10 likes and I’ll rewrite the whole script to make it make more sense N = narrator k = Katsuki D = Deku Ib = Izuku’s brother op = other person m = mind or in mind A = Aizawa 1.A=someone in class 1A N:Hello this is Izuku from immortal au.And I wanted to explain my story to you guys I hope you like it I guess N: I also forgot here will be Mita too she will be one of my friends when i’m a Child in my school and in Ua. okay. Okay. Let’s start now. D:ugh wheres Kacchan he said he will be here to play with me ... ugh why did I talk to him first D: there you are D:Kacchan what happened why are you crying? K:I- I asked my mum if she will let me go to hospital with you but she said no because she wanted me to help her clean my stupid room. so that means I can’t see what quirk you get D:(wow I didn’t know that Kacchan cares for me) It’s okay Kacchan I will show you my quirk instead Op:Izu help your brother wants to kill me!! D: what happened now Mita-chan Op:uhhhh I- I kinda broke your brothers hero figure D: you what!!!!!!!! Op: i’m sorry I didn’t know that it was his figure Idk Who thought this:(guess we’re dead now) Ib:oh Mita~ All:(oh sh!t) Ib: anyways me and Izuku need to go home D: why are you so early I wanted to play Ib: you forgot that you have to go to the doctor to find out your quirk. Didn’t you? D: oh yeah! I already forgot that. I told Kacchan that not even two minutes ago Ib: anyways let’s go or will be late for the appointment Izuku’s brother and him Let me go it hurts I don’t care let’s go Well.I can tell dad about it Oh really? And what is he going to do? Kill me? Very funny Yo what kind of brother are you? A better one than you that’s for sure Hey that hurts you know Do I look like I care You little Do me a favour-shut up No you shut up Hey I am the older brother you need to respect me you little sh!t Oh. Then what about you What about me? I just f*ck it up Wow so you finally admit it?Huh? If you want me to type more 15 likes Izuku andhis brother fighting still: Wow so you finally found out huh Find out what? That you’re the idiot Get back here! I’m going to kill you! (I will write some more later. I have school) K:so Do Any of you understand what just happened or is it just me? Op: nope I did not understand a thing * honestly I have no idea what the creator meant* K: good so it’s not just me who saw all of that Op: your Mrs Midoriya right? Inko: yeah that’s me! Op:well then Your son does have a quirk but it will turn up a little late so you don’t have to worry about him being quirkless Inko: thank you sir Op: no problem miss (I’m going to stop writing for a day or two because I am going through a move so I would like to focus on that if it’s not a problem)(i’m going to focus on it anyway) (Ok I’m back 👍) D:(happy noises/sounds) D n (Deku being a narrator/filling you in) Dn: from that day me, Kacchan and Mita-chan tried to get my quirk to show up. But it never did. A year goes by and we are in middle school. I get bullied because people don’t think I have a quick and that I am lying that I do have one.But don’t worry Kacchan and Mita-san always protect and help me. But one day, Something happened… K: is there something wrong? D’s pov:(why do I think someone is watching us?) D: what? How?? Kacchan, I’m still alive! K: how ….? How is that possible? D:I- I don’t know K: that doesn’t matter.At least you’re still alive (or) i’m just happy you’re still alive * I couldn’t decide which so I let you 😊* D:kacchan, can you please stop looking at my face? K: but your face (or) hair looks weird right now, it’s funny D: stop thinking about kissing me! We are only 15!! Op: now, Izuku Midoriya, Right? D: yes, that’s me Doctor. How am I not dead? Did I get a hit with a quirk? Because this has never happened before (My little sis made me fix something I’ll brb) (I’m back 😀) Op: oh, don’t worry, you are still alive because of your quirk. And the use of your quirk is for you to be immortal, so when you got a shot your quirk was the thing that saved you D: My quirk? Op: yes, your quirk D: but, What is my quirk called? Op:hmm, Let’s see. Your quirk is called immortality/immortal K: immortality/immortal? Op:mhm K: finally! Those bastards won’t bully you anymore! D:Kacchan wth Anyways, thanks for your help Doctor kacchan, why would you do that/why did you do that? K:bc- Op: where the hell were you gays?