how to *fully develop* body paragraphs - writing task 2 double question/two-part question essay
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In this video, I use a double question in IELTS writing task 2 to share with you guys how we can fully develop body paragraphs.
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 essay structure
01:33 fully develop your body paragraph 1
05:25 fully develop your body paragraph 2
08:10 introductory paragraph
09:49 conclusion paragraph
10:21 entire essay
10:28 key takeaways
Lilie, i want to say that i have got band 7 in writing following through your tips ☺️. But unfortunately i didn't have time to practice for listening and reading. So i got less in them . I'm planning to write the test again . Thanks again for your channel ❤
You already nailed the hardest part. I'm sure you'll get higher scores in listening and reading with practice!😊
@@LilieIELTS Thanks a lot Lilie for the motivation. It means a lot to me 😭❤️. My sister was scolding me , telling I wasted money . I'll go through your message whenever I'll feel down . Thanks a lot dear. And I was shocked myself that I got band 7 , it motivated me more , because I practiced only 4 days . I really loved your page as it was precisely partitioned . I was overwhelmed seeing so many RUclips channels and soooo many videos, but finally decided to only focus on your channel.
In writing, i didn't write proper examples and was in doubt if my content was relevant or not . But I just went on giving explanation in broad sense. I got essay question like " Dealing environmental problems is responsibility of a International organisation itself rather than national governments, do you agree or disagree?" . Thanks for your motivation again , I'll practice more and update you 😘 God bless 🙏🏻
Thank you Lillie. I have followed your videos for writing task. And I got 7 ❤️
Wowww, that's great. I wish you all the best in your future endeavors.😊
Thank you so much Lilie! I followed your instructions and got 7 in my writing!!❤
Congratulations! What are your scores on the other three sections?
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Thank you Lilie. I love your explanation.
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Nicely explained
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It's really help me to make easier for prepare ielts exam
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Your lesson was really helpful. I got 7.0 on my exam, thank you so much for making this video🤍
That's great news. Wish you a bright future ahead.😊
Perfectly understood!
I also studied this for the last couple of days.
I think focusing on progression,
having clear ideas and
being able to differentiate between main idea and supporting ideas are the keys.
Thanks a million for making this video!💜
Thanks for the video idea.😊
@@LilieIELTS You are welcome!😊
In the next video you can focus on planning. Planning is extremely important for all of this. Coming up with clear ideas is hard, given questions are getting increasingly weird day by day.
Although I've watched some videos on planning, I'd love to see yours. I find your videos useful and easy to understand. 👍
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Should problem and solution essay be written like having one main idea only?Like we have to write 2 problems, should we mention them in a single para or separate ones.Nearly every youtube channel explains them in a single para?
Hello what is the best paraphrasing in that topic
Can I use example body paragraph 1 ? Thanks a lot for your enormous support.
Great tutor ❤
Thank you! 😊
i am really confused now. Do we need to write our opinion in the introduction of double question essay. i saw a lot of videos and samples about this essay type, but no one said to provide your opinion, only what you are going to write in bp1 and 2
Hi Lillie. Thanks a lot for videos that are very helpful 😊. Where do you get such an amazing ideas, please share where do you get beautiful vocabularies and collocations?
Thanks for the kind words! I share in this video how I get ideas for my essays: ruclips.net/video/FAUbhn5N0SI/видео.html
And I learn vocabulary on news sites like the Wall Street Journal and the New York Times.
Well explained, please make a video on the life cycle
Here you go: ruclips.net/video/_GDjEoxxy7c/видео.html
How can we improve our vocabulary?
Thaks my sister 💕
My exam is on 17 feb,sis, I want a session for multiple choice, paragraph matching and box fill in the blanks techniques I cannt manage my time & cannt indicate correct option..thank u for last video
Thanks a ton for this useful video, it helps me a lot to deal with Ielts writing task 2, especially in supporting and developing my key ideas in each paragraph. By the way, do you plan to sit the Ielts exam in the future?
Glad it was helpful! Yes, I will take the exam again after my current test result expires.
