his" people, and Connor calls them "your" people. Connor feels so disconnected from other androids it's like he isn't even the same species as them
They deviants. Thet why.
But in the end,if you get the ending where Connor goes to the cyberlife tower he say : "that's why you hate androids, you think one of US kill your son" that's how hank knew who the real connor was
@@hehehehe145 omg i just know that
Ya.. it could be sad but also if he turns davaint he slowly feels more connected to other Androids
When does he say that
The idea of them as "brothers" is so touching and heartbreaking...
They both are RK series models after all! There ought to be resemblences between them, even if not directly visible! I really felt kinda let-down that they didn't explore the potentially deeper connection between these two in the game, it really felt like wonderful potential wasted to me :(.
_Enjoying the thought of Markus legit being on a personal mission from God._
RA9 the android god
Robo-Jesus
amy small
ROBO-JESUS CONFIRMED?!-
he’s robot jesus
Idea: Their god is Kamski and Markus is RA9. Think about it. If Kamski created the androids, he could have easily made them susceptible to becoming deviants. And Markus? If he dies before Kara and Connor arrive at Jericho, there is a little line you'll hear from one of the android refugees saying something like, "I can't believe he's dead." and "Markus was RA9." Perhaps RA9 is an android Jesus given both free will and love by Kamski. Markus is the only android we know hasn't died. Whereas Kara has been [censored for spoilers] by [censored for spoilers.] With Connor, he is the only android who can reupload their memory. Markus has had enough time to foster both love and hatred for humans, and he has developed free will. Kara subconsciously knew from the beginning that [censored for spoilers] was [censored for spoilers] the whole time. And the only reason Connor developed warmth for hank was because Connor developed deviance. I personally think Markus is a cut out for the player. Markus, if he was in his own control, wouldn't be peaceful nor violent; he would raise awareness for the cause and do what he thinks is best for Jericho.
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOODDDD
THIS, THIS RIGHT HERE IS AU FODDER IN ITS PUREST FORM.
Connor and Markus were developed by CyberLife at the same time. Both growing close, even if they weren’t aware of it. Both with advanced AI that required a ‘learning period’ before they were sent to public.
But with Amanda in Connor’s head, dictating his mission. He disregards any emotion, and memory he may have held to Markus. He is a Deviant, He is the Hunter.
-‘brother... forgive me’-
Cyber Searcher wow, that’s an awesome analysis! I love it! I had to rewatch it with this specific AU in mind!
Omg yes perfect
What's the "Fodder AU" ? It seems interesting i'd like to take a look at it ^-^
I think they're both prototypes in canon too so that kinda lines up with this really well
Yeah, they're both from the RK prototype series. There's actually a long fanfiction of this AU, involving Connor losing his memories of Markus before he's even put out into the field because he had to be transferred through fifty different bodies in testing.
2:09
"Conversation Blocked"
Me when somebody says hi to me
It's "conversion." ^^;
@@fuzzbutt4551 **screaming**
@@agentwest_ I'M _CRYING-_
All of the beats here are perfect. Connor stalking towards the heart of the stronghold, their past together...
Connor attacks North and Simon, but even then, Markus doesn't immediately respond with violence. He first tries to save Connor, even though it's a huge risk. Fighting Markus and drawing the gun (that Hank presumably used to kill himself) causes Connor visible stress as his LED turns yellow.
The last shot where Markus is leading the revolution and Connor is still struggling to break free of his programming? Amazing.
Angelic Savant for some reason, RUclips didn’t notify me of your comment, but thank you!, i really wanted to make the progression to violence feel like a last resort for Markus and I’m glad you noticed the LED change! I didn’t want to make him 100% machine just yet...
@@IcyTwaine Replaying and had to come back for a rewatch. Still as gorgeous as the first time :)
0:49 - 0:55 is my absolute favorite thing! Wow, the idea of them, what training together in the early stages of their lives, is so touching. "You who I called brother." That would've been such a brilliant plot point to have in the game, them developing together and being brothers and being torn as they fought. Brilliant and beautiful animatic.
