Jon Negroni
Jon Negroni
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One Piece 1130 Manga Recap: 'The Accursed Prince'
This week on the show, Jon Negroni (inbetweendrafts.com/author/jonnegroni/) and Travis Hymas (inbetweendrafts.com/author/hymastravis/) discuss the latest chapter of the One Piece manga, titled “The Accursed Prince." One Piece 1130 is currently available to read for free on Viz (www.viz.com/shonenjump/chapters/one-piece?locale=en) .
We want your feedback! If you have any questions, corrections, or your own theories and speculation, you can either email us (rookiepirateradio@gmail.com) or join our Discord (discord.gg/wG5g8RR4m2) , where we have a special channel devoted to all things One Piece spoilers.
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Our intro music is a remix version of “Overtaken” from the One Piece anime,...
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How to unlock your fantasy writing potential
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One of the hardest things about writing a fantasy novel (or any novel) is starting. Where do you even begin? And how do you know if you're even ready? Today on Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, I talk all about overcoming those creative blocks that can mess up our writing process. Especially if you're just trying to get started. I take a look at an advice prompt from an aspiring writer who feels ...
How to write love interests who aren't one-dimensional
Просмотров 10212 часов назад
If you're writing a fantasy romance - or maybe just a fantasy with some romance - then at some point you're probably going to wonder if your love interest is compelling enough. Readers typically bemoan one-dimensional love interests who don't really have their own character arcs. When they're just props in the story or merely an extension of the main character instead of their own character. So...
How to make your fantasy map feel true-to-life
Просмотров 59День назад
Most fantasy stories benefit from a great map. But is it really ok to draw upon real-world geography as inspiration? Well, yeah! There are certainly some do's and don'ts when it comes to mirroring real locations, but it usually comes down to when and how you start thinking about your setting as a living, breathing, world. Not just an abstract idea. So today on Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, I ...
How to find original ideas with Kate Brauning
Просмотров 55День назад
Special guest Kate Brauning (creator of the Breakthrough Writers' Bootcamp (www.breakthroughwriters.com/) ) joins me today to answer a particularly dicey question about original ideas. What if your concept for a new fantasy story has already been done before? Kate and I discuss the current landscape of publishing in the fantasy genre and how to break through the noise with your novel. We also g...
How to make your inciting incident make sense
Просмотров 6514 дней назад
Your inciting incident is going to be one of the most crucial moments in your entire story. No pressure, of course. So today on Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, I take a look at a prompt from a fantasy writer who's having trouble making logical and emotional sense out of their inciting incident. Plus they're struggling with the motivations of a key (albeit minor) character. As usual, I give some...
How to create fantastical worlds that aren't overwhelming
Просмотров 14614 дней назад
We all want our stories to be fantastical and original. But when does a novel have "too many things?" Balancing fantastical elements with simple, efficient storytelling is a serious challenge, but that's where this podcast comes in. Today on Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, I dig into a prompt from a writer who wants to know if their story is too "out there" with its fantastical world-building. ...
One Piece 1128-1129 Manga Recap: 'RPG' and 'Livedolls'
Просмотров 1114 дней назад
This week, Jon Negroni (inbetweendrafts.com/author/jonnegroni/) and Travis Hymas (inbetweendrafts.com/author/hymastravis/) discuss the two most recent chapters of the One Piece manga, titled “RPG” and “Livedolls.” One Piece 1128-1129 are currently available to read for free on Viz (www.viz.com/shonenjump/chapters/one-piece?locale=en) . We want your feedback! If you have any questions, correctio...
How to hook readers in the first scene with Craig Hanks
Просмотров 13614 дней назад
Special guest Craig Hanks (host of The Legendarium Podcast) joins me today as our first official guest here on Fantasy Writing for Barbarians to talk all about hooking readers with your first scene. We critique the first 240 words of a dark fantasy excerpt, which focuses on the concept of possession. Craig and I also tackle how to infuse your first scene with vivid detail and prose, properly im...
How to develop smart themes without even trying
