I hope this becomes a series, the characters are awesome and I'd like to hear more stories about them. Thank you for always putting the best stories on your channel ❤️
Jordan this is such a great story!! 🤩💜 I would love to hear more as a series! What great characters! Thanks Jordan, hope you’re having a great holiday, cheers!!!! 🎉🤗💯🥂🎄
It was so good it could be inspiration for a tv show or movie, hell I'd call it " my misadventures at the monster saloon " yes!!! That would be it.. Ry's opinion only but yes 100% yes follow up make more put it on screen, syfi or Netflix would pick this up in a heart beat!!
OP thinks on his feet! He handled it well and didn’t freak out. He is alive!!! Like vex the characters, hopefully we’ll meet in hem again soon. Thanks, have a nice evening. 🎉
A Pest elf? I’m amazed at how great this story was. Thank you for a great dose of adventure/monster story to darken up the season. I’m here for that always. Looking forward to the next one!😊
I love these kind of stories and the characters, hopefully hear more from them.really glad I found your channel and really enjoy the stories and characters you have created. Especially the humour intertwined with the situations they find themselves in. Financially not in a place to become a patrion but in time hopefully I will. I shall support your work by liking commenting and sharing foe now take care
🛑WARNING!⚠️ A small spoiler below.⬇️ . . . . . . . . I'm at 10:48 where a monster is trying to wheedle Wisp into handing over the human "meal," or at least share. I'm wondering if the young human man isn't so human after all, which was why the "don't look/come here" glamour of the speak-easy didn't work on him?.... OR it's as simple as what Wisp said about the bar guy setting a lure to trap a human meal? Either way, i'm loving this story and am here for it!!😂
🥰 Awh Wisp ❤a sweetheart I love him. ❤how sweet of him to care a human knowing that he’s not in the upper echelons of his monster world. I’m loving this so much. Monsters are hilarious. Wait I know who this is. He’s the wife from the other story. Omg Jake wanted the phone case. So cool. This must’ve been before he was able to get out of slavery. I like this. Wisp is cool. Yesterday I met a woman and her daughter who has Down syndrome and I have a daughter on the spectrum around her so. This little lady was so bold and sweet and kind and she doesn’t mix words. Her mom said “ why are you so nice to this woman and you treat me like crap?!” The baby said “BECAUSE SHE’S AWESOME SAUCE!” Look at her mom she’s gorgeous and she looks pretty 😢❤That girl just didn’t know what I was going through underneath the makeup and clothes. She made my day and now we’re buddies her and my daughter have a dinner date with tomorrow night and me and her mom are so excited because they have wine. And my baby girl has a drivers license so we can have a few glasses and feel like we’re cool again. I’m totally gassed up being called awesome sauce by someone who doesn’t lie at all, brutal honesty. She told my daughter “we’re not kids, we’re women too and if you know how to take busses we can be able to do everything with just us!” POV I love kids.
Jordan you always have a new, exciting, awesome story to narrate for us!! I subscribed to your channel from day one, when you 1st came out. Ik you were something special then. Now look at you, almost at 57K members & growing!! With ppl that love your channel & talent just as much as me💗💗
My giant, biker-looking dad does this often. All black bar in the 70s, gay bar, lesbian bar, etc, etc. He said the scariest and unfriendliest was the lesbian bar. 🤣🤣
I loved this story. Jake was an ass, but that's what makes me like her. I like Wisp too. I'm happy his first instinct was to help the poor man instead of harming him. Which brings me to my question. What is Wisp? Can someone tell me please?
I've worked with him on a couple of projects, he's a great narrator! tbh I think a lot of us use similar fonts and thumbnail styles. If you look at most creepypasta channels a lot of them have similar styles of thumbs and fonts. Go with what works I guess
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I love all of your work Jordan, far and away my favorite narrator. But the main character in this story was so stoopid and annoying I just couldn't listen to it.
I hope this becomes a series, the characters are awesome and I'd like to hear more stories about them. Thank you for always putting the best stories on your channel ❤️
Same. Sounds as if it in the silver king universe as well
I want to buy Jordan's books very soon 🙏🤞. He's a great writer too ❤
That sounds great and heck yea silver king is great
Definitely could be a awesome series
Yeah I'm with you on this. It would definitely make an awesome series!
