Yang's Breakdown from Fixing RWBY
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- Опубликовано: 21 окт 2024
- FINALLY
MY MAGNUM OPUS FOR FIXING RWBY
I've done a couple parts in Fixing RWBY, but this was my very first part, that I decided to torture Celtic with by making it an animatic
For those who only want this bit unedited, hope you enjoy!
also you should watch Fixing RWBY, this is from the final episode • Fixing RWBY | Volume 5...
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Blake has absolutely no context for this, she just sees her distraught friend and goes in because she needs her.
that is what Blake would do in the proper show
@@eren34558 No, she really wouldn't
@@ebensennett3095 - She would. Bumblb, remember?
@@Shamshiro "fixing rwby"; is for adam bootkissers and blacksun fanatics
@@eren34558 - Rar, I am angry at you~
The close up on Yang’s face always makes me teary-eyed. I can practically hear Yang crying her heart out in that moment.
You have done an amazing job!! The way Ruby and Weiss threw their weapons to go see Vernal truly shows they were in shock. The hunters too are vulnerable beings with feelings, which is also shown is a symbolic way to me when Yang is carrying Vernal's body instead of the Relic. You made such an amazing scene.😊
jaksldhbfksdjbaaaaaaa thank you : ' D I was just doing my best with the script I was given by CelticPhoenix but I'm glad that everyone's liking it
but why a bastard child of raven?
there's already yang and ruby?
why make vernal into something unnecessary
@@eren34558 vernal was already unnecessary she was a red herring if your going to criticise an element of a rewrite at least acknowledge that the original screwed up in some areas
@MattMati Oh I wasn’t talking to you I was talking to eren
@@patrickheneghan877 @Patrick Heneghan hey pat. Word of advice. Don't bother arguing with Eren. He's that same Eren denburg Niederhoffer who would harass others for liking fanworks that are better than RT's RWBY. Plus, he's an autistic man in his 30's. He has a facebook account if you're interested.
When I saw this my heart ached. I knew Vernal was fated to die, but I was really hoping that she would survive. Seeing Yang's thoughts in the beginning, if only she, Yang, and Ruby had met sooner then the 3 of them probably would have been inseparable. I think she probably would have had a small rivalry with Ruby over Yang's (and later Weiss') attention. It would have been a beautiful life. Being an older sibling I can relate to this pain. Well done displaying everything.
And suddenly this rewrite has made me care more for the characters than the main series ever has and this animation just cemented that, great job
you never cared for the show though.
@@eren34558 how do you know that oh yeah you don’t
@@eren34558 cope
@yeh uda i don’t have a problem with the ship itself I’m actually fine with it I dislike it’s execution
@yeh uda I mean I personally don’t really care what your opinions on others are I’m my own person
You did a really great job capturing Yang's heartache, the sorrow everyone feels, and Blake looks heartbroken as she comforts Yang with the rest of the team is a perfect illustration of how difficult their journey really is.
These 50 seconds brought more emotions out of me than the past 5 volumes of Rwby combined.
but you don't watch rwby,,....you're basically all about hating on crwby
@@eren34558 No, it's just that these last couple volumes haven't been very good
@@eren34558 someone's acting like a white knight
And agreed with what Paul said, this definitely hit hard, especially after knowing this version of vernal.
you don't even watch rwby dude
this was hands down the best section of Celtics volume 5, I could just feel Yang's emotions. I can imagine her doing like a kind of scream while crying, all rage and pain
Superb work. This was truly the peak emotional point of that episode and really, the entire Volume itself, and you nailed it. Part of me hopes you get to work on Ruby and Penny's reunion in the eventual Fixing Volume, because you and the team have got the chops to give us the emotional payoff we never got.
I was so damn sad,the rewrite made me actually give a damn about Vernel and absolutely _destroyed_ me. I cared cause the CHARACTERS cared. That's so important.
Yang breaking down as she realizes what could've been,two sisters to care for,to love. Weiss who knew her,got to meet her properly. The entire tribe,their princess,their joy,their _Lily_ not Vernel,Lily. Even Raven despite how cold she was about it cause I guess that's just who Raven is as a person.
Just... I love it,I love this rewrite cause it truly explores the potential RWBY has available,and I love this sequence you've made.
we're not supposed to care about vernal...
and raven abandonging yang and taiyang to have a bastard kid...
are you god damn insane?
wait, you are
@@eren34558 can you acknowledge that vernal is a separate person from her mother please it’s not hard you shouldn’t assume someone has a mental illness because of their opinion on a fixfic that’s more fucked up than anyone’s opinion on a bandit
@yeh uda for the vernal thing I do think she has enough differences to make her her own character and for the creep I personally don’t have an issue with making the creep a character but if you have an issue with that sort of thing that’s completely okay just not an issue for me
@@patrickheneghan877 hey pat. Word of advice. Don't bother arguing with Eren. He's that same Eren denburg Niederhoffer who would harass others for liking fanworks that are better than RT's RWBY. Plus, he's an autistic man in his 30's. He has a facebook account if you're interested.
