I like it the timeline may not be right And I don't ship bilper bc of age gap and how dipper is either Straight or bi but I like it happy 10th Anniversary Gravity Falls!
wtf wtf!!! bill is 200,000+ years old and dipper is 13!! and bill tried to kill pines family!! ALSO WHAT HAPPEND TO TAMBRY AND ROBBIE?! ROBBIE IS OVER WENDY and… and… mason!? it should be dipper >:[ even if that’s his real name dipper is more original 😠
Uh... I don't actually know how to respond, if I'm being honest I started laughing my face off when I saw this comment 😂, you have just made my day💗, also I don't know if this is supposed to be a hate comment 😅
no idea if this is still happening but ahh i want another part idk i feel like this would be good sibling development for dipper and mabel, but i want mabel to have another anxiety attack about bill or something but it actually affects her
pov: you're trying to find you're way back and you fall into undertale where your good old dorito knows people there- ( im not trying to hate btw, i think its really good! )
I hate people who watch a masterpiece like this and then wast there and everyone else's time writing a comment in this comment please only write nice things and thank the maker of the video and like This is the only thing i want So please
Okay listen, I'm not trying to be mean, but why is bill there in the future? They turned him into a statue at the end of the last episode. And are they kissing? Girl Bill legit tried to kill Dipper and all his friends/family
I think I did explain somewhat in the video of how bill was there, but if I'm not correct in my au he gets turned into a partially human meaning he still has most of his demonic powers but he's not immortal and he looks human for the most part, but the reason that happened was because it was his punishment for trying to take over the dimensions, hope this helps explain some things 👍😐
Thia was not thaught out well cuz 1)dipper and wendy switched hats. 2)stanford and Stanley went out to sea to discover oxean monsyers on the stan-o-war 2.0. So you need to rewatch the whole thing
It does say somewhere that bill in humans is 13 so because this takes place 3 years later he would technically be 16 as well as dipper, also bill is not immortal in my au any more
Suggestion how to write a story better: the way you started the video was very cringe worthy to say the least. You forgot the important movie/story rule "show don't tell" where you fed us all he info we needed, making it sound like a weird Y/N story. What I would have done is show small clips of the years, concider everything that may happen in school, how they may fall apart, how they now interact, and finnaly making sure everything seems human, and normal. A few flaws I saw were things like the style of the characters. I don't think dipper would ever wear all black. He seems the type who wears chlothes comfortable to him, and making him this depressed, emo, bad boy makes him seem very cringe. Dipper over all is done VERY out of character. You could have used his interest for weird things as an big aspect of him, or make him look insane infront of others, making Mabel seem a bit worse, like you wanted to do, for not confirming anything he said. But rlly the worst is how you wrote the story. "after everything that has happend, with the bullying at school and the nightmares about gravity falls" you could have made it much better by not bringing them up till later. Not only does it make the viewer realise why some character is the way they are, it makes it seem more natural. The bullying could have been in the recap of wha happend, or maybe there's a moment where Dipper has a nightmare about school, or we even get somebody who bullies him to come across him when they're leaving to go to gravity falls, or maybe never even mention that he was getting bullied, just have the subtle but clear hints he is getting bullied in school, land don't make it stupidly severe, tha makes it seem like you're trying too hard to give the character a reason to be evil. The nightmares could have been showed by his reaction to them going back to gravity falls, and it telling us only then that dipper sometimes has nightmares about gravity falls, what could have happend, what can happen, what ifs, and just flashbacks. The fact your dipper is gay could have been given whit the bullying, either he gets called a f@g, or we get a homophopic comment from one of the parents to show they don't like him being gay. Overall, I hate that you try so hard to make you feel bad for dipper, and justify his bad choices. It's a stupid one, I get making the situation a bit worse, or much worse in only one aspect, but max worse case scenario in every aspect ruins everything. Im not even a minute in, and I'm already this bothered. This is worse than the fanfiction I've read. 🧍♂️
Cool, cool, Love the suggestions But, telling someone that you don't like the way they wrote their own personal opinion on a future idea of an original storyline, is just straight up rude and makes people feel like sh!t so if you want to give suggestions and pointers on how to help someone write a story be a little bit nicer about it. People work really hard on their stories and it usually takes days to weeks to make them. Down grading someone's work is really wrong in it self, so I'm sorry you didn't enjoy but if you feel the need to comment rethink, and consider how the other person that put all the work in is gonna feel.