(17:45) What an amazing plot twist! Your storytelling skills are out of this world. 🚀
I love supernatural and human interaction story's hope we get a part 2
This is part of the silver king universe. It's a one shot but there's a ton more stories.
This is from the silver king universe theres a bunch more stories if anyones interested
Yes where do I find them
@@Cander617 Ditto! I'd love to read those stories 💜😎
I want a wisp!❤ Thank you Jordan for another fantasti-magical story!😊
What I took from this is that if I keep a three wicked candle in my home, a small smoke monster will clean for me. I'm heading to Wal-Mart!
Jordan this is such a great story!! 🤩💜 I would love to hear more as a series! What great characters! Thanks Jordan, hope you’re having a great holiday, cheers!!!! 🎉🤗💯🥂🎄
i LOVE when characters reappear in new stories
I know this is Silver King but which characters reappeared?
This has to be Jake from the woods that saved the kids with all the posters on the trees
I believe it is
Whats the vids name?
Loved it, but now I want to hear what happens next - I have a feeling there’s way more to be told 😛❤️❤️❤️
Best story I've heard in a very long time!!!! Bravo!! Loved it!
It was so good it could be inspiration for a tv show or movie, hell I'd call it " my misadventures at the monster saloon " yes!!! That would be it.. Ry's opinion only but yes 100% yes follow up make more put it on screen, syfi or Netflix would pick this up in a heart beat!!
Still like the sheriff and deputy stories from Hollows End but these characters could come close 2nd if follow up stories are made
Thank you Jordan! Have a Great Day Everybody
Great story- really hope it becomes a regular series. Love the characters ❤️
Here’s the comment to boost the algorithm- cool story, too!
OP thinks on his feet! He handled it well and didn’t freak out. He is alive!!! Like vex the characters, hopefully we’ll meet in hem again soon.
Thanks, have a nice evening. 🎉
A Pest elf? I’m amazed at how great this story was. Thank you for a great dose of adventure/monster story to darken up the season. I’m here for that always. Looking forward to the next one!😊
*pest _wisp_ 😛
Love these types of story’s. Hope you continue more of this story line.
That was a cute story and it sounds like there will be more coming with these characters 😊 Thanks Jordan
I love these kind of stories and the characters, hopefully hear more from them.really glad I found your channel and really enjoy the stories and characters you have created. Especially the humour intertwined with the situations they find themselves in.
Financially not in a place to become a patrion but in time hopefully I will. I shall support your work by liking commenting and sharing foe now take care
Under my electric blanket for this one ❤
love love loved this story. I hope there's more.. 🎉
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I'm at 10:48 where a monster is trying to wheedle Wisp into handing over the human "meal," or at least share.
I'm wondering if the young human man isn't so human after all, which was why the "don't look/come here" glamour of the speak-easy didn't work on him?.... OR it's as simple as what Wisp said about the bar guy setting a lure to trap a human meal?
Either way, i'm loving this story and am here for it!!😂
Awesome!! Feels like it could be a series!! ❤😊 thankyou JG
Monster is a subjective term.
I mean what most of us flush after waking up every morning could be called monsters .
I want another story of them, this was a great story❤❤❤ Im on love with them
That's one human that can roll. He'd be great back up in over under situations.
True fact. There used to be a cartoon in the UK years ago called "Willow The Wisp."
🥰 Awh Wisp ❤a sweetheart I love him. ❤how sweet of him to care a human knowing that he’s not in the upper echelons of his monster world. I’m loving this so much. Monsters are hilarious. Wait I know who this is. He’s the wife from the other story. Omg Jake wanted the phone case. So cool. This must’ve been before he was able to get out of slavery. I like this. Wisp is cool.
Yesterday I met a woman and her daughter who has Down syndrome and I have a daughter on the spectrum around her so. This little lady was so bold and sweet and kind and she doesn’t mix words. Her mom said “ why are you so nice to this woman and you treat me like crap?!”