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First of all, what even are themes? In this episode of Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, Jon Negroni takes a look at the intricacies of themes and how we should look at them as authors. He starts by reacting to a recent comment from one of our listeners and then discusses the role of themes as opposed to conflict and how to avoid preachy writing. Jon also takes a look at another prompt asking if ...
How to craft a believable fantasy setting with nuance
Просмотров 28721 день назад
In today's episode of Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, Jon Negroni discusses the intricacies of crafting compelling in-world societies, focusing on the role of historical context and the nuances of belief systems within fantasy settings. Jon also encourages writers to explore their ideas deeply and to draw inspiration from their real-world influences while also allowing for creative liberties in...
S4E12 - Blowing Smoke
Просмотров 3721 день назад
We're not known for blowing smoke on Mad Men Men, but I guess we can make an exception for this penultimate episode of the season! That's right, we're back to discuss Season 4, Episode 12, titled "Blowing Smoke." Which finds the old gang at Sterling Cooper Draper Pryce scrambling in the fog of losing Lucky Strike. As usual, we recap the episode, give our analysis, and reference the director/wri...
How to make your worldbuilding more efficient and meaningful
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Balancing effective worldbuilding with efficient plot progression can be a true challenge when writing fantasy. You want your readers to immerse themselves in the world you've created, but when is the right time to even come up with all the lore? Before you start drafting? During? After? Never? OK, not that last part, but you get the idea. In this episode of Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, Jon ...
The risks and rewards of having multiple POV characters
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In this episode of Fantasy Writing for Barbarians, Jon Negroni discusses the complexities of switching points of view (POVs) in fantasy writing. He explores a prompt from a fantasy author about writing a series with multiple POVs, emphasizing the risks and rewards of this approach. Jon also delves into some examples of experimental POV choices done right, the common pitfalls of mixing first and...
How to turn a good fantasy idea into an actual story
Просмотров 95028 дней назад
Have an interesting fantasy idea for your novel? A lot of us do! The problem comes when you try to write the dang thing into an actual story with well-rounded characters, exciting plots, and all the other nitty gritty details. A lot of folks will tell you to "just write." Or "just outline." But there's another way to avoid the revision churn, which is where this episode of Fantasy Writing for B...
How to avoid writing clichéd main characters
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How to avoid writing clichéd main characters
One Piece 1127 Manga Recap: 'Adventure in the Land of Mystery'
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One Piece 1127 Manga Recap: 'Adventure in the Land of Mystery'
One Piece 1126 Manga Recap - 'Settling the Score'
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One Piece 1126 Manga Recap - 'Settling the Score'
One Piece 1125 Manga Recap - 'What Death Means'
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One Piece 1125 Manga Recap - 'What Death Means'
S4E11 - Chinese Wall
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S4E11 - Chinese Wall
S4E10 - Hands and Knees
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S4E10 - Hands and Knees
One Piece 1123-1124 Manga Recap - 'The Void Fortnight' and 'Close Friend'
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One Piece 1123-1124 Manga Recap - 'The Void Fortnight' and 'Close Friend'
S4E9 - The Beautiful Girls
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S4E9 - The Beautiful Girls
S4E8 - The Summer Man
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S4E8 - The Summer Man
One Piece 1122 Manga Recap - 'Time is Right'
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One Piece 1122 Manga Recap - 'Time is Right'
S4E7 - The Suitcase
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S4E7 - The Suitcase
One Piece 1121 Manga Recap - 'The Upheaval of the Era'
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One Piece 1121 Manga Recap - 'The Upheaval of the Era'
One Piece 1120 Manga Recap - 'Atlas'
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One Piece 1120 Manga Recap - 'Atlas'
S4E6 - Waldorf Stories
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S4E6 - Waldorf Stories
Interview - Briana Lawrence, Author of 'The Essential Manga Guide'
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Interview - Briana Lawrence, Author of 'The Essential Manga Guide'

