||When a devil falls for the mute girl||ONESHOT||

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  • Опубликовано: 8 ноя 2024

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  • @itzcherrychimmie9265
    @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +10

    After the trash end- Ik most of yall want another bonus part. But I'll say that I can't actually make a new part fot this cuz I Don't have any ideas next. I'm on on *no idea* phrase for sometime now. So why don't we do smth different!!!
    💙You can write your Own bonus part FOR THIS story. Or like a short idea what happens next according to your own choice. I'll then pin the yall's comment ✌️✌️ 💙
    Ridiculous idea ik-

    • @ARMY-LACHIMOLALA
      @ARMY-LACHIMOLALA 10 месяцев назад +5

      Bonus part please
      Y/n start to go her college and in the way she was lost in jimin's thought that she didn't notice a car is going to het her but someone save her and that someone non other than our Devil jiminaa
      Now you are. Author so imagine more and make part 2 please i want them together ❤❤❤

    • @INNOCENT_ARMY58
      @INNOCENT_ARMY58 8 месяцев назад +1

      Yess authorrrr🎉

    • @ARMY-LACHIMOLALA
      @ARMY-LACHIMOLALA 8 месяцев назад +1

      @@INNOCENT_ARMY58 do you like my idiya ??

    • @INNOCENT_ARMY58
      @INNOCENT_ARMY58 8 месяцев назад +1

      @@ARMY-LACHIMOLALA yess

    • @ARMY-LACHIMOLALA
      @ARMY-LACHIMOLALA 8 месяцев назад

      @@INNOCENT_ARMY58 oo thnx, but I think author didn't see my comment

  • @smol_guy_jimin
    @smol_guy_jimin 8 месяцев назад +5

    From past 8 months this story is living rent free in my mind!!!!