@@eren34558 I dont know man, Raven is such a bitch it does seem in character
Also if we weren’t supposed to care about vernal RWBY wouldn’t have made a full scene about emotional Raven closing her eyes to let her rest, Raven would’ve kicked her dead body to drown alongside cinder’s
I guess you don’t watch the show you defend so much
(V8 SPOILERS IF ANYONE CARES)
Fixing RWBY Vernal, whose character was built up to be a red herring, had a death scene that actually made me shed a tear for the girl. She had her own character, her own relationships, her own personality, her own flaws. She turned from a generic mook in a group full of mooks into a girl who, despite knowing what her inevitable fate will be once she gets down to that Vault, that I didn't want to see die. She felt REAL, and it made her death all the more heartbreaking. Compare that to Penny who, even after becoming a 'real girl', I felt nothing towards when Jaune slit her throat. No anger, no grief, no shock. Just complete apathy. Celtic Phoenix and you fine folks who comprise the Sketchy Huntsmen have done in but a few years what RWBY had all but completely failed to do for nearly a decade: Make me care for the characters and this world. This scene rivals, nay surpasses, Pyrrha's death in terms of an emotional gut punch and the gorgeous animation and artstyle put it into visual poetry. Kudos to you all on your wonderful work! I can't wait to see what you all do for Volume 6!
But until then, Rest in Peace Vernal... No, not Vernal... Lily.
It's because they made Vernal real. They took their time to make her feel like a real character and made her death impactful, unlike Penny, who, in my opinion, was killed off for no reason than just to give Winter the maiden powers and Jaune more reason to be upset depressed, like if you were gonna give Winter the maiden powers the whole time, then just cut the middle man and give Winter the powers from the start
Sorry for the rant, but that's my opinion, at least
It was a pretty amazing limited animation. I really liked the image of Yang tearing up at 0:28
This was my favorite moment of the Volume 5 Fixing and possibly my favorite moment in the entire fixing series! I genuinely started crying right here. You're so good at drawing emotions! The pacing, the cinematography! It's all SO GOOD! You knocked it out of the park and you should be proud!
THANKS I TRIED SO HARD
it took a rage quit and 4 days to get it all together, I was very happy to be assigned a part with so much emotion cause I find that to be one of my big strengths
Heyyyyyy. Glad to see you're here too. Favorite moment as well.
Aside from the Vergil Adam moment.
@@dio2076 which adam never was
@@eren34558 don’t know how valued that claim is cause I don’t know who Vergil is
@@eren34558
You’re telling me Adam.
Who uses a Katana, wields it will the quick draw style, has an ability to slash energy at a distance, slicked back hair, edgy as f, is not a rip-off/copy cat of Vergil?
And the scene where he slices the tower in the fan project where “Bury the Light” plays in the background.......
You just not pay attention to stuff?
Let’s all gaslight ourselves into thinking this was canon vernal, also her storyline
This is great! You've done a great job capturing that scene here, you should be proud of yourself for this, the animation is great and and I love your artstyle, fits so well. Giving Yang a different shaped nose, and Blake a narrower face and pointer chin really made it for me, the fact that you can tell the characters apart from just the facial features is something that I myself struggle with, and you've nailed it here.
aaa thank you! Being able to differentiate bodies and faces means a lot to me, so I do my best to apply that everywhere
Well... now I know what to watch if I ever want to feel horribly depressed.
I bring thee pain and suffering
You captured the momennnt perfectly. I teared up it was so good and with so limited animation. Kudos to you
Rest easy, Vernal.
damn i didnt know the rewrite became a huge thing and now has animatics. this is great!
A picture is worth a thousand words.
the scene that cements the phrase you don't what you have until it is gone
You did it, you managed to make me choke up over VOLUME 5!!! Well done!
aaaaaaaa thank youuuu a lot of it is thanks to the writing in fixing that allows it to work, but I'm glad to be able to hammer it home visually
Just saw this in my recommendations, and I gotta say, well done my friend, well done. Certainly a well animated scene. Certainly says everything without a word. Well done.
Fixing RWBY Is Awesome!
#MakeRWBYCoolAgain
When I saw this in fixing rwby it kinda broke me tbh. God this is amazing.
Even without context this hurt :'(
The show needs more emotional gut-punches like this
Something that takes its time to set-up, simmer and let the characters and audience really get those floodgates out without too much interruption from the moment
The original RWBY did it only once in volume 3 and that was it, that was their peak. Every time they tried it afterwards it fell flat (even Ren's confrontation with the horse grim fell flat).
This was beyond perfect.
Thank you for your hard work
it was this scene that i think made his version of S5 better.
Literal chills. You animated this beautifully and really stuck with the original vision as well as giving your own amazing additions to it. Wonderful job all around!
Beautifully done.
This was beautiful! Nearly got me to tear up
Yeah this part was fucking Golden. 1000 years of Good Luck up ye.
This always makes me cry.
