Glad to see you're back, Dennis. This creepypasta is pretty interesting to me personally since it is always neat to see creepy stories based off of early or unreleased media.
Mario looks at the screen with hyper realistic eyes and barfs hyper realistic blood while saying "Its a me, mario!" In a demonic voice as a pentagram appears behind him
As a creepypasta, the story is pretty bad, there's barely anything creepy aside from the possibility of Nintendo going into darker stories. But as a sadpasta, I think it's very good! The one-liner really works in that case, as it symbolizes that this game was an entire "funeral" and "grieving" to innocence in the game industry throughout the story.
Small nitpick, but if Toad were more sad and sorry instead of angry it would have felt more fitting, maybe giving even more weight to the whole loss of innocence idea. Especially since toad isn't a very realistic character that you would not see in a "real" setting.
There's a painfully mediocre Megaman X story called "The red cartridge" So when you eventually do a video about bad Megaman creepypastas, I can't wait to hear you say, "The red chartredge"
I feel like this story is a little silly when thinking about it as something Nintendo actually made, but it’s very good as a more of an art piece regarding the social climate of video games :]
instead of saying that he was crying or something, I woulve said "he started to understand the whole premise, leaving him somewhat sullen." and instead of shutting off the console and never playing again, I would've replaced it with "without any obvious exit, he sighed and shut off the console. Though it wasn't scary, or outwardly depressing, the message the game gave to him would always linger in the back of his mind when he played Mario from then on."
Didn’t expect to see you here. I enjoyed this read. Certainly flawed by a margin, but if I’m being generous, it’s leagues better than basically 90% of gaming pastas which are either Sonic.EXE or Ben Drowned clones. I think if this story were to be cleaned up more, have an even more refined set up and a sombre and or subjective ending add more hints towards the problems that faced Nintendo at the time other than an edgy metaphor with dead kids which I found rather redundant and boring. For what it is, it’s probably a 6 or a 5.5. Not written by a dyslexic ape on a type writer, with a few interesting ideas sprinkled in, however the story itself should be refined to be creepier, and have a more coherent narrative instead of being metaphor after metaphor. An actual storyline other than the opening text to the game would’ve made it interesting as two stories could be playing out at once, those being Mario’s and the behind the scenes of the game. Someone else in the comments said this, but it feels more like a feelpasta than a creepypasta.
I think the grave saying innocence could represent the authors loss of innocence as hes growing up hence the strong reaction. As hes growing up he is expected to move onto more violent games rather than sticking with mario
it's meant to represent Nintendo's feelings about the death of innocence in videogames, like every other metaphor in the story. i think they made a few too many metaphors for the same thing
I feel like they should have chosen another character instead of toad, it's kind of comical thinking of toad telling people to piss off and die in that squeaky raspy voice
Tbh, after hearing some bad creepypasta videos on the Michael Leroi channel and hearing them joke about Toad and mimic his voice - like, after hearing one of them shout in Toad's voice, "Live or die on this day!" - I think Toad is a very fitting character. XD
So they tried to do "Shadow the Hedgehog" but with Mario? Jokes aside, I like that this story gives a bit of background instead of just jumping into it and being all "I found this game online. OMG IT'S ALL BLOODY AND SCARY I DON'T WANNA PLAY THIS SERIES ANYMORE!" It makes the themes more prevalent.
Even if this story has some “peculiarities”, I’m a big sucker for stories based off of early or unreleased media. Also, It’s very nice to see you again!
I still want somebody to write a Creepy Pasta about the cancelled grim dark "Tough and Bloody" Spyro game that Activison/Toys for Bob were attempting to make prior to Skylanders. Spyro is probably the most easy character to use for a 'lost of innocence' type story especially with recent events that went down in Activision studios Ala the downfall of Skylanders.
That story theory sounds like an interesting one. I actually didn't mind the story ending on the line "Innocence" too much. Could have sounded kinda open ended. I like open endings. I'm just not too happy about that this word was what ultimately caused the author to be like, nope, this is too much, I'm quitting.
