This email gets a "B" in my opinion...which is good for sales emails since most are "D-" and "F's... 1 big thing that pops out. "Let me know what your calendar looks like?" I think that definitely can be improved...maybe ask more specific time frames on availability if he has availabilities next week on Wednesday or Thursday?
I think that there is no magic bullet. Brett what do you have for magic bullet email template? I typically suggest times i have open. But other than that i think it is solid.
@@ryguy6481 I agree. No magic bullet. It’s a game of improving a tiny bit at a time and having different versions depending on your target audience while being able to give it a hint of customization to the prospect if possible without spending too much time on it. Truly good emails are very hard to craft. I follow SNAP selling email style.
"How to Sell Anything to Anyone..." That's a book by the Guinness Book of World Record holding car salesman Joe Girard. It's pretty good! Patrick - I don't mean to sound arrogant.. I'm a Top Realtor in Tennessee. Licensed in two states. I've sent thousands of emails like you have... Literally. And this video is the best that I've been able to find on creating a Cold Closing email like this. You're "Manufacturing Interest," which is something that I try to coach my teams on. Just want to encourage you man. Keep up the excellent work. Thank you for your time creating this video.
I read a book which is about Cold Email. but your explanation that you teach only 9 minutes is much better than the book that has over 300pages I read. Thank you so much for teaching me a good advice. I send this message from Korea to America
I know Im asking randomly but does any of you know of a tool to get back into an Instagram account..? I was dumb forgot my password. I would appreciate any tricks you can offer me!
Thank you for discussing the concept of cold emails and writing an effective cold email to get more clients to our business. I have a question, what if I do not have clients? Should I get some clients off a freelancer website first to use in my cold emails? *I edited this comment because I did not compliment you for discussing this topic I was confused about.
This video is a goldmine for anyone looking to elevate their email marketing game. With valuable insights packed into every minute, it's a must-watch for marketers aiming to craft the perfect email strategy. From optimizing subject lines to mastering segmentation, this tutorial covers it all. Don't miss out on this opportunity to level up your email marketing skills!
Hey Patrick, I am now starting my niche in Email Marketing. After watching this video, I've gained more confidence and been more productive. Thank you so much.
Hi Patrick, this is a goldmine you're giving out for FREE!. I recently ventured into cold emailing after spending many months submitting proposals on Upwork with no results. I think I can face my fears now!!
The email warmup feature alone sets Mystrika apart from the competition. Its like having a secret weapon to ensure your emails land in the inbox every time.
We had really similar childhoods and Im now entering my first legit sales role. Just wanted to say thank you for doing this - you inspired me to believe my past will not determine my future
Wow, this video is fantastic! It provides great insights into the importance of email marketing. I especially appreciate how easy bulkresponse makes it to create and send effective cold emails. I've tried many different email marketing tools, but none compare to the features and results that bulkresponse provides. If you're looking for a top-notch email marketing tool, bulkresponse is definitely the way to go.
I've had many sales trainings but have never seen the cold e-mail so concisely taught! Thank you for the video and I'm looking forward to watching more of your content as well as checking out your training!
I was taught to keep initial emails short and to the point and only focus on generating an initial meeting but see your format makes me want to re-evaluate that process and meld the two together. I can see where your format would generate more openings and mtg opportunities. As a BD for the green industry, my focus is very localized and theres no opportunities for sending 100’s of emails out daily. The market is service based with limited geographic area. Thanks for the content
Hi Patrick, this your PAIN FORMULA in writing email is very interesting and wonderful. Very simple and easy to understand. Thank you very much. It's of very great help to me.
The best cold email formula I'd have ever found. I was just starting send the cold email recently, and definitely give it a try for the next mails. Thank you very much Patrick Dang
Thank you. I do like your straightforward method. I would not say that I have been having an “ego” re sending cold email though. Just the opposite after all my experiences👎🏽. Thanks again for your professionalism. Cheers🙂.
BTW Patrick, after trying your template, I have successfully transformed my company’s response rate from 2% to a whooping 16%! This is amazing! Your template works, and your ideas work! Thank you so much for teaching me the marketing ideas.
