Story 1 is such a fiction. They talk in third person and first person, and forgets what they wanna write it about. Plus no dealers do deals with homeless kids. EDIT: And that car crash... really?
Story 1: if he's in the States, Statue of Limitations on non-capital crimes is like 5 years. So if that happened more than 5 years ago he can't be convicted for it and is free to share the story without any legal concern.
First story is obviously a fiction story that somebody wrote and only later tried to pass off as real. You can tell by the way it switches from I/we to he/they.
The mix up of first and third person on the first story makes me think "copy pasta." Total work of fiction and OP didn't proof read their edits properly.
😂 Story 1 is literally a book report. It's changed around a little bit- a VERY little bit- but they basically summarized a few chapters of a book that came out like 10yrs ago 🤣 Spoiler alert: the main character becomes a police officer, and his girlfriend becomes a con artist/hooker/the villain that he has a soft spot for
sounds like some one needs a bit of feed back on a screen play for a movie they want to pitch the way the he/him/ i/me was mangled makes me think he couldn't keep the op/main character straight in his mind
The level of utter bullshit of that first story! Clearly some 11-year-old got bored. Switching between he and I, claiming to have a revolver, yet not bringing it to buy weed from the most scariest drug dealers of the country! The fact that he’s playing off that he is a street level weed dealer and yet has pockets full of cash. And lastly, in the time it took the cab to pass by her car the cops had stopped. Her, pulled her out, searched the entire vehicle, found the contraband, arrested her, put her in handcuffs, and had her in the police car. Junior needs a lesson in how to write fiction.
Fan fiction. Story 1 is almost certainly just a story in someone's head, and it reads very much like OP just changed the 3rd person pronouns to 1st person. I think I even heard a few slips in grammar where they missed a change.
I think both were fiction the Tattoo "nuke" revenge read more like a 7th grader wrote a bad fiction petty revenge story and thought OH this is gold. When it was actually 99% backstory and predictable set up for 0.8% revenge and 0.2% closure.
The first story sounds like some straight-laced guy who has only worked in a corporate setting and is trying to relay that experience through "drug running" dude literally said had a "department head" lol. And he had high endurance for drug running? Drug running isn't actual running...
Why did the drug runner story suddenly shift from first to third person. Is it because it is a piece of fiction being poorly passed off as a true story.
3:15 so many of these stories where you have guys dealing or girls doing only fans or something, they say they had no choice. I like that op is honest about what he and the girl wanted. They realized they could just get jobs at fast food places, but they said no to an honest job and wanted to do something illegal. What they did was wrong, but at least unlike all the other stories I read here, they are honest about it.
@chiapets2594 oh geez thank you so much stranger on the internet! Thanks to your rude and unnecessary comment/question I have completely realized the error of my ways and will now reevaluate how I view things online. Thanks ya dumbass. You could say that about every single story on any of these channels. I don’t watch these because I think they’re true, I just enjoy them.
The fact that story 1 keeps switching between first and third person is a clear sign to me that it's a work of fiction that some amatear author has written and repurposed to try and pass off as Nuclear revenge. It's clearly fake.
That first story is obviously fake. Way too many holes. For example the crashed cop car. How was he able to make it from the back seat to the front? The back doors lock. Wasn’t the crash a little too convenient? What about the fact that the cops were incapacitated, but op wasn’t? Why were there no emergency serviced at the scene? The list goes on…
Yeah, if you're knocked out for an hour that's a sign of significant injury. Normally being knocked unconscious and being able to get back to normal immediately is a couple of minutes max.
I don’t know story 1 isn’t very believable, but strange things have happened before. If it is true hopefully you changed your ways and you’re living an honest life.
Especially if the writer is a fluent English speaker due to their inability to not write in the third person since if it happened to them it would all be in the first person. 🤔
Yeah I agree specially when op describes himself as athletic, I don’t think that people growing up on the streets have very athletic bodies when they eat 4 times a week
Op in the last one was the biggest asshole. It just shows that love truly is blind and deaf. I can’t sympathize with him, or gf. I feel sad for the ex friend who got beat up. The parents are dumbasses for not pressing charges, too.
Story 1 sounds like it was copied from an online fictional story with the mixture of 1st and 3rd person viewpoints. As has been stated the poster didn't proofread their submission. Had it stayed as 1st person viewpoint then it would have been more believable .
The first story was interesting. It's likely fack but if buy some change it's not the only proof the cops would have on the guy would be the one money drop if he was lucky enough to not be farther sold out buy his ex but for her to likely get off with a lighter sentence is to give up bigger fish not a little runner witch means giving up her cop buddy . With little to keep him he would likely get a year in jail if that was his first time in jail then free and clear .
I try not to call out these posts as fake, but the first OP could have at least tried not to refer to themselves in the third person. Also a police car, which had already radiod in and was expected to arrive at the station, could not have actually stayed crashed on the side of the road for an hour. The cop who arrested you would most likely know your address from Kayla, as gathering that kind of info is bog standard practice. Idk man, it all just seems kinda fishy.