The idea of a realistically proportioned Mario looks really goofy to me, especially with the N64 Mario head on top. The symbolism was interesting, but it was not scary.
The original game titled Mario 128, the Mario 64 sequel for the N64 disc drive, never came out. However, Mario 128, the one that was shown as a tech demo for the Gamecube, did eventually come out in 2007 on the Wii, and today has sold over 12 million copies. Of course the reason many people didn't notice it came out was because at some point in developement they changed the name to Mario Galaxy after deciding to make the game set in space, but maybe that part isn't particularly important.
I actually really enjoy when someone likes something I don't. Value is in the eyes of the beholder and I was laughing quietly during most dramatic scenes of the pasta, tbh. I did like the idea of it's plot, but it's just really hard to make this idea work in a short story, specially using a real franchise. Trying to make it more sad and less harsh was a good plan, but I think making it full sad would be better for the concept, making the "Innocence" at the end look more like a disheartening vent of sorts from the developers instead of an edgy game detail the author didn't like
Yo Hoodo, it doesnt matter how often you upload. Your wellbeing is more important to us than the consistency of your uploads. Plus the quality of your videos when you take your time on them are absolutely spectacular.
Man, I thought I just got reccomended one of your old videos because you were on break for a while. I read the title and clicked on it and wow, your back!
This is a weirdly well written story. Or at least it seems like a well thought out story. Though I'll be honest the ending made me laugh, I was so entranced with the story that when he was describing how he felt about the tombstone I was expecting it to say his real name, or to be Peach's signifying that Mario died for nothing which could've been upsetting. But no, it wasn't anything disturbing or scary it was just sad. Though, the authors reaction to it is what made me laugh lol, if his reaction was something a little more understanding it would've fit well with the setting and vibe the story was going for.
I feel like this pasta has several issues which could be solved by observing horrific elements in actual Nintendo games, especially Luigi's mansion and super paper mario.
128 was supposed to be a worldwide server game with other marios that were actual people from online and 128 marios would mess around and be able to talk to each other however due to the game not having enough severs and it didnt have online because that wasnt possible
Yo glad to see yea uploading take your time tho m8 just good to see you and also top notch edits/effects they simple but effective and quite nicely done as always tho not that i expect less from you but just not mentioned enough imo. Have a good day :)
Honestly never liked this one until you explained the symbolism (never thought I'd use that word for a creepypasta lol) behind what was happening in it.
This pasta could’ve been better if it wasn’t so unbelievable. I don’t think that Nintendo would have ever done something like this, and I feel like it would be more believable if the game was created by an disgruntled ex member of the team, pushed into a corner by the expectations of Nintendo.
Hey, if you want a break from all these old creepypastas and want some genuinely good horror, I think it’d be really cool if you looked at the walten files by Martin walls! It’s a fnaf inspired (but don’t worry, it’s lore isn’t frustratingly convoluted and it actually is pretty dang scary, it takes a few concepts from fnaf but is mostly fairly original) analog horror series that’s fully drawn and animated and really well made in general, it’s just rly rad and I think it’d be cool to see someone like you check it out! (:
“Mario falls into a realistic city”
Did this predict Mario Odyssey?
It could very well have.
Yes.
now we gotta find the level!
i love yoshi
@@fella_named_smokey This is probably level 11.
I like it because of the fact that it references an obscure demo that never become full
Yes, i dont gets
@@adamyujinplays9 ??
@@letthatsinkin8569 there basically saying i don’t get it
Old gamecube demo
128 Mario's on one screen
Welcome back Dennis 😀 One of your creepypasta readings is just what I felt like tonight.
these kinds of videos are always relaxing in the background. your vids included haha
Oh hey phantom I love your videos
Wow, only 2 replies? (not including mine)
HE-
*bangs furiously on desk*
*HE’S BACK*
I missed his uploads being more consistent but as long as Dennis is mentally healthy and happy, makes me appreciate his uploads even more.
thats the raction to rayman coming back
Glad to see you're back, Dennis. This creepypasta is pretty interesting to me personally since it is always neat to see creepy stories based off of early or unreleased media.