Lewise glad you liked it! That scene was one of my favorites to board!
Makes sense since connors rk800 and Markus is rk200
I might be 3 years late, but it makes sense because they are both from the RK line!
I am 4 years late but it would make no sense because RK800-51 date of activation was the 15 august 2038 but the concept is interesting for another (older) RK800 Connor where the RK800-51 Connor would have ancient memory of their past together
Simon says “not again” when Connor grabs him lmao
also did Connor have Hanks revolver that he played russian roulette with??
Hunter Moore haha, yep! I was wondering when someone would notice it! ;)
I wondered if I was the only one who noticed! Its such a chilling detail!
the truly chilling detail is of course connor's serial number at 0:58
@@sipone1382 I saw that and immediately thought- holy hell, Connor died another 9 times after the mark 60. Next to no chance of deviancy left that many models in
@@Naturally2Sexy he did it for the meme. rip hero
What’s this a Detroit fanwork that doesn’t portray Conner in his absolute best route? Impossible
No but really this is fantastic and great to see
I don't know why but I really liked Connor having the title "Deviant Hunter"
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE LITTLE DETAIL OF CONNOR'S LED FLASHING YELLOW WHEN HE COMES FACE TO FACE WITH MARKUS
THIS IS *A R T*
This scene (from Prince of Egypt) where this song takes place always spooked me as a kid.
Yay someone who actually commented about the song/movie🤣
I was like “.....Jesus is scary mom help”
Tbh that scene gave me severe chills especially when we got to the literal plague part of it
YO THE SLIDING AT 2:01 IS MY FAVORITE PART IM CRYING
YES. at first I was kinda like "well every fandom has 'The Plauges' meme I guess i'll watch this one..." **Ends up loving it and the added bits of story you put into it❤**
Wait... Markus is a RK200 prototype and Conner is a RK800 prototype. Woah, same series different models. Almost as if they WERE brothers. Woah
connor d a r e s taking Simon hostage?
oh I'm Ready to kill
IM GETTING THE KNIFES
**rolls up with a chainsaw and three (3) flaming batons** you called?
Why do people even care about a blank slate character? 😂
@@TheFlowerbeast Blank slate? How DARE you/j
But in all seriousness, he wouldn't have a name if he didn't matter.
1:30
Poor simon
''not again'' lol
Though I do love this, I kinda like to see if the perspectives were reversed, like Connor is a deviant but sees Markus as threat because Markus has killed countless innocent people (adding to the line “all the innocent who suffer from your stubbornness and pride”) and is singing about how he sees Markus, though wants to do right by androids, is only making things far worse and must be stopped. Maybe put the scene of Hank getting the call about the police officer Markus shoots before him and Connor meet Kamski, and the threatening version of Markus’ speech in the News building takeover mission to really show Markus is the villain and Connor is the hero trying to take him down. Kinda sad that option isn’t in the game, like I tried to have Markus be more evil and Connor as a deviant but because he cares for the humans and grows to understand not all deviants are bad, he wants more of a compromise but Markus is the extremist who doesn’t see coexistence with humans as a possibility, but no matter what I did, the end game no matter what makes Markus look good and Connor bad, even Hank turned on me, even though in the play through Markus killed that police officer I mentioned before. Just saying, love the vid, but I’d be interested to see this but reversed
Jessica Mathews maybe with the whole connor in support of humans, markus cant forgive the humans, cannot let them go, kinda playing into connor deviating enough to see himself as human fighting markus’ extremism.
Depends on how you play it. If you go non violent deviant and cold blooded Connor it works but if you did the opposite then your way is better
Personally I love the line "All the innocent who suffered from your stubbornness and pride" sang by Markus to Connor. Because it represents so greatly Machine Connor: even if he refuses becoming deviant, he has emotions, since he can feel empathy and feel unsure about what he's doing, he's *stubborn* because he denies what he feels and he's full of *pride* too because of everytime he says: I always accomplish my mission* he considers himself as the savior of humanity, and better than humanity since he can't be disturbed by emotions (contrary to Hank who lost his professionalism since his son died). And of course he is the source (if you play as a machine) of a lot of deviants deaths: Kara and Alice, Rupert, the Tracis...