Комментарии

  • @sammyranyx6710
    @sammyranyx6710 4 дня назад

    Thanks for your point of view Jon, it was a pleasure to listen to. OP’s post resonated with me as well. The pull between yearning to put to paper the ideas living inside me, and some unnameable dread caused by trying to actually do the thing. I hope their passion guides them through this uncertain time 🫶

  • @sammyranyx6710
    @sammyranyx6710 10 дней назад

    “It can be really fun to just create your own world… But if your passion is writing, you have to come to grips with some of the limitations of what a novel has to do in order to function” Oof, touché

  • @drummerguy438
    @drummerguy438 12 дней назад

    is that a Sponsor at the beginning of the episode?! Thats amazing! congrats! Thank you so much for this episode. This was wonderful. I've decided to shelve my current work and pick up a previously shelved project. I am very excited to dive in and bang this story out. I'm hitting the ground running.

    • @JonNegroni
      @JonNegroni 11 дней назад

      Very happy to hear that you're working on your story again! If you have any other questions or discussion topics along the way, don't hesitate to send them our way!

  • @kellenjones9930
    @kellenjones9930 15 дней назад

    Not great advice tbh. Idk how anyone could picture themselves in a world like Garland’s Annihilation or Interstellar but the idea is to go deeper instead of wider. The OP’s fantasy world sounds dope and I have questions about the seasons, crops, hibernation of species, other celestial bodies, the makeup of gases in the atmosphere, this tree of life, etc. (so deeper) as opposed to wider (new races coming up from underground, inter dimensional/extra terrestrial invasion, magical items/weapons, colonization of this new outer space bc of the degradation of the old world, etc.) all of which would be overwhelming for the reader especially in a one off and not in a series, but even a series needs to parallel/call back to Act I.

  • @travissullivan6575
    @travissullivan6575 18 дней назад

    100% disagree about the deathnote conflict being 'additive' It's essentially what made the story good. While theme may be the backbone of the story with characters as the heart, conflict is the meat. Without good conflict, there is no story, only preaching.

  • @Datduuudeee
    @Datduuudeee 18 дней назад

    ❤❤❤

  • @ducking...
    @ducking... 19 дней назад

    I wanted to write For, forever but never could Bring myself to do it, i think im scared. Anyway i would want to do it For me and still be good. i could never be brave enough to even try to publish.

  • @AtaraxianWist
    @AtaraxianWist 19 дней назад

    How does this have so few views?

  • @stanleyleroy
    @stanleyleroy 20 дней назад

    I'm glad this came up in my recommended

  • @drummerguy438
    @drummerguy438 21 день назад

    I could listen to these for 2 hours easy. Keep up the great work, very informative and interesting to listen to! Ive got a question, maybe a discussion topic. How do you write and avoid pulling in elements from other media you've watched or read? Ive been paralyzed in my writing for a long while. I'll be working on a scene and I'll have a moment where I suddenly see something that reminds me of some other media. As soon as that happens the scene is dead and a voice in my head tells me I'm a plagiarizing fraud. I want to write the story that's in my head, but that inner critic is very loud lately and I'm finding it difficult to push through.

    • @stanleyleroy
      @stanleyleroy 20 дней назад

      It can be hard to get past that voice in your head, but part of getting past that is understanding that all work is derivative even if unintentionally. The most "original" works just pull from many places and experiences. The hunger games is reminiscent of battle royale and many dystopias with evil dictatorships, but has a unique story to tell. Part of the reason it feels more original is that the author also pulled from her own experiences with politics and the Iraq war. Also, while something might remind you of something else, that doesn't necessarily mean that it will be as obvious to someone else reading it. If it would make you feel better, have someone who isn't a writer read over what you've written and ask them if its *too* similar to anything they've seen before *after* they've read it. I've found that writers can get too caught up in tropes, patterns, arc, and things that have "been done before". The second I stopped worrying about being derivative and just focused on themes, characters, incorporating my experiences, and worldbuilding, the more "original" my work became.

    • @JonNegroni
      @JonNegroni 19 дней назад

      Great question! Tabling this for a future episode

  • @kentjensen4504
    @kentjensen4504 22 дня назад

    PAPACY is pronounced PAY-PASSEE.

    • @JonNegroni
      @JonNegroni 19 дней назад

      Ahhhh. Pronunciations are often my downfall.