  • @btsamygurl9635
    @btsamygurl9635 Год назад +20

    MASTERPIECE 😭😭😭😭😭😭 they deserved to get together😭😭😭😭

  • @SarojSharma-y7c
    @SarojSharma-y7c 8 месяцев назад +6

    Bonus part by me :
    After all the things Y/n again started her schooling but she never forgot abt him and always wished to see him again. 5 Months later
    Y/n was sitting in her room with her bestie lia whom she met 4 months ago as a newbie they were discussing abt something when Y/n noticed a stat pendent on her neck and it was glowing black ( like u know wht I mean)
    Y/n: hey, lia what is that on ur neck it's beautiful.
    Lia: o-oh t-this umm....my grandma gave me this yeah..(nervous)
    Y/n: Gurl... don't even know how to lie tell me the truth and why do I feel like it's something to do with demons and all.
    Lia: (sigh) fine I will tell......but please keep it a secret pls.
    Y/n: ok now tell.
    Lia: You are right it is related to demons. Actually I worship demons.
    Y/n was too stunned to speak, but she gathered herself and asked stuttering.
    Y/n: S-So it means y-you pray to demons. (Scared a lil)
    Lia: yeah but am not like ur cousin to sacrifice u for my good ok.
    Y/n already told her about the incident but didn't told about jimin. She was scared that people might think her as a fool. But after she learned about her friend being a worshipper it brought hope in her that she might be able to see jimin again so she decided to tell her everything.
    Y/n: (deep breath) u know when I told you about the incident with my cousin.
    Lia: yes...so?
    Y/n: actually I hid something from u actually- (tells her abt jimin her love)...... Sorry for hiding I hope u understand.( Nervous)
    Lia: (still shocked from what she just learned) So ur telling me u both love each other....
    Y/n: yeah pls pls help me I wanna meet him again pls don't say no pls ..
    Lia: b-but...... Tch fine I will.
    Y/n: thank you so much.
    Lia: so done tmrw meet me at my house at 3AM ok?
    Y/n: yess done.... (Excited)
    Lia: so for now am going I need to prepare for tmrw
    Scene shifted to HELL....❤️‍🔥
    Jimin is sitting on his throne while remembering abt Y/n
    Suddenly his best friend comes.
    Tae: hey, jimin what are u thinking are u thinking about that girl again?
    Jimin looked over and saw tae.
    Jimin: yes tae, I miss her so much I wanna take her here and never leave her.
    Tae: U know na u can't she belongs to earth. Also she didn't said she love you so I don't think she loves you.
    Jimin: I don't think so. But maybe ur right huhh..... I just wish to meet her again.
    Time skip lia's house
    Y/n: lia u sure he will come... I mean will this work.
    Lia: yes trust me now sit there and let me do my work.
    She started the ritual of calling him. While she was doing so the temperature of the room suddenly went down and it started to get cold Y/n hugged herself because of coldness. The lights started flickering and eventually turned off now the room was totally dark only the light from the moon that was coming through windows can be seen.
    Y/n: w-whts happening.
    Lia: oh my lord demon jimin look ur worshipper is calling u pls come and bless us with ur presence.
    The room was filled with smoke now and u were sitting beside lia but then u heard.
    ???: Y/n?
    U looked up only to see hin standing ther with red glowing eyes,fangs,horns, wings everything beautiful. You couldn't stop urself and rushed to hug him and cried over his chest.
    Y/n: u so bad u left me alone. I am angry (sobbing).
    Jimin: sorry love I thought u didn't wanted me. So I left.
    Y/n: did I ever said I didn't wanted u??
    Jimin: So u love me (smirk)
    Y/n: (blushing) I didn't said that did l.
    Jimin: someone's blushing hmm....(smirk)
    Y/n: yahhh hey, stob it..
    Jimin: (laughing) ok ok fine.
    Lia: ( throat clear) guys am also here...
    Jimin: (frown) who are u?
    Lia: me her bff and the one who helped her to call u here.(proudly)
    Jimin: oh ok now u can go I don't need help now.
    Lia:(in disbelief) did u guys just used me huh...fake love fake love (being dramatic)
    Y/n: yahh go now shu shu.
    Lia left
    Jimin: baby, I missed you.. I love you
    Y/n: l love you too baby ❤
    Jimin: (smirking) then proove by kissing me.
    Y/n eyes widened
    Y/n: yahh u shameless man shut up.
    Y/n was about to move but jimin pulled her and kissed her lovingly, Y/n also responded
    After good 5 min they pulled away.
    Jimin: I love you
    Y/n I love you too
    The end
    Hope u like it 🤧🤧

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  8 месяцев назад +4

      omg this sounds actually great!! ✨😭💓 thanks it was cool!!

    • @ash_mos
      @ash_mos 2 месяца назад +1

      Wahh...I really liked the bonus part even tho it is not published through video ❤

  • @Bangtannies577
    @Bangtannies577 Год назад +31

    I wanted them to be together but it's still AmaJIN 💜

  • @andreeatutu1526
    @andreeatutu1526 Год назад +14

    Girl you are the best❤❤ i want Jimin and Y/N together they deserve to be together ❤️ 💜

  • @_j.m35
    @_j.m35 Год назад +6

    7:10
    Jimin: watch your mouth
    Meanwhike Yn be like
    Bruh u know i cant speak 💀

  • @louiestarr3728
    @louiestarr3728 8 месяцев назад +2

    I'm crying rn!!! It was amaJIN like MASTERPIECE?!!

  • @safasultan1548
    @safasultan1548 Год назад +5

    They diserve to be together Unnie plz make them together make a bonus part telling that she tried to call him by black magic after so many tries he came back and make them together plzz unnie i request it was just fabulous 😭💕

  • @manawershanaz7697
    @manawershanaz7697 Год назад +7

    Author they deserve to get together it is a masterpiece I ever seen in my life😢❤❤❤ love you

  • @palakkharwar9486
    @palakkharwar9486 Год назад +9

    Unnnie we really need a bonus part plzzz btw love you and your ff's ......... but we need bonus part plzzz please please...🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻💜❤take time but make it plzzz

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +3

      No dear..I Won't make a bonus part for this lol I Don't have more ideas for this-

  • @bandanakumari4046
    @bandanakumari4046 Год назад +3

    Girl you got the best ffs💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @Janna_18
    @Janna_18 Год назад +4

