Right, so a mistake in editing meant that the song ends abruptly a couple seconds earlier than it should, my apologies if it is jarring. Here’s a link to the full song (with the 2 seconds extra, as well as the prompt if anyone is interested) on Suno: suno.com/song/94c6f5cf-7474-4fd0-a2f1-2219061c912a
A very powerful work that clearly conveys the fighting mood and the essence of the song. Something reminded me of the quote "Iron melts into steel in a fire, a people turns into a nation in a struggle" only here the reverse situation where humanity renounces the nation and idols, as a relic of a terrible past.
@@dawngards I suppose here it would be akin to a nation melting into the Human Race. Still, in a way the spirit of the quote is applicable. Glad you liked the song. This one took quite few iterations.
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Warhammer 40K, Halo, Helldivers and etc, this song goes well with anything.
I really like the cadence of this song. I'm all for human Unification and all that jazz, but can we get a song for the Covenant of the Heavens? Sometimes it's fun to hear what the losing side has to say. Cheers!
@@jerma-ck6ch oh I really like this idea, there's a lot that can be done for both thr Covenant and the National Front. I'll definitely look into it once my workload lightens. Thanks for the idea.
"No gods, no kings. Only Mankind, and his allies." - This is literally one of the unshakable postulates that I have prescribed for this faction. Yes, there is no price that is too great to banish ignorance, superstitions that put barriers between unity.
I have read the entire Chronography. It took about 8 hours (with breaks) but I hardly noticed how the time flew by. This was simply because the story/chronography was well written and very interesting. You can tell in some places that it's not quite finished yet (e.g. according to M43), but for something that's still in the works, that's perfectly fine. You've somehow managed to incorporate the current real world present, "near" future, a game of Stellaris, the Warhammer 40k universe (up to some point) and the compelling tales of Lord Commander Bohyrin into one story/chronography. I was a bit surprised when it suddenly turned into Warhammer 40k towards the middle. But it worked well. Are there any other texts about the universe? I also have a few questions about the story itself (maybe they are explored in future works): Did the Sol Federation expand extragalactically during the Age of Gold? That would make sense since the Iron Warriors left the galaxy. Was there a second Age of Gold somewhere between M43 and M95? Was there extragalactic expansion after/during the Second War in Heaven? What scale the did The Second War in Heaven reach, was it extragalactic (numbers would be nice). What kind of technological developments have occurred in the hundreds of thousands of years, especially when considering the amount time that 100.000 years are? Another thing to consider in this is that the Aeternum probably focuses on science and technological development like its predecessors. At last, I would like to thank you. Thank you for the time I was able to spend reading the chronography, every single hour was worth it!
Wow. I am truly humbled that you took the time to read through the whole thing and enjoyed it. So first of all, thank you, and I am very glad you enjoyed it. And yeah, you identified my inspirations well, the earliest sections are near future and based in the modern world, the early exploration parts were inspired in part by the Expanse, and the Age of Conquest largely by Stellaris. I hope the transition to 40k was smooth as I tried to embed it in some form from early, the Precursor, Aeldari, Orks, etc. I also very heavily modified the 40k setting I think. Now wrt to your questions: 1) I am in fact working on a novel in universe set during the Battle for Eternity, which is why that single year has that much detail, Bohyr’s speech is cribbed straight form the book. Though, I will say, I did not realise when I started how much effort a novel is, starting to sympathise a lot with GRRM. 2) That is an interesting question, and one I had not considered. But it definitely makes sense for them to try, its not like they had any other pressing issues to deal with. I think it would be easier from a storytelling perspectivr to keep them in one galaxy, but exploring extragalactic clusters, ala Stellaris, is definitely something that would be suitable. 3) No, the opposite really. The M43 - M95 period sees the Imperium start off with the position of power it is in after the Cleansing (even accounting for the losses at the Third Battle of Terra) and is slowing but surely grinded down by the near infinite Great Devourer, which is indeed an extragalactic threat that has consumed multiple galaxies. Though, not all other galaxies as some theories in canon 40k suggest, that’s absurd. However, they also aren’t actually carrying around all the biomass from all the galaxies they have devoured, they lose a lot of it in transit between galaxies, relying on what they have gained to sustain them until the next feast. I like to imagine in this period Humanity becoming increasingly desperate, detonating stars en mass near the end, while the Silent King just sits there for 46,000 years repeating ‘hold the line, its almost time.’ 4) No risky expansion in this period I think, the situation was too desperate and the war effort took everything. I also didn’t want to overdo it by trying to one up the First War in Heaven, which was (I believe) confined to the Milky Way, so the Second War in Heaven is also primarily fought in this galaxy. However, I think that bringing back the extragalactic clusters here might be a good idea, perhaps that’s where Starnet was, or Old Federation bastions, long dead, but restored by Nova Terra prior to its final fall. 5) The technological developments is hard to say, because we don’t know the scale of Necron technology or if it is even possible to go beyond it. However, long aeons of cooperation would mean that Humanity was largely at parity with the Necrons atleast halfway through, if not shorter. Beyond that, or even into the Aeternites, I’m afraid I can’t even imagine. Once, more I would like to say that I am very glad that you enjoyed this work, I intend to continue working on it which includes iterating on the Chronography (I intend expanded details to the Wars of Unification, the Age of Conquest, culture and aesthetics at the zenith of power, and the Second War in Heaven, also quite likely properly fill out the Third Battle of Terra), hopefully get the novel done at some point next year, and also maybe see if viewers here are interested in narrative style content that goes through the Chronography in a similar style as the Templin Institute’s Greater Terran Union series.