Mario looks at the screen with hyper realistic eyes and barfs hyper realistic blood while saying "Its a me, mario!" In a demonic voice as a pentagram appears behind him
Thank God there's no red text that poped up and said "your next"
As a creepypasta, the story is pretty bad, there's barely anything creepy aside from the possibility of Nintendo going into darker stories. But as a sadpasta, I think it's very good! The one-liner really works in that case, as it symbolizes that this game was an entire "funeral" and "grieving" to innocence in the game industry throughout the story.
Well I guess now
Innocence doesn’t get you far.
Small nitpick, but if Toad were more sad and sorry instead of angry it would have felt more fitting, maybe giving even more weight to the whole loss of innocence idea. Especially since toad isn't a very realistic character that you would not see in a "real" setting.
It's not that bad, but people should stop using the word "realistic" so much on Creepypastas
Yeah, we need to get a little more... hyper...
Well Atleast Its Not HYPERREALISTIC
There's a painfully mediocre Megaman X story called "The red cartridge"
So when you eventually do a video about bad Megaman creepypastas, I can't wait to hear you say, "The red chartredge"
K.
Yes more Mega Man content
*MORE MEGA MAN CONTENT*
*MORE MEGA MAN CONTENT*
*more chanting*
RED! The color of BLOOD! Was black too subtle?
lol I remember that one
I feel like this story is a little silly when thinking about it as something Nintendo actually made, but it’s very good as a more of an art piece regarding the social climate of video games :]
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
@@HoodoHoodlumsRevenge h
And when the world needed him most... he returned.
Yknow, when hoodo posts, its a gift from the creepypasta gods.
Agreed.
Even though this story has flaws, I'd honestly say it's pretty good.
Yeah, it is well written despite its flaws! The author has talent!
instead of saying that he was crying or something, I woulve said
"he started to understand the whole premise, leaving him somewhat sullen."
and instead of shutting off the console and never playing again, I would've replaced it with
"without any obvious exit, he sighed and shut off the console. Though it wasn't scary, or outwardly depressing, the message the game gave to him would always linger in the back of his mind when he played Mario from then on."
Those are some great points that I agree would have definitely improved the story and made it feel more believable. Good stuff!
I have a soft spot for video game creepypastas like these. They're often a guilty pleasure.
I love how both story’s from this author states said company tried to make a darker version than before
Ah youtube. Thanks for not sending this to my notifications. Really appreciate it...
Didn’t expect to see you here. I enjoyed this read. Certainly flawed by a margin, but if I’m being generous, it’s leagues better than basically 90% of gaming pastas which are either Sonic.EXE or Ben Drowned clones.
I think if this story were to be cleaned up more, have an even more refined set up and a sombre and or subjective ending add more hints towards the problems that faced Nintendo at the time other than an edgy metaphor with dead kids which I found rather redundant and boring.
For what it is, it’s probably a 6 or a 5.5. Not written by a dyslexic ape on a type writer, with a few interesting ideas sprinkled in, however the story itself should be refined to be creepier, and have a more coherent narrative instead of being metaphor after metaphor. An actual storyline other than the opening text to the game would’ve made it interesting as two stories could be playing out at once, those being Mario’s and the behind the scenes of the game.
Someone else in the comments said this, but it feels more like a feelpasta than a creepypasta.
I think the grave saying innocence could represent the authors loss of innocence as hes growing up hence the strong reaction. As hes growing up he is expected to move onto more violent games rather than sticking with mario
it's meant to represent Nintendo's feelings about the death of innocence in videogames, like every other metaphor in the story. i think they made a few too many metaphors for the same thing
this story can be summed up as
"It's the nature of time that the old ways must give in, its the nature of time that the new age comes in sin"
Take you time and take care of your self. I am just happy seeing you post again so thankyou for posting
I feel like they should have chosen another character instead of toad, it's kind of comical thinking of toad telling people to piss off and die in that squeaky raspy voice
Tbh, after hearing some bad creepypasta videos on the Michael Leroi channel and hearing them joke about Toad and mimic his voice - like, after hearing one of them shout in Toad's voice, "Live or die on this day!" - I think Toad is a very fitting character. XD
So they tried to do "Shadow the Hedgehog" but with Mario?