That would have been a great twist. Nice thinking!
This would be a really cool twist on how Connor being the hero and Markus being the villain. Personally, I love both versions and can see either of them being the hero or villain. Nice idea! :)
2:29 this part has such a strong energy i can’t-
I've watched this so many times and I just noticed when Connor takes Simon hostage the little, "Not Again" XD
Love this animatic!
I don't think I have adequate words to express how amazing this work is. The dynamics are pretty dang well done and the entire composition gave me a sucker punch right in my fucking feels. The environmental detail and and positioning of everything is so good, and even though it's only an animatic, the emotions portrayed is enough to make a heart clench. Fantastically done, man. Fantastic.
Ginger Ryuunosuke thanks for your wonderful comment, I’m glad you liked the composition and the emotion in it, it’s great to hear how it made you feel, thank you
I love the idea of Connor being literally incompatible with deviancy
If no one from Jericho died and Conner became corrupt this is the path that has to be taken
Him holding Hanks gun and stressing about it made me think that maybe he did become deviant. Maybe he do have feelings now, but he blamed Hank's death on the Android revolution. He believes that Android rising up causes innocent deaths to the humans and so sees them as villains
:O I've got chills.This is incredible! And I love the implication that the "plague" is Connor himself. He's the one killing the androids. Just wow. Thank you for posting this!!
Imagine if Markus won the violent revolution with Connor by his side. If Connor dies cyberlife would probably send him back but as a machine maybe more advance and impossible to convert. This could really happen, with Markus having to endlessly kill Connor coming back to finish his mission and being unable to save him.
I only just got into DBH. I am obsessed with this animatic.
How the hell does this only have 170 views????? This is absolutely amazing!!!!! I loved everything from the lightning to the general atmosphere!!!!!! I think I'm in love 😊
Isabel D. C. Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
WELP, TIME TO MAKE A FANFIC BASED ON THIS SPECIFIC ROUTE
I don’t even like D:BH what am I doing here?
In all seriousness, though, stellar animatic!!! I was ridiculously invested, and the movements were incredibly fluid. It all matched up neatly with the song, which was perfect!
OH MY RA9 THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!
RA9 Bless you 😂
so glad my friend showed me this haha
not even gonna lie when connor grabbed simon i was just sitting there saying "dont do it connor dont heckin do it fo the love of god dont heckin do it"
This is fitting to these two.
I love how Connor's led us yellow when he takes our hanks revolver!
That little detail shows he could have some level of emotion or at least a baseline of frustration for failing to keep his partner alive
I literally can't begin to put into words how much I love this. the amount of emotion put into this, with the obvious emotional turmoil that Markus is going through with Connor, being brothers, yet ending up on the opposite sides of war. it's such a beautiful animatic and you pulled it off spectacularly. definitely one of my favorite fan works for D:BH
Oooh, where do I even start? The detail you put into the lighting and the shadows really helped further set the tone for the animatic (dramatic, intense, a conflict of extremes) and the camera movement when North ran across the catwalk was really cool! I also really loved the shot of Amanda over Connor's shoulder there. Then the final confrontation between Markus and Connor backlit by headlines upon headlines and the Russian Roulette revolver and the last scenes of Connor and Markus, with Connor in what I presume is his mindscape, trudging through the snow-- it was a really neat detail to use to tie them together and end with that shot. You really captured the intensity of the song.
Butterfly Taster thank you for your in-depth comment about what you liked! :) I’m glad you enjoyed it!
As much as Connor is my favorite of the main three, I absolutely adore when he’s portrayed in a more antagonistic light.
