"Noticed" - Short Story about High School Love (fun short)
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When I saw this before 5 years,i was single. Today also single.
Jaydeep Parmar Same here buddy
Same Here 😔
Same
Same :(
I think I should ask how many years old are you 🤔
Who else thinks his bedroom looks like a prison cell
Mee
Same here!!
OMG 🤣🤣🤣🤣
I THOUGHT I AM THE ONLY ONE 😂😂😂
I also think his bedroom looks like a jail cell
Hahaha, this is chez boi calling from juvenile detention center, his room doesn't look like a prison cell my dude
bro touches his face WAY too much lol
ikr, he over did it 😂😂
THE CHOSEN ONE i keep cringing bc when I touch my face I get a bunch of acne
True
Haha haha lol 😂😂😂
Way before covid too
this is a beautiful short film I learned that if the one you love is taken there is always someone else waiting for you
Agree
those desks are smaller than my thumb
No theyre like chair desks not all highschool have dem
😳 crap I'm imagining myself in one of them.(background info ADHD and left handed) mess everywhere books pens pencils on the floor and looking like a nuclear war zone.i am really messy if u didn't pick that up already😂
+Just Me Ahahahhahah looking like a nuclear war zone omg I just imagined the scene😂😂
I'm really messy too, I'd probably spill/drop everything out of my back pack AND hands XD within the first 5 seconds of class XD I'm clumsy as freak! So don't worry about being "messy" 'cause I am too! ^-^
☁Simply Ceylin☁ lol
imagine being left handed in those desks 😭😭 wish me luck in high school #leftiesforlife
For realsies though!
Oh shit we need to sit facing backwards 😅😅😅😅
omg for real though!! left hand gang!
Oh wow I just thought about that because I am left handed XD
As a lefty, I noticed that. The struggle is real. We adapt, we move on
Yo is this guy going to fall in love with any girl that smiles at him lol wtf.
XD
LOOOOL
😂😂😂
just like every boy at my school XD
Oh word I guess good for you
5:13 ma dude was so excited that he forgot his backpack
No one dresses like that on the first day of school! It's hecka hot! I'll be wearing my XXXXXXL Elvis t-shirt instead
Hahahaha that was funny
ikr
Ocean's BlueBell just wondering why ur lyao
Ocean's BlueBell ok nvm
Emily Eborn fat ass
this movie reminds me of how i fell in love with my bf. we used to be really good friends but separated during quarantine. it was because of our homeroom this year that i fell in love with him. he walked in and i knew it was my time to start being honest with the way he made me feel. we went on two dates and grew so much closer than we used to be. this boy makes me the happiest i’ve ever been and i’d do anything just to be around him.💖
:)
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That's so sweet, wish you both the best of happiness
These things never happens with people like me..... :(
Samee, but thats why we have ourselves
Amy Labastida and our hands at night :)
lol
thats sad tho
The BrownLad cause you're a little bitch, go talk to someone and stop wishing miracles will happen
Austin Marr Alright expert show him the way then.
Brilliant soundtrack, that underlines the emotional tension, the ups and downs of the protagonist.
Excellent subtle sound effects that lay open his hidden inner struggle.
thank you so much for that beautiful comment
1:31 thats some small ass desk
thats exactly what i thoughts XDD
phan
killjoy7123 ikr
killjoy7123 yess i understand ur feelings
killjoy7123 THATS EXACTLY WHAT I THOUGHT
he is so much cuter than the guy she went for
i like your profile picture
ARMYYYY jungkookie
Hey cool profile
I agree:)
Yeah bro I swear
4:18 the guy in the back is me asf😂😂👌🏽
Rumbie Shumba 😂😂😂😂😂
Saame💀
If you go back and watch it again..you can see the girl that has the flower in the end..watching him. But he is watching someone else. So heart breaking
Wow I never... "NOTICED" that! Ba dum tiss
nice lol
I thought I was the only one that noticed that ! I thought he was going to fall in love with her because she was looking at him in the beginning
is no one going to mention how small the desk are?!!
everyone's mentioning that
Our scl desks are even smaller
How Can you sleep with socks? (._.")
Ikr
Fuzzy socks are really comfortable to sleep on
omg ikr
If you believe, anything is possible
+EkBayon I BELIEVE I CAN FLYYYYYYY
3:47 The girl in the back it's me when someone says act natural
Really, btw which city is that
5:44 The classic flower drop
Ikr
ik
it's fake tho hahah
I hope the same thing doesn't happen again with the girl that picked up the flower.