*the word gay is that because it’s true* K: get up so he can explain Op: oh right, sorry Sooo. what happened? K: why the hell do you want to know? Op: I think you were the one that told me to get up so that Izuku could explain? K:Oh yh(or)oh right Op:duh(or)obvi K:you litt- D: okay, stop trying to fight you two What? Can you let me explain now? * i’m so sorry I forgot about it for like a week or two lol* Op:•Waits for response• N: •after explaining• Op:• death stare• someone shot you…? I. Will. Kill. That. F*cking…b!tch! • mood swing• uhh umm you guys alright? * they abandon her* Op: come on guys! I’m not THAT scary! Am I? N: A few months after that day, before the (I have no idea) D: mum! I’m going to go out with my friends, okay? Inko: okay Izuku! take care! • walks out house to his destination• D M:(gosh- where are they?!) K:• sneaks up on Deku• D:Kacc- K:• kisses Deku•• stops kissing him• D: •flustered• K: still the same, huh deku? D• angry• Yo- Op: are you guys done yet? because at this rate I think I am gonna get ice cream by myself D & K: wait for us! We are coming too! D N: from that day forward me, Kacchan and Mita had so much fun together!we tell each other everything.!All of us got into UA!And to make matters better, we all got into the same class! okay! Now we should get to the story… A:get your a$$es in here! stop standing there like you’re some sort of models and get into class. Now! D:coming sensei! A: okay class. We have three new students- 1.A: are they nic-? A: let me finished! And how am I supposed to know whether they are nice or not!? Okay you 3. You can come in now D: come in you two A: introduce yourself and then go take a seat D: hello everyone! I am Izuku Midoriya! I am 16 years old! K: i’m Katsuki Bakugo I’m 16 years old Op: anyways! Hi! you can call me Mita, I am 16 years old K: let go of my hair loser! A: okay class . Get the hell out of my classroom 1.A: you’re the new student, right? I’m Kirishima, your classmate * his name is now ‘Kiri’* D: hi nice to meet you too • alarm• D: what is this? Kiri: villains are attacking! •D fights shiggy• Shiggy: you do you know that I’m not here alone, right? D: what do you mean? •D gets stabbed• •D takes out knife• Shiggy/ib: I am so sorry little bro! Please forgive me! D:f*ck off before I change my mind Shiggy/ib: okay. Thanks little bro! •shiggy/ib somehow disappears• K: this is why I love you. D: and this is how it’s done. Thanks for watching! Please subscribe for more! I hope you enjoyed the video! Editors note ✍🏼: not saying you have to like but this took me forever to finish 😅 lol 😅😅 Also just saying this is a great channel. it is great quality.(I watch their videos and I do understand the spelling mistakes occur because I am terrible at spellings. I have AutoCorrect)
@@eoeowo2 I actually think it must be “has”, because we use “have” with I, you, they we. And this person is referring to a concrete individual, so the one who is incorrect is actually-you
@@MikagulyActually, it should be have. Has would be for a singular person, like child. For example “The child really has great grammar.” Have would be for children. “The children really have great grammar.” Therefore, the ACTUAL incorrect one here is you. Also you used the hyphen incorrectly. Please go to 4th and refresh your memory on punctuation.
Am just putting this out their Grammer is important so is spelling if you aint sure how something is spelt then look up meaning from either Google or a book with words and meanings and asked around or onced u learn the correct spelling take 2 sheets of notebook paper and pencil write out the words 100x until u remember
![Mha” 𝘱𝘵.4 “Deku’s 𝑸𝑼𝑰𝑹𝑲𝑺😟‼️” [𝘉𝘬𝘋𝘬] {𝘋𝘢𝘥𝘻𝘢𝘪𝘸𝘢}[𝘌𝘮𝘰𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘭𝘦𝘴𝘴 𝘋𝘦𝘬𝘶]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/mUFXDn7Xhjg/mqdefault.jpg)
10 likes and I’ll rewrite the whole script to make it make more sense
N = narrator k = Katsuki D = Deku Ib = Izuku’s brother op = other person m = mind or in mind A = Aizawa 1.A=someone in class 1A
N:Hello this is Izuku from immortal au.And I wanted to explain my story to you guys I hope you like it I guess
N: I also forgot here will be Mita too she will be one of my friends when i’m a Child in my school and in Ua. okay. Okay. Let’s start now.
