This was a great story from beginning to end part 1 from part one he acted like a man all the way through to the end of part 2 in part one he didn't do the pick me dance he didn't cry and beg and plead in all throughout the story you stood up like a man and handle business and got her done finally no simp story😊
Omg just finished both parts.....this was one of the best stories I've listened too so far....well written, with great plot twists.... I'm ready to hear more ESPECIALLY about the mysterious Justice O Peace and Russell the old sheriff 😌😌😌 the mystery surrounding them has me intrigued espec ially wanting to know how they knew so much...the author can't leave us hanging 😮
Loved it. Don’t mess with Texas reminded me of another story and burst out laughing. Great story. Well written and kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you. ❤
Just finished part 1, great timing. Me and him almost have a lot in common. Other than the money, mine has a couple less zeros. Well that and most everything else. But we both wear boots and a Stetson.
Congratulations on the new channel exciting news indeed amazing story can't wait to see more from both channels subscribed and ready for the upcoming content best of luck with all the new ventures
They borrowed it. They don’t come up with any of them as far as I know. Don’t get me wrong. This is my #1 channel. They do have a couple contributors that give them stories directly but this was another Saddletramp1956 story A Father’s Justice. The channel changed the names but I gave you enough to find the original
@@WilliamH-et4 sorry, wasn’t originally commenting to you but you make a great point. I’m pretty good at tracking them down as you can see from my post above 👍
Why tell the sheriff you're leaving at. 1100 H ?( Which is morning) when it's past noontime. Their departure schedule was 2330 H. It was just AI so it's understandable
Main hero men are taking up new day job professional stations at the happy ending of this story! But, "Gunner" son -inlaw might be taking up a job that can set up another international corporate criminal intrigue other story!? Cringe?
Hi. Well, I most certainly wasn't disappointed. Part two was a stem winder AND it left the door wide open for Maliciouslogic3740 (or someone) to provide any number of sequels filled with any number of characters listed in parts one and two. So, c'mon LLC, put Maliciouslogic3740 to work on extending this series containing these wonderful characters. Together, parts one and two rate 👍👍...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ and a solid A-Plus
This was a great story from beginning to end part 1 from part one he acted like a man all the way through to the end of part 2 in part one he didn't do the pick me dance he didn't cry and beg and plead in all throughout the story you stood up like a man and handle business and got her done finally no simp story😊
Omg just finished both parts.....this was one of the best stories I've listened too so far....well written, with great plot twists.... I'm ready to hear more ESPECIALLY about the mysterious Justice O Peace and Russell the old sheriff 😌😌😌 the mystery surrounding them has me intrigued espec ially wanting to know how they knew so much...the author can't leave us hanging 😮
YES!!! Give us the skinny on the Ranger and the old Sheriff!!! PLEASE!!! 🥺
@@theunieroux3649 look up Saddletramp1956 in Literotica ..... this story is called 'a father's justice' he has several great stories on his page
Definitely one of your best stories thanks for your great channel
Great! Part 1 & 2 like it.
Excellent stories! 👍👍 this could be make into a book series or a movie. Verry good!
Love these nail biting on edge of seat stories. Keep them coming. Please
Good story thank you very much🙏
As a truck driver. The longer stories are always better. 🙏 Thanks
I agree. I like when they are one part . But when it is 2, it shouldn't be spaced more than 4 hours between the next part comes out
Loved it. Don’t mess with Texas reminded me of another story and burst out laughing. Great story. Well written and kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you. ❤
Very good story... I love the long ones. Thank you
This for me is a 10/10. Thanks for this enjoyable story 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
This would make a great movie.
LLC Rocks!
Once again thank you LLC for another great story also whoever made this story is a fan of Metal Gear Solid 😎👍🏽
This was a nice ride , LLC ! Outside of the usual mold of cheating stories. Good job and thank you !
Just finished part 1, great timing.
Me and him almost have a lot in common.
Other than the money, mine has a couple less zeros.
Well that and most everything else.
But we both wear boots and a Stetson.
One for the books! LLC strikes again. Glad I'm subscribed!
Perfect timing, just finished part 1. Waiting for all hell to break loose in part 2!!!
Very good story. Full of excitement ❤❤❤
Congratulations on the new channel exciting news indeed amazing story can't wait to see more from both channels subscribed and ready for the upcoming content best of luck with all the new ventures
Great EFIN story. Enough action and intrige to make a movie. Super well done.
A well told story l like the sheikhs answer, peace and a father's justice, need more solid stories.❤😂😂😊
Very enjoyable story, you have me carrying my phone all over the house !!!
