This is really good so far, im happy to have been able to see it. Id love for the next part to happen soon, but dont let streess get to you! Take your time!
PLS I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED DPTO MIKE AND WILLY WONKA (william) BC THERE IS NO PT 2 (if u are still here pls just finish it if u can but if ur unable then i understand)
great work !! I love your AU its quite unique , its very little to find an AU where Elizabeth isnt a manipulative brat and C.C doesnt hate michael and want to kill him 24/7 and michael hating william's guts and wanting to set him on fire all the time And william either being a psychopath with no emotions or uses his kids as expierment rats or being goofy ! And Mrs afton being delusional or blind or dumb whatever you wanna call it And i am amazed that you had enough motivation to make a 7 minute long video I also make fnaf gacha videos but i have never made a video longer than 5 minutes cause of lack of motivation and school and stuff So props to you for that ! So keep going and i hope your channel grows in subscribers as long as recognision cause it's really underrated !
I mean those personalities for them do line up with canon more While Elizabeth in canon isnt spoiled, she does act a manipulative and such to help William (Book-wise) and it would make sense that CC would hate Michael because, yes his death is an accident, but even if he didnt die from it, he'd still be traumatized- He was constantly tormented by his brother, locked in rooms with animatronics and such despite that being his worst fear, and then Michael put him in the mouth of an animatronic- Death or not, that'd be traumatizing for any kid with an animatronic fear- And canonically William basically did use his kids as labrats, with the fact it was revealed FNAF 4 was hallucinations caused by gas n stuff in a book iirc, and just how he treats Elizabeth in the trilogy too- He was NOT a good father in canon- (Though i agree with being tired of the goofy copy-paste Williams) And Mrs Afton has no canon personality or anything, so- I understand finding AUs that stray from those more interesting! but you also cant belittle people who do use those ideas in their AUs when they're closer to the canon info we have, yk? (Saying that because you went out of your way to mention those ideas as a way to boost your compliment for this persons AU-) /lh
@@RestInReeses i understand your point , but I sometimes love to see different AUs yk ? It has lots of creativity which I like I do know the full and actual lore but sometimes I wanna see stuff that stray away from canon a bit but not so far that it doesn't feel like fnaf anymore if that makes sense But I still love the canon lore the way it is
@@Ash_Is_Normal Yeah I completely get that! I love seeing AUs that stray from canon too! Just sayin you shouldnt put down other peoples AUs (Which probably wasnt your intention but how your comment is formulated sounds that way) for being more canon ykyk?
@@RestInReeses you were right , that wasn't my intention at all , I was just praising them for making something different nothing more nothing less :')
Hey, I was here yesterday and you had 90 subscribers and now over 200!! I see you are quickly gaining fame (please remember me as the 91st subscriber) That's all there is to see
My only suggestion would be to adjust the pacing (although you already mentioned its too fast) and avoid using things like "u" instead of "you" and such, it makes things harder to take seriously at times and if the sentence is already formed with short words like "I" and "if" it becomes a bit hard to read, atleast to me- and simply check for typos before taking screenshots, too
hi! as a retired gachatuber i just wanna say this is really well done for a first! keep up the good work
Hey, thanks!
I love William's face as everyone's showing up. Bros getting ready to say last words 💀💀💀💀
William really pulled up and decked Clara in the back of the melon
This is actually good for a first post well done 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
I NEED PART 2 ❤❤❤
Such an amazing video, you just gained a new sub ! I hope there will be a part 2 soon !
Please do a part two this is actually amazing 🙂
Love it love it love it❤❤❤❤❤❤ part 2 pls
this needs a part 2!!!!
plus new sub
Hope you get rid of Mrs.Afton permanently you really don't need her at all love the vid by the way.
Even though this is only your first post this is an absolute masterpiece and I think you’ll be an amazing creator in the future.😁
Wow, thank you!
Good Job on this I really like this!!
This is really good so far, im happy to have been able to see it. Id love for the next part to happen soon, but dont let streess get to you! Take your time!
