There won't be any more parts. If you read the title properly, you will notice Movie is in the title, meaning there won't be more to the story. Not to mention that the last hour felt like they hit writers block and just smashed multiple stories together just to end the story. There was no real rime or reason to the third act.
Well the story was going good till the last hour or so, then it felt like you got writers block and just wrote whatever to quickly finish the story in any way you could. It felt like multiple stories smashed together at the end.
Okay, some of the stuff in this one doesn't make sense. They knew the attack was coming yet they're unprepared? What? Why? It's just like the stuff that was in tpphe previous paragraph doesn't carry over to the next one. I don't get this story. How it went from being a great story to oh, here is a surprise twist. This sailor that nobody knew anything about all of a sudden shows up to rescue Naruto. Like who the hell is this guy? There was no build up and it is just like random events afterward. All the monkey with the plot with an unknown character and a still killed the third. Does anyone else see what's wrong with that situation? I don't mind changing cannon, but at least save some. That really people felt bad about dying in the original if you're going to change the Canon of the story. But, yeah, a lot of random unknown characters, all of a sudden showing up in the plotor they might be from some of the story. I don't know, I just know, I don't know who they are if there's author's originals, I'm, it's become a cliche to throw in random characters now. Almost every story and the reason I point that out is there are plenty of very seldom Singh characters in Naruto, you just catch glimpses of them. There are plenty of characters to use in a fan fiction. But people don't make use of them. They also added out minor storyplots that could be expanded upon and papers like will. It's just a fan fiction. My point is if you're going to change a significant part of the story. But not really alter the cannon, just sort of scramble it up. You could rot your own story. Just drop the whole ninja village thing. And I've never understood why the ninja's act more like adventurers. Even in the original cannon, Naruto didn't act like a ninja. He acted like an adventurer.
This and my previous comment or just critiques. Truthfully, I'm confused, it's like the author stapled, 2 different story together and then just wanted to get the story over with to me. So you can read my previous comment or not. I just I'm just confused?
To hide his cat like eyes as stated multiple times in the story up to the point of him forgetting to put them back on after the first part of the test.
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This was a very well written story. The ending was a plot twist. I never saw coming. Very sad ending. 6:12:14
6 HOURS im in love
Bro I thought this was only two hours let's go
@@itzwillyboy2377lol me too
Kakashi tells Naruto to change his clothes and is then surprised that Naruto changed his clothes?
Fr
I mean take someone that has never listened to advice let alone a command and for them to comply without any argument? I’d be surprised too
Because naruto refused
@@devious_ballsbro😭 he refused?, Bruh he listened and went with a different outfit😹
@@cory8770 he said no and when he got home he listened
Dem bots dont understand that grammer is important tho fire story
That is how you teach it.
@@westernbodyno don't get the fire Nation railed up we don't need another 100 year war lmao
This is sooo good please do part 2 ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This is fire
Anco Could have ended orochimaru but she didn't, she fucked everything up 🤦♂️
Orochimaru is stronger than anko tho
@@MonkeyPlayingRblxorochimaru was weakened she saw him
True but that would make the most sense not to kill him for the Invasion of The sand and the sound
Part 2 please 🙏 😂😂🎉🎉😂❤❤
There won't be any more parts. If you read the title properly, you will notice Movie is in the title, meaning there won't be more to the story.
Not to mention that the last hour felt like they hit writers block and just smashed multiple stories together just to end the story. There was no real rime or reason to the third act.
I don’t why but when I heard sunglasses I thought of gojo 😂 i don’t know why though 😂
Sasuke acts like he’s five acts like he’s better then gets angry when someone shows him up
It always pissed me off
Orochimaru lost to Naruto,
Orochimaru: Dosu, go kill Naruto
Part 2,3 and 4 please! 😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉😂😂😂😂
This was amazing
Imminent Change by Botan-kun
Ok i dont say this often but please give us a part two
Usually if they call it movie, it's the full story, or at least all that was made
Why sunglasses 😅
this is an ancient story
#Sukuna fire
Well the story was going good till the last hour or so, then it felt like you got writers block and just wrote whatever to quickly finish the story in any way you could. It felt like multiple stories smashed together at the end.
He doesn't write them he just puts a has something read it put a picture on and post it
Okay, some of the stuff in this one doesn't make sense. They knew the attack was coming yet they're unprepared? What? Why?
It's just like the stuff that was in tpphe previous paragraph doesn't carry over to the next one. I don't get this story. How it went from being a great story to oh, here is a surprise twist. This sailor that nobody knew anything about all of a sudden shows up to rescue Naruto. Like who the hell is this guy? There was no build up and it is just like random events afterward. All the monkey with the plot with an unknown character and a still killed the third. Does anyone else see what's wrong with that situation? I don't mind changing cannon, but at least save some. That really people felt bad about dying in the original if you're going to change the Canon of the story. But, yeah, a lot of random unknown characters, all of a sudden showing up in the plotor they might be from some of the story. I don't know, I just know, I don't know who they are if there's author's originals, I'm, it's become a cliche to throw in random characters now. Almost every story and the reason I point that out is there are plenty of very seldom Singh characters in Naruto, you just catch glimpses of them. There are plenty of characters to use in a fan fiction. But people don't make use of them. They also added out minor storyplots that could be expanded upon and papers like will. It's just a fan fiction. My point is if you're going to change a significant part of the story. But not really alter the cannon, just sort of scramble it up. You could rot your own story. Just drop the whole ninja village thing. And I've never understood why the ninja's act more like adventurers. Even in the original cannon, Naruto didn't act like a ninja. He acted like an adventurer.
Yoo
Part 2 please
This and my previous comment or just critiques. Truthfully, I'm confused, it's like the author stapled, 2 different story together and then just wanted to get the story over with to me. So you can read my previous comment or not. I just I'm just confused?
Yoooo
Who’s gonna sit here for 6 hours ik I am
I've got it on ×2 speed
Why the sunglasses?😂😂😂
To hide his cat like eyes as stated multiple times in the story up to the point of him forgetting to put them back on after the first part of the test.
Next part
Next part pls
I’m sorry but this is a movie so no next part sorry 😕
yooooo
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Part 2
Part 2?????????
4:26:27
No it's not it is the tiger seal
bro they no part 2
p2?
Hi love your videos i was wondering if you could do what if fem naruto is a gorgeous sleigh beggy with no whisker marks with OP magic from the magus bride in the naruto world harem❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
can i get a link to the fanfiction
🤮
Part 2
6:06:02