I really hate that blood licking thin anko does. Its really disgusting and I wish for once some writer would be brave enough to take it out or at least have Naruto push her off before she does it. Seriously, every fanfic has it and it makes me believe that people have no imagination. Would it really be so hard to take it out or have Naruto stop it or even heck, call her out on it and tell her that's disgusting and that he could have her charged for sexual harassment?
Good what if showing the reality of Naruto becoming what the village made him as they say treat someone as a demon you get a demon but poor Hinata that's the one thing I didn't like
I understand and glad that Naruto has finally gotten more his act together, but Hinata doesn’t deserve this level of cruelty. I can’t see anything else to root for him anymore. I don’t see a Pilar of resilience against hate that many people have come to know, but a jaded ninja who is just going to end being another Sasuke.
@@Chrisfragger1 dude even the manga and anime not once has Hinata defended Naruto. Now don’t get me wrong I’m happy how things played out in the manga and anime don’t forget this is an AU so cool your jets bitch
Oh great. Another one that Hates on Hinata. I got news for these fan fiction authors. This is not doing something different. This is the cliche I have read over 500 fan fictions of Naruto and in 95% of them. He does not hook up with Hinata. In a high percentage of them, they make Hinata into an insane stalker. It's like they're looking for a reason not to hook them up. And for those who say they don't want follow cannon. Here's the thing in the Naruto. She doesn't hook up with him until the movies in between the Naruto cannon and the Borato cannon. So another story where they actually make it bland as hell and more cliche than they realize. I think I'm going to avoid all the cliches. No, this one just played into most of the worst ones. I'm not telling the author to change how he wrote this story. It's just not for me and I get 2/3 of the way through and I just have to quit listening to it. Just my opinion and no one has to respond back. I don't really care. Just I got 2/3 of the way to this story and had to quit listening to it.
Part 2 I am very interested and very curious
PART 2
I really hate that blood licking thin anko does. Its really disgusting and I wish for once some writer would be brave enough to take it out or at least have Naruto push her off before she does it. Seriously, every fanfic has it and it makes me believe that people have no imagination. Would it really be so hard to take it out or have Naruto stop it or even heck, call her out on it and tell her that's disgusting and that he could have her charged for sexual harassment?
That's her character
Neji: 359° degree vision and rotation
Akamaru/Kiba: bare claw slashes him from behind to debilitate Neji
bro was in that one weakspot
For those wondering this story got scrapped
bruh
@@wavetheGOAT420I’m not even surprised every good what if gets scrapped
I really hope kurenai doesn't mess naruto up to much that damn troublesome woman thinks he's a demon and will probably mess him up with a genjutsu
Part 2 please. Interesting take on Naruto. Curious to see what happens on the last day. I have an idea, but I will wait to see if I am correct.
Part 2 asap
Wow, I feel bad for Hinata.
I think people don’t realize that hinata has been through the ringer just like Naruto( not as much but) she is not that bad of a character.
It's your fault get revenge on the demon You're responsible for this
Naruto lowkey a menace what did Hinata do 💀
I honestly hope he gets rid of Sakura
Part 2 please ❤❤❤
Part 2 please! Is naruto really going dark? ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😮😅😅😅😅😅😮😮😮😮😮
Good what if showing the reality of Naruto becoming what the village made him as they say treat someone as a demon you get a demon but poor Hinata that's the one thing I didn't like
The child who is not embraced by the village will burn it down to feel its warmth
No,hinata desert of that I loved every moment of you it
What if are only at peak when naruto an sasuke are brother type relationship
I understand and glad that Naruto has finally gotten more his act together, but Hinata doesn’t deserve this level of cruelty.
I can’t see anything else to root for him anymore. I don’t see a Pilar of resilience against hate that many people have come to know, but a jaded ninja who is just going to end being another Sasuke.
Exactly. I was with him until that part. Like sakura deserved that beating yet hinata got it. made me dislike him heavy
How could the writer be so SAVAGE to Hinata...
Naruto is SOOO proud of beating the ONE fellow shinobi his own age that appreciated him... What a slimeball.
@@Chrisfragger1 never diss Naruto in front of me, bro
@@Chrisfragger1 dude even the manga and anime not once has Hinata defended Naruto. Now don’t get me wrong I’m happy how things played out in the manga and anime don’t forget this is an AU so cool your jets bitch
liked it at first, but when he beat the crap out of hinata and stomped on her head after the match was called turned me off from this.
Agreed
1:54:35 , this does not fit for naruto as hes not stupid anymore
So ummm... we not gonna leave hinata like that are we like damn I'm afraid to ask for a part2 😅😅😂
Another dude in the comment section said it got scrapped
Next please 🔥🔥🔥🔥
part 2 please
Part 2 pls
Oh yeah, the title is wrong.
Next part please
You got the title wrong.
1:40:00
Part 2 please and if possible put the link for this story
this the movie bud
2:38:46 part 2 I think
What hinata do tho
Oh great. Another one that Hates on Hinata. I got news for these fan fiction authors. This is not doing something different. This is the cliche I have read over 500 fan fictions of Naruto and in 95% of them. He does not hook up with Hinata. In a high percentage of them, they make Hinata into an insane stalker. It's like they're looking for a reason not to hook them up. And for those who say they don't want follow cannon. Here's the thing in the Naruto. She doesn't hook up with him until the movies in between the Naruto cannon and the Borato cannon. So another story where they actually make it bland as hell and more cliche than they realize. I think I'm going to avoid all the cliches. No, this one just played into most of the worst ones. I'm not telling the author to change how he wrote this story. It's just not for me and I get 2/3 of the way through and I just have to quit listening to it. Just my opinion and no one has to respond back. I don't really care. Just I got 2/3 of the way to this story and had to quit listening to it.
um yapp
Damn what hinata do to Naruto💀💀
She got the wrong sensi
Seriously though
It’s not what she did, but what she didn’t do
@@The-Iast-1preach brother preach
Bro plz give link
How you not gonna let us hear Naruto beat down Sakura
Exactly. I had to endure hinata getting beat but not the girl who deserve it????? Pissed me off
You let innocent hinata get the crap beat out of her but not sakura? Im glad the author didn't continue. Because he is garbage at what ifs.
what if naruto got harem
I really hope kurenai doesn't mess naruto up to much that damn troublesome woman thinks he's a demon and will probably mess him up with a genjutsu
Part 2 please
Part 2 please