One of the most stellar stories y'all have come up with since sheriff Pat 😁
They borrowed it. They don’t come up with any of them as far as I know. Don’t get me wrong. This is my #1 channel. They do have a couple contributors that give them stories directly but this was another Saddletramp1956 story A Father’s Justice. The channel changed the names but I gave you enough to find the original
@@WilliamH-et4 sorry, wasn’t originally commenting to you but you make a great point. I’m pretty good at tracking them down as you can see from my post above 👍
Loved the story.
Very well written story!
Well done !!! 👍👍👍
Good story!!!!!
Every story now has one these protagonists falling in love at first sight, then maybe a month or two later "will you marry me 😍?"
THAT was a MOVIE script ... Made me think of The Expendables .. A band of bro's Forge in Battle, that can be called on to help you out.. Loved it
Just this far into the story, makes me think this would be a great movie 😄
Who would you cast for the roles?
@@Catsclaw-ru6zw Jason Statham comes to mind, or Stallone if he weren't too old or the current Jack Reacher guy 😅😂🤣
How about Timothy Olyphant of Justified?
Great story!
Nice Story
What a ride !
That was a great story.
Beautiful story ❤️ ♥️ 💕 😍
Unfortunately it's over but what a wild ride.so worthy of the hour's of awesome sauce truly nice job LLC thx for the sweet escapes
great story
Why tell the sheriff you're leaving at. 1100 H ?( Which is morning) when it's past noontime. Their departure schedule was 2330 H.
It was just AI so it's understandable
Helicopter takes off... *Paranoia starts playing*
Part 1 now part 2 absolutely loved it ! Can’t wait for more hopefully on Russell ,,,,,,
This one was Great!! Wish more was revealed about Justice O Peace, very mysterious! Peace and a Father’s justice??
@@jrazz2298 sequels. Need sequels
I like the veteran stories.
Wow I like these long stories Hello everybody
I think we need a background story of his service in the military and how war dogs met.
Wow, 3 more hours worth 😮
Great storyline, ....
This reminds me of Sicario 1 & 2, both are highly recommended
Cracking story and the Texas Ranger? Icing on the cake.
Once again, many compliments to LLC for another beautiful story.
Jim needs speakers and a recording of flight of the valkiries on the helicopter
Damn Great story
Holy Hell this is epic. Fucking luv the bad assery that is Justin
I like how his ex is gonna live and die alone and broken.i hate when people say this ,but : womp womp.....
The thing is, the ones at Wilson petroleum will be the ones who are innocent.
ML3740 was firing on all cylinders in this story. Every character was pin point of just wanting to hang with them more
Grrat story
Hooked
I really like Beverly - she is so cute with her chicken eggs ... LoL !!!
Or chicken legs 🍗 😂😂😂🍺😎
If you know who the Texas Ranger is then you've delved that audiobook too...
Leos not elos but still a really good story. And this is second or third time I've listen to it. 🤔👌👍🍺😎
Im muslim. I love how they knew the islamic tradition of not shaking a womens hand, beautiful
Damn, this story is a whole lot better than most. Here's hoping for the return of the War Dogs!
Love the story
Roscoe P Colet😊rain
John Smith is a great Agent name and also very popular in Motel registers.
Some long story.
Why wear desert camo in a woodland? Doesn't make sense!
Dey went to New Mexico more desert than woodland out there
South eastern NM is desert
I actually knew a police officer named bledsoe ... LoL !!!
Why does 'nt the commentator pronounce the words properly. Because in certain circumstances it takes from the story.You'd think he'd know better.
Yeah, "Why here" instead of y'hear? Y'know?
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and the movie stars Arnold
@@tomhellert4125 😂🤣😅
Excellent story with the bad guys getting their end!
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Good story!
Now question for everyone, who th makes a lasagna dripping with mushrooms?? Or am I the only one around here baffled?
I got a better question isn't Central City the home of the Flash? And if so where was he? 🤔😔🍺😎
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Main hero men are taking up new day job professional stations at the happy ending of this story! But, "Gunner" son -inlaw might be taking up a job that can set up another international corporate criminal intrigue other story!? Cringe?
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Good rich and great story such Depth
Hi. Well, I most certainly wasn't disappointed. Part two was a stem winder AND it left the door wide open for Maliciouslogic3740 (or someone) to provide any number of sequels filled with any number of characters listed in parts one and two. So, c'mon LLC, put Maliciouslogic3740 to work on extending this series containing these wonderful characters. Together, parts one and two rate 👍👍...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ and a solid A-Plus