"The Night Shift Job I Got Seemed Great, But Then I Read The Rules" Creepypasta
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- Опубликовано: 27 сен 2024
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Hey guys. I thought we were all due for a Rules story so I went through some other stories of mine and dug this up. This is some of my older work and I tried to polish it up to the best of my ability, so forgive me if it sounds a little stiff at some points. Anyway hope you all enjoy and have a great evening!
Mr. Creeps must love your work!
@@keraharding9248 I hope so! Hopefully you do as well.
Mr. mills, can you elaborate on the pentagram on his hand?
Ya you're the most consistently writer
@@esperwtb3788 It was more or a less a way to show he had messed up and made a mistake. That was a consequence of his error. And you can imply the entities were marking him as a target to eventually kill him or take him (like the poor soul in the news.). Which you see at the end when he’s driving away and sees the man with the huge grin waving at him. Hope this helps!
I actually work security at an art gallery, and quite a few of my co-workers are fans of the channel too, so we made sure to mess with our new guy that got hired for his first night by giving him a creepy list last week. The guy was scared sh*tless by all the stuff we were doing to make it seem like the rules were real.
You need to tell what the rules was 😂 I’m hella curious
Dude you need to share what happened. Lol
pls we need them
HEY! We are still waiting for the rules u gave the poor newbie! 😂
@@DannyGamez7 It wasn't really anything special and tbh I can't remember most of them but we basically synced lights to turn on and off just like the list said, turned paintings upside-down when he was he wasn't looking while doing his rounds and had some of our guys dress in black cloaks walking around the hallway. Then we finished the guy off by one of us sneaking into his office while he was doing his rounds dressed in some scary costume under his desk to jump him when he came back.
My dad said he had the night shift 3 years ago, it’s weird because he didn’t have a job and he still hasn’t come back
went for smokes like my dad
He's gonna get some serious overtime and shift-differential pay!
Comrade long live the Soviet 🇷🇺🇷🇺
Don’t forget the 6 pack of pabst blue ribbon
@@Skaven_is_greatest the Soviets shall live as long as the queen
Any creepypasta title: *mentions rules*
Me: SHUT UP AND TAKE MY VIEWS
A man culture
I agree this is my favourite type of creepypasta
It is what it is
a man of culture i see U-U
Yeah. The idea of rules to follow late at night to survive with powers unknown always make me paranoidly anxious.
The night shift at the Mental Hospital has the worst rules. Bonus you have to deal with the local police occasionally and thats as bad as the rules.
Hey! You stole my name
@@NationalSecurityAssosiation I've had it way longer.
Could u provide me the link of that video
@@NationalSecurityAssosiation But it looks good on both. Plenty to go around.
@@tusharuzumaki3131 It does sound like the start to a good story doesn't it. If I could sit down and write them I would. But there's not no where near enough time in my days sadly. You know everyone always needs something fixed on their vehicles.
Rule 1 for surviving the Rules Cinematic Universe: It’s never a prank.
Rule 1 for writing in the Rule Cinematic Universe: Always assume its a prank.
Rule 2 for survivng the rules cinematic universe: after seeing the rules go home
Rule 3: If something seems to good to be true, there’s something wrong.
Rule 4 if you think you saw something strange you did
I like the idea that literally all of these stories are in the same universe yet no one seems to know of this happening to anyone else lol.
Rule 1: Carry a loaded gun.
Rule 2: Make sure its loaded with anti spooky loads
Rule 3: demons are resistant to holy water but not Pipe bombs and Cleansing Smoke grenades.
anti-spooky "loads"? what, is the pope gonna jack it into your gun?
thank you
Rule #10-If you hear the music of an ice cream truck, he’s not selling ice cream. He’s actually got some really dank hydro OG kush, so run over to him, buy as much as you can, and enjoy your night. If you get killed, at least it’ll be with a smile on your face.
"Hey man you got any Skywalker In there!?!?"
@@taylenseeley6188 sorry bro, all I got left is an oz of Chewie.
Ayo you got any moon rocks?
