How to write a PROBLEM STATEMENT in your THESIS: Its 2 parts with an EXAMPLE

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  • Опубликовано: 24 окт 2021
  • “There is no study if there is no problem.”
    These words were said to me when I wrote my Masters dissertation and are arguably the most important in all my years of being a young researcher. I have applied it throughout my career and instilled it in all my Master and PhD candidates.
    In this video, I share with you the two parts of a problem statement applicable to research project.
    I also argue the importance of having a thorough introduction and background that transitions effortlessly into the problem. This background contextualises the problem.
    Finally, I work through an example that you can use as a blueprint when you write your problem statement.
    I hope this video adds value to your research. Please click the LIKE and SUBSCRIBE button if it does.
    Let me know if there are any other topics in your research that you would want me to make a video on?
    Visit my LinkedIn and ResearchGate pages and get in touch.
    Chat soon!
    Johan

Комментарии • 106

  • @sumeyagebewo1591
    @sumeyagebewo1591 22 дня назад +2

    10Q so much professor. I get huge knowledge. I am writing my MA thesis in sociology. I suffered a lot because I did not have more experience. You gave me very good lecture and I hope now I will complete my thesis soon. Thank you once again.

  • @ImaginationStationAI
    @ImaginationStationAI 7 месяцев назад +8

    You know you're out of time when you find yourself watching this at 4 in the morning 😂😂

  • @speededucation686
    @speededucation686 Год назад +6

    i am from pakistan, your lecture give me clear idea about problem statement. long live

  • @user-cx9wg1dq7e
    @user-cx9wg1dq7e 6 месяцев назад +5

    Witching after being returned by my professor twice after getting wrong .thanks all the way from africa 🇹🇿Tanzania

  • @carolinekelly3415
    @carolinekelly3415 Месяц назад +2

    Thank you Professor Johan, I appreciate your mentoring and guidance.

  • @comfortmhakayakora2212
    @comfortmhakayakora2212 18 дней назад +1

    Thank you, Professor. Your accent is just fine.

  • @adongojoyce
    @adongojoyce 8 месяцев назад +2

    Thank you Prof, this made me feel very soon I am getting at the peak!🥰

  • @NhlanhlaQwabe
    @NhlanhlaQwabe Год назад +2

    Thanks Prof for such an informative talk. Never thought of "part two of the problem statement" that really makes everything a little more easier

  • @user-tf6zf8ds6s
    @user-tf6zf8ds6s 9 месяцев назад

    Thank you Prof 🙏

  • @mthenjoasemokoatle3161
    @mthenjoasemokoatle3161 Год назад +2

    Thank you Prof. for this clarification.

  • @carolinekelly3415
    @carolinekelly3415 6 месяцев назад +1

    Hello Professor, thank you for sharing this Problem Statement video. I appreciate it.

  • @shaistanooreen5436
    @shaistanooreen5436 2 года назад +3

    Thank you so much,prof. This video is really very very helpful .The efforts you put in, indeed,appreciative.

  • @sairasaggu8623
    @sairasaggu8623 7 месяцев назад +1

    Wonderful job! Thank you Professor.

  • @huoxincun-sv8nk
    @huoxincun-sv8nk 10 месяцев назад

    Your video is so instructive and helpful. Thank you so much

  • @lolalaz
    @lolalaz Год назад +3

    Thank you for this. Extremely useful!

  • @jacquelinehabana2387
    @jacquelinehabana2387 6 месяцев назад +1

    Should have found you earlier. Thank you for such a clear message.

  • @samuelkapasuka4078
    @samuelkapasuka4078 7 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you Prof ,well explained

  • @amberliwentee402
    @amberliwentee402 Год назад +2

    Clear, precise and most importantly straight to the point!
    Best explanation so far that i have gone through~ Thanks Prof.🤝

  • @carolinekelly3415
    @carolinekelly3415 6 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you for sharing this video Professor.

  • @brighttooth3592
    @brighttooth3592 Месяц назад +1

    Thank you so much.

  • @jngigi04
    @jngigi04 Год назад +1

    Thanks so much for this well articulated presentation

  • @AbdirisakAAden-fo6ou
    @AbdirisakAAden-fo6ou Год назад

    Shortly, understandable clip, thanks

  • @pamchetty5342
    @pamchetty5342 Год назад +2

    This is an excellent explanation. Simple and easy to follow and understand. Thank you Prof

  • @mamuyefikrefkr5466
    @mamuyefikrefkr5466 17 дней назад

    Thank you prof. Would you attach the example and/or another PDF article Paper done so far??