Amazing work 👏 you're going to be one of the greats within the animation industry 👏
At first, I didn’t get this scene, then I watched fixing RWBY, and it made me cry. 😢
Oh aight den...
This was beautiful
Holy shit this gave me goosebumps
With the exception of the Blake part, this is perfect. However, I understand the NEED for that part, so it’s still perfect.
Don’t mind me I just come here to cey on a daily basis
😭👌😭👌😭👌😭👌😭👌😭👌😭👌
One thing I do wonder is Vernal Yangs half sister or her full-blood sister
One thing I don't get-
Why are people so mad about Vernal's dad?
Dude made one skeevy comment and he gets punched for it and humiliated, yet somehow Vernal is at fault because of her [very obviously a full blood Raider] Dad?
Sins of the Father much?
It's not as if Raven was looking for awards, and her character design-
Of course she's gonna look like her mom because she's her daughter???
Am I missing something cause there is a weirdly large amount of people who dislike Vernal for things-
Not really related to Vernal at all.
If we're talking about FRWBY Vernal specifically, from what I've seen, it's mostly people being upset about any large change in the story, which I'd argue Vernal is one of the biggest changes in the project (with the other huge change being Ozpin and Roman) so people kinda have just been upset. People be disliking change
Who is Yang holding in her arms though is that Raven or is that vernal
that would be Vernal!
Vernal, in fixing rwby she was redesigned to look more like raven because her and yang are half sisters
I want the animation and the instrumental in the background tattooed on me. What instrumental track is this? I went to the channel but couldn’t figure it out
The instrumentals happening in the background right now is made by Mollie Rhymemaster! a link to her channel in the description, but I don't think she actually posted the music anywhere, only used in the original Fixing RWBY episode, which is unfortunate
....I'm in spain but the "s" is silent.
I'm sorry but who was yang crying for and who was the girl she was cradling if not Ruby
In this scene, it's Vernal from volume 5 of the Fixing RWBY series I linked in the description
@@anotel8080 and the Flashback was Ruby Yang and Vernal if they were friends as kids but why change vernal's design that was what confused me
@@jonathonsirlord8251 That's something better asked to the character designers on Fixing, but in general I'm pretty sure it was just to make a stronger character design compared to the original (as well as have a more visual connection to Raven)
alas, I cannot bring specific reasons
@@anotel8080 basically make vernal a bastard child
@@eren34558 better then nothing
Am I the only one who's confused here? Can someone please fill me in on what's going on?!
This right here is a scene I did for the Fixing RWBY series! I have the actual episode linked in the description, which might help to watch in it's original context
So uh, who died
In this scene, it would be Fixing RWBY's version of Vernal
@@anotel8080 an OC
@@eren34558 better then a non character
@@anotel8080 That's depressing; it doesn't help that I'm reading Relic of the Future.
What's going on here?
i'm sorry, but making vernal into a mini-raven and then having the dude who sexually harassed yang be vernal's father? who thought that was somehow a good idea?
did you actually watch the video.
Wait...Shay/Shiloh was her dad...? I musta missed something
@MattMati I read through some of the comments on the actual video (on Raymond's channel) and a reply he made to a comment asking about the identity of Vernal's father seems to indicate that this was in fact intended to be the case. I mean, I guess it would make sense, he notably made efforts to try and connect with her and attention was drawn to her attempting to decipher this behavior. Raymond's reply made it seem like they intentionally left it vague but those who paid attention could figure it out. Lily's dad was _most likely_ Shiloh and... I don't really have an issue with that, regardless of him being a bit morally questionable. I mean, they're sketchy ass bandits. They all are morally questionable. And booty call mishaps are bound to happen in a wandering bandit tribe. Honestly...I kinda appreciate the subtlety if this is in fact true. I don't like some of the changes in the rewrite but I think pretty much anyone could agree that Vernal was handled better than in canon bacause, she's actually a character in this version. Canon Vernal made zero impact on me tbh
@@yuukichan12 yes, celtic loves creepy men like roman and shay d mann
@MattMati shay d mann...not shiloh...either way, he still sexually harasses yang, which celtic likes...
this isn't rwby...i don't know how people completely rewrite these characters to be unrecognizable and then trash-talk the show and its creators.
cause the creators did turn it to trash.
I’ll be blunt I wouldn’t consider anything you say to be valid criticism after you straight up ignored the post credits scene existing I think 90% of what you say is out of context or a straight up lie if someone like me or Celtic “never cared for the show” then I’d not want to know whatever the hell you are
I'm sure your namecalling of people pointing out the missed potential of the show because it requires acknowledging the show writers as not being the best thing since sliced bread helps the show more than just prove how the fanatic side of the fandom of RWBY is part of why the show is not as popular as it could be...
Because since when has negative criticism pointing out the problems ever improved anything by.. letting the creators know what issues to polish out?
@@TheDeadlockBuzz all I see is that bullshit called fanfic making roman into a fucking protag and ruby into a sidekick.
and you seriously think bumbleby or adam being evil is trash?
@@patrickheneghan877 all celtic cares about is making roman his self-insert