All the entities start hearing Bob Marley playing in ur office
Omg YES some of that pinesol OG kush
At least you didn’t have to do the night shift at the SCP foundation
So Dr. Plague is this you ruclips.net/video/DE7wUrK0Pb0/видео.html
The Soviet version is way more fun, just bears who love vodka and normal sprite that tastes like sprite cranberry
@@f.b.i.8590 I’m scared of that video now
At least you didn’t have to work at Dr Plagues Hospital
@@lemons6001 how so? Don’t you guys get free cocain?
One thing I think is a missed opportunity for these "Rules" stories is telling a story through the rules. Make each encounter, each ghost, relate to some tragedy or other story you're trying to tell, and have the protagonist trying to figure it out alongside us. Adding some mystery to horror is a great way to keep the reader engaged.
Write it
@@never-endingquestions3314 Challenge Accepted
That's a great idea
There’s a story like that, it’s called rules for a theatre/cinemas. Lighthouse horror is the narrator
the rules are by far the best creepy pastas 👍
I'm a simple man,, if the creepypasta protagonist has a list of rules, I watch
now if we could get a “i was a researcher for the cia, we had a weird set of rules for the most recent experiment” type story, i’d lose it
Ikr
That's a fact
@@threestans9096 honestly that would be sick 🔥
Lol my mom yelled at me because I fall asleep listening to your videos every night, but I have insomnia and listening to these story help me escape my reality and let my mind relax for once. When I try to sleep without listening to your story’s or music I have a hard time because my mind runs wild. I felt I needed to type this out to get it off my chest so I don’t go to sleep pissed😂 goodnight ❤️
The warning should be more like if u start a new job and you get a strange set of rules, turn around and walk out the door. Lol
Although if I’m ever in that situation the curiosity would kill me so I’d still take the job lol
me *sees note and reads it* NOPE
Unless the rules say you can’t leave or die
Wow, this is the first rules story where the protagonist thinks and acts like a real life intelligent person. This was so refreshing. I guess I get why they can't all be like that, but still.
Yeah it's nice to hear
Narrator: *fails to follow the rules.*
Me: so you have chosen death...
the part with the ghost chick asking for her brother was genuinely one of the scariest and unsettling parts I’ve listened to out of any pasta
u know ur early when u don't see FBI or CIA comments
Jesus that is early, sadly the C.I.A hasn’t commented yet
@NASA what did you do?
RIP cia
This is why I like the CCCP better, they were the first to space but not the moon
@@lemons6001 :(
I love how Mr.Creeps knows that he has an actual gimmick that works to the point where we made a story about writing rules. Absolute legend
I WON'T LIE, I LOVE THE SET OF RULES STORIES
Jeez, health code regulations really cracking down.
This rules story is relatively easy compared to some of the other ones. I'd keep this job if the pay is as great as it sounds.
Same
Once you know the rules by heart. Just make bank there until you find a better job
Tune in next week for "We're No Strangers To Love, You Know The Rules and So Do I".
It's a hobby looking for this comment in his videos now
@@gazingonnirvana 👍🤣
For the first time in a really long time this one actually got my heart racing some. Much praise and love for this one to the author! 💕
same
I love these stories with the strange rules genre, very excited to fall asleep to this one!
On point!! Bedtime story!
It's still day why u sleep so early 🤣
12.03am here
@@linusk8837 oh my bad haha
It’s 11:30 here in England
@@xSAINTPERKx don’t presume that everyone is in your time zone
Basically the summary of the rules was to act badass in front of the demons .
Like waving at the man with razor teeth , ignoring the beast from the basement and tapping at the monster from the garage like a dog .
Your voice is very soothing, even with some super scary stories, I manage to fall asleep to these every night.
Every time you post a rulespasta I get all reminiscent and excited. Thank you
Need someone like Wolverine to take one of these jobs. Damn the rules. Claws come out. What you want with me bub. ***Massive and epic fight ensues*** all the other enteties never show up afterwards. Lol
Fuck yeah ! These motherfucking ghosts are having too much fun !
We need more movies of the monsters getting the crop beaten out of them. Willy's Wonderland might be one of the few we've got
Ghostbuster's would be cooler. "oh there's a ghost" *ZAP* " well he isnt there anymore!"