The baby said “BECAUSE SHE’S AWESOME SAUCE!” Look at her mom she’s gorgeous and she looks pretty 😢❤That girl just didn’t know what I was going through underneath the makeup and clothes. She made my day and now we’re buddies her and my daughter have a dinner date with tomorrow night and me and her mom are so excited because they have wine. And my baby girl has a drivers license so we can have a few glasses and feel like we’re cool again. I’m totally gassed up being called awesome sauce by someone who doesn’t lie at all, brutal honesty. She told my daughter “we’re not kids, we’re women too and if you know how to take busses we can be able to do everything with just us!” POV I love kids.
I can't wait to hear the evolution of this story!!
Looking forward to see where this might go, well I hope there's a follow up story with these characters.
Excellent story Jordan! Thank you
Huge thanks to the author u/02321 for writing this one!
Bedtime story! Yay! Thank you Jordan!!
This reminds me of the mailman story universe.
I’m here for it.
This story was so fun! I really I hope this becomes a series. I love these kinds of worlds! 🥰
Definitely need this to be a huge series the potential is endless
I LOVE this one! Yes! Next chapter???
If this is a start of a series, it would be great. The dude get a place to live out of all this after all. Nice story.
That was supernaturally fun!
That was a cool one. You’ll be able to build on the story line , too.
You suck
Very first line is my life in a nutshell 👌🏻
Loved this!
Echoing previous comments this would make a great series. Love to hear more about Supernatural society. Here's to more Joey and Wisp!
This was so gooooood! You amaze me! Thank you
Bang ❗️ Bang ‼️ Boys❤. Thanks for the epic stories 🎉
Thank you Jordan 🫶
Love it!!! Need more of this storyline!!
This was really good. I also hope that it becomes a series.
Jordan you always have a new, exciting, awesome story to narrate for us!! I subscribed to your channel from day one, when you 1st came out. Ik you were something special then. Now look at you, almost at 57K members & growing!! With ppl that love your channel & talent just as much as me💗💗
Thank you so much for supporting the channel since the very beginning!
Thank you very much, Jordan❤❤❤❤❤❤
Much appreciated Jordan. 👍🏻
This was great
What a freakin bro! ❤ and what an ending! 😊 👏👏👏
Thanks Jordan!
I love this writer! Thankyou Jordan ❤
This could totally happen in Portland
I want this to be a series
Loved it!❤
Thanks Grupe! A bar series sounds promising 💜😎👍
Always love 02321 💕💕💕
I hope this is the same Jake that saved those kids in the woods
My giant, biker-looking dad does this often. All black bar in the 70s, gay bar, lesbian bar, etc, etc. He said the scariest and unfriendliest was the lesbian bar. 🤣🤣
Would love a series of this!!!
Well that was fun!
Those flowers I want 😊
Hold on... is he talking about the things from the pest control company stories??
This was a hidden gem! ❤
I loved this story. Jake was an ass, but that's what makes me like her. I like Wisp too. I'm happy his first instinct was to help the poor man instead of harming him. Which brings me to my question. What is Wisp? Can someone tell me please?
Probably some type of fae with a name like wisp and floating
I loved this!!! When the next instalment?😊
Hope to hear more of this
Unexpected. ❤❤❤
Can’t wait! I always love “I walked into the wrong bar…”
Invite Jake she seems fun haha
Interesting story nothing personal to the people that live there but this wouldn't surprise me in New York LoL
yeah, been there, done that
@@strange-universe you had homosexual encounters in New York City?
@@bryanclark5529 encountered, but not participated. And years ago, bars weren't very clear about what was on the inside.
Yeah. Love Jake.
Well , this was amusing . Kind of a Douglas Adams thing going on .
Need a continuance!
Great story, new series? I hope.
Cool story
Very nice, and kinda cute too.
Is this the same Jake from the story with the brothers?
Yes I believe so
Was the bar in hollows end?😅
Different author but I could definitely see a bar like this existing in HE
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Jake!✨
Liked and commented. Going to live chat
I guess you didn't make it 😢
Oooh, i ship it!😂
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This is the same music, thumbnail style, and text font style as another narrator named, “Horror on the Rocks”….
I've worked with him on a couple of projects, he's a great narrator! tbh I think a lot of us use similar fonts and thumbnail styles. If you look at most creepypasta channels a lot of them have similar styles of thumbs and fonts. Go with what works I guess
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I love all of your work Jordan, far and away my favorite narrator. But the main character in this story was so stoopid and annoying I just couldn't listen to it.
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