  • @caroakosa9221
    @caroakosa9221 4 месяца назад +1

    Thank you so much professor, certainly makes it clearer how to go about writing the problem statement

  • @Guru-om6lv
    @Guru-om6lv 2 года назад

    Great video 👍

  • @celestepule8724
    @celestepule8724 Год назад +2

    Bravo

  • @user-od5sc8oj8h
    @user-od5sc8oj8h 5 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you Prof. this is very clear and understandable, appreciated!!

  • @chamithkumara6482
    @chamithkumara6482 9 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much prof.Excellent vedio.This was really helpful.

  • @seyberrick2250
    @seyberrick2250 2 года назад +1

    thanks a lot sir, good presentation

  • @emmaluftie7688
    @emmaluftie7688 Год назад +1

    Thank you Professor this was extremely helpful

  • @gabrielgabrieldeng5317
    @gabrielgabrieldeng5317 Год назад +1

    Excellent video

  • @getahunsolomonofficial
    @getahunsolomonofficial 6 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you so much, proff. This video is really very very helpful!

  • @tiktokeveryday3811
    @tiktokeveryday3811 Год назад +1

    PERFECTLY DESCRIBED

  • @user-xj3km5od4d
    @user-xj3km5od4d Год назад

    So helpful

  • @solinekahiwot2212
    @solinekahiwot2212 5 месяцев назад +1

    Bless you! i got it

  • @hlabatheposholi5889
    @hlabatheposholi5889 10 месяцев назад

    Thank you Prof... I only have one question to this insightful lecture. so in the two highlighted parts in the problem statement there is no need to to reference? I am asking this because, phrases like "there is evidence" are used in the statement without any source acknowledged/ highlighted as it is the case in the background.

  • @user-xv8uf2bn3f
    @user-xv8uf2bn3f 3 месяца назад +1

    Knowledgeable

  • @aseweelizabeth1305
    @aseweelizabeth1305 2 года назад

    Just subcribed, very informative content

  • @andre4060
    @andre4060 2 года назад

    Thank yu Sir. Please make a video about the Research Gap or Research Problem in writing synopsis. I would be thankful to you.

  • @caseyyeow1649
    @caseyyeow1649 Год назад

    Excellent video Prof. May I know from this problem statement how you translate to statement of objective and subsequently, research questions? Or you have a follow-up video on these topics? Thx.

  • @zabidi59
    @zabidi59 3 месяца назад +2

    Do like to share this video please.

  • @gurunathhj6883
    @gurunathhj6883 3 месяца назад

    Sir,
    With due it is submitted that ,the text and message is very good for high impact critical research article, but the problem is ,it not that easy to get the related, relevant information and data .
    Dr.Gurunath. H. J.
    Bangalore
    India

  • @eyasumisganaw394
    @eyasumisganaw394 Год назад +1

    dear prof thanks for part one about the problem statement lesson . it is very interesting !. I cant get the part two or the continuum. pls attach it ?

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  Год назад

      Hi Eyasu, thanks for the comment. The two parts refer to the two parts of the problem statement which are discussed in the video. There is thus not two parts to the video as such. 😃 What I would recommend is maybe watching my other video on the research gap as it plays directly into the problem statement. Good luck and enjoy!

  • @EkeneEbisi
    @EkeneEbisi Год назад

    Nice presentation Prof. The example was excellent however, in your example, I did not see where you highlighted gaps from existing literature.

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  Год назад +1

      Hi Ekene. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. You raise an interesting point. The question is: are the gaps in the literature the actual problem? I don't think so - the research gap is not necessarily the research problem. If the literature does not deal with the problem, the gap exists. They are indeed related, no doubt, but the gap emanates from the problem not being addressed (in a particular context). I want to say, though, that it does depend on the type of study that you are doing - whether it being more empirical or literature-based. What are your thoughts?

  • @georgecavaleros9166
    @georgecavaleros9166 Год назад +1

    Excellent video. How would this problem statement link up to the literature review?