Well when my kids in the future says they don’t get scared I finna show them all of mr. creeps vids
Yes
i would do that, because i am heartless and i enjoy horror, it doesn't make me scared, im just interested
finna
It doesn’t scare me, I love them and they are interesting
@@kirstensautel6796 yeah same here but a few are creepy
The writer had a whole new direction missed from not continuing with the pentagram on his hand.
I love "the rules" genre....
"[...] as I tried desperately to remember them."
*"WITH AUDIBLE-"*
I thought at the end he was reading about himself
That's how I interpreted it as well.
Fun fact: People are more likely to read your comment cause it has the word fun fact thinking they will learn something cool in reality this is a fact itself see you learned something new today.
How are you always so early
@@linusk8837 cuz they're the FBI
Factception
@@sabieleclipse5799 yeah, somehow they’re faster than my KGB
always knew peeps were followers, no fun, just sorrow.....
Rule vids are best vids
“The space job I got was great, until I read the rules”
Sus bruh red stay sus just becuz u have to huh
Are you sus
@@thatoneguyproductions269ye9 R u sus???? hmm? answer dont got all day lol
@@305thief8
I answered a month later because you said you don’t got all day. Lmao
edit
*I AM SUS 😏😏*
This sounds like it could be a really cool game where you have to survive as many nights as you can while dealing with the enemies
Five nights at fredddiiessss, thats where I wanna be!
A five nights at Freddie’s game but with a list of rules to fight the monsters
Rule # 1: Redacted
Rule # 2: Repeat Rule 1
I’ve been waiting for another one of theses set of rules creepy pasta !
Finally, a creepy pasta in Minnesota.
Crazy how creepy pastas plot always sound better than the actual horror movies that been out lately
Can't imagine anything scarier than being an hour late for work on your first day
Great narration, loved the eerie feeling the music gave in the video
What if in the ending when he looked back out the window of the car he was supposed to wave and grin at the man in the torn suit as rule 5 says “if you look outside your window behind you and see a man in a torn suit with a grin looking at you grin and wave and ignore him even if he knocks at the window” this might be a overlooked theory but I think it’s not
He broke one rule, so when did he break the other one is my question because the voice said rules and he got punishment for the first🤔
@@chillex3877 He was marked for death.
Someone needs to make a FNAF like game using a rules story like this one. That would be fun.
I knew it was going to go downhill fast once he said that he was going to have an easy shift. As a Security Officer myself, you NEVER say that "This shift is going to be easy." or "Man, it sure is quiet today." That's a surefire way to have to deal with crazy people.
It’s quiet toooooo quiet
Here are the rules, in case you want to follow along in the story:
''Please follow these to a T; it can, and will, save your life:
1. If you hear footsteps rapidly approaching up the basement stairs, stay in your chair and DON'T go near the door or make a sound. Sit quietly and wait for 30 seconds.
2. If a tall, young, scraggly-haired girl with long, dirty fingernails appears to you, asking where her brother is, tell her ''I haven't seen him lately'', in those EXACT words.
3. If you hear scratching coming from inside the garage closet to the big iron doors on the right, walk out to it and tap your nightstick lightly three times against the door. Do NOT talk, or make any other sounds, it doesn't like that.
4. When midnight arrives, there will come noises of a small female child crying from outside, in the woods behind the building. Do NOT investigate the crying, no matter how human it may sound.
5. If you look outside the window behind your desk and spot a man with a torn suit, very deformed skin with lifeless and pitch-black eyes and an unnaturally large grin on his face, with razor-sharp teeth gleaming in the night and standing at the entrance of a forest, smile back and give him a small wave. After this, turn around and pay no attention to him, even if you may hear him tap on the glass.
Wonder how many guards is needed to get all the right set of rules
I thought there was going to be a news photo of HIS car.
It should have been! That would have closed the story nicely. This author.... I kinda wonder what they were thinking.... Unless this character has more story to tell...
I thought so too!!