Teo MoonLight
This film should be called : the purple flower
Blue flower
She dating her gym teacher?
Larry is Otp The exact thing that I was thinking! Omg!
Larry is Otp I’m so much stronger and better then that gym teacher he looks fat
@@dorkistantkd6233 Fat people are actually quite strong.
Larry is Otp lmao
LMAOAOAOAOAOAOA
That boy tho, like, waking up and everything and looking hella depressed on the first day, was the story of my life.
Lol I loved it! and I just gotta say that damn... those are some small ass desks
Also small lockers
Halley viera you right omg!
I know ! That was the first thing I thought....
they really are and thanks haha
I think that we should be patient because everyone will find someone one day
who else noticed the guy in the back at 4:15 - 4:19 AHAHHA
lmao
SAAAAAAAAME
I DID OML XDXDXDDDDDDDDDD
Me haha😂😂
Haha
That dramatic scene though when we was going through the hall way😂👏👏👏👏
I thought the boy have a mentellillness or somthing😂but Nice movie after all
okay I subed
Hey
I did too cause he slept with stuffed animals
Me too!
Naa hes probably an introvert
The part where he wakes up, I'm like
HOW!!!! IT TAKES ME AN HOUR TO EVEN REALIZE MY ALARM EVEN EXISTS AND HES LIKE...uuuup I'm awake🤣
And the part where he drops the flower I'm like
NOOOOOOOOOOO
FLOWER ABUUUUUUUSSE
This is actually really good. This exact same thing happened to me not too long ago, and well, it sucked. Aside from a bit "cheesy" acting, I think it was very realistic and captured a true moment in highschool that a lot of us experience. Props to you for this great video
Yeah ,that experience was very horrible
I was in a big mess
Yup, it always seems to happen like that.
@@mrpresident5257 me too stranger, me too
Ya is have happened to almost every one
tell me about it!
5:56 when u realize u did not do ur homework and da deadline is tomorrow hahah lmao😂
This was really good! You captured the true emotions of high school love without saying anything! I think most people have been in the same exact situation but you move on and realize perhaps that next move/person was/is better anyways!! Keep up all the great work!!! Absolutely genius!!!
Brother it's always a pleasure hearing from you :) Love the kind words man
Very well shot, this was refreshing, and pleasing to the heart.. I Like it..
@@EkBayon Always remember we must repent of our sins (sin is transgression The Law Of Yahuah The Father in Heaven. The Law are The Books: Genesis, Exodus, Leviticus, Numbers, & Deuteronomy). We must repent of our sins and Have Belief On Yahusha The Messiah. HE Died and Rose three days later so that we can be forgiven of our sins!
Come to HIM🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
4:15 plot twist he just wanted her to sit there so he could copy 💀
alice connors Haha 😂 Good one!
5:38 poor him, plastic flower lol
lol XD i know, i know
Bbb
Reyxo I thought the exact same thing at the end of this I was thinking great he’s just gonna keep having crushed than getting into denial till he finds the right one ahaha
He drops the flower...he drops the flower... HE DROPPED IT
I knew it had something to do with the girl that kept staring at him at 1:28
Me too!!
me too
smart guy
Yas.
Oh.. I hadn't noticed her. 😬
Thanks.. Now I understand 😅
oh man, that feeling of failure after you try to confess your love
She looked like a teacher
0:33 dayum this guy can draw!
Sehel lol
For some odd reason, I didn't even notice that until you pointed it out. 😂
Bro 69 likes
Exactly what I felt
1:33 wow, americans have TINY desks
In my school their huge. I guess some schools just wanna save money or something
+Jenee4Life they're *
Jenee4Life oh kk
I thought of the same thing !
+mabel mathew Depends on the school and grade
Oh my gosh the beginning 😂
Edit: his stuff animals every morning
This my sound weird but I HATED the way the guy moved and just acted he just had an overall super stupid Aoura to him sorry it's just my opinion
Annalise Scott same
This is sone Disney channel acting innit?
"Stupid Aoura to him"...lmfao
He was giving us the stupid vibes
Annalise Scott same
Nice movie. You should become a film director. I wanna know the ending. I like how adds a twist. This should be a full movie/film.
THE FLOWER WAS PLASTIC
This was actually really accurate for high school.
OH THIS BOY IS SO CUTE HE DESERVES ALL THE LOVE
thank you!!!
EkBayon your that boy in the video?
