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This just got recommended to me two months later, this rewrite is actually peak I wish this was what I watched

I Love how the scenes with Abby and William were handled as this seems like what a ACTUAL child abductor would act like at a school

This rewrite had me shipping Mike and Vanessa so hard!

I think having normal (Albeit, metallic) doors held closed by electromagnets would make more sense, but that's just me nitpicking. UPD: The only sad part about the Rewrite is that William doesn't get springlocked, either in the presence of Mike and Abby, or in entirely separate scene. Also, Llama, your voice for Aunt Jane is so fitting, it's uncanny.

2:37:11 can anyone read this? my dyslexic ass cannot even 😅

18 minutes in and omg the characterization, the plot thats being set up, i love thissssssss

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I LOVE THAT! I.. i.. this is trully massive and i in love with the characters! You did HELL A GREATEST WORK THAT COULD POSSIBELY BE AND BEYOUND! I LOVE THE CHARACTERS AND THE EXPRESSIONS! THE WILLIAM'S EXPRESSIOINS SPECIFFICLY! I DONT KNOW HOW TO SAY THAT THIS IS WOULD BE MY FAVORITE MOVIE EVER! I LOVE THE CREEPY ANIMATRONICS, THE SCENE WITH CHICA IN KITCHEN IS PEAK (silly cupcake!)!!!!!! I LAUGHED LOUD AT THE AUNT JANE'S REACTION OF COLOR THE WILLIAM'S CAR AND THAT WAS FORESHADOWING!!??? HOW DID YOU MAKE IT SO COOL!!! Wish you EVERYTHING THAT YOU NEED TO LIVE HAPPILY!

I think you made Aunt Jane and Vanessa as living breathing people. Not super robotic like in the actual movie. Good job. This could've been a better movie in my opinion.

I've just come across your channel and WOW! This is amazing, better than the original and enticing . 10/10

I LOVE ITTTTTTTTT🥹

I never expected this to be as great as it was. I’ll definitely be revisiting this from time to time and continue to wish the actual movie had this level of writing quality. I’d love to see a sequel to this and see if William would eventually become Springtrap in this version.

this story was a bit better than the official movie in my opinion

Say uh why'd you write out any kind of a spring lock failure?

Ballora is my favourite SL animatronic too. Very underrated and underutilised!

You made Aunt Jane, a character who annoyed me with how lazily written she felt, into my favorite character in this, well done!

I really enjoy this rewrite. I like how you made the animatronics actually attack Mike and how you added back the powered doors. Honestly aunt Jane became my favorite character, she went from a nothing character to a legit sympathetic one. William serves more of a purpose and feels like an actual predator. Vanessa still doesn’t make that much sense but I think it works in your favor. The only critique is that it’s a little long, I mean if this took over 3 hours I can’t imagine how long the actual movie would be. It’s also a little to character focused, I means that’s a good thing but i feel like the animatronics should’ve had more scenes. Because of those last two points I honestly think this would work better as a series like the fallout show. That way the animatronics can have more to do and the characters can be more fleshed out. I think the rivalry between Mike and Freddy could be really cool. And finally, wish you kept aspects of the original ending like Williams spring locking.

1:05:39 where's his exotic butter 😂

I love that mike is intrigued by the telenovela Dave should've said "well hello there old sport" to abby also you're a amazing writer

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I do love the movie we got, but WOW this is amazing. I wish we got a longer movie like this. The characters all feel more fleshed out and I love how you keep parts of the movie story so its still separate from the games

I’m literally rewatching this instead of watching the actual fnaf movie this is so good lol

My left ear would've liked to- oh never mind.

Absolute cinema unironically

You cooked with this one, I think next time I wanna watch a horror movie imma load this up with some snacks and a few buddies

14:55 Say that again...

DO GARRET WAS POSSESSING GOLDEN FREDDY???

Bro this movie would be 5 Hours

This is my new favorite rewrite video of all time. Also thank you for having William get away, at least this time. If you ever plan on rewriting the sequel, keeping his final fate as Springtrap a bit further away is great for building tension, and it’ll make it more satisfying when he finally gets his comeuppance. Brilliant video.

damn i love this rewrite of the fnaf movie it got me invested, I was expecting a big twist/ending credits scene of vanessa meeting her therapist and her expression change into terror then the camera shifts to william afton with a new name and pretend to be vanessa therapist but the matpat and the gang just talking at the end is very nice and it leaves the video an happy ending

Scott should higher you.

As soon as i heard "purple car," i thought, no, i knew it was william appleton

Imagine after your rewrite instead of Baby being the one kicked out of Ennard it was Ballora. She almost kept them trapped in the facility because she just HAD to toy with Mike. Then Molten Freddy could have been a hive mind of Baby, Funtime Foxy and Funtime Freddy.

48:02 you mean make it FEEL like a choice or actually make it a choice? Because you can choose not to listen to her, that'll lead to the secret ending

This is perfect, exactly what I'm looking for!!! Great job!!!!

I genuinely feel that if this was the actual FNAF movie’s plot, it would be my favourite movie of all time. I still enjoy the OG movie, but this would’ve been a complete masterpiece. Can’t wait to see what you do with FNAF 2 when it comes out 👍

Would kill for you to rewrite Security Breach

In the fort of nite...