When they wrecked, he was passed out for an hour, and the cops were still unconscious... I guess there's no passing cars to call the cops, no 911, no actual logic?
That first story has enough changes between first and third person, along with some other quirks, to make it sound just a little bit implausible. Maybe it did happen, and the writer made those changes with some intent. But I'm a little bit skeptical.
7/8ths of the last story was setup for a revenge tattoo. This is not NuclearRevenge it falls between petty and pro. Petty because the revenge was a one off event of revenge with NO follow up to the story of the fallout or aftermath. Pro because the one off event was a Friggin ink job that probably cost a shiny bit.... unless OP payed to have her inked then it falls back into petty because OP just tagged his soon to be stalker.
Sounds like everyone was crap in the last story. Everyone that wanted him to break up were crappy and they even hid that the ex was hitting on his friends.
Yeah story one sounds more like a work of fiction. Even if there was a crash there are so many factors that don’t add up
Like the fact that the storyteller constantly switches between "him" and "me"
Oh yeah its definitely meant to be like a fiction story but at the very least it's interesting
@@rymdalkis I noticed that too. I was confused. Maybe english isn't OP's native language?
No doubt. And the drug knowledge isn't there AT ALL. "They where going to give away GRAMS of it." 😂
I have to wonder how a homeless orphan that lived a life of crime has now become a professional writer
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First one is a total lie. As if a cop would admit that while wearing a body camera
And people are that dumb. I've seen people in news articles get caught because they were boasting about their crime.
Story 1 is such a fiction. They talk in third person and first person, and forgets what they wanna write it about. Plus no dealers do deals with homeless kids.
EDIT: And that car crash... really?
Story 1: if he's in the States, Statue of Limitations on non-capital crimes is like 5 years. So if that happened more than 5 years ago he can't be convicted for it and is free to share the story without any legal concern.
Its bs how do u fall for it gullible
The weed store is total BS. The switch in tenses and the cop telling him on the spot that his girl sold him out is so fake.
That last one hahahaha
First story is obviously a fiction story that somebody wrote and only later tried to pass off as real. You can tell by the way it switches from I/we to he/they.
The mix up of first and third person on the first story makes me think "copy pasta." Total work of fiction and OP didn't proof read their edits properly.
Exactly.
Sounds the GF sounds like someone from a series of unfortunate events
Pretty sure it was translated from the OP’s native language
Def a fake story tho
Yep bad fiction
OP in the tatoo story got what he deserved. Knowing the gf was toxic and still staying with her and becouse of love. So dumb
I’d kill somebody for betrayal like that
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The flipping between 1st and 3rd person pronouns means that I don't buy Story 1 for a second. Very Deus Ex Machina in his "escape"
😂 Story 1 is literally a book report. It's changed around a little bit- a VERY little bit- but they basically summarized a few chapters of a book that came out like 10yrs ago 🤣
Spoiler alert: the main character becomes a police officer, and his girlfriend becomes a con artist/hooker/the villain that he has a soft spot for
What’s the book called?
sounds like some one needs a bit of feed back on a screen play for a movie they want to pitch the way the he/him/ i/me was mangled makes me think he couldn't keep the op/main character straight in his mind
Glad OP wised up about the gf. Toxic people are sometimes hard to leave behind
PSA: (no nuclear revenge present)
Story 1: fantasy from someone's mind.
Story 2: long, boring and it is a petty revenege
What's with the change from first person to third person tense in the first story?
I know nothing about selling drugs or how plausible these events are.
having said that, that first story seems fake as fuck
The level of utter bullshit of that first story! Clearly some 11-year-old got bored. Switching between he and I, claiming to have a revolver, yet not bringing it to buy weed from the most scariest drug dealers of the country! The fact that he’s playing off that he is a street level weed dealer and yet has pockets full of cash. And lastly, in the time it took the cab to pass by her car the cops had stopped. Her, pulled her out, searched the entire vehicle, found the contraband, arrested her, put her in handcuffs, and had her in the police car. Junior needs a lesson in how to write fiction.
That was some nice creative writing in story 1 lmao.
Yeah that First story was fake AF. Entertaining though. lol
Fan fiction. Story 1 is almost certainly just a story in someone's head, and it reads very much like OP just changed the 3rd person pronouns to 1st person.
I think I even heard a few slips in grammar where they missed a change.
I think both were fiction the Tattoo "nuke" revenge read more like a 7th grader wrote a bad fiction petty revenge story and thought OH this is gold. When it was actually 99% backstory and predictable set up for 0.8% revenge and 0.2% closure.
The first story sounds like some straight-laced guy who has only worked in a corporate setting and is trying to relay that experience through "drug running" dude literally said had a "department head" lol. And he had high endurance for drug running? Drug running isn't actual running...
He was saying from running from the cops pickpocketing people which would make them both Pos's and the stories complete bs so...
Probably a work of fiction, but an entertaining work of fiction so it gets a pass from me.