Not William explaining how he killed all the children to Elizabeth💀
I love this and I keep re watching it can you make a part two soon? Keep up the good work!!!!
i absolutely love this! i just started making fnaf gacha videos and this gave me the motivation to continue 👍
I'm glad!
Sanaall😢😢 your video is amazing❤❤
This is amazing!!!
can you do a part 2? plus you have a new sub :)
My fav part 7:15 😂 jk it all was wonderful
Lmao
Hiii
this is actually pretty good
also
New sub :)
btw, will u be making a part 2? i really hope u do because its really good
Tell us, if you made a part 2. Is really well made!!🤩
PLEASE I NEED MORE! It’s TOO good!!!
Part 2
PLS I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED DPTO MIKE AND WILLY WONKA (william) BC THERE IS NO PT 2 (if u are still here pls just finish it if u can but if ur unable then i understand)
PT 2 IM GOING CRAZZYY
great work !! I love your AU its quite unique , its very little to find an AU where Elizabeth isnt a manipulative brat and C.C doesnt hate michael and want to kill him 24/7 and michael hating william's guts and wanting to set him on fire all the time
And william either being a psychopath with no emotions or uses his kids as expierment rats or being goofy !
And Mrs afton being delusional or blind or dumb whatever you wanna call it
And i am amazed that you had enough motivation to make a 7 minute long video
I also make fnaf gacha videos but i have never made a video longer than 5 minutes cause of lack of motivation and school and stuff
So props to you for that !
So keep going and i hope your channel grows in subscribers as long as recognision cause it's really underrated !
I mean those personalities for them do line up with canon more
While Elizabeth in canon isnt spoiled, she does act a manipulative and such to help William (Book-wise)
and it would make sense that CC would hate Michael because, yes his death is an accident, but even if he didnt die from it, he'd still be traumatized- He was constantly tormented by his brother, locked in rooms with animatronics and such despite that being his worst fear, and then Michael put him in the mouth of an animatronic- Death or not, that'd be traumatizing for any kid with an animatronic fear-
And canonically William basically did use his kids as labrats, with the fact it was revealed FNAF 4 was hallucinations caused by gas n stuff in a book iirc, and just how he treats Elizabeth in the trilogy too- He was NOT a good father in canon- (Though i agree with being tired of the goofy copy-paste Williams)
And Mrs Afton has no canon personality or anything, so-
I understand finding AUs that stray from those more interesting! but you also cant belittle people who do use those ideas in their AUs when they're closer to the canon info we have, yk? (Saying that because you went out of your way to mention those ideas as a way to boost your compliment for this persons AU-) /lh
@@RestInReeses i understand your point , but I sometimes love to see different AUs yk ? It has lots of creativity which I like
I do know the full and actual lore but sometimes I wanna see stuff that stray away from canon a bit but not so far that it doesn't feel like fnaf anymore if that makes sense
But I still love the canon lore the way it is
@@Ash_Is_Normal Yeah I completely get that! I love seeing AUs that stray from canon too! Just sayin you shouldnt put down other peoples AUs (Which probably wasnt your intention but how your comment is formulated sounds that way) for being more canon ykyk?
@@RestInReeses you were right , that wasn't my intention at all , I was just praising them for making something different nothing more nothing less :')
Hey, I was here yesterday and you had 90 subscribers and now over 200!! I see you are quickly gaining fame (please remember me as the 91st subscriber) That's all there is to see
I'll reamber you! I honestly don't know why I'm getting so much attention-
Nice video ❤
Thanks 🤗
I didn’t even understand with the voice changer😭😭😭
My only suggestion would be to adjust the pacing (although you already mentioned its too fast) and avoid using things like "u" instead of "you" and such, it makes things harder to take seriously at times and if the sentence is already formed with short words like "I" and "if" it becomes a bit hard to read, atleast to me- and simply check for typos before taking screenshots, too
Thanks for the tips!
Bro part the 2nd
Why do you guys like this???,it's so bad 😅
Quick question is it pronounced "Clera" or "Clara" cause they are spelled the same way and I'm just curious
Depends
What's the outro 💀 overall good just a little fast.
I have one thing to say unrated