legend has it that candy and patrisha are still lost
Lol😂
they are probaly dead actually :
Oh no ☹️
rip patrisha
Uh it’s Pacifica
"Doesn't buck seem familiar "
"Buck": is a fucking triangle demon
Y E S I AM A FUCKING TRIANGLE DEMON
they be blind
they be blind
Lol, yes they be
More like wierd ahh Dorito demon
Mabel: "who's ur friend? "
Mason/dipper: "uhhh ✨BUCK✨"
8:30 Candy is 36 universes ahead of everybody 💀
Valid
The flowey interaction made me realize you just combined my 2 favorite fandoms
RIP to Candy and Pacifica who are most likely still lost-
14:04 How did I forget about that evil flower?
Love!
when they met flowey i laughed to die
“Well i should probably thank Buck for bringing home here” 😂 I know it was a typo and that they corrected it but it’s still funny 😂
Buck? *oh god....
I have watched too much supernatural originals and 911🤣😂*
@@shadow_glitchy_cosplays lmfao 🤣
Note to self... _never walk in the woods then fall down into what seems like a hole opening for a crave, because you will enter another world_
My favorite response yet 😂
@@Demon_Kiki05 thank you, i wanted to say ‘undertale’ for the memes but- XD
Also Sans means ‘without’
Dipper is going through everything possible😭😭
I was think dipper or mason pines loves Pacifica but he loves Bill cipher ;( A new ship.
@@williamortizcruzatt517 never ship billdip or whatever close to me ever again
@@ram.h032 oh okej...
Omg I flipped out when I saw flowey! 🤣🤣
I like it the timeline may not be right And I don't ship bilper bc of age gap and how dipper is either Straight or bi but I like it happy 10th Anniversary Gravity Falls!
Dip:the idiot Fall asleep
Pacifica: guys she died
Me : tu match epig😂
Love the story good change on the story in my opinion 👌
Mabel looks adorable
Thanks 👍
I was worried about the ages being wried but i looked it up bill in human form would be 13 when the show is taking place
No one is talking about how they got dippers real name right lol
You mean pine tree right?
@@shadow_glitchy_cosplaysMason. (I can’t tell if ur being sarcastic)
ми дізналися це з інтернету.
UNDERTALE MEETS MY INNER DEMONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
They gonna meet alot of depressed homies
@@Mikasa_Ackerman00 how?????
Pacificas crush on dipper was like every time mable saw a guy
Totally 👍
I really enjoyed it ♥️
I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊
* Me watches Original *
* 5 Secs later *
* Finds dis *
Me- whata coincidence
Mason/Dipper, Bill and Mabel land in the "Underground"
Me: What is this, Undertale?
A few moments later...
Me: Oh, it is.
This is definetly the best undertale and gravity falls crossover-
This is way better than the other one!! ♥️ New sub
Awww, thank you, I really appreciate it 😁👍
EMO DIPPER 🖤⛓🥀
👍
wtf wtf!!!
bill is 200,000+ years old and dipper is 13!!
and bill tried to kill pines family!!
ALSO WHAT HAPPEND TO TAMBRY AND ROBBIE?!