Hey bro, I have super qualified eCommerce leads that I sourced personally (fresh). Would you like to have that bro? All decision makers' emails verified. I wanted to start my agency but I'm going a different route atm. I would give you this for little cents /lead bro.
Just 1% are going to read this email because it's too long... I use a different strategy which is called "start the conversation" and the aim is not get a yes or no, but start the conversation and the lead it to a rapport and the to sales. For me it's worked!
Thank you Patrick! I'm in desperate need of "inspiration" regarding cold emailing and getting new customers. This clip came up on my feed right in time. Wish you all the best.
Hi, I really like the format and the way of explaining. I think it would be interesting to do an example with a B2B customer. This is B2C and also you have chosen you, who is a prospect with a lot of information available on the internet. Most B2B customers don't tend to have information published or available and the ability to build something so elaborate and with such a direct Pain-Solution is more complicated. Do you have any videos with this type of information for B2B?
You'll want to be more general regarding the pain/solution strategy. You can just use what pain you expect most of your prospects to have and your solution.
This is SO HELPFUL. I had some of the elements in place with my current format, but was missing some critical pieces! Thanks so much, can't wait to put this into action.
Hey Patrick, I rarely ever leave comments but after watching your video yesterday and implementing this template I received a meeting on my first attempt using this. Greatly appreciate you and your help. Will definitely be keeping an eye on your content.
Very good summary! I like your structured approach. For my cold calls (using my script) and cold emails, I like to propose a specific time/date for a meeting … so I can then come back with, “ok, when is a good time to discuss…?” (I offer a Calendarly link at the bottom of my messages, too)
Summary This video shares email templates for both clients and admin, covering various scenarios such as guest posting, bargaining, and advanced communication. Highlights - The video provides email templates for initial contact with clients or potential partners. - It also shares templates for negotiating and communicating with admin or team members. - The templates cover topics like guest posting and bargaining. - The video emphasizes the importance of personalizing the templates. - The speaker shares their own experience as a professional blogger and offers tips for effective communication.
Hi Patrick, very intense and informative video. We are a clothing manufacturer who are specialzed in custombranded clothing for customers who want to establish their clothing brands and this video amazingly helped us generate more clients. Thank you so much keep it up.
Hey Patrick thank you for that awesome video, you are very informative and give great clarity to the many topics you provide, keeping it nice and simple, I will definitely be using these strategies in my marketing and continued success to you 🎉🎉🎉🎉
You are doing great job , your views not much but solved all our problems. I'm a social media graphic designer, I want to learn more from your RUclips channel.. Need more videos Thanks ♥️
Hey Patrick, I just discovered your channel. You're Godsend. I'm starting my Gen Lead business and your videos are helping me to work my way around the business. I did subscribe to your channel. Thank you so much.
Thanks Patrick! I applied your video tips immediately and got 2 responses out of only 28 cold emails sent! One is interested in learning more 🙌🏻
Finally a video on Cold email that actually has a step-by-step formula, unlike others. Glad to have seen this video.
I am applying for a job and the test task is about an email cold campaign that I never heard of. Watching this is a blessing so thank you for this!
Best of luck
Did you follow his technique? Did you get the job?
Legend says, she got the job.
@@texastim3187 we still haven't got an answer
@@texastim3187 source: trust me bro, she got the job
This email gets a "B" in my opinion...which is good for sales emails since most are "D-" and "F's... 1 big thing that pops out. "Let me know what your calendar looks like?" I think that definitely can be improved...maybe ask more specific time frames on availability if he has availabilities next week on Wednesday or Thursday?
Urgency is a CRUCIAL, always good to suggest a day and press on the iron while it's hot
@Brook Tadesse constructive criticism bruh. No emails get A+….they can all use improvement.
I think that there is no magic bullet. Brett what do you have for magic bullet email template? I typically suggest times i have open. But other than that i think it is solid.
@@ryguy6481 I agree. No magic bullet. It’s a game of improving a tiny bit at a time and having different versions depending on your target audience while being able to give it a hint of customization to the prospect if possible without spending too much time on it. Truly good emails are very hard to craft. I follow SNAP selling email style.
Totally agree, you want to be more specific in giving them options. People have an easier time deciding between two dates.