I hate it when the main character breaks all the rules and survives, either make them break no rules or after they break the rules they die.
i love these work related rule based creepy pastas
8.5 Background piano was a nice touch.
If you get a disturbing list of rules, maybe just follow it just in case. Immediately breaking the rule with the 8 foot lady with scraggly hair just made me 🤦🏻♂️
I LOVE THE ONES ABOUT WEIRD RULES
imagine fnaf, but make it a rules creepypasta
Rule stories are my favorite. Your narrations have gotten better over the years man. Top 3! Keep up the great work 💪🏾
I absolutely love these types of stories
the rules creepy pastas are the best
Love the rules stories
This bloke always works at these evil places a true sucker for punishment
Apparently every creature resorts to an unnaturally large grin.
I was talking at the narrator, telling him the rules for each situation. Can't believe I remembered them.
I have never had any job that i was straight off by myself as i arrived on my 1st day with just a note
Overnight stocking at a grocery store. You dont even get a note. Just your shift manager giving you a 5 minute crash course and then your cut lose to throw your isles, Normally without help.
Ngl, at first I thought the skeleton in the thumbnail was holding a giant guitar and I got excited
Good to see Minnesota is finally in a horror story
I’m a simple person; I see a Rules story, I click
Have yall EVER, heard of closing one eye at a time? Don't blink, just close one eye, open it, close the next eye, open it- and you're fine-
i swear i listened to this like 2 weeks ago and it said it came out 8 hours ago then too. deja vu
Aight bois, TIME FOR ROUND 2 **** YEAH
I hate it when the creatures mention the rules. I love it when they're some unknowable being that you never can describe, it makes it mysterious, more fun to listen to.
I could believe this was a true story if it wasn’t for him having a flip phone. That’s as fictional as it gets
It could have been an interesting twist, if a missing person in the the news at the end was be a narrator himself.
*was a narrator himself
I see rules, I clicc 🌟🌟🌟
This is the first creepy pasta in Minnesota and I live there.... oh no
I'm shocked that they didn't follow him home
there is a rule of horror story in Thailand which is very fascinating because there is a false rule to trick you as well.
Every body gangsta until u see the nightshift has rules
Rule 1: Narrate the same story 8 million times with just slight variations to make it seem like not the same one
Not really
why dosent this guy have more than a million subscribers?!
Mr Mills! We meet again. Another great story, a cut above the usual "rules pasta". Thank you.
Hey glad to see you back!
@@mrmills45 please make a horror game gone wrong, or a road trip please
Rule number 1: don’t eat the ding dongs gramps will find you!
27 And still "excited" to drink? Dude apparently dosnt have much going on
i'm addicted to these stories, man and the narrator helps a lot lol.
This is like Five nights at freddy's 2.0
This guy has the most bizarre pauses in his narration
Thank you for this gem❤️
Make more of these rules vids bro
That video about the parks sure has me chuckling. Don’t run to the parks during a shtf folks they get you.naw I’m done 👍carry on the shire circus
The onlytime your getting traffic like that at night here in Minnesota is in the twin cities. After a sports game
Come on guys over 4K views in a hour, and no one can hit the like button for this man.
Bought time someone NOPED OUT!!!! 😂😂😂
Awww, I only wanted to play with your soul.... Why did you run away?
Remember always stay strapped or get clapped
I love love love love the rule ones plus more more more
rule 1 carry a loaded semi auto ak47 extend mag rule 2 ware chainmale and a tire 5 vest kavlar 3 make sure to have a aa12 semi auto extend mag 50 12 gauge rule 4 make sure to have many loud toys to use as a distraction rule 5 always have ammo in the darw
There's a genre of creepypastas about 'grunt job with inexplicable rules, involving eldritch abominations'.
I think someone could do a dissertation on the relationship between that and late-stage capitalism.
Ok... 1 loud thing (could be large person, could be monster, unknown entity) comes upstairs from the basement and your first thought is, “the basement must be a portal to hell”
MOST (Not All But MOST) people would try to convince themselves that there was a rational reason.
“Must be a person, maybe a squatter, maybe fam member down on their luck so living in bsmnt. Maybe some mental or emotional issues they working thru like maybe ptsd and that’s why i shldnt be seen” some type of thoughts like that INITIALLY. After a cpl/few weird things that occur and basement is involved THEN MAYBE think bsmnt is a portal
Can we get a part 2
Okay, tht was pretty scary. Especially because I also do security - how spooky?!