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You're great teacher ❤❤ Lilie
Thank you! 😊
Mam please reply no need to write positive development for this? When I wrote only advantage in my test my mam said incomplete task
nahhhhhhhhhh... very complicated explanation. Thanks!
It was just greaaaat !
Thank you
Woww, you're quick.😊
Could you say that how we can develop progression of one particular idea if we are Unknown with the topic? Or is there any way/tip that we could help us to build progression on the the idea of the topic?
I'm afraid there is no shortcut. You need to practice. Watching or listening to news also helps.
Thank you for your excellent explanation. It's helped me understand writing essay a whole lot better. I'm stuck at 6.5 writing 3 times. It's frustrating. I really want to change that next time taking the test. Can i ask what band score does this model essay deserve?
The essay was improved by a native speaker. I think it deserves at least an 8.
@@LilieIELTS Really? That's great. Thank you!
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I have so much difficulty in essay structures for example in positive or negative development, some teachers tell to explain both body paragraphs in positive and other says one of positive and one of negative .
What should I do
Hi, I suggest sticking to only one side. You may find this video helpful: ruclips.net/video/dFPVRy_siS0/видео.html
the score explanation template you show at the beginning, isn’t that for the general training test?
academic
Hii mam
my exam is on 24 Feb.
I'm struggling with writing task 2 please help me figure it out 😔
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@@LilieIELTS 不是啊，blog直接过来的，B站也有吗？
B站发了几个后就放弃啦😂
Hey guys I have my exam next tomorrow and I am so afraid.I am getting low score on writing and reading
are you alright there?😧 What did you get?
Make a video about idea generation please 🙏
This one may help: ruclips.net/video/FAUbhn5N0SI/видео.html
Hi Lillie
you have mentioned one paragraph should have one topic. but there are several band 9 structures where they told us to write two advantages in one paragraph and two disadvantages in another paragraph. Will it contradict the idea of one topic per paragraph?
Yes, it will. Better provide only one advantage and only one advantage unless the question uses the plural "advantages" and "disadvantages", such as this one: www.ieltsessaybank.com/some-people-spend-most-of-their-lives-living-close-to-where-they-were-born/
@@LilieIELTS but if question mentions advantages and disadvantages then will it be wrong to write two advantages in one para and two disadvantages in another?
Or do i have to write 4 para for four individual advantages and disadvantages?
I think both are fine. You don't need to worry about it too much if you are going to take the academic test. They want to test our ability to develop our ideas so it's very unlikely that we get a question like that. The link I gave you is a general training question.
@@LilieIELTS thanks a lot for the feedback
@@LilieIELTS can we write question statement in any of both paragraph??
Hi Lillie, kindly clarify that this looks more like a positive or negative development question as a gains a double question essay. Kindly respond.
Thank you for the amazing job. I am thoroughly enjoying your videos 😊
It doesn't matter. All you need to do is answer the two questions.
It's because half of the questions is about positive/negative. However, the first half is also important. If you answer it as a positive/negative essay and give 2 main ideas to support your opinion without answering the cause question, it'll not receive a high score for task response.
Hi Lilie. That question is like an opinion-type question. How can I understand it is or not?
You don't need to worry about it. You just need to focus on answering the question.
Please give some introduction starting lines
Sorry, I don't use templates.
I need your help
when you say each paragraph should have 1 main topic. Does it imply to the other types of writing task 2 questions.
No because some questions use plural words like 'causes' or 'advantages'.
Need more
More videos on ielts 17 are to come!😊
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How do you differentiate double question and cause and solution questions?
It really doesn't matter what type it is. All you need to do is answer the question.
@@LilieIELTS Many thanks .
You are the best
@@LilieIELTS Any tips for how to focus for long during the CBT listening test and not miss a mark?
Meditation can help improve focus. I use this app: www.wakingup.com/
My mentor told me to not write brief point in intro... What should I do now??
Hi, I tested it on actual exams and got a 7 twice on the writing test.
@@LilieIELTS can we use idioms in essay?
Yes.
You are not seen to use necessary connectors or linkers in your writings
Do you see native speakers use a lot of connectors in their writing. Connectors are not the only way to link sentences.