Pain Formula is the way to go when it comes to cold emails
"How to Sell Anything to Anyone..." That's a book by the Guinness Book of World Record holding car salesman Joe Girard. It's pretty good!
Patrick - I don't mean to sound arrogant.. I'm a Top Realtor in Tennessee. Licensed in two states. I've sent thousands of emails like you have... Literally. And this video is the best that I've been able to find on creating a Cold Closing email like this. You're "Manufacturing Interest," which is something that I try to coach my teams on.
Just want to encourage you man. Keep up the excellent work. Thank you for your time creating this video.
Forget Cold Emails... this is how I'm going to structure all my RUclips videos from now on!
Just found him today.
This would draw a client's attention it's pretty cool
I read a book which is about Cold Email. but your explanation that you teach only 9 minutes is much better than the book that has over 300pages I read.
Thank you so much for teaching me a good advice.
I send this message from Korea to America
Wow, thank you!
Thank you for replying to me!
hahah! I have the same feeling!
Best teacher on the net in my opinion. I'm getting his whole class; he knows what he's talking about.
Thanks 🙏
I know Im asking randomly but does any of you know of a tool to get back into an Instagram account..?
I was dumb forgot my password. I would appreciate any tricks you can offer me!
what a great name.... Patrick DAAANG!
this is the most simple but effective methodology I've seen so far! Thanks Patrick
It‘s so helpful, you're a genius
Thank you for discussing the concept of cold emails and writing an effective cold email to get more clients to our business. I have a question, what if I do not have clients? Should I get some clients off a freelancer website first to use in my cold emails?
*I edited this comment because I did not compliment you for discussing this topic I was confused about.
This is so amazing! Ok subscribed!! Phew finally got a solution!
This video is a goldmine for anyone looking to elevate their email marketing game. With valuable insights packed into every minute, it's a must-watch for marketers aiming to craft the perfect email strategy. From optimizing subject lines to mastering segmentation, this tutorial covers it all. Don't miss out on this opportunity to level up your email marketing skills!
I just learned how to commit on RUclips, just to make sure that I left a comment. Your videos are amazing!!!! Thank you!!!!
Thanks for watching.
Hey Patrick,
I am now starting my niche in Email Marketing. After watching this video, I've gained more confidence and been more productive. Thank you so much.
That's great to hear. Thanks for watching.
Hi Patrick, this is a goldmine you're giving out for FREE!. I recently ventured into cold emailing after spending many months submitting proposals on Upwork with no results. I think I can face my fears now!!
Cold pitching us the way to go.
How's it going? I'm starting now too
Good, practical advice that l will apply immediately
The email warmup feature alone sets Mystrika apart from the competition. Its like having a secret weapon to ensure your emails land in the inbox every time.
Probably the best video on email marketing. Thanks Patrick, keep up the great work. Much love!
Hi Patrick, thank you for the tutorial. It helped me a lot and I got tons of responses on my cold emails after watching your videos.
Now this is what I call giving value. Thank you for this template and for the straight to the point video.
We had really similar childhoods and Im
now entering my first legit sales role. Just wanted to say thank you for doing this - you inspired me to believe my past will not determine my future
Appreciate you sharing that Lewis. Wishing you the best on your new role
Wow, this video is fantastic! It provides great insights into the importance of email marketing.
I especially appreciate how easy bulkresponse makes it to create and send effective cold emails.
I've tried many different email marketing tools, but none compare to the features and results that bulkresponse provides.
If you're looking for a top-notch email marketing tool, bulkresponse is definitely the way to go.
You should do a similar video for LinkedIn. And the follow up sequence
Yes, please do
Hey! Thanks very much for the knowledge. this will literally help my journey as a Freelancer.
Thank you Patrick for all the Info..
My pleasure!
Perhaps the best video on clod marketing
The A/B testing capability in Mystrika is another huge plus. It allows me to fine-tune my email content for maximum impact.
great cold email. i have noticed that emails this long have a much lower response rate. but the ones that reply are HQ. great vid
Thanks for watching.
this is brilliant- very clear and no BS- i like that you speak clearly as well rather then too fast
I've had many sales trainings but have never seen the cold e-mail so concisely taught! Thank you for the video and I'm looking forward to watching more of your content as well as checking out your training!
