Please upload part two... I'm hooked on this story, the way it ended, with Cole and Atticus revealing Olivia has a brother, I know there's more to this story, and I want it!!!
I liked it, there were definitely some corny parts, but that's to be expected with a fantasy dark romance 🤣 I say 6/10, will be waiting for the next part❤
@@Michelle95292 i looked on goodreads and it was the only book shes ever had published but one would think number 2 book would be in the works.i just meant its not out yet.i do want to know about her brother and why wa he in prisin.
Good story but AI narration was dreadful. Ignores punctuation for expression. Mispronounces many obvious words. Uses incorrect character voices. Too jarring.
Thank you for sharing this with me. I'm one of your newest subscribers. I think you have good taste in stories. ❤😊 Maybe there's a book two? Could you please share it if there is?❤
I am at 32 minutes. The narration is the worst because sometimes the male caracters have female voices and then you get confused who is actually talking. Its so bad... But the story is ok.
Agreed But at the same time.. I don't really mind because it's free. It would be different if I paid for it but I don't mind so much.. I get the general gist of it. Now if I paid for it and it was like this.. I'd be fuckin pissed lol
@@aliviamenke5334 Vampires have waited long in the shadows. Waiting for their time to take over, and their wait is finally over. Humans have lost that battle and now answer to them. Olivia is a nineteen-year-old girl who has spent her entire life in a cage. She’s unique, pale skin with white hair and grey eyes. She accepts that she’ll probably die at the hands of the vampires. Her world is flipped upside down when one of the most powerful and oldest vampires comes for her. Cole Vallen. Cole is cold and feared by everyone, including the other vampires. He has waited hundreds of years for Olivia, and he isn’t about to let her slip from his fingers now. Secret after secret will be revealed as they journey together to change the world. Content warning: For mature adults. Some chapters include violence, profanity, sexual scenes, and intense torture scenes. DO NOT BUY if those type of situations trigger you or offend you. (no cheating) ENDS ON A CLIFFHANGER
Please upload part two... I'm hooked on this story, the way it ended, with Cole and Atticus revealing Olivia has a brother, I know there's more to this story, and I want it!!!
kimberly totman the arthur has only one book and this is it and she has a bright furture.
one hell of a cliffhanger and i cant waite until the 2nd book comes out
I liked this ❤
Love it and the readers too ❤
I liked it, there were definitely some corny parts, but that's to be expected with a fantasy dark romance 🤣 I say 6/10, will be waiting for the next part❤
This is accurate and an appropriate review. I second it
Very nice story please post the next part ❤
This is a really good story❣️Is there a part 2 or A continuation?
this is kimberlys totmans only book and shes a kid and she has a britght furture.
There is suposingly a second book. At least I found on some website that The 2. Book is called "his lovely Queen". Or is it not published yet?
@@Michelle95292 i looked on goodreads and it was the only book shes ever had published but one would think number 2 book would be in the works.i just meant its not out yet.i do want to know about her brother and why wa he in prisin.
Love this book, please let us know if there is 2nd book please!
The only reason I could tolerate the horrid narration was because of the amazing story.
kimberly totman is just a young kid and this is her only book and i like it.
Good story but AI narration was dreadful. Ignores punctuation for expression. Mispronounces many obvious words. Uses incorrect character voices. Too jarring.
Not bad for AI narration.
Great story until you get left hanging without a part 2.
Thank you for sharing this with me. I'm one of your newest subscribers. I think you have good taste in stories. ❤😊 Maybe there's a book two? Could you please share it if there is?❤
I am at 32 minutes. The narration is the worst because sometimes the male caracters have female voices and then you get confused who is actually talking.
Its so bad...
But the story is ok.
Agreed
But at the same time.. I don't really mind because it's free. It would be different if I paid for it but I don't mind so much.. I get the general gist of it. Now if I paid for it and it was like this.. I'd be fuckin pissed lol
It's cause it's a text to speech voice
Yes, the narration is chaotic, very annoying though the story is good.
Agreed I’m confused 😂
I the narrative is good, I'm enjoying the story.
I agree about the bad narration. I'm constantly trying to figure out who's talking.
Please upload book 2❤❤❤❤
their is no book 2 kimberly totman has only this book
This is a good book BUT the narration is horrible
Ai reading this story
People complaining about the narrator, unmmm you didn't realise both male and female voices are AI?
Yeah Cole was a day late and a dollar short. I'm disgusted.
The narration is almost monotone, flat, no emotional enuances, sorry, had to stop listening. 😢
This have 2 part ?
Liked the story the narration was awful
3:15 in and I'm really not well for the torture
The narrator is inconsistent. She switches around on her voices for the same characters, and sometimes does a wrong voice for the gender of character.
Good story but no quality in the reading
Didn't even realize that it was AI narration. I have absolutely heard alot worse than this narration
One of the worst narrations ever! It’s almost funny.
This could have been a good story. Sadly the English language has been totally slaughtered with this excuse of a book.
Terrible Ai narration
These AI voices SUCK
Who is this book by?
it’s by kimberly totman idk if there’s a second book or not
@@aliviamenke5334 Vampires have waited long in the shadows. Waiting for their time to take over, and their wait is finally over. Humans have lost that battle and now answer to them.
Olivia is a nineteen-year-old girl who has spent her entire life in a cage. She’s unique, pale skin with white hair and grey eyes. She accepts that she’ll probably die at the hands of the vampires.
Her world is flipped upside down when one of the most powerful and oldest vampires comes for her. Cole Vallen.
Cole is cold and feared by everyone, including the other vampires. He has waited hundreds of years for Olivia, and he isn’t about to let her slip from his fingers now. Secret after secret will be revealed as they journey together to change the world.
Content warning: For mature adults. Some chapters include violence, profanity, sexual scenes, and intense torture scenes.
DO NOT BUY if those type of situations trigger you or offend you. (no cheating)
ENDS ON A CLIFFHANGER