Jokes aside, I like that this story gives a bit of background instead of just jumping into it and being all "I found this game online. OMG IT'S ALL BLOODY AND SCARY I DON'T WANNA PLAY THIS SERIES ANYMORE!"
It makes the themes more prevalent.
Who else watched one of his vids, and now watch him all the time.
Let’s go, a new video!
Glad to see that you're back, Hoodo.
Glad to see your still alive and well Dennis. I was worried because you haven’t been active recently. I hope you’re ok. Take care of yourself.
Even if this story has some “peculiarities”, I’m a big sucker for stories based off of early or unreleased media. Also, It’s very nice to see you again!
I still want somebody to write a Creepy Pasta about the cancelled grim dark "Tough and Bloody" Spyro game that Activison/Toys for Bob
were attempting to make prior to Skylanders. Spyro is probably the most easy character to use for a 'lost of innocence' type
story especially with recent events that went down in Activision studios Ala the downfall of Skylanders.
That story theory sounds like an interesting one.
I actually didn't mind the story ending on the line "Innocence" too much. Could have sounded kinda open ended. I like open endings. I'm just not too happy about that this word was what ultimately caused the author to be like, nope, this is too much, I'm quitting.
A dead Bart creapypasta review would be nice
The idea of a realistically proportioned Mario looks really goofy to me, especially with the N64 Mario head on top. The symbolism was interesting, but it was not scary.
The original game titled Mario 128, the Mario 64 sequel for the N64 disc drive, never came out. However, Mario 128, the one that was shown as a tech demo for the Gamecube, did eventually come out in 2007 on the Wii, and today has sold over 12 million copies. Of course the reason many people didn't notice it came out was because at some point in developement they changed the name to Mario Galaxy after deciding to make the game set in space, but maybe that part isn't particularly important.
sup, glad youre doing more vids, its been like, too long, but I'm also glad you're feeling better
Finally, a creepy pasta that dosnt use only satan and hypertelstic blood
The editing in this video is amazing!
HOODO MY BELOVED HOW I MISSED YOUR WONDERFUL VOICE
I discovered this channels like a week ago and I have been on a binge watching spree...so glad to see a new video
I actually really enjoy when someone likes something I don't. Value is in the eyes of the beholder and I was laughing quietly during most dramatic scenes of the pasta, tbh. I did like the idea of it's plot, but it's just really hard to make this idea work in a short story, specially using a real franchise. Trying to make it more sad and less harsh was a good plan, but I think making it full sad would be better for the concept, making the "Innocence" at the end look more like a disheartening vent of sorts from the developers instead of an edgy game detail the author didn't like
I remember Mutahar reading this story.
Muta got me into Creepypastas. Kinda sad he dropped the Creepypasta part of the channel, but hey, I still enjoy his content.
A Mario creepypasta is the last place I expected to find social commentary on the gaming industry.
Yo Hoodo, it doesnt matter how often you upload. Your wellbeing is more important to us than the consistency of your uploads. Plus the quality of your videos when you take your time on them are absolutely spectacular.
Thank you, that’s really appreciated.
Mario 128 : bowser's revenge
And then, Super Mario 128 was rebranded as an RTS game
Welcome back my g
Man, I thought I just got reccomended one of your old videos because you were on break for a while. I read the title and clicked on it and wow,
your back!