HI Patrick, Thanks for making a tricky subject much easier..
Great video. I sent a bunch of cold emails this week, and got poor responses. I feel more confident sending out emails now that I know a formula!
Congrats. Yep, keep trying things out and you'll find what works.
This post is super helpful! Crafting the perfect cold email can be tricky, but with your tips, I'm feeling more confident
Patrick, thank you. I am good at what I do but cold call emails are not my best area. Thanks for the video. Will be looking at more.
Hi Patrick. I'm just starting my own company and your video helps me a lot. Thx man!!
Congrats! Glad you found the video useful.
Thank you for helping me understand cold emails 📧
This is theeeee best so far……
Thanks!
Hey I'm from Bangladesh I saw your content it’s very amazing I learn something about this❤❤
Hi Patrick. You made a lot of sense in little time, which is the most important. Thumbs up
thanks homie needed this for my photography and videography business.
Glad I could help!
Thank you so much Patrick
thanks for watching
Thanks, Patrick to share this cold email template. I use it and rephrase it according to my work 💼.
F**king brilliant mate - so clear and concise THANK YOU!!!!
Thanks!
New subscriber here from the Philippines!! Thanks for the tips, now I have a guide how to create Cold Email.
very useful video if you are starting with cold emails😀
I was taught to keep initial emails short and to the point and only focus on generating an initial meeting but see your format makes me want to re-evaluate that process and meld the two together. I can see where your format would generate more openings and mtg opportunities. As a BD for the green industry, my focus is very localized and theres no opportunities for sending 100’s of emails out daily. The market is service based with limited geographic area. Thanks for the content
This is great resource for freelancers in looking for client via email or social media. Thanks.
Hi Patrick, this your PAIN FORMULA in writing email is very interesting and wonderful. Very simple and easy to understand. Thank you very much. It's of very great help to me.
The best cold email formula I'd have ever found. I was just starting send the cold email recently, and definitely give it a try for the next mails. Thank you very much Patrick Dang
wait -- how can you know it's "the best cold email formula" you've found if you hadn't tried it yet?
Thanks Patrick its very helpful for my client to his start-up business.
thanks Patrick, for the PAIN formula. I think this is one of the best, efficient ways to cold email someone.
Hey Patrick, you have made my work much easier. Thankaass
Very impressed with your videos Patrick. I additionally overlooked you based on you being a younger guy. That was certainly my mistake. Great content.
Hi Patrick, I found this cold email structure very useful. Thank you for your sharing and great content.
Thanks man it was very helpful
Glad to hear it
love it! I translted it to Hebrew :)
This is exactly what I needed. Best teacher for sales
Thank you. I do like your straightforward method. I would not say that I have been having an “ego” re sending cold email though. Just the opposite after all my experiences👎🏽. Thanks again for your professionalism. Cheers🙂.
Hi Patrick, this video is significantly helpful. You can't imagine how happy I was when I found you. I hope you all the best in your work and future
great, thanks ! this is great formula for cold call.
i tried this and this is brillliant
Awesome!
My question is if I should use a cold emailing software or something like that. Thanks and great video!
Yeah should for sure. It’ll save you hours of time each week
BTW Patrick, after trying your template, I have successfully transformed my company’s response rate from 2% to a whooping 16%!
This is amazing! Your template works, and your ideas work! Thank you so much for teaching me the marketing ideas.
Wow that’s amazing to hear. Really happy to see the strategies working for you.
Thanks Patrick!
Thanks for watching.
TOP!!
I'm glad my way of writing was somehow very similar to the how-to of this example.
Thank you Patrick!
Well done. I am recommending your videos to sales friends.
Hey bro, I have super qualified eCommerce leads that I sourced personally (fresh). Would you like to have that bro? All decision makers' emails verified. I wanted to start my agency but I'm going a different route atm. I would give you this for little cents /lead bro.
OMG！I love your content. Thank you so much Patrick
Glad you like them!
Just 1% are going to read this email because it's too long... I use a different strategy which is called "start the conversation" and the aim is not get a yes or no, but start the conversation and the lead it to a rapport and the to sales. For me it's worked!
Please share
Please can you share the example? I really need this kind of Strategy.
This is such a great way to think about this. Thanks for the gems.
