@@Little_butterfly_1806 and what were talking about in the end? Not a good writer???? This was fantastic!!!!! You said my idea was great, and you made it beyond fantastic! You've made this so good!
@@Little_butterfly_1806yes it's really great and also i make some adjustments in @levin0231 idea and he really like it glad if you read that comment to
You're a better writer than you think tbh cuz if u really know how hard it is to make me cry when reading or watching a movie u would be surprised that I cried over this work of art. Keep flying high LB.
This story made me cry and remember what my parents and gramps told me that one of my great grandfathers are also a soldier from WW2 and i think he is from the german army or whatever that is bcz we are germans plus my gramps told me that he kept my great grandfather’s helmet in his basement and i can see it for myself after i became 20 y/o😢😢
Wait....Tsutako's whole body was burned? The only thing that i believe it could do something like this during this time is.... don't tell me the Tomioka house was in Hiroshima or Nagasaki and Tsutako got the blast from the atomic bomb
10th comment by the way can you make one like it's the infinity castle arc but the way the fans wanted it to be like hashira not dying and Giyu saving shinobu and intense fights and they overcome the curse of the mark of dieing at 25 pleaseeeeee pretty please I am sure everyone will love it ❤
*Please do mind my spelling mistakes* Great story! These are my tips in writing a better story • describe the setting of the story ex: it was a rainy day, there was slight wind blowing towards the butterfly mansion • describe the point of view of the character, ex: as tanjiro was walking by he spotted a window open from which water was streaming down • describe the emotion of the character, ex: as tanjiro heard kanao's beautiful words, tears of joy started streaming down as he thought to himself that je wanted to spend his life with kanao forever • try to keep the personality of the character similar to the original manga (anime) Now ill make a stoey of of everything i described It was about 12pm when tanjiro couldn't sleep, he tiptoed his way out of the butterfly mansion, it was drizzling as he made his way to sit beneath the grass, as he sat down he gentily closed his eyes and gave in to mother nature, as a few minutes passed by, kanao was making her way out of the butterfly mansion, she spotted tanjiro sitting by the grass, as she admired tanjiro's beautiful face, she reluctantly made her way to sit with tanjiro and sat beside him, tanjiro wasn't able to sense her because he was deep in admiration of nature's beauty Kanao: "..hello tanjiro.." Tanjiro: "..oh hello there kanao, apologies for not noticing you sooner *as he gentily smiled* .." Kanao: ".. oh there is no need to apologise tanjiro, i must be tye one to apologise for disturbing you.." Tanjiro: ".. oh i wasn't doing anything, i couldn't fall sleep so i decided to take a walk but i got a little carried away and sat to feel peace *as he says slightly laughing* Kanao: ".. ah i see, please continue, i was just wondering what you were doing *she says smiling*.." Tanjiro: ".. ah it was getting a little boring, i was wondering if you'd like ro keep me company.." Kanao: ".. ofcourse i would love to *she says has her eyes sparkled* Soon they spent about half an hour talking to eachother while laughing Tanjiro: *yawns* Kanao: ".. oh my i see you finally feel tired *she says this as she giggled*.." Tanjiro: oh *slightly embarrassed* yes i finally feel tired, i really appreciate that you kept me company kanao -he smiles-.." Kanao: *slightly flustered* ah, its really finetanjiro, im happy that you find me amusing * she says this while laughing* Tanjiro: ".. *smiles* im happy that you show your emotions more kanao, it makes me happy that you coukd enjoy life even if its just a little bit.." Kanao: ".. i mean i should thank you, because you changed my perspective in life! * she says while looking at the moon* Tanjiro : ".. *smiles at her* Kanao: *in her thoughts, i remeber msster shinobu told me to compliment the moon wuen i feel romanticly attached with someone* Hey tanjiro, isn't the moon lovely Tanjiro: "..