Ava's Demon Dub - Chapter Two

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  • Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
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    Ava's Demon
    by Michelle Czajkowski
    Read it at avasdemon.com/
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    ★★CAST★★
    ★Ava★
    [uncredited VA for Ava Ire]
    ★Maggie★
    Finch / definch
    ★Odin Arrow★
    Grey Mind / crabnek
    ★Gil Marverde★
    Jonah Scott www.jonah-scott...
    ★Nevy Nervine★
    Vivi / fortifeye
    ★Wrathia Bellarmina★
    as herself
    / voiceofthedemonqueen
    ★★CREW★★
    ★Director★
    Finch / definch
    ★Queen of the Universe★
    Lilith
    ★Supervising sound editor, mixer★
    [uncredited VA for Ava Ire]
    ★Sound editor, re-recording mixer★
    Ian Govednik
    ★Foley and effects★
    Emmett Baber
    ★Music and score★
    Arzenic / arzenic-music
    Ian Govednik
    ★Animator★
    Lovato / eturneasage
    ★Titles/Additional animation★
    Ian Govednik
    ★Animatic★
    Emmett Baber
    ★Video post★
    Ian Govednik
    ★Lead Artist★
    Minty Mae / starshinebeast
    Special thanks to Michelle.

Комментарии • 121

  • @thewatcher509
    @thewatcher509 9 лет назад +41

    I gotta be honest, I wasn't expecting anyone to have the same name as Wrathia, plus with a