D:ugh wheres Kacchan he said he will be here to play with me ... ugh why did I talk to him first
D: there you are
D:Kacchan what happened why are you crying?
K:I-
I asked my mum if she will let me go to hospital with you but she said no because she wanted me to help her clean my stupid room. so that means I can’t see what quirk you get
D:(wow I didn’t know that Kacchan cares for me)
It’s okay Kacchan I will show you my quirk instead
Op:Izu help your brother wants to kill me!!
D: what happened now Mita-chan
Op:uhhhh
I-
I kinda broke your brothers hero figure
D: you what!!!!!!!!
Op: i’m sorry I didn’t know that it was his figure
Idk Who thought this:(guess we’re dead now)
Ib:oh Mita~
All:(oh sh!t)
Ib: anyways me and Izuku need to go home
D: why are you so early I wanted to play
Ib: you forgot that you have to go to the doctor to find out your quirk. Didn’t you?
D: oh yeah! I already forgot that. I told Kacchan that not even two minutes ago
Ib: anyways let’s go or will be late for the appointment
Izuku’s brother and him
Let me go it hurts
I don’t care let’s go
Well.I can tell dad about it
Oh really? And what is he going to do? Kill me?
Very funny
Yo what kind of brother are you?
A better one than you that’s for sure
Hey that hurts you know
Do I look like I care
You little
Do me a favour-shut up
No you shut up
Hey I am the older brother you need to respect me you little sh!t
Oh. Then what about you
What about me?
I just f*ck it up
Wow so you finally admit it?Huh?
If you want me to type more 15 likes
Izuku andhis brother fighting still:
Wow so you finally found out huh
Find out what?
That you’re the idiot
Get back here! I’m going to kill you!
(I will write some more later. I have school)
K:so
Do Any of you understand what just happened or is it just me?
Op: nope I did not understand a thing
* honestly I have no idea what the creator meant*
K: good so it’s not just me who saw all of that
Op: your Mrs Midoriya right?
Inko: yeah that’s me!
Op:well then
Your son does have a quirk but it will turn up a little late so you don’t have to worry about him being quirkless
Inko: thank you sir
Op: no problem miss
(I’m going to stop writing for a day or two because I am going through a move so I would like to focus on that if it’s not a problem)(i’m going to focus on it anyway)
(Ok I’m back 👍)
D:(happy noises/sounds)
D n (Deku being a narrator/filling you in)
Dn: from that day me, Kacchan and Mita-chan tried to get my quirk to show up. But it never did. A year goes by and we are in middle school.
I get bullied because people don’t think I have a quick and that I am lying that I do have one.But don’t worry Kacchan and Mita-san always protect and help me.
But one day,
Something happened…
K: is there something wrong?
D’s pov:(why do I think someone is watching us?)
D: what? How??
Kacchan, I’m still alive!
K: how ….? How is that possible?
D:I-
I don’t know
K: that doesn’t matter.At least you’re still alive (or) i’m just happy you’re still alive * I couldn’t decide which so I let you 😊*
D:kacchan, can you please stop looking at my face?
K: but your face (or) hair looks weird right now, it’s funny
D: stop thinking about kissing me! We are only 15!!
Op: now, Izuku Midoriya, Right?
D: yes, that’s me
Doctor. How am I not dead? Did I get a hit with a quirk? Because this has never happened before
(My little sis made me fix something I’ll brb)
(I’m back 😀)
Op: oh, don’t worry, you are still alive because of your quirk. And the use of your quirk is for you to be immortal, so when you got a shot your quirk was the thing that saved you
D: My quirk?
Op: yes, your quirk
D: but, What is my quirk called?
Op:hmm, Let’s see.
Your quirk is called immortality/immortal
K: immortality/immortal?
Op:mhm
K: finally! Those bastards won’t bully you anymore!
D:Kacchan wth
Anyways, thanks for your help Doctor
kacchan, why would you do that/why did you do that?
K:bc-
Op: where the hell were you gays?*the word gay is that because it’s true*
K: get up so he can explain
Op: oh right, sorry
Sooo. what happened?
K: why the hell do you want to know?
Op: I think you were the one that told me to get up so that Izuku could explain?