*flustered* ahh kanao do you really mean it?.." Kanao: ".. oh ofcourse it is the full moon isnt it? *pointing towards the moon*.." Tanjiro: ".. ah t-thats what you mean, i apologise for misunderstanding.." Kanao: *flustered* tho i do mean it the other way too *looking away*.." Tanjiro: "..oh is that so! Well it seems you're lucky because i feel the same about you, but im afraid that we would have to wait until we demolish all the demons *he says while looking down*.." Kanao: "..its fine tanjiro, ill wait for you *slightly smiles*.." Tanjiro: ".. i appreciate your patience kanao *brighlty smiling*.." Soon with the help of the entire demon slayer corpes demons were finally abolished, as soon as they defeated the demons. Tanjiro: ".. kanao *he says with affection- will you spend your entire life with me* he says while moving closer-.." Kanao: "..*tears of joy started streaming doen her face as she nods*.." The demon slayer curse was left behind and everyone with the curse had survived beyond the age of 25, The end
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I really appreciate the tips on setting, point of view, and emotion-they'll definitely help me improve my storytelling. I'll keep working on maintaining the characters' personalities true to the original manga as well. Also...OH MY GOD! YOU'RE WAY BETTER THAN ME! YOU SHOULD ALSO OPEN A YT CHANEL! I LOVE THE WAY HOW YOU EXPLAINED EVERYTHING....it was great! 💖💖💖💖💖💖
@@Little_butterfly_1806I enjoyed helping you, hope you get better and thank you for your kind words, but youtube isn't my main focus rn, but thank you for considering my idea ❤
Pls do one where kagaya runs am organisation protecting important people and the hashira except shinobu and kanae are agents, shinobu and kanae are celebrities and are being threatened by muzan and douma so giyu and sanemi are assigned to protect them , and they end up falling in love.
......I....Idk what to say. I never thought my idea would be chosen honestly. Wow. Thank you for enjoying my idea.
@@changhee95 You're the chosen one for today!
@@Little_butterfly_1806 and what were talking about in the end?
Not a good writer???? This was fantastic!!!!! You said my idea was great, and you made it beyond fantastic!
You've made this so good!
@@changhee95 I agree Brother
@@Little_butterfly_1806yes it's really great and also i make some adjustments in @levin0231 idea and he really like it glad if you read that comment to
Bro your ideas was amazing that why she was able to take it beyond fantastic
You're a better writer than you think tbh cuz if u really know how hard it is to make me cry when reading or watching a movie u would be surprised that I cried over this work of art.
Keep flying high LB.
OMG THAT COMMENT MADE MY DAYY TYSMMMMMMMM I LOVE Y'ALL SO MUCH 💅🏻😭😭
I'm not really a crybaby
This type of stories but
This one actually made me shed a tear
As soon as I saw WW2 I was like- HERE COMES THE SUN! DODO DODO! [the nuke-]
Thank you for posting 😊
No problem 😊
This.....was so.....sad. Sorry,but I cry a little. And this was a very good story😊😢😢
*Teleports from Costco with tanjiros magic nose* hmmmmm I smOil a Masterpiece 😊❤
AWWW I LOVE YOUR PERSONALITY! AND THANK YOU! 😭🌼🎀🌿
@@Little_butterfly_1806 u too I love ur personality because u make material I make jokes off ❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊
Also I love al, ur stories ur so creativeee❤❤❤❤❤❤
@@LILILUVS123 aw bestie things😭🎀🌿🌼
@@LILILUVS123 awww Ty Ty bestie😭✋🏻
you can make good stories and i love your stories
Thank you so much 😊
*gives everyone tissues* I’m going bankrupt but oh well 😊
Nah nah You ain't going bankrupt my boi here's uhm $100
@@SANS-v8oi thanks bro
This was very good. the only thing i dont like its that its long and it moves slowly, so i put the speed on x2. But its still good 👍
Aw dear! I'll try to make it fast..i made it slow
Bcz so many people need some time to read all the massages
@@Little_butterfly_1806 dont worry abt it its just that ive aleays been a very fast reader
@aleixspace aw that's good! Fun facts... I'm a fast reader too!