EkBayon the other guy was fat don’t know why that girl left you for him. Well maybe Becuse she likes fat people
@@dorkistantkd6233 being fat doesn't mean you are not a good person, you don't fall in love with someone based on their body, it's the personality of that person. Grow up pls
“That is one small ass desk”
Bruh, you can’t even fit 1 sheet of paper in their lockers
That face at 2:20 though
hahahaha XD!!
+EkBayon lol hahahah
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Twenty øne cry babys at the Disco I am obsessed with Melanie Martinez also. Look closely at my profile picture
+Twenty øne cry babys at the Disco |-/
bruh why is is so awkward
those are the smallest desks I've ever seen
Who automatically yawns back whenever he wakes up and yawn
Over 300,000 views!! Wow that is incredible, I would have never imagined! You guys are truly awesome! I was thinking of doing a Q and A video if enough people ask, so start asking questions and I'll make the video!
BTW
If you want something a bit different (action) - i suggest this film, one of my favorites
What age are you?
Where do you live?
Where are you from originally?
+Oisin McBrien (Oishi01) STALKER
+Oisin McBrien (Oishi01) weirdo don't ask that
+Tamyah Maxfield he is asking questions for the q and a don't be so rude
+Tamyah Maxfield Lol ;3
1:10...now thats just too much😂😂😂
that was actually pretty said but also pretty accurate
Why did you put this comment two times
+KawaiiLuffy Mugiwada didnt mean to lol.RUclips did it
2:12 "Hush hush hush, blush blush blush, you are now my big fat crush" lol
one of the best short films on here that ive seen, bravo!
Thank you kind sir!
+EkBayon she a lady 😭
Lol Onye'a Thomas i was just gonna let it go....😂
+Jessica Carden oh okay lol
lmao i didn't even notice that, my apologies XD!
This guy is a meme material 😂😂
bruh how am I gonna go and find love im going to a private school 😭
Salma Abbas haram
+GoodGoy salma abbas is joking,don't u understand
Salma Abbas Danm
Salma Abbas haha me too😂
Salma Abbas wdym private schools still have other guys and gals??
What i wear on my first day:
The same thing as everyone else bcuz we wear uniforms
Brithney B 😂
Exactly duh
I'm going to tell you my love story.
I was in my stepbrothers room and he was talking to friends on his baseball team(my stepdads the coach so I get to go to some games if I wanted too but I never go and even if I do I never pay attention and I'm always on my phone)through his ps4 and I started talking to his friends. But one kid caught my eye(well ear lol) there was like 6 people listening. I don't think he cared who was listening to us, but he was just so nice and so friendly that I just immediately liked him. I was able to get his number through my stepbrother and started talking to him everyday since we met. And I told him everything and he told me everything it was like this for a long time and I finally told him that I liked him and he told me he loved me since the day we met because he said my voice made me sound even prettier than I already looked(my stepbrother show him a pic of me).now we are together. It's been about a year and half since I got with him. I love him so much
Woooooow!!!! omg thats sooo awesome XD it's like a modern fairytale lol I'm so happy that you found that special someone! I wish you guys the best
+EkBayon thank you so much and on the 27th it's our anniversary and I'm gonna go to his house and just watch movies with him all night(I'm gonna tell my parents that I'm sleeping over a friends house)
EkBayon we're over
Marissa Garcia rip in peace lol
@@marissagarcia4679 oof
this video shows women can change/create anything...as well as could destroy anything...calls feeling and emotions...love Ur self and be u....😊😉
2:09 those cannot be her legs...
i thought that she was fat ( bacause of her legs) O.o
Manuela M is something wrong with being fat??
actually there is, unhygienic + Obese people have 8% less brain tissue than people of normal weight, Overweight people have 4% less brain tissue than people of normal weight.
BlackWolf so cz of that one cannot get a man or something??cz she's fat??stop looking down upon others..
i never said that, im just simply saying things wrong with being fat. My original comment was only due to me being shocked at her legs when having that body shape.
Bro wtf, she fell for a guy who is a thousand times uglier than our main dude🤣🤣
Pft...That other guy's got nothing on you anyway.
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clique |-/
Thank you (T_T)/
What. How does this comment remind anybody about the clique? XD
We all learnt a lesson here....
Never leave your flower anywhere someone might take it
lol😂😂😂😂 im jus jking
I enjoyed tht very much. Very nicely acted. Ur DP was good too
We cannot even call this a low-budget film, this is probably a no-budget film, but there's a powerful message behind it, it shows that your girl or guy may be the best thing it has ever happened to you, but if things don't work out, there's always someone else. I see a lot of people wanting to kill themselves or doing stupid things because of a broken heat, is it really worth it?
