What you said at the front of the story you didn't add at all you did in your story was talk and give advice anyway at the end of it. He was talking about your feelings toward him, but you never brought him out and did whatever you were feeling with him. Your story was a lot of advice, but that gets boring all of that talk and a lot of it with the same old words over and over, please change that story and put some spice in it. That's what we want most all of these stores I've seen so far there's way too much talking. They talk about just about everything but the thing that's going on at the store supposed to be about a lot of the windows how the sun's coming in and all that kind of stuff then all of a sudden you talk yourself into having sex with him, but you turn right around to talk yourself out of it that gets so boring. We need to hear the touches and for the touch is actually go. What you actually do if there's a mouse job put that in there, if the backdoor job put that in there That's the kind of storage we want for the kind of stores I want, but it seems most all these stores in in absolutely nothing. It gets so boring when I get a story that's got a good hitting. They never put it in there it just to get you to open it so at the first part of the story if it doesn't come out like I want it I just zip by it. That's easy to do. You know you can pull the stores here and find out the ending read at the first. I don't like to do that. I pull the prompt halfway because if there doesn't happen between halfway, then that means the story is going to end without anygood news in it at all you can send me something on what you think about what I said, but that's my opinion and I'm sure you have yours, but you have a great day. Keep writing stories, but put spices.
Repeating
What you said at the front of the story you didn't add at all you did in your story was talk and give advice anyway at the end of it. He was talking about your feelings toward him, but you never brought him out and did whatever you were feeling with him. Your story was a lot of advice, but that gets boring all of that talk and a lot of it with the same old words over and over, please change that story and put some spice in it. That's what we want most all of these stores I've seen so far there's way too much talking. They talk about just about everything but the thing that's going on at the store supposed to be about a lot of the windows how the sun's coming in and all that kind of stuff then all of a sudden you talk yourself into having sex with him, but you turn right around to talk yourself out of it that gets so boring. We need to hear the touches and for the touch is actually go. What you actually do if there's a mouse job put that in there, if the backdoor job put that in there That's the kind of storage we want for the kind of stores I want, but it seems most all these stores in in absolutely nothing. It gets so boring when I get a story that's got a good hitting. They never put it in there it just to get you to open it so at the first part of the story if it doesn't come out like I want it I just zip by it. That's easy to do. You know you can pull the stores here and find out the ending read at the first. I don't like to do that. I pull the prompt halfway because if there doesn't happen between halfway, then that means the story is going to end without anygood news in it at all you can send me something on what you think about what I said, but that's my opinion and I'm sure you have yours, but you have a great day. Keep writing stories, but put spices.
Boring story same thing all way thro