Where can I find your TEEE method video ?? Please reply.
What do you mean by TEEE?
For writing you use this method, someone told .
May I ask why don’t you use linking words such as as a result,moreover,furthermore
Do you think the essay flows well?
Most of the teenagers waste their major time by using modern phone each day. In my opinion, I think excessive utilising social media is harmful for children’s health and study as well mentality.
(Plz mam, count my introduction and if I do any mistake plz correct my mistakes.)
is this a solid 6.5??
In today’s world, smartphones have became something very popular device by children regularly everyday. There are several reasons why children spend hours on their smartphones and I believe, this case has both positive and negative impacts on children.
There are numerous reasons to state why do children use their smartphones more than usual. Firstly, as it is known, smartphones are reachable devices can get children’ attention with ease and when the children are used to spend time, they are more likely to become addictive. For example, most children are such a technological addictive user that, they do not even go out with their peers to play games at the street. The reason why is that, when childre are comfortable at playing games or surfing on the internet on smartphone, they find a virtual life to do whatever they wish.
It would also be beneficial to talk about whether this case a positive or a negative development. I believe, smartphones have both positive and negative developments on children. On the one hand, smartphones can provide children for different kind of purposes such things as chance to do their homework or chance to have better education. As a result, smartphones play a huge role in children’ live and make their lives easier. On the other hand, smartphone can harm children by means of social development. The negative development that smartphones can do is, smartphones have a potential risk to restrict children’ physical activity and social skills. For instance, if the children spend most of their time at home by giving attention to smarthphones, they will not have enough time to go out and develop their social skills.
To conclude, while it is argued that why children allocate most of their time on smarthpones and possible impacts on children, I believe, children benefit not only positive developments of smartphones, but also negative ones.
Words I want to write : 🥰.
Words I write : 🤮.
Is there more types of essay than this?
1)Agree/Disagree
2) Discuss both views and give your opinion
3) Positive or Negative development.
4) Advantages Disadvantages
5)Problem/solution
6)cause and solution
7)Double Question
Here is one more: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/what-is-your-opinion/
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are you cs student? you know well about tech.
I wish I were.😛 Used to listen to WSJ tech news briefing every day when I was preparing for ielts so I know a lot of tech stories.
aha! im pre-paring cs master in us rigth now. so its quite familiar to this topic .but its difficult to explain in fancy way😃
@@user-vm8yn4hb4w You have a bright future ahead.
Great video. But you mispronounced WIND UP
Did I? 😁
@@LilieIELTS Yes. Had the word "wind" been a noun, your pronunciation would have been right. But as a verb, it pronounced like the past tense of "whine", which is "whined".
@@omidbahramzadegan8310 thank u
the way you support the idea of teenagers are still children seems like an Ielts parapgraph. It has a main topic, well developed idea and coclusion. lol
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is there no need to talk about the positive use of smartphones even though one is of the opinion that it negatively impacts kids?
In that case, you don't need to talk about the positive side.
This is what I wrote. Can someone give me bands on all 4 criteria on this task I would be grateful.
"Since the rise of digital technology, it has been a topic of discussion for its positive and negative effects. The younger generation, especially the children, are spending more and more time on their smart phones. In this essay I will explain different reasons of this increasing addiction and argue its effects on the development of the children.
Smart phones are getting more and more popular among children because they can give them access to the world without even moving from their place through the internet. They can easily contact their friends, watch movies of their choice, and listen to their favorite music so they don’t even realize how much time they have spent just scrolling the screen of the smartphone. Parents also use smart phones to escape themselves from giving their attention to their children and they do not have time in busy life to spare some minutes.
This much time spent on the smart phone is definitely causing negative effects on their development. Lack of physical activities not only damage their health but also their personality development, watching others’ ideal life on their phones make them feel sad and depressed which negatively affect their mental health and they get poor at social skills like how to interact with their friends and completely express themselves to others. The longer they spend on their smart phones, the worse their mental and physical health will become.
In conclusion, although smart phones keep the children busy and parents free of their duty, they are not just affecting the physical health of the children but also affecting their mental health."