K:Oh yh(or)oh right
Op:duh(or)obvi
K:you litt-
D: okay, stop trying to fight you two
What?
Can you let me explain now?
* i’m so sorry I forgot about it for like a week or two lol*
Op:•Waits for response•
N: •after explaining•
Op:• death stare• someone shot you…?
I. Will. Kill. That. F*cking…b!tch!
• mood swing• uhh
umm you guys alright?
* they abandon her*
Op: come on guys!
I’m not THAT scary! Am I?
N: A few months after that day, before the (I have no idea)
D: mum! I’m going to go out with my friends, okay?
Inko: okay Izuku! take care!
• walks out house to his destination•
D M:(gosh- where are they?!)
K:• sneaks up on Deku•
D:Kacc-
K:• kisses Deku•• stops kissing him•
D: •flustered•
K: still the same, huh deku?
D• angry•
Yo-
Op: are you guys done yet? because at this rate I think I am gonna get ice cream by myself
D & K: wait for us! We are coming too!
D N: from that day forward me, Kacchan and Mita had so much fun together!we tell each other everything.!All of us got into UA!And to make matters better, we all got into the same class!
okay! Now we should get to the story…
A:get your a$$es in here! stop standing there like you’re some sort of models and get into class. Now!
D:coming sensei!
A: okay class.
We have three new students-
1.A: are they nic-?
A: let me finished! And how am I supposed to know whether they are nice or not!?
Okay you 3.
You can come in now
D: come in you two
A: introduce yourself and then go take a seat
D: hello everyone! I am Izuku Midoriya! I am 16 years old!
K: i’m Katsuki Bakugo I’m 16
years old
Op: anyways! Hi! you can call me Mita, I am 16 years old
K: let go of my hair loser!
A: okay class . Get the hell out of my classroom
1.A: you’re the new student, right?
I’m Kirishima, your classmate
* his name is now ‘Kiri’*
D: hi nice to meet you too
• alarm•
D: what is this?
Kiri: villains are attacking!
•D fights shiggy•
Shiggy: you do you know that I’m not here alone, right?
D: what do you mean?
•D gets stabbed•
•D takes out knife•
Shiggy/ib: I am so sorry little bro! Please forgive me!
D:f*ck off before I change my mind
Shiggy/ib: okay. Thanks little bro!
•shiggy/ib somehow disappears•
K: this is why I love you.
D: and this is how it’s done. Thanks for watching! Please subscribe for more! I hope you enjoyed the video!
Editors note ✍🏼: not saying you have to like but this took me forever to finish 😅 lol 😅😅
Also just saying this is a great channel. it is great quality.(I watch their videos and I do understand the spelling mistakes occur because I am terrible at spellings. I have AutoCorrect)
Damn- you wrote a lot
I think that you did a wonderful job even with the misspelled words. You did amazing, so keep working hard and always give it your all!
Omfg you actually did it :0
thx I actually just wrote up to 3:10
@@-berry-toffee-bear-damn- that’ll be a loooooot of writing to finish this.
Aizawa at the end though🤣🤣🤣
He be like: ugh teenagers🙄🙄
great vid though
Aizawa's reaction at 13:16 KILLED me!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Trying to read this killed my last brain cell💀
Fr 😭🙏but still good tho
same
✩△□◇★⃤⃞⃞⃠⃤⃤⃞⃝⃟◯◈▣◉◆✪✦✧❒❐❏◘
Same
Fr fr
I understand every word and didn't realize that the words were messed up 😢
The children really has GREAT grammar 😂
And the adults 😂
Speaking of grammar have*
@@eoeowo2 I actually think it must be “has”, because we use “have” with I, you, they we. And this person is referring to a concrete individual, so the one who is incorrect is actually-you
@@MikagulyActually, it should be have. Has would be for a singular person, like child. For example “The child really has great grammar.” Have would be for children. “The children really have great grammar.” Therefore, the ACTUAL incorrect one here is you. Also you used the hyphen incorrectly. Please go to 4th and refresh your memory on punctuation.
Is no one going to care that Aizawa said okay you CANT come in 😂😂😂
I thought I was the only one that noticed😂😂😂
Yeah😂😂
I was laughing at that 😂😂😂
Me like fr tho😭 10:40
Aizawa: Ok 3 you *can't* come in
Them coming in anyway
Qurk okay……WHAT THE FUK-anyway great video 👍
Godzilla had a stroke trying to read this 😂😂
I give this video a 10/10
not me somehow understanding this whole thing 💀 my brain just automatically assumed what word it was meant to say .