Why did the drug runner story suddenly shift from first to third person. Is it because it is a piece of fiction being poorly passed off as a true story.
3:15 so many of these stories where you have guys dealing or girls doing only fans or something, they say they had no choice. I like that op is honest about what he and the girl wanted. They realized they could just get jobs at fast food places, but they said no to an honest job and wanted to do something illegal. What they did was wrong, but at least unlike all the other stories I read here, they are honest about it.
Stories complete bs how do u fall for it
@chiapets2594 oh geez thank you so much stranger on the internet! Thanks to your rude and unnecessary comment/question I have completely realized the error of my ways and will now reevaluate how I view things online. Thanks ya dumbass. You could say that about every single story on any of these channels. I don’t watch these because I think they’re true, I just enjoy them.
The weed story is 100% fake
The fact that story 1 keeps switching between first and third person is a clear sign to me that it's a work of fiction that some amatear author has written and repurposed to try and pass off as Nuclear revenge. It's clearly fake.
That first story is obviously fake. Way too many holes. For example the crashed cop car. How was he able to make it from the back seat to the front? The back doors lock. Wasn’t the crash a little too convenient? What about the fact that the cops were incapacitated, but op wasn’t? Why were there no emergency serviced at the scene? The list goes on…
Yeah, if you're knocked out for an hour that's a sign of significant injury. Normally being knocked unconscious and being able to get back to normal immediately is a couple of minutes max.
First story is totally fake.
Does anyone else find it strange that the 1st story switches back and forth to 1st and 3rd person narrator? Kinda looses the air of believably for me.
I don’t know story 1 isn’t very believable, but strange things have happened before. If it is true hopefully you changed your ways and you’re living an honest life.
Especially if the writer is a fluent English speaker due to their inability to not write in the third person since if it happened to them it would all be in the first person. 🤔
The changing from first and third person makes it sound like they stole it from a book and forgot to change the details
I don't believe it at all myself.
Just like the ones narrated by Mr Reddito.
Yeah I agree specially when op describes himself as athletic, I don’t think that people growing up on the streets have very athletic bodies when they eat 4 times a week
Op in the last one was the biggest asshole. It just shows that love truly is blind and deaf. I can’t sympathize with him, or gf. I feel sad for the ex friend who got beat up. The parents are dumbasses for not pressing charges, too.
This is complete BS!
Fake story how does he have the car keys after being on the way to jail? And how does he got a phone ?
Story 1 sounds like it was copied from an online fictional story with the mixture of 1st and 3rd person viewpoints. As has been stated the poster didn't proofread their submission. Had it stayed as 1st person viewpoint then it would have been more believable .
it wasn’t Starbucks. It was Dutch brothers.😂
The first story was interesting.
It's likely fack but if buy some change it's not the only proof the cops would have on the guy would be the one money drop if he was lucky enough to not be farther sold out buy his ex but for her to likely get off with a lighter sentence is to give up bigger fish not a little runner witch means giving up her cop buddy .
With little to keep him he would likely get a year in jail if that was his first time in jail then free and clear .
I try not to call out these posts as fake, but the first OP could have at least tried not to refer to themselves in the third person. Also a police car, which had already radiod in and was expected to arrive at the station, could not have actually stayed crashed on the side of the road for an hour. The cop who arrested you would most likely know your address from Kayla, as gathering that kind of info is bog standard practice. Idk man, it all just seems kinda fishy.
The OP in that last story was an idiot, even Stevie Wonder could see the red flags
yep first story was soo fake
That's the trouble with being a criminal. You never know who to trust.
No, I'm not a criminal myself. I've never done anything like that.
Story 1 is complete BS. Indiva? Him, I, they, etc. do they not know who they are?
When they wrecked, he was passed out for an hour, and the cops were still unconscious... I guess there's no passing cars to call the cops, no 911, no actual logic?
That first story has enough changes between first and third person, along with some other quirks, to make it sound just a little bit implausible.
Maybe it did happen, and the writer made those changes with some intent.
But I'm a little bit skeptical.
That tattoo story that was a nuclear Revenge love it
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7/8ths of the last story was setup for a revenge tattoo. This is not NuclearRevenge it falls between petty and pro. Petty because the revenge was a one off event of revenge with NO follow up to the story of the fallout or aftermath. Pro because the one off event was a Friggin ink job that probably cost a shiny bit.... unless OP payed to have her inked then it falls back into petty because OP just tagged his soon to be stalker.
I always wonder why tattoo shops don't do couples tattoos at the same time to avoid this. Two tattoists, two chairs, no tricks.
Wow not beating ur friend up, trying it on with ur mate wow just wow
First story sounds like fiction, but it was entertaining
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Sounds like everyone was crap in the last story. Everyone that wanted him to break up were crappy and they even hid that the ex was hitting on his friends.
Haven't even finished it yet but that first story is complete and utter bullshit tho so far entertaining
The tattoo story is classic 😂
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