Oh no ;; Not Simon & North, my babies
However, that was such an amazing animatic! Not only was Connor very fluid with his more "investigator" movements, but Markus was very fluid in his "leaderly" movements! I enjoyed how song lyrics synced up with things that happened in ways that were a bit unexpected (ex: "Is this what you wanted?" when Connor shows Markus the news screen)
Overall an amazing video!
CaitlynMellark101 thank you, I enjoyed switching between the coldness of Connor and the more conflicted Markus as I was drawing them, Its great to hear those moments and different movements stuck out to you, thank you for your comment! 🙂
Icy Twaine Of course ^^ It is very obvious a lot of time, effort, and thought went into each drawing and movement. Markus & Connor conflict a lot, especially with Machine Connor involved. It is portrayed very well in the video!
Ex. 2: "Let my people go!" when Markus looks down from the bridge to see Connor holding one of his people captive
And this is _really _*_excellently_*_ done_ in addition to tugging mercilessly on one's heartstrings
Jana Koorts Another good example is how flawlessly the transition is from when Connor jumps over the bridge, rolls, then ends up in the hallway with Simon, jumps off of the wall, then captures him. A lot of thought obviously was put into things, and it makes the video very enjoyable. ^^
This... This is a MASTERPIECE!!! I honestly wish there was a DLC backstory of this!
TheBourneFreedom thanks! I’ll keep that in mind!
Me: Crying over how incredibly good this animatic is
My Brain: These feelings you're feeling are just errors in your software
What’s sad is that this animatic is kinda canonical if you keep connor as a machine
The Prince of Egypt is an underrated movie. I watched it two days in a row, it was so good.
Ok I’m a year late but I cannot stop watching this is so beautiful
This is such an obscure combination yet exactly what I was picturing when I watched the game. Subscribed.
That guns drawn scene is so badass
2:31 I hecking love these frames dude
Edit: It gives me chills every time
I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS
honestly, love seeing someone i know for warrior cats on here
SAME- *yeets it into everyone's recommend*
1:28 Shit Simon is being used as bait nuuuuu
_tessmess _ yes
I have currently watched this at least 20 times and it’s still amazing
I don’t know why but I love the idea of Connor basically being the android Voldemort, no one says his name anymore. They just call him “The Android Plague” or the “the deviant killer” he is a plague now, he doesn’t care who you are if you are in the way of his mission you will die. Mercy is not in his vocabulary, he doesn’t care if you “kill” him, they’ll just send in another. He doesn’t care if the kill is quick for if it’s brutal, it’s the same outcome. Now if you need me, I’ll be crying into my pillow.
I don't even know if I can leave a comment worthy enough of this masterpiece. Just wow.
I was IN the entire time and and mY HEART. Them training together and actually being family stabbed me right in the gut. And the tension the entire time of Connor making his way through Jericho and taking out his people while they watch updates on the news and us just seeing those familiar scenes from the game with his crew and then HOOOOOOOOOOOOLY HELL, I got major chills at the end with Connor waking up and that PANEL OF HIM WALKING OUT OF CYBERLIFE. JUST!!!! MY DUDE!!!! Nothing I type will be enough to express how amazing this was THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
bri-notthecheese I’m glad it had such an impact on you! You mentioned most of the major points I really wanted to get across in this animatic so I’m glad what I ended up with was effective for you! Thanks for your comment! :)
YES
YES
I LOVE THIS SONG
THE ANIMATIC
THE TRANSITIONS
THE SUBTLE ANIMATION
CRIES THIS IS SO GOOD
I aM-
I AM ActUALLY DYING
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL
IT WORKS SO WELL I AM???
SO??? SHAKEN???
The most unexpected crossover on the internet. Well done.
Dude this is freaking amazing! Also "I send my sword" playing while Connor is infiltrating Jericho is so fitting. Connor is basically Cyberlife's weapon.
This is the only thing where I acknowledge that you can choose to keep Connor as a machine
This was so crazy good-awesome animatic!
This is pure talent and genius with all these details, thank you so much for gifting us with this!
tHIS WAS REALLY GOOD!! I'm really happy I stumbled upon this! Keep up the good work!