Quirk ☒
Qurk☑
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Everyone is getting immortality and invincibility mixed up… the deku in this episode is invincible not immortality-
Well deku is doth of them but l just say immortality but the thrue is that is deku doth the them
Hi
@@Noli7643say that in the title next time-
Immortality will not show in this vid, put invincibility next time.
2:10 is that Touya before he became Charcoal 😂
i think so
Yes, yes it is
Spelling is amazing
Are you sarcastic bro?
@@Meowplayz8498 yes I'm being sarcastic I also lost brain cells reading that comment
@@PoppyKing-i3s lol
I love this video 11/10
Love your vid
My brain hurts👍👨🍳
im sorry why are their heads so big XD
If your invincible I don't think you feel anything immortal tho you still feel it
Edit: stop making fun of her spelling mistakes
Good video, but lots of spelling mistakes, and btw not hating, but the krishima doesn't look like krishima 😅 13:28
You should've put immortality but also your tracker is he who offense and you sleep a lot of things wrong
Great vid, but I didn’t really understand it because of the spelling errors…
The song is from the greatest showman
Can you remake this but the words spelled righ and add more to the video?
Bro I only have 2 percent left 😅
New sub❤
Quirk❌
Qurk✅
really good but just couldnt read it all cuz of the spelling mistakes but well done
I don't get it there are many spelling mistakes
Either a really young elementary kid wrote this or someone just not learning to read
some of the words are spelled wrong
Warning! Many many many many MANY mistakes 😊🎉
Your welcome
In the spelling 😂😂😂
Am just putting this out their Grammer is important so is spelling if you aint sure how something is spelt then look up meaning from either Google or a book with words and meanings and asked around or onced u learn the correct spelling take 2 sheets of notebook paper and pencil write out the words 100x until u remember
Why does Aizawa look like William afton
*ok... Get out of my classroom* me:HAGAHAHATSDGGDGDGDGDGFGDYDYCHFGHDDJD
The fact I had to fix the bad grammar
I understand a few spelling errors…but there is one in every sentence
Notice that the word guys is spelled wrong it's spelled gay with an s at the end
12.04 nasıl o kiri??
TO MANY MISSPELLED WORDS I CAN'T READ IT
Same😂😂
Why do izuku, Katsuki and Aizawa look like Terrence Afton, Samuel Emily and Vincent/Shota Afton
Probably because there main Au is that or they did a video like that
10:40
Pt 2??
Dude its like a 2 year old wrote this😅
real
I got a stroke trying to read what they said...
Read more...
.. Read more what???
Is that a 7 year old 😅😅
And wow your RUclips channel name is A that’s all
Part 2?
Don’t tell me bakugo doesn’t look like the Gacha Adrian’s
What are they saying?😂
All most all of the words were spelled wrong 😂😂
Ikr
You said intruse instead of introduce
Guys ❌
Gays 👍
Umm why are so many eazy words miss spelled
They can misspell it as soon you understand them
You spelled some simple words wrong to stupid. "Easy" "misspelled"
video good la
but spelling not
should work on it
I dont want to be mean but the spelling is a bit bad
LMFAO
Please tell me you arent english please 😭
this is hard to read grrr help i need to auto correct from now on
I can't read anything
Guys🚫
Gays✅
So many spelling mistakes Its making me mad
I'm so sorry l don't mind to make you mad
The song nooooooo dose not match
Your garammar is bad😂😂😂😢😢
Speak for yourself
Too many spelling words welpp-😭😭
The spellings 💀✋ help-
Help the spelling💀
english might not be thier first language.
*"gays"*??! Is it guys or what i think it is???! 😭😭
I couldn’t finish the video because of all the terrible spelling mistakes.. it hurts to watch. 😔 No hate!
Wrong spelling!😡😡
Who gives a flying fuck
I tink so
guys to gays hahahahaha
Boooooooooo wrong spelling
is it *"Booooooooooo"* or *"Broooooooooooo"* ???
BAKET MY MISS SPELLING ITO EW
gays💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