    Bonus part of them being together plssss 😭🥹

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +1

      Nah- I Won't be making bonus... Ya can imagine the rest of the story on your own. Lol✨

    • @RiyaKumari-tr6rd
      @RiyaKumari-tr6rd Год назад +1

      Please for your family members we are like your social family and make more supernatural ffs

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +1

      ​@@RiyaKumari-tr6rdaw ofc you guys are like a family to me!!! I'll try making more and more horror ffs like these surely Honey!! ❤

  • @Just-pelestenian
    @Just-pelestenian Год назад +5

    Only 1 hour late 🎉
    And you and your ffs are perfect like forever ❤

  • @Suzy_Lunaire
    @Suzy_Lunaire Год назад +3

    Its Amazing ✨️
    Btw First

  • @sunshinesunny9657
    @sunshinesunny9657 Год назад +1

    Wow I just read a masterpiece but you've to make a bonus part please also I loved the horror themed story so make it more

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +2

      Lol yeah I also love horror theme and with romance there🥹🤌✨
      But no bonus-💀

  • @itzmecoco07
    @itzmecoco07 Год назад +3

    thanks unnie for your great ffs

  • @iamanimedarklover9029
    @iamanimedarklover9029 Год назад +1

    Amazing ❤👍can you please do a bonus part plzzzzzzzzz🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @jinhitentertainmentsceosse1711
    @jinhitentertainmentsceosse1711 Год назад +13

    Dear author you don't have to make a bonus part.just comment that *Jimin came back to her and they lived happily* so I can sleep peacefully. 😢

  • @Arpi_sings
    @Arpi_sings 7 месяцев назад

    Nah we deserve a bonus mannnn

  • @ChitraSardar-ng1gc
    @ChitraSardar-ng1gc Год назад +3

    Unnie bouns part please 🙏🙏🥺🥺

  • @anushreeheartbts8083
    @anushreeheartbts8083 Год назад +4

    Its so so good author sis😭😭o god but ending I feel crying I want Jimin I lose him 🤧 I don't know u will make bonus part or not but I hope u make more this type ff ur best

  • @minniekookie4441
    @minniekookie4441 Год назад +2

    cherry cherry!! how you even manage to make HORROR FFs so so so SOOO MUCHHH SATISFYINGGG?!!! Ahhhh now I really want a bonus, though I've never asked for ffs but I really want a bonus for this ff🙂 though its your wish to whether make it or not🥰 ALL HAIL HORROR FF QUEEN CHERRY!! 'laughs'😂

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +2

      Omgg tnxxxxx😭😭😭💜
      But nah- I'd rather make a new horror story than bonus lol- sorry-💀💜

    • @minniekookie4441
      @minniekookie4441 Год назад +2

      ​@@itzcherrychimmie9265 AYYO-😶 AISH NO WORRIES💅🏻 BUT YESSSS I WANT A NEW HORROR FF ygygxhbchnsdjisd. I WANT IT I WANT IT🌚*"mimics taehyung's I WANT IT actions"* no need to say sorry Bella😉 (if you have doubt that why I called you as Bella instead of cherry then search Bella's meaning)👀 listen to more AI BTS covers, Bella😜

  • @Zero._.0_0clock
    @Zero._.0_0clock Год назад +1

    Bonus part please

  • @kavya_gupta_23
    @kavya_gupta_23 Год назад +2

    Bonus part please make them together if u can

  • @Mochi_viki_13
    @Mochi_viki_13 Год назад +3

    thank you so much for this much wonderful stories 💜💜😌

    • @MS.JimmyJerry
      @MS.JimmyJerry Год назад +1

      They hi

    • @Mochi_viki_13
      @Mochi_viki_13 Год назад +1

      @@MS.JimmyJerry
      hiiiiiiiiii!
      do you also wanted jimin and y/n to be together? 😔💜

    • @MS.JimmyJerry
      @MS.JimmyJerry Год назад +1

      @@Mochi_viki_13 why not

    • @Mochi_viki_13
      @Mochi_viki_13 Год назад +1

      @@MS.JimmyJerry
      you also wanted them to be together.
      but it's oneshot .

    • @MS.JimmyJerry
      @MS.JimmyJerry Год назад +1

      @@Mochi_viki_13 just wait and watch

  • @ManeetGaming444
    @ManeetGaming444 Год назад +2

    Unnie bonus part

  • @FarahFatima1892
    @FarahFatima1892 Год назад +1

    Bonus part plzzz❤❤❤

  • @miskatulirin4202
    @miskatulirin4202 Год назад +1

    Part 2 plz

  • @dieheartfanofsumellika1243
    @dieheartfanofsumellika1243 Год назад +2

    Bonus part plz unnie

  • @muskan667
    @muskan667 Год назад +1

    It was amazing 😍🤩

  • @nityasnrityaanjalidancecla8324
    @nityasnrityaanjalidancecla8324 Год назад +2

    Bonus part

  • @Jiminssweetsmile
    @Jiminssweetsmile 11 месяцев назад +1

    I'm crying

  • @Mahi3.1406
    @Mahi3.1406 Год назад +2

    Unnie pls make bonus part of this they really deserved to be together if you don't have ideas you can ask us but don't say no plzzzzzzzzz

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +2

      😭😭✨ lol I Don't think I can make. I'll still think about it

    • @Mahi3.1406
      @Mahi3.1406 Год назад +1

      @@itzcherrychimmie9265 I'll really appreciate it we will help you if you need

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +1

      ​@@Mahi3.1406thank you sm💙😭

    • @Mahi3.1406
      @Mahi3.1406 Год назад

      @@itzcherrychimmie9265 always there ✨

    • @tanu6602
      @tanu6602 Год назад

      ​@@itzcherrychimmie9265 please make bonus part plssssssssssssss

  • @darkcrysta_10
    @darkcrysta_10 Год назад +2

    The story was beautiful but please author nim make a bonus and get them together. It feels like that the time went out of hands like sand and she wasn't able to realize the right thing at a right time. Please somehow make them together.

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +1

      Lol I Won't make new part for this but yall can imagine the story on your own!! Lmaoo💕

    • @darkcrysta_10
      @darkcrysta_10 Год назад +1

      @@itzcherrychimmie9265 😊😊 it's okay the story is still beautiful

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +2

      Thanks alot 💙✨✨

  • @learningsoul847
    @learningsoul847 Год назад +1

    I loved it noonaaa....for some reason I love these kind of paranormal and horror ffs...made by u(•ө•)♡

  • @Ninjaturtle5721
    @Ninjaturtle5721 Год назад +1

    Author can u please make the bonus part please I'm crying for the bonus part can you please make please please 🥺🙏 requesting please make a bonus part or i gonna die 🥺🙏😭

  • @ritanaSam77
    @ritanaSam77 Год назад +1

    It's re-upload right

  • @tanu6602
    @tanu6602 Месяц назад +1

    Bonus pls 😢pls pls

  • @filomena419
    @filomena419 Год назад +2

    about what kind of devil you are talking about????

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +1

      Fictional!!! It's just a normal devil spirit types. It's Just fictional imagination! Don't take srslyyy

  • @muhammadhuzaifa-lg4tm
    @muhammadhuzaifa-lg4tm Год назад +1

    Bonus part pleasssssseeeee if you make it I will subscribe your chennal

  • @twiceonce6752
    @twiceonce6752 Год назад +1

    17:20 I wanna know what happened next plssssss

    • @itzcherrychimmie9265
      @itzcherrychimmie9265  Год назад +1

      It ends here lol😭✨

    • @tanu6602
      @tanu6602 Месяц назад

      Don't do this pls make bonus 😢pls​@@itzcherrychimmie9265

  • @kavya_gupta_23
    @kavya_gupta_23 Год назад +3

    Please make jimin and yn together 😢

  • @vijayojhavijayojha2169
    @vijayojhavijayojha2169 3 месяца назад

    I regret reading this 😢 I want brain eraser 😭

  • @kavya_gupta_23
    @kavya_gupta_23 Год назад +6

    Bonus part please make them together if u can