  • @drummerguy438
    @drummerguy438 24 дня назад

    Fantastic episode! Loved it. I gotta know though, is the name of the podcast a reference to Dead Poets Society? A barbaric YAWP :D

  • @jaydenminnis2752
    @jaydenminnis2752 25 дней назад

    Good look at this episode. I would say throughout the series the reason don is able to keep his emotions in check at work is the affairs that he has throughout the series where he is able to tell who he is with at the time about deep aspects of his life. Allowing him to go into work unchanged. But that’s how I see it.

  • @jacobburns1721
    @jacobburns1721 26 дней назад

    For me as a pantser it always comes down to what I am trying to say. Which is in the end what a story is. If you don't have something to say, you don't have a story. It's not about conflict even, as conflict is often better off as a additive to a story rather than being the catalyst. (Example, Die Hard without the terrorists is not a story. But Death note without the battle of wits between light and L is still a great premise that has a story, a message and ample opportunities for conflict being baked in later.) There is no end all be all answer but I think the crux of writing a story comes down to what the writer is trying to say. The message behind the themes.

  • @Manstar
    @Manstar 27 дней назад

    I think for me, knowing the reason why I'm writing is 90% of what determines whether I get a project done. Most of the time my reason is just getting the nightmares out, which has worked well Not trying to write novels has also worked well too

  • @gigipopescu
    @gigipopescu 27 дней назад

    >likes the most annoying and boring character in the show dropped

  • @justinspade
    @justinspade Месяц назад

    The entirety and of this scene is literally one of the most perfect things to exist

  • @l2bf93hq6gnw8
    @l2bf93hq6gnw8 Год назад

    And yes, he reads magazines 😏

  • @glenmalesa8902
    @glenmalesa8902 Год назад

    Jerry is actually the best actor in this show

  • @fatoumatasisohor9827
    @fatoumatasisohor9827 Год назад

    😂😂😂

  • @CORONAKAIZOKU1
    @CORONAKAIZOKU1 Год назад

    Jerry was about to go super saiyan.

  • @mineiro2377
    @mineiro2377 2 года назад

    The "Bye Jonah" at the end is so good hahahah

  • @isabellalam08
    @isabellalam08 2 года назад

    He put on the crabby sweater🤣🤣🤣

  • @Jolovideos123
    @Jolovideos123 3 года назад

    sandra and jerry are meant for each other 😭

  • @junehatter8479
    @junehatter8479 3 года назад

    I love that he took the time to put on the crab sweater before trying to intimidate Jonah

    • @JonNegroni
      @JonNegroni 3 года назад

      He wanted to make sure Jonah knew he was crabby.

  • @JeepersCreepers25
    @JeepersCreepers25 3 года назад

    Funny how I just watched this episode

  • @avec.ariette
    @avec.ariette 3 года назад

    LOL

  • @MJFinn
    @MJFinn 3 года назад

    LMAO😂😂😂😂

  • @Bighhead
    @Bighhead 3 года назад

    How does the actor that plays Sandra do her lines without laughing 😂😂

    • @Rednaxela137
      @Rednaxela137 3 года назад

      Good question...all the bloopers from all the seasons seem to be everyone else but her

  • @jaetowns
    @jaetowns 3 года назад

    Fun fact: the guy Sandra was “flirting” with is Lauren Ash’s (Dina) boyfriend...cute😊

    • @thegreatestgaming6400
      @thegreatestgaming6400 3 года назад

      No wayy ....... She got her real life bf to act in this

    • @cinnamonroll96
      @cinnamonroll96 3 года назад

      These two are a good looking couple that’s for sure!

    • @okay8590
      @okay8590 3 года назад

      aw nice

  • @darrelldemarest3502
    @darrelldemarest3502 3 года назад

    He's wearing the crab sweater!!

    • @Stburrell93
      @Stburrell93 Год назад

      I'm re-watching their wedding episode and came here just to see if he was. Lol

  • @abedimblebee7360
    @abedimblebee7360 3 года назад

    I. Will. Hate. It.