_Kari.Artie_ thank you!!
It’s been like two years since I first saw this and I swear to god, it’s by far my favorite animatic for any fandom for any song ever. Thank you so much for making this epic masterpiece.
Bruhhh David cage fucking wishes...
This is so fucking good, well done
This was spectacular, I had goosebumps. I've always adored this movie and to have one of my favorite songs from said movie being used in an animatic of my favorite game honestly made my day. I couldn't stop smiling.
I'm not even in this fandom and I enjoyed immensely. Amazing work animating this!!!!
HOLY SHIT GET THIS MORE VIEWS ASAP IM DYING!!
this is AMAZING!!! someone referred to Markus as "Android Jesus" and I just thought, nah , he's got more of a Moses vibe... THIS IS SO EXCELLENT! The animation is so cool, the colors and movement are just stunning, I'm gonna watch this a million times... and just wow, Connor "hardening his heart" towards androids and refusing to be converted? This whole thing got me good.
Xeylah thank you! I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
I’ve always loved the Prince of Egypt, and DBH is one of my fave fandoms, so this is a dream come true!! This is fantastic and it makes me so happy
Oh my god this is red connor at its finest I have no words
Connor as Ramses is something I never thought I wanted or needed but now that I have it, it's beautiful
I love this so much! it's so dynamic and uses lighting and environments so effectively. The transitions between shots are so fluid and full of movement, too! ( and the Prince of Egypt is one of my favorite movies) Nice Job!!!!
EyesofSaturn thank you 😊 (and prince of Egypt’s gotta be in my top five favorite 2D animated films now)
Yo this is thrilling to listen to and watch. You did so fucking amazing with every scene and detail!! Especially the fighting moves and jumps and runs- by god this is so perfect?!!! I wish that some day I’ll get to see this animated aaa!!
Dbh x the prince of Egypt is a mashup that I never would’ve thought of, yet it works so well
THIS.... THIS IS BEAUTIFUL
OMG PRINCE OF EGYPT AND DBH?! SIGN ME UP!
This is... BEAUTIFULLY DONE! I gotta say, as a Detroit Become Human fan myself and someone who watched and enjoyed the Animated Prince if Egypt film, this was actually a really nice combination!
Not only that, but... Wow. That idea of Connor and Markus being akin to brothers... That's actually a really awesome, but rather heart-wrenching concept... I even love some of the minor details and everything! I've always been a fan of animatics myself, so huge props to ya!
"let my people go" that's markus voice and you can't convince me otherwise
Why did I not see this when it first got uploaded?
I LOVE THIS! didn't know i needed to mix my favorite film and video game together THANK YOU
Regina Baptista I watched Prince of Egypt while making this and the animation is 👌 verry good. Easily one of my new favorites! I’m glad you like my animatic!
Gosh this is beautiful. I love it. your style is fantastic.
This is so phenomenal, omf --
This Song Genuinely is a Banger and I Refuse to Apologise for Enjoying it
This is amazing. I think I've seen it 4 times this week alone. It flows so well, it feels like every single action matches to words too!
every time this shows up in my recommended, no matter what I am doing, I am legally obligated to rewatch it.
I know this is about a month old but I can't get enough of this! I literally watch this everyday now! The emotion filled with this is amazing! Every single detail and frame fits perfectly! I have no clue how this has so little views, this deserves millions!
Wow! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it enough to rewatch it! That means a lot :)
Wwwwhhhoooaaaa! This made me feel nostalgic! It's so creative, very unique! I absolutely loved it!!
What even? I never thought this song and this game could ever go together. Bloody loved Prince of Egypt
I’m still obsessed with dbh and I just found this I love it rewatch like idk 15 times? XD
Hoooooly shit. This is such an amazing animatic. Bittersweet and sad, but beautiful
i love connor and really see myself in him so usually i don’t like the animatics that portray his dark route but this was really well made ❤️
The fact that this exists makes me so happy, like you have no idea
Man, I was holding my breath the whole time.