ROBBIE IS OVER WENDY
and… and… mason!? it should be dipper >:[ even if that’s his real name dipper is more original
😠
This is everything I needed and more 🥺😍
I like it but I ship Dipper and Pacifica
Well I'm still glad you like it
my insides turned into a weird mess as soon as i saw bill dip and now i look like mash potatoes thanks alot
Uh... I don't actually know how to respond, if I'm being honest I started laughing my face off when I saw this comment 😂, you have just made my day💗, also I don't know if this is supposed to be a hate comment 😅
FINALLY AN ENGLISHIAN
I-
I didn't expect to see undertale here XD
THAT WAS AMAZING
You know bill is over 6,000 years old right.. while in this storyline mason (dipper) is only 16…
Yeah, but in human years bill is only 16 😑👍
@@Demon_Kiki05 well still, but no judgement I just think it’s a toxic ship
@@Demon_Kiki05 ITS NO EXCUSE ITS STILL WIERD CUS BILL STILL HAS THE MIND OF A 6,000 YEAR OLD
The flower:welcome to the underground
Me: how was the fall 😏
UNDERTALE
Bruh this really went to the future of gravity falls to future gravity falls meets umdertale
13:43 the undertail kicks in lol
I really liked this video and the end was funny
This. Is. AMAZING!!! Combining Gravity Falls with Gacha Club is just... FREAKING GREAT!! 5/5 stars. :D
Thank you 😌
I hope make part 2 one day but I won't rush you 🤗
when a person ships billdip
ok that's enough gravity falls for one day
Tysm for putting so much effort into that for us🥺🥺🥰🥰
Your welcome ☺️💗
UNDERTALE!!!
no idea if this is still happening but ahh i want another part
idk i feel like this would be good sibling development for dipper and mabel, but i want mabel to have another anxiety attack about bill or something but it actually affects her
3-a universal being and a kid hmm why not😃💀
I love it
That's random XD
BEGUN DEMON BILL CHIPER HATES HATES DIPPER
Au😑
@@Demon_Kiki05 idc
Ok😐👍
pov: you're trying to find you're way back and you fall into undertale where your good old dorito knows people there- ( im not trying to hate btw, i think its really good! )
Thanks, didn't take it as hate 👍😁
İ just die of laughing to see they meet undertale🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Bro when it said two days into the party I got FNAF flashbacks
Wait... Elaborate?
Nevermind I got it lol
When I saw Flowey I was literally so confused just randomly munbling to myself what the fk just happened
Lol 😂
and candy and patisha never found there way back and had to survive off of leaves
I need more!😂
Pls part 2 ! 🥺 This is awesome.
Someone tell me the intro music I loved it!!
Absolutely anything
11:23 A Body Has Been Discovered!
Yesss, lol😂
Sans: who are you
Bill: bill
Sans:not what I meant😂
Don't mind me just searching up one word and this pops up
Makin me feel single…but I’m not
pls make a part 2 pls i will not sleep until it comes out
Ngl when candy hugged dipper in one episode I shipped them AND NOW IM SHIPPING PACIFA *not spelled right* AND DIPPER O-o I’m a shipping machine OWO
Oh lol
This is so funny and cute at the same time!🤣🤣🤣🤣🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
You should call the future falls
OMG THEY JUST FELL INTO UNDERTALE
Aaaaand we have gone straight into undertale...😅
Yes 😌
I hate people who watch a masterpiece like this and then wast there and everyone else's time writing a comment in this comment please only write nice things and thank the maker of the video and like
This is the only thing i want
So please
Hi 11mon IM 168TH AND LOLL
Should have named him... TYRONE
Lol but his connon name is Mason XD
WHY IS FLOWEY IN GRAVITY FALLS, THEYRE LIKE 19 UNIVERSES APART😭😭
Yes 😶
Okay listen, I'm not trying to be mean, but why is bill there in the future? They turned him into a statue at the end of the last episode. And are they kissing? Girl Bill legit tried to kill Dipper and all his friends/family
I think I did explain somewhat in the video of how bill was there, but if I'm not correct in my au he gets turned into a partially human meaning he still has most of his demonic powers but he's not immortal and he looks human for the most part, but the reason that happened was because it was his punishment for trying to take over the dimensions, hope this helps explain some things 👍😐
Thia was not thaught out well cuz 1)dipper and wendy switched hats. 2)stanford and Stanley went out to sea to discover oxean monsyers on the stan-o-war 2.0. So you need to rewatch the whole thing
I saw a fanfic like this once 🗿
Ok does future dipper still like wendy
No he doesn't, they're just friends
you made good contate
Thank you ☺️
I loved it although it just went to fast
Thanks for letting me know, I am trying to make them less fast now 😅
Excuse me UNDERTALE?
