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Jon Shaivitz
Добавлен 5 дек 2007
Films from writer/director Jon Shaivitz , and sometimes filmmaking/screenwriting advice.
Garmin Jeb - A spec commercial directed by Jon Shaivitz. Written by Dan Sorgen.
Garmin Jeb - A spec commercial directed by Jon Shaivitz. Written by Dan Sorgen.
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No Longer There - A short film by Jon Shaivitz
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No Longer There - A short film by Jon Shaivitz
He's a shmuck
It's in the eyes first. In the theater, it's another grab bag. I used a number system for a simple scene with a friend when I made a short film noir. He's sitting, opens his eyes, turns to his right, picks up a pair of chopsticks that he's going to attack someone with, turns back to face forward, then blows out a candle to end the scene. My guy Riki Chen, is very theatrical. I let him loose, then when he was done, I said, you're giving me 80 percent. Try 15. We do it again, I ask for 4. Within one minute we nailed it. No ego squashing. And Riki still added some sweet flourishes with his fingertips. The film is on youtube as Bum Rap Andre Hunt. Not for phones.
I cannot hear this dude at all 🗣️🔥
Disney ain't listening.
Beautifully done! This short conveys deep emotions in just a few minutes, with a warmth and sweetness matching its sorrow. Bravo!
I guess we must've watched different films. It was well shot, lit, directed (in general), but for me, there was NO emotion in the story. And it would've helped if we knew why the father died. Did it have something to do with his loss of work? His stubbornness? Having said that, very well done for a FIRST FILM!
I think it's good as well, and I think the ambiguous ending relating to cause of death is not very pleasing it was still well done