Great video men big thanks!
Glad you enjoyed!
Thank you Patrick! I'm in desperate need of "inspiration" regarding cold emailing and getting new customers. This clip came up on my feed right in time. Wish you all the best.
Hello, i m looking to start copywriting with sales emails, would you be open to answering a few qs ? It would help me a lot
@@enduropeoplemx how exactly can I help you?
Gosh! Grateful for coming across your channel Patrick, great work!!👏🏼
Thanks so much!
Hi, I really like the format and the way of explaining. I think it would be interesting to do an example with a B2B customer. This is B2C and also you have chosen you, who is a prospect with a lot of information available on the internet. Most B2B customers don't tend to have information published or available and the ability to build something so elaborate and with such a direct Pain-Solution is more complicated. Do you have any videos with this type of information for B2B?
You'll want to be more general regarding the pain/solution strategy. You can just use what pain you expect most of your prospects to have and your solution.
Hey patrik please make a video about how we can close over the email.
Thanks
Usually you won’t be able to if you’re doing outbound cold email. You got to get them on the phone.
@@patrickdang thanks a lot
Now I see where I completely was going wrong at
Best explanation by far. Thank you so much!!!
Very effective lesson, thanks Patrick!
This is great really, appreciate your help.
Thanks for watching.
Nice tip Patrick it did helped a lot in my prospecting .
This is SO HELPFUL. I had some of the elements in place with my current format, but was missing some critical pieces! Thanks so much, can't wait to put this into action.
Glad it was helpful!
Hey Patrick, I rarely ever leave comments but after watching your video yesterday and implementing this template I received a meeting on my first attempt using this. Greatly appreciate you and your help. Will definitely be keeping an eye on your content.
how did it go
Excellent presentations and communication. Very usable data!
Very helpful man. Thanks for sharing this.
No problem!
Thank you for the insight & nice video. Much appreciated.
Very good summary! I like your structured approach.
For my cold calls (using my script) and cold emails, I like to propose a specific time/date for a meeting … so I can then come back with, “ok, when is a good time to discuss…?”
(I offer a Calendarly link at the bottom of my messages, too)
Hey how do I get a calendar link ?
@@clickheretogetcoldemailtem8300 ok, wow, well 🤞🏽
@Optimal Tech House Once the first email lands in inbox, you shouldn't worry about attaching links to your followup emails.
That video is great! Thank you!
Thank you!
Learn something very important which is really needed right now thank you so much for adding value ❤️
Summary
This video shares email templates for both clients and admin, covering various scenarios such as guest posting, bargaining, and advanced communication.
Highlights
- The video provides email templates for initial contact with clients or potential partners.
- It also shares templates for negotiating and communicating with admin or team members.
- The templates cover topics like guest posting and bargaining.
- The video emphasizes the importance of personalizing the templates.
- The speaker shares their own experience as a professional blogger and offers tips for effective communication.
Hi Patrick, I've been binge-watching your videos and I must admit I really learned a lot, it was so helpful.😉
Great to hear that Suzan. Thanks for watching.
Hi Patrick, very intense and informative video. We are a clothing manufacturer who are specialzed in custombranded clothing for customers who want to establish their clothing brands and this video amazingly helped us generate more clients. Thank you so much keep it up.
Thanks for watching.
Hey there - How is business going? Thought about bringing an experienced sales rep onboard on a part time basis?
Hey Patrick thank you for that awesome video, you are very informative and give great clarity to the many topics you provide, keeping it nice and simple, I will definitely be using these strategies in my marketing and continued success to you 🎉🎉🎉🎉
Hello Patrick, Really love your videos. I am new to Business development in IT Consulting and learning a lot from your content.
Really useful video! Thank you!
You are doing great job , your views not much but solved all our problems.
I'm a social media graphic designer, I want to learn more from your RUclips channel..
Need more videos
Thanks ♥️
More videos coming every week. Thanks for the support.
amazing video, simple and understandable.
Glad it was helpful!
Hey Patrick, I just discovered your channel. You're Godsend. I'm starting my Gen Lead business and your videos are helping me to work my way around the business. I did subscribe to your channel. Thank you so much.
great to hear!
Congrats on starting your business.