Girl you need sleep plz it's ok to take a break from it ok.🙁
Thank you, I appreciate your concern. I am getting better at taking a step back from things ☺️
Yes undertale i'm a fan undertale undertale undertale undertale
☺️👍
Part two
Ok, is it just me, or does "Me(GF)" look very VERY similar to GF from FNF
Why does dipper look like Michael afton-
13:38 uhhh bill Sans? *Flashback remember ships error404 Sans X bill Sans* uhhhh shoot
🎩
👁
🎀
Ok not complaining about this, but why are there Undertale characters in this?
It's a crossover idea I've had, just based on the way the universes are set it made sense to me
@@Demon_Kiki05 Kk, no hate. It was funny.
Gente vamos fazer o youtube dominado por JESUS!
Cole isso em todos os vídeos que você vê!
💛ELE VIVE💛
🔥ELE ESTÁ VOLTANDO🔥
fixa??
10:48 bro thats not true dipper almost sascrifises himself for mabel almost every single episode of gravity falls
😐👍
I- 😰
Mabel shares the photo pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee???? i like so much your video
Thank you ☺️
@@Demon_Kiki05
Make part 2
where did Mable go at the end
Mabel pacífica
I think my adds are broken, they just gave me an add for a butter knife made out of butter
Lol 😆
Dipper is only 13 and bill is like 10000.00000 years old
It does say somewhere that bill in humans is 13 so because this takes place 3 years later he would technically be 16 as well as dipper, also bill is not immortal in my au any more
I hate bill x dipper but I will not argue as it is your opinion and I will respect it
Why thank you * bows out of respect* 😊😅
13:40 how was the fall
How did they get inside the sand universe-
It's a theory man 👍😊
Girl I'm a girl but thx
Sorry I call everyone man 😅
It's ok XD
The video is 100% great it’s just I don’t ship Dipper/Mason with Bill but yet again very outstanding video
Suggestion how to write a story better:
the way you started the video was very cringe worthy to say the least. You forgot the important movie/story rule "show don't tell" where you fed us all he info we needed, making it sound like a weird Y/N story.
What I would have done is show small clips of the years, concider everything that may happen in school, how they may fall apart, how they now interact, and finnaly making sure everything seems human, and normal.
A few flaws I saw were things like the style of the characters. I don't think dipper would ever wear all black. He seems the type who wears chlothes comfortable to him, and making him this depressed, emo, bad boy makes him seem very cringe. Dipper over all is done VERY out of character. You could have used his interest for weird things as an big aspect of him, or make him look insane infront of others, making Mabel seem a bit worse, like you wanted to do, for not confirming anything he said.
But rlly the worst is how you wrote the story. "after everything that has happend, with the bullying at school and the nightmares about gravity falls" you could have made it much better by not bringing them up till later. Not only does it make the viewer realise why some character is the way they are, it makes it seem more natural. The bullying could have been in the recap of wha happend, or maybe there's a moment where Dipper has a nightmare about school, or we even get somebody who bullies him to come across him when they're leaving to go to gravity falls, or maybe never even mention that he was getting bullied, just have the subtle but clear hints he is getting bullied in school, land don't make it stupidly severe, tha makes it seem like you're trying too hard to give the character a reason to be evil.
The nightmares could have been showed by his reaction to them going back to gravity falls, and it telling us only then that dipper sometimes has nightmares about gravity falls, what could have happend, what can happen, what ifs, and just flashbacks.
The fact your dipper is gay could have been given whit the bullying, either he gets called a f@g, or we get a homophopic comment from one of the parents to show they don't like him being gay.
Overall, I hate that you try so hard to make you feel bad for dipper, and justify his bad choices. It's a stupid one, I get making the situation a bit worse, or much worse in only one aspect, but max worse case scenario in every aspect ruins everything.
Im not even a minute in, and I'm already this bothered. This is worse than the fanfiction I've read. 🧍♂️
Cool, cool,
Love the suggestions
But, telling someone that you don't like the way they wrote their own personal opinion on a future idea of an original storyline, is just straight up rude and makes people feel like sh!t so if you want to give suggestions and pointers on how to help someone write a story be a little bit nicer about it. People work really hard on their stories and it usually takes days to weeks to make them. Down grading someone's work is really wrong in it self, so I'm sorry you didn't enjoy but if you feel the need to comment rethink, and consider how the other person that put all the work in is gonna feel.
Dont be mean she worked very hard on this