Too bad he didn't explain to his daughters why he left, I also miss a conversation he should have had with his ex and the reason why she got involved in this. Otherwise a very good story, I want to hear more.
Good story in the sense of good narration, good narrative voice, and resolution arc that covers the full bases. Nice turnaround. But I agree with many other comments. Why didn't he tell the kids about it? I can see why he felt he couldn't combat the system and company that his wife was employing against him. He was overmatched, and well outside of his element. I agree we should have had more of his wife's voice. Why did she do this to him? Was she gradually turned? Was he abusive but we never saw it because all we saw was his viewpoint? Was it the more common 'seduced to the dark side'? By the end of the story we don't like her one whole hell of a lot, if we didn't already. Maybe it's not important. But our protagonist largely projects victory totally by luck. He didn't even know he was fighting. Not necessarily his fault, just that writing the story this way had an impact on my ability to like him.
The story should have given the voice to the wife so we could better understand when og why it went wrong with the marriage and why they sent her husband away for two hours when it was so important that he should be present at her promotion. Was her new jobb to serve customer with sex? Why didn't he have a close up conversation with her before he drove away? The story should have told the reactions to the missing Valve stem caps and the husbands absence. Too little and too much in this story.
Another story of an idiot, very weak and slow thinking husband. He's truly a moron animal. Please stop posting this type of story anymore. I'm tired listening to this type of garbage story. It's shows 99% of husbands nowadays is very stupid and weak in handling their wifes infidelity.
What I find stupid about all of these stories is that when he has a chance to explain to his kids, what is going on he finds a way to not say anything. When his daughter talk to him the first time, asking him why he left and explaining that their mother is upset with him for leaving her, all he had to do was tell the truth, but in every story is the same old, stupid line, let your mother tell you. Would it be easier just to say to his grown daughter, your mother and her new promotion is for her to sleep with the bosses.
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Why be upset the daughters blame him? Its not like he told them the truth. He just ran away.
The wife is a 304 in the most classic way
Too bad he didn't explain to his daughters why he left, I also miss a conversation he should have had with his ex and the reason why she got involved in this. Otherwise a very good story, I want to hear more.
This story has been doing the rounds for a while
yep
Imagine my shock!
Good story in the sense of good narration, good narrative voice, and resolution arc that covers the full bases. Nice turnaround. But I agree with many other comments. Why didn't he tell the kids about it? I can see why he felt he couldn't combat the system and company that his wife was employing against him. He was overmatched, and well outside of his element. I agree we should have had more of his wife's voice. Why did she do this to him? Was she gradually turned? Was he abusive but we never saw it because all we saw was his viewpoint? Was it the more common 'seduced to the dark side'? By the end of the story we don't like her one whole hell of a lot, if we didn't already. Maybe it's not important. But our protagonist largely projects victory totally by luck. He didn't even know he was fighting. Not necessarily his fault, just that writing the story this way had an impact on my ability to like him.
Hey another story with way to much BASS ,get the audio right!!😐👌👍✌
The story should have given the voice to the wife so we could better understand when og why it went wrong with the marriage and why they sent her husband away for two hours when it was so important that he should be present at her promotion. Was her new jobb to serve customer with sex? Why didn't he have a close up conversation with her before he drove away? The story should have told the reactions to the missing Valve stem caps and the husbands absence. Too little and too much in this story.
I hate these reddit dudes that never explain what happened to family or friends and let the cheater narrative tell what happened.
Another story of an idiot, very weak and slow thinking husband. He's truly a moron animal. Please stop posting this type of story anymore. I'm tired listening to this type of garbage story. It's shows 99% of husbands nowadays is very stupid and weak in handling their wifes infidelity.
What I find stupid about all of these stories is that when he has a chance to explain to his kids, what is going on he finds a way to not say anything. When his daughter talk to him the first time, asking him why he left and explaining that their mother is upset with him for leaving her, all he had to do was tell the truth, but in every story is the same old, stupid line, let your mother tell you. Would it be easier just to say to his grown daughter, your mother and her new promotion is for her to sleep with the bosses.
Same....I hate stories...and men...that do this.
What kind of ending was that?
The ending was void of information like the writer ran out of time and words which made it very rushed. Too bad it was a good till then.
Why don't I understand? Just like that..... Lack of imagination?