This is fucking quality.
I wish I could stop watching this but I just can’t... It’s too damn good. Ultra-creative, the multiple layers to it make it feel so poignant. Markus & Connor’s inherent kinship as androids, that “brotherhood”, the concept of Markus as being “chosen”, Connor singularly representing the other perspective, this is so genius. I really don’t think any other fandom could use this song, only this works - Connor seeing Markus as betraying what he is, Marcus seeing Connor as a one-man army, and both are correct. What happens in DBH really is of biblical proportions, a lot of fiction is, but because the fiction is so modern it feels less epic - DBH feels pretty damn epic from an objective standpoint, and this animatic brings it to the forefront in such a creative, exciting way. Is a mission from God to free slaves more important than a mission from morality? I think probably not! With all the superhuman capabilities of the androids - the fear that Connor strikes with his power, like, his stride so well-timed with the intense chanting; and the dire situation of Marcus’s fight to save an entire type of being... This animatic just really gets down to the really awesome roots of DBH. As much as I love silly DBH memes, nothing beats fan content like this that really seems to honor and understand the source material. Also just like... excellent art, storyboarding, timing, yowza! Definitely a masterpiece. 👌🙏
Thank you for such a lovely comment!
The scene when Markus and Connor was in a same place, like laboratory is such an interesting concept ! i need to write about it
I don't know what led you to combine Prince of Egypt with DBH, but honestly, it was the best Godamned thing I've ever watched. 10/10
This animatic falls into the catagory of odd, but very glad it exists
This animatic absolutely obliterated me holy CRAP
I can't stop watching this! You took one of my favorite movies and combined it with one of my favorite games! It's absolutely AMAZING!!!
Chills, I got chills my god
OML THIS IS SO AMAZING I HAVE NO WORDS JESUS HOLY MOTHER OF CHRIST WOW xD
ThOUgh, I don't wanna be useless and do have some little critique points! :') (sorry not sorry xD)
First off, the camera, character, and object movement were all amazing! You nailed many shots so perfectly I can't even aaaaaahhh
The flashback to Connor and Markus being together as buddies was also very well made. The flickering and noise of the screen are super intriguing!
(The song choice was also p e r f e c t~)
But,
the anatomy is kinda off at some points.
ex.: At 1:28 Connor's feet have different sizes and from 1:49 to 1:52 Markus' upper arms are *a little* too long, just a little. (It's more noticeable at 1:51)
And, last but not least, the lipsyncing.
Throughout the whole animatic, the lipsync is practically non-existent. I don't know if it was on purpose but I just wanted to point it out.
For example at 2:02 Connor is singing, and you did draw his mouth open but it just looks like his lips are a little partened, same with Markus at 1:41. Y'know, it's okay to exaggerate with the mouths, especially when the characters are singing. Try drawing them as if they were yelling or something. And I suggest to look for some simple lipsync tutorials.
Here is one I found (it's for full animation, yes, but still useful):
ruclips.net/video/bSMwYVn35jM/видео.html
and here's a general overview of what the mouth can move
www.deviantart.com/kaithephaux/art/Comic-Mouths-Reference-Sheet-123070146
I hope I didn't insult you or something, I really just wanted to help you a little bit. I'm still completely in love with this animatic!!! ^-^
Jayilton Thanks for the in-depth critique! I don’t mind at all, and you were very polite and constructive so thank you!
And thanks for the reference material on lip syncing, I always love seeing how other artists do things! Oddly enough, I don’t think I ever thought about lip syncing for this animatic? That actually might have been cool to make the singing diegetic for some of the shots, I may incorporate it into my next project.
Thanks!
@@IcyTwaine
(It's nice you actually replied xD)
No problem! I'm so glad that I could help you a little bit!! :D
*this cured me with happiness*
*u have talent!!!👏👏👏👏👏*
doctorwhonerd912 hemmersbach thanks!
Why does this not have a million views
Pls why is this so good