@@aleixspacesame
This story made me cry and remember what my parents and gramps told me that one of my great grandfathers are also a soldier from WW2 and i think he is from the german army or whatever that is bcz we are germans plus my gramps told me that he kept my great grandfather’s helmet in his basement and i can see it for myself after i became 20 y/o😢😢
Aw .... that's really sad...😭
to think that this story would have made me cry even more if it had the true ending
29:14 bro really thinks that he can kill a soilder fresh from war, he has 5hp bruh💀
Amazing 🤩
Thank you! Cheers!
I was so closeee, but you make not good not great but amazing storys❤
AW THANK YOU!
I’m late but I love this story
Fire story
Wait....Tsutako's whole body was burned? The only thing that i believe it could do something like this during this time is.... don't tell me the Tomioka house was in Hiroshima or Nagasaki and Tsutako got the blast from the atomic bomb
Oh sh-
Maybe you should make the gap between texts quicker
Shell shock but ww2 ahh one shot💀🙏 but good idea tho
💀💀💀💀
Butterfly I just saw that Harry Potter one can you cover the before the goblet of the fire and make it a bit long pls it was good
Always Starting part! Remembering 2023❤
YES
Nice
Thanks
Could you pls do an au Thay like Giyu and shinobu r married that would be amazing ❤
Btw I'm That "@Astro-San" I changed my name Cuz idk 😐😅 Don't change it Cuz I'll Change it to "@Astro-San" again 😅😅😅😅
Okii
10th comment by the way can you make one like it's the infinity castle arc but the way the fans wanted it to be like hashira not dying and Giyu saving shinobu and intense fights and they overcome the curse of the mark of dieing at 25 pleaseeeeee pretty please I am sure everyone will love it ❤
Hm sure ! I'll also add this
1 hour 🎉!!!
Yess!
First
@@muiclouds omg you're fast as zenitsu!
*Please do mind my spelling mistakes*
Great story! These are my tips in writing a better story
• describe the setting of the story ex: it was a rainy day, there was slight wind blowing towards the butterfly mansion
• describe the point of view of the character, ex: as tanjiro was walking by he spotted a window open from which water was streaming down
• describe the emotion of the character, ex: as tanjiro heard kanao's beautiful words, tears of joy started streaming down as he thought to himself that je wanted to spend his life with kanao forever
• try to keep the personality of the character similar to the original manga (anime)
Now ill make a stoey of of everything i described
It was about 12pm when tanjiro couldn't sleep, he tiptoed his way out of the butterfly mansion, it was drizzling as he made his way to sit beneath the grass, as he sat down he gentily closed his eyes and gave in to mother nature, as a few minutes passed by, kanao was making her way out of the butterfly mansion, she spotted tanjiro sitting by the grass, as she admired tanjiro's beautiful face, she reluctantly made her way to sit with tanjiro and sat beside him, tanjiro wasn't able to sense her because he was deep in admiration of nature's beauty
Kanao: "..hello tanjiro.."
Tanjiro: "..oh hello there kanao, apologies for not noticing you sooner *as he gentily smiled* .."
Kanao: ".. oh there is no need to apologise tanjiro, i must be tye one to apologise for disturbing you.."
Tanjiro: ".. oh i wasn't doing anything, i couldn't fall sleep so i decided to take a walk but i got a little carried away and sat to feel peace *as he says slightly laughing*
Kanao: ".. ah i see, please continue, i was just wondering what you were doing *she says smiling*.."
Tanjiro: ".. ah it was getting a little boring, i was wondering if you'd like ro keep me company.."
Kanao: ".. ofcourse i would love to *she says has her eyes sparkled*
Soon they spent about half an hour talking to eachother while laughing
Tanjiro: *yawns*
Kanao: ".. oh my i see you finally feel tired *she says this as she giggled*.."
