Need some interceding time and dialogue before meeting the 'Galactic Peacekeepers'. It just jumps from message from Council to meeting an entire fleet in what feels like 2 seconds. Otherwise the dialogue is well written and not overly flowery. I like that style. Concise. In general this is very well written. I hope there is a part 2. Awesome cliffhanger ending.
Need some interceding time and dialogue before meeting the 'Galactic Peacekeepers'. It just jumps from message from Council to meeting an entire fleet in what feels like 2 seconds.
Otherwise the dialogue is well written and not overly flowery. I like that style. Concise.
In general this is very well written. I hope there is a part 2. Awesome cliffhanger ending.
Please keep the kamala demands for money off this channel.or i will cancel.