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  Год назад

      Thanks George. Well, the problem is what your study tries to solve/address/shed light on. But in order to do this, you need to know what other studies have done on the topic of your study. So the literature review is reviewing the existing thought on the topic and that your problem is embedded in. Put differently: you cannot make a robust and rigorous contribution via addressing your problem, before not establishing what those before you have tried to establish and did establish. The literature review gives you and your contribution the integrity to withstand critique from existing thinking.

  • @tuncozben4784
    @tuncozben4784 2 года назад +1

    Dear Prof. Coetzee, thank you very much for this useful video. If you don't mind, I have a question for you. Recently, I have been writing an article in English. The first subheading of my Introduction is Context. Do you think that the term "context" is appropriate here or should I use the term "background" for an American academic journal? Is there any significant semantic difference between context and background? Thank you very much for your kind reply.

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  2 года назад

      Hi Tunc, thank you for the question. Its a difficult one to answer because it really does depend. I would suggest that you maybe 1) look at guidelines that may be provided by the journal’s ‘Guide to authors’ and also, 2) have a look at previous papers that have been published to get an idea what they have used. This latter factor is particularly important as the papers were subjected to peer review and accepted, so it would be a good indication. With regards to ‘context’ or ‘background’ being used, in my experience I would argue that the difference is negligible. I would however argue that for a paper in a journal, I would use neither and only stick with the ‘Introduction’. I say this because of the limited space and word count allowed. If I have understood you incorrectly that the paper is not for a journal but for a thesis at a university, your supervisor and the guidelines in the department would apply. At the end of the day, I have seen many papers with different headings that have been published. As long as the paper is well written and coherent, more often than not the headings as such do not matter as long as they are logical. I hope this helps. Please do not hesitate to ask any further questions. Keep well!

    • @tuncozben4784
      @tuncozben4784 2 года назад +1

      @@profjohancoetzee4658 Dear Prof. Coetzee, Thank you very much for your prompt reply. I will follow your suggestion. All the best.

  • @oluwakemifamakin5571
    @oluwakemifamakin5571 Год назад +1

    Thanks for this, Sir. Are we not expected to include sources while writing problem statement?

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  Год назад

      Hi Oluwakemi, yes you are. It is a personal preference of mine, however, to have the sources predominantly in the background that leads up to the problem statement itself. I prefer this because when I want to read the problem statement, I want to know exactly what the problem is, and not the background and what lead to the problem. For this reason, the sources would most likely not be needed in the section of the problem. But, you must always be guided by the preferences of your university and especially your supervisor. There is no hard rule that there must be no sources in a problem statement - as long as you are clear and there is an understandable logic as to what you are doing.

  • @nanacarazone906
    @nanacarazone906 2 года назад +1

    please talk about how to write significance of the study

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  2 года назад

      Hi Nana that sounds like a good idea. I will make a note of it as a future video. Thank you for the suggestion.

  • @anelenkoyi1995
    @anelenkoyi1995 2 года назад +1

    Excellent video Prof. Would you give me permission the video in my PGdip class...

  • @angelpari3203
    @angelpari3203 Год назад

    Challenges face by higher secondary school students in there transition from Sindhi medium of instructions in to English mediums of instruction in science subject. dear sir tell men how to write problem statement in that topic

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  Год назад

      Hi Angel
      It is a bit difficult to do so without more details, but based on what you say, consider this:
      - A few sentences explaining the ACTUAL challenges face by higher secondary school students in there transition from Sindhi medium of instructions in to English mediums of instruction in science subject
      - Then, another few sentences arguing WHY these challenges are problematic and WHAT THE IMPLICATIONS WILL BE if they are not therefore addressed.
      I hope this helps!

  • @alnusramedia
    @alnusramedia 3 месяца назад +1

    Asc. Nadaara. Waxbixinta mar walba wan dhageystaa waa ok
    Lkn hal dhaliil ayaan ku hayaa
    Fadlan erayga MACALINKA WAYN NAGADAA waa codsi

  • @fidelisndigwe6710
    @fidelisndigwe6710 Год назад +1

    You lecture is indeed worth listening to...I need you personal contact

    • @profjohancoetzee4658
      @profjohancoetzee4658  Год назад

      Hi Fidelis thank you for the kind words. You are welcome to contact me via LinkedIn. Keep well.