Tanjiro: oh *slightly embarrassed* yes i finally feel tired, i really appreciate that you kept me company kanao -he smiles-.."
Kanao: *slightly flustered* ah, its really finetanjiro, im happy that you find me amusing * she says this while laughing*
Tanjiro: ".. *smiles* im happy that you show your emotions more kanao, it makes me happy that you coukd enjoy life even if its just a little bit.."
Kanao: ".. i mean i should thank you, because you changed my perspective in life! * she says while looking at the moon*
Tanjiro : ".. *smiles at her*
Kanao: *in her thoughts, i remeber msster shinobu told me to compliment the moon wuen i feel romanticly attached with someone*
Hey tanjiro, isn't the moon lovely
Tanjiro: "..*flustered* ahh kanao do you really mean it?.."
Kanao: ".. oh ofcourse it is the full moon isnt it? *pointing towards the moon*.."
Tanjiro: ".. ah t-thats what you mean, i apologise for misunderstanding.."
Kanao: *flustered* tho i do mean it the other way too *looking away*.."
Tanjiro: "..oh is that so! Well it seems you're lucky because i feel the same about you, but im afraid that we would have to wait until we demolish all the demons *he says while looking down*.."
Kanao: "..its fine tanjiro, ill wait for you *slightly smiles*.."
Tanjiro: ".. i appreciate your patience kanao *brighlty smiling*.."
Soon with the help of the entire demon slayer corpes demons were finally abolished, as soon as they defeated the demons.
Tanjiro: ".. kanao *he says with affection- will you spend your entire life with me* he says while moving closer-.."
Kanao: "..*tears of joy started streaming doen her face as she nods*.."
The demon slayer curse was left behind and everyone with the curse had survived beyond the age of 25,
The end
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I really appreciate the tips on setting, point of view, and emotion-they'll definitely help me improve my storytelling. I'll keep working on maintaining the characters' personalities true to the original manga as well. Also...OH MY GOD! YOU'RE WAY BETTER THAN ME! YOU SHOULD ALSO OPEN A YT CHANEL! I LOVE THE WAY HOW YOU EXPLAINED EVERYTHING....it was great! 💖💖💖💖💖💖
@@Little_butterfly_1806I enjoyed helping you, hope you get better and thank you for your kind words, but youtube isn't my main focus rn, but thank you for considering my idea ❤
70th like
Aw thank you
First cam I have pin pls
ive been fed!!!!
Thanks a lot for watching!
New!?🎉🎉🎉
Do a giyuu mitsu
Um...i think i can't do that...my other subscribers will attack me
@@Little_butterfly_1806😭ok
@@Little_butterfly_1806That is true 👹👹
Pls do one where kagaya runs am organisation protecting important people and the hashira except shinobu and kanae are agents, shinobu and kanae are celebrities and are being threatened by muzan and douma so giyu and sanemi are assigned to protect them , and they end up falling in love.
That is actually a really gold concept
Ok ok.... I'll also add you!
@@Little_butterfly_1806 thanks so much 😚
Your welcome!
Excuse me...... But...are you and....loner-san.are...relatives or....something..??... Like siblings....😅😅😅
We're friends!
@@Little_butterfly_1806 oh
@@Rubychan.102-9fithey are dating now!
@@God_dragon6442 I know!😉
@@Rubychan.102-9fi 😉
New vid!
@@Nainanezuko162 yesd
Why is that Giyuu and Not Muichiro,Giyuu and Tanjiro get back to the past? This demon slayer stories just f*cking pissing me off!
Oh I'm sorry Mr.. I'll add Muichiro
WDYM UR NOT A GREAT WRITER WHOEVER TOLD U THAT GETS BIGGEST LIAR AWARD
Hm thanks a lot for supporting me a lot...
@@Little_butterfly_1806 np 😉❤️❤️❤️