Well actually Nintendo was gonna be more EDGY and DARK if it wasn't for Reggie talking nintendo out of it so this is kinda true
Forgot this story existed
This is a weirdly well written story. Or at least it seems like a well thought out story. Though I'll be honest the ending made me laugh, I was so entranced with the story that when he was describing how he felt about the tombstone I was expecting it to say his real name, or to be Peach's signifying that Mario died for nothing which could've been upsetting. But no, it wasn't anything disturbing or scary it was just sad. Though, the authors reaction to it is what made me laugh lol, if his reaction was something a little more understanding it would've fit well with the setting and vibe the story was going for.
Take your time with videos, we are all real people with our own issues behind the scenes. Just happy to see you have returned after a 2 month hiatus.
I love how hoodlum isn’t a total prick reviewer
Everybody loves a fair and honest review :3
YAY NEW CONTENT! Not that I wouldn't have continued watching old videos otherwise:)
I love your theory on the meaning of the creepy pasta
Glad to have you back! Also Yuriofwind reference FTW
I feel like this pasta has several issues which could be solved by observing horrific elements in actual Nintendo games, especially Luigi's mansion and super paper mario.
I also feel like looking at how sonic games became darker and edgier would be good inspiration.
HE'S BAAAAAACK!
Good to see ya alive and well, Dennis. Welcome back.
YOOOO I was just binging your vids, this is great timing bro!! Hope you're doing well!
Welcome back! Nice to see you're doing well ^-^
Glad to hear you are ok, welcome back.
ayyy nice to see you back my guy :D
hope u get well man!!! love ya content and im always glad to see you uploading :D
*THE RETURN OF THE KING*
I also wish that the ending was more fleshed out, but I really love the symbolism in this story
well... for once a creepy pasta that has a game that was supposed to be creepy.
128 was supposed to be a worldwide server game with other marios that were actual people from online and 128 marios would mess around and be able to talk to each other however due to the game not having enough severs and it didnt have online because that wasnt possible
It’s been awhile welcome back
Love you dennis
Yo glad to see yea uploading take your time tho m8 just good to see you and also top notch edits/effects they simple but effective and quite nicely done as always tho not that i expect less from you but just not mentioned enough imo. Have a good day :)
Return of the king.
Welcome back, mad man.
I remember listening to Yuriofwind read this story, it's a little weird to hear someone read it and not crap on it the entire time lol
You should really do this more if you can, this is cool.
-starbonnie
ah, so nintendo was making a grimdark fanfic
Yes! Take excellent care of your beautiful self!~
You're alive!!! Was so worried
I got this plugin that makes my speakers sound better, but now I can hear that Dennis' microphone sounds like he is recording inside a toilet seat
Glad your back dennis
He...
He has RETURNED!!
Honestly never liked this one until you explained the symbolism (never thought I'd use that word for a creepypasta lol) behind what was happening in it.
He has returned
Good video & take care of your health, man
The king has returned.
I hope you do more lost esipodes and trollpastas.
THE KING POSTED!!!!
It’s a me, da pasta! With Gaba-Ghouls and badabing Badadooksss
I always get scared watching these creepy videos but I like it
To me it's more of a sadpasta
You should do more reviews
Outbreak is happy that our god is back
HE BACK YAY
The king posted
This pasta could’ve been better if it wasn’t so unbelievable. I don’t think that Nintendo would have ever done something like this, and I feel like it would be more believable if the game was created by an disgruntled ex member of the team, pushed into a corner by the expectations of Nintendo.
Dam i forgot hoodo even existed
Same here
1:00 That reference is hilarious
It’s been years bro,I love your channel where u been bro?
About god damn time
your voice is so unique and i love it
wait isn't there already dark themes in the Mario law like the bricks in the game that you destroy are actually citizens of the mushroom Kingdom🤔
Yes a kind has returned
Hey, if you want a break from all these old creepypastas and want some genuinely good horror, I think it’d be really cool if you looked at the walten files by Martin walls! It’s a fnaf inspired (but don’t worry, it’s lore isn’t frustratingly convoluted and it actually is pretty dang scary, it takes a few concepts from fnaf but is mostly fairly original) analog horror series that’s fully drawn and animated and really well made in general, it’s just rly rad and I think it’d be cool to see someone like you check it out! (: