Joanne!!! what an incredible round 1!! Judge Notes: - some very cool looking manips - we absolutely love your colouring and lighting its so beautiful and adds so much atmosphere composite and keyframe the opacity of the effect - 1:03 - 1:05 Love it! - The expressions you use for Jim are perfect in each scene - some masks are bit rough, sometimes colouring can work against you, if you put so much on, it actually can lower the quality of the footage so some masks you zoom in on have a grainy look to it (maybe try adding "grain remover" in AE) - 1:49 because the shots before were a lot of CU and blurred background this would've been nice to see more detail in the background especially since Sarah is in a medium shot so you don't have to emphasis a lot of depth of field (same with 1:54 don't go too crazy with the blur in full body masks) - again I love the Garret scene
yay!! and since I know you work so hard on those little side stories, you can always upload them as a bonus scene like how books have novella's that dive into side characters but completely up to you
Joanna I love this so much! Jim's story is so interesting to see and all the side plots were added in perfectly and you really showed Jim struggling with the constantly changing situations. I especially loved the scene between Garrett and Jim ;) I can't wait to see more of Jim and the story you have planned!!!
oooh very entertaining and easy to follow! 😍 I loved the part where megara asks Jim how he is that good with magic and we see the flashback of him and gaston! now I want to know more about his past ;) good job!!
Yes yes yes. This is so amazing. Storytelling A plus. I love how you focus on Jim when he looks up and down and how impressed he is. I loved your audition and know the story gets even better and better. Also yes Kayley stop being with Charming who acts a little bit like our mean Hans. Dump this guy and go with Taran to find Jim. Taran is such a wonderful friend. I am so happy that your work kind of reminds me of gold compass? Might be worng about the title. Also heck why do a lot of people get rid of Jim? Or might it be because of his criminal activitis. Can't wait to explore more about his past and furture. Amazing.😀😀😀😀😂😂😂😂💗💗💗💗💗👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Joanne!!! what an incredible round 1!!
Judge Notes:
- some very cool looking manips
- we absolutely love your colouring and lighting its so beautiful and adds so much atmosphere composite and keyframe the opacity of the effect
- 1:03 - 1:05 Love it!
- The expressions you use for Jim are perfect in each scene
- some masks are bit rough, sometimes colouring can work against you, if you put so much on, it actually can lower the quality of the footage so some masks you zoom in on have a grainy look to it (maybe try adding "grain remover" in AE)
- 1:49 because the shots before were a lot of CU and blurred background this would've been nice to see more detail in the background especially since Sarah is in a medium shot so you don't have to emphasis a lot of depth of field (same with 1:54 don't go too crazy with the blur in full body masks)
- again I love the Garret scene
xDivineMemoriesx Thank you so much for the feedback ! And totally understand the subplots issue! I will make sure to change that ^^
yay!! and since I know you work so hard on those little side stories, you can always upload them as a bonus scene like how books have novella's that dive into side characters but completely up to you
That would take me even more time ahaha but thank you for giving me another way !
HOLY SHIT
Joanna I love this so much! Jim's story is so interesting to see and all the side plots were added in perfectly and you really showed Jim struggling with the constantly changing situations. I especially loved the scene between Garrett and Jim ;) I can't wait to see more of Jim and the story you have planned!!!
oooh very entertaining and easy to follow! 😍 I loved the part where megara asks Jim how he is that good with magic and we see the flashback of him and gaston! now I want to know more about his past ;) good job!!
Nice job setting up an interesting subplot for Jim and his interactions with the other characters, looking forward to more!
Love the intricate storyline
Love Jim's story! I can't wait to se more! Also-- amazing work ♡ Love it
So. Many. Feels. In. One. Video. Oh this is so promising I love where it goes!! 💙
Yes yes yes. This is so amazing. Storytelling A plus. I love how you focus on Jim when he looks up and down and how impressed he is. I loved your audition and know the story gets even better and better. Also yes Kayley stop being with Charming who acts a little bit like our mean Hans. Dump this guy and go with Taran to find Jim. Taran is such a wonderful friend. I am so happy that your work kind of reminds me of gold compass? Might be worng about the title. Also heck why do a lot of people get rid of Jim? Or might it be because of his criminal activitis. Can't wait to explore more about his past and furture. Amazing.😀😀😀😀😂😂😂😂💗💗💗💗💗👏👏👏👏👏👏👏