I know it may be a lot to ask, but i would humbly request this in another version in male choir version? I do believe that this composition would benefit from male choir performance. Could we please get that?
Ha, funnily enough, I actually had to fight with Suno to not get male vocals given that this is a martial song. I do think its worth exploring though, yet Suno is not very collaborative when it comes to consistency and my workload is heavy atm, but I’ll give it a shot when I can. In the meantime, you might want to look at ‘March of Unification’, it’s on the same theme but with male vocals. ruclips.net/video/Xybo5UDDcKk/видео.html
@@wizfoz yeah, I made mistakes in editing. Only a few seconds were lost. By the time I realised it the song had already been up for a while. Between the awkwardness of reuploading and leaving it be, I chose the later.
Yeah, a mistake in the editing. Didn't catch it until a few hours after the video had already been uploaded and couldn't do anything then. Only missed a few seconds however, hope it didn't affect the enjoyment of the song too much.
I made a mistake in editing and didn’t realise it until hours after it uploaded, I think I underestimated how jarring it could be given that I have heard this song a hundred times and basically autocomplete in my head. In retrospect, I should’ve just taken it down and reuploaded properly. In any case, I am glad you liked it regardless. If you want the full song with my editing amateurism, here’s a link: suno.com/song/94c6f5cf-7474-4fd0-a2f1-2219061c912a
Right, so a mistake in editing meant that the song ends abruptly a couple seconds earlier than it should, my apologies if it is jarring. Here’s a link to the full song (with the 2 seconds extra, as well as the prompt if anyone is interested) on Suno: suno.com/song/94c6f5cf-7474-4fd0-a2f1-2219061c912a
A very powerful work that clearly conveys the fighting mood and the essence of the song.
Something reminded me of the quote "Iron melts into steel in a fire, a people turns into a nation in a struggle" only here the reverse situation where humanity renounces the nation and idols, as a relic of a terrible past.
@@dawngards I suppose here it would be akin to a nation melting into the Human Race. Still, in a way the spirit of the quote is applicable.
Glad you liked the song. This one took quite few iterations.
Warhammer 40K, Halo, Helldivers and etc, this song goes well with anything.
Let's go family it's time to unite
@@toddjay5635 onwards to unity comrade!
Love this ❤
I really like the cadence of this song. I'm all for human Unification and all that jazz, but can we get a song for the Covenant of the Heavens? Sometimes it's fun to hear what the losing side has to say. Cheers!
@@jerma-ck6ch oh I really like this idea, there's a lot that can be done for both thr Covenant and the National Front. I'll definitely look into it once my workload lightens. Thanks for the idea.
Delightfully. And it's funny - I lead a party in DnD-Dragonstar, where the action is conducted on behalf of a faction with a very similar ideology.
Unity at all costs? If so, my support to that faction, help it if you can.
"No gods, no kings. Only Mankind, and his allies." - This is literally one of the unshakable postulates that I have prescribed for this faction. Yes, there is no price that is too great to banish ignorance, superstitions that put barriers between unity.
@@Nekros90 now that’s a faction to side with. Hope your game goes well (and party supports the right faction).
@@Nekros90 "Allies", I sure do hope you mean useful idiots.
I have read the entire Chronography. It took about 8 hours (with breaks) but I hardly noticed how the time flew by. This was simply because the story/chronography was well written and very interesting. You can tell in some places that it's not quite finished yet (e.g. according to M43), but for something that's still in the works, that's perfectly fine. You've somehow managed to incorporate the current real world present, "near" future, a game of Stellaris, the Warhammer 40k universe (up to some point) and the compelling tales of Lord Commander Bohyrin into one story/chronography. I was a bit surprised when it suddenly turned into Warhammer 40k towards the middle. But it worked well. Are there any other texts about the universe? I also have a few questions about the story itself (maybe they are explored in future works): Did the Sol Federation expand extragalactically during the Age of Gold? That would make sense since the Iron Warriors left the galaxy. Was there a second Age of Gold somewhere between M43 and M95? Was there extragalactic expansion after/during the Second War in Heaven? What scale the did The Second War in Heaven reach, was it extragalactic (numbers would be nice). What kind of technological developments have occurred in the hundreds of thousands of years, especially when considering the amount time that 100.000 years are? Another thing to consider in this is that the Aeternum probably focuses on science and technological development like its predecessors. At last, I would like to thank you. Thank you for the time I was able to spend reading the chronography, every single hour was worth it!
Wow. I am truly humbled that you took the time to read through the whole thing and enjoyed it. So first of all, thank you, and I am very glad you enjoyed it. And yeah, you identified my inspirations well, the earliest sections are near future and based in the modern world, the early exploration parts were inspired in part by the Expanse, and the Age of Conquest largely by Stellaris. I hope the transition to 40k was smooth as I tried to embed it in some form from early, the Precursor, Aeldari, Orks, etc. I also very heavily modified the 40k setting I think.
Now wrt to your questions:
1) I am in fact working on a novel in universe set during the Battle for Eternity, which is why that single year has that much detail, Bohyr’s speech is cribbed straight form the book. Though, I will say, I did not realise when I started how much effort a novel is, starting to sympathise a lot with GRRM.
2) That is an interesting question, and one I had not considered. But it definitely makes sense for them to try, its not like they had any other pressing issues to deal with. I think it would be easier from a storytelling perspectivr to keep them in one galaxy, but exploring extragalactic clusters, ala Stellaris, is definitely something that would be suitable.
3) No, the opposite really. The M43 - M95 period sees the Imperium start off with the position of power it is in after the Cleansing (even accounting for the losses at the Third Battle of Terra) and is slowing but surely grinded down by the near infinite Great Devourer, which is indeed an extragalactic threat that has consumed multiple galaxies. Though, not all other galaxies as some theories in canon 40k suggest, that’s absurd. However, they also aren’t actually carrying around all the biomass from all the galaxies they have devoured, they lose a lot of it in transit between galaxies, relying on what they have gained to sustain them until the next feast.
I like to imagine in this period Humanity becoming increasingly desperate, detonating stars en mass near the end, while the Silent King just sits there for 46,000 years repeating ‘hold the line, its almost time.’
4) No risky expansion in this period I think, the situation was too desperate and the war effort took everything. I also didn’t want to overdo it by trying to one up the First War in Heaven, which was (I believe) confined to the Milky Way, so the Second War in Heaven is also primarily fought in this galaxy. However, I think that bringing back the extragalactic clusters here might be a good idea, perhaps that’s where Starnet was, or Old Federation bastions, long dead, but restored by Nova Terra prior to its final fall.
5) The technological developments is hard to say, because we don’t know the scale of Necron technology or if it is even possible to go beyond it. However, long aeons of cooperation would mean that Humanity was largely at parity with the Necrons atleast halfway through, if not shorter. Beyond that, or even into the Aeternites, I’m afraid I can’t even imagine.
Once, more I would like to say that I am very glad that you enjoyed this work, I intend to continue working on it which includes iterating on the Chronography (I intend expanded details to the Wars of Unification, the Age of Conquest, culture and aesthetics at the zenith of power, and the Second War in Heaven, also quite likely properly fill out the Third Battle of Terra), hopefully get the novel done at some point next year, and also maybe see if viewers here are interested in narrative style content that goes through the Chronography in a similar style as the Templin Institute’s Greater Terran Union series.
I know it may be a lot to ask, but i would humbly request this in another version in male choir version? I do believe that this composition would benefit from male choir performance. Could we please get that?
Ha, funnily enough, I actually had to fight with Suno to not get male vocals given that this is a martial song. I do think its worth exploring though, yet Suno is not very collaborative when it comes to consistency and my workload is heavy atm, but I’ll give it a shot when I can.
In the meantime, you might want to look at ‘March of Unification’, it’s on the same theme but with male vocals. ruclips.net/video/Xybo5UDDcKk/видео.html
I noticed that there was a bit missing at the very end there
@@wizfoz yeah, I made mistakes in editing. Only a few seconds were lost. By the time I realised it the song had already been up for a while. Between the awkwardness of reuploading and leaving it be, I chose the later.
It seems it cut off a few seconds before the lyric was done...
Yeah, a mistake in the editing. Didn't catch it until a few hours after the video had already been uploaded and couldn't do anything then. Only missed a few seconds however, hope it didn't affect the enjoyment of the song too much.
@@Vasilefs_Terranorum Don't worry, it didn't.
Is it only on RUclips
It is, I don't really know how I'd upload it anywhere else, if other places even accept AI songs.
Darn good song, but that abrupt cut at the end is a bit jarring.
I made a mistake in editing and didn’t realise it until hours after it uploaded, I think I underestimated how jarring it could be given that I have heard this song a hundred times and basically autocomplete in my head. In retrospect, I should’ve just taken it down and reuploaded properly.
In any case, I am glad you liked it regardless. If you want the full song with my editing amateurism, here’s a link: suno.com/song/94c6f5cf-7474-4fd0-a2f1-2219061c912a
Ha the first good Song.
Ha, I'm glad you think so, thanks.