Just stay confidence, don’t give up.👍
My brother has a zit in between his eyebrows too!! 😂👏🏻👏🏻
That came out as a twist. A nice lil one at the end. :)
The quiet girl in the biker jacket seemed like a way better match for him. Sometimes you don't have to look to hard. Your lover is right around the corner.
That's why you don't fall for the pretty popular girls it's safer to stick with the pretty midpopular girls less guys will go after them
Or even girls that aren't as pretty cause they don't have guys lining up for them unlike prettier girls.
+Juveria Memon (GlitterArmour234) ikr
I think they get used to a lot of attention, I think it might change their character and behavior... Their life might be not easy too, a lot of pressure I think....
+Juveria Memon (GlitterArmour234) or just whoever you fall in love with no matter their looks, focus on personality :)
+justlorna well said :)
that video taught me something, that their are plenty other girls in the world and don't get sad because of one girl...so thanks!! :)
This basically happened to me a year ago, I hate highschool
8 years ago but I still remember when I first watched this! I can relate, I literally went through this phase every school year, good video to this day!
1:24 did anyone else notice the girl in the red dress was already sitting in the class room?
Nice story, well filmed and lovely background music, just a tiiiny bit predictable maybe, I knew from the start that the girl staring at him at the beginning would be an important part :)
omg yes!!!
I always sit in the class room before class start dude.....
That second girl was much cuter. All natural, no "war paint" on. Perfect.
Ha ha! I knew it! That girl in the background
silence is the best language when it is disappointed with the circumstances ..
6:39:, what he's thinking in his head: An I really gonna fall for another girl and and take the chances of getting my heart broken?.....
Props on adding the "Exodus In America" music track from Red Dead 1 in here. Everyone who noticed it before comment here.
AaHH! If you can produce a love-story short film with no words as touching as this, there's incredible talent I wish I had there!
Half of these comments are like why he sleeps with socks😂
can I recommend one about a freshmen and senior ?
My Name's Blurryface and I care what you think
My Name's Blurryface |-/
Hey guys,
I wrote a play about drama high school romance called "MATT'S LIFE". It's basically about a teenager named Matthew Corry and he moved into a new city with his older brother Johnny to start a new life and a new school. In his first day, he meets someone named Dustin Johansson, they started talking more and then they became best friends. Then he suddenly sees a girl named Kayla Jules, started to have a crush on her and have feelings for her. But he also has two problems he needs to fix. First, a bully named Zachary Lloyd. Second, his problems of depression and anxiety about his mother's death he's been suffering throughout his life. If you have got this far, I'm glad you read it all. Thanks.
lmao. this was cute
I'm crying right now because I feel like I'll never be loved. people say I'm beautiful just to be nice.
I love this one it was so relaxing and interesting
Anybody else find it funny how the teacher didn't come in that class once. The bell just rang and then they left? Lol.
the guy in the backround at 4.17 is me
One gone another come. This is a life of singles. 😂😂😂
"Noticed" - Short Story about High School Love (fun short)
Great video. I have an idea for a new video. A story of a boy who survives a zombie attack. Really apprentice if you to make that.
+NianTube 0 _-_
NianTube 0 that was a terrible idea
EkBayon I'm not crying
EkBayon well I am... a lot
my boss wakes up the other morning feeling like a king
Is that a mole in between his eyebrows or a cut someone please help
Its a cut lol I got it the last day of shooting XD
+EkBayon it was such an amazing video I felt like the guy was me
Me, first day of school (SIIIIGGGHHHHHHHHHH)
Me, first day of senior year
I WANNA GO BACK
Loved it!!! Wanna give some tips though for your next short. If its based around drama I would try to captivate the watcher more with the music. I loved how that beautiful song played through out. A song i recommend using is To build a home. If its based around suspense make sure to leave the watcher feeling tense after the end of a particular scene. A cool idea i recommend using is the way based around a group of friends in a home, and a murderer breaks in and starts killing them one by one, or use the idea of a post apocalyptic society were humanity has fallen, just to change it up a bit, but if you wanna keep the drama shorts I recommend using the idea of being bullied and finding a friend to help you through your struggles or a young teen on the run from his abusive family. Really loved the short film and I feel that as you make more they will get better, keep doing what your doing and I'll keep watching :)
Oh man I always wanted to do post-apocalyptic short just for fun! great ideas man! I'll see what I can do :)
It's a really cute movie! It also represents the reason why you shouldn't go outside and socialise with anyone😊
Senpai noticed.
XD
That's so me in the morning!! Relatable😂😂
Who else is watching 2019?