Somehow i managed to click this while asleep and it played for an hour until my phone died and then i woke up with 0%

best thing ever id pay to see this animated and witness this abstract creation on theators ❤

Jesus I love your Mike design though

Awesome work. This need to be made in a mini series or an animated movie.

I was genuinely creeped out and grossed out when William was talking to Abby, and i was scared we'd actually see his victim's bodies. This was incredible!

BEGINNING - NIGHT 1 2:58 Beginning/mall scene 7:08 Jane’s house 18:06 Mike try’s to get a job 22:14 Mikes apartment 26:08 Abby goes to school 28:41 Mike goes to Fazbears NIGHT 1 - NIGHT 2 34:16 Night 1, also the rabbit moves 41:10 6:00 AM also Vanessa 43:19 Abby’s at school 45:29 Mike has another dream 50:32 Back at Freddy’s, also Vanessa NIGHT 2 - NIGHT 3 52:56 Night 2 58:15 6:00 AM, Mike leaves 1:00:16 Abby goes to school 1:03:49 Back to Mike 1:05:41 Aunt Jane is back 1:08:33 Mike sleeps 1:12:46 back to Fazbears NIGHT 3 - NIGHT 4 1:13:54 Night 3, they all move 1:20:06 6:00 AM 1:26:32 Janes meeting with the headmaster 1:28:56 the meeting ends 1:29:52 Mikes worried 1:31:36 Abby & Jane call Mike 1:41:40 Mikes dreaming 1:44:45 Back to Fazbears NIGHT 4 - NIGHT 5 1:46:51 Night 4 1:47:49 Powers out 1:50:13 6:00 AM 1:51:26 breakfast at sparkys 1:59:43 mikes thinking for hours 2:00:20 Jane’s calls interrupted by Abby 2:02:16Mikes trip to the library 2:09:00 Mikes over his head 2:10:10 Mikes sees Garrett in his dream 2:20:34 Abby and Jane 2:28:13 Mike gets called by Jane NIGHT 5 - NIGHT 6 2:31:53 Back to Freddy’s 2:32:34 Vanessa bring Mike to the forest 2:34:42 Mikes in the Dream forest 2:35:45 Dave runs Jane over and kidnaps Abby 2:38:36 Mike has a talk with Garrett 2:44:36 Jane Calls the police 2:45:14 Mikes awake 2:48:19 Abby runs 2:49:26 The animatronics have awoken 2:51:03 sparks of fire 2:51:41 Dave killed Garrett 2:53:18 Williams Plan 2:55:16 Vanessa’s plan 2:59:21 in the pizzeria - CONNECTION TERMINATED- 2:59:55 MIKES BACK 3:02:45 *HEADSHOT* 3:03:37 THE FLAMING RABBIT 3:03:50 VANESSA FIGHTS WILLIAM 3:12:08 MIKE AND ABBY TRY TO ESCAPE 3:12:52 ABBY CALLS THE POLICE 3:10:22 MIKE AND ABBY TRY TO ESCAPE 3:14:01 VANESSAS UNCONSCIOUS 3:14:51 WILLIAM FOUND ABBY 3:16:23 FREDDY LETS THEM LEAVE 3:17:27 THEY LEAVE 3:18:12 Garrett’s happiest day - THE END - 3:18:56 Breaking news: Cold case solved 3:20:08 Mike leaves Jane’s house 3:21:40 Mike visits Vanessa 3:25:48 Mike picks up Abby from school 3:27:29 the end Finally I’ve done it after at least 5 hours🎈🎊😭

My main question is where’s William now and what is he gonna do now because he’s obviously gonna want revenge.

Genuinely amazing work for someone that is neither a professional storyboarder, nor a professional writer. I definitely want to see more of this rewrite

This version of the FNAF movie you wrote is undeniably much scarier than the actual film. I commend you for respecting the source material from the original game while effectively maintaining the horror atmosphere throughout the story. Although I appreciated the movie, it fell short of my expectations in terms of fear, especially as a devoted FNAF fan. The scene where the animatronics and characters were hanging out like it was a "sleepover party" really undermined the tension of the narrative. It felt more like a "plot protection" moment that belonged in a "horror comedy" rather than a true "horror movie," which was quite disappointing. I'm thrilled to see that you chose to omit that scene, as it would have detracted from the overall impact of the story. I truly appreciate the way you approached William Afton's character in your rewrite. While he had some interesting moments in the original movie, your interpretation adds a much deeper layer to his persona by emphasizing his manipulative villainy, especially during his interactions with Mike and Abby. The nuance you brought to those scenes really enhances the overall tension and showcases his sinister nature, making him a much more compelling antagonist. If I had to choose between your version and the film's portrayal, I would definitely lean towards yours. I admire how you cleverly incorporated elements from the original source material from the game, which not only enriches the storyline but also stays true to the essence of the characters. Additionally, your depiction of the animatronics is chilling; they come across as far more menacing and terrifying compared to how they were portrayed in the movie. Instead of conveying a friendly and whimsical demeanor, they resonate with a darker, more disturbing presence that evokes genuine fear, much like the unsettling vibe of creepy children's shows. This transformation adds an exciting dimension to the overall narrative, and I find it incredibly effective.

I love all of this. Now I loved the film like and fnaf fan but you got game aspects in, we actually see the bbeg william/dave more than we did in the film and it was really good. I actually properly choked up at the scene with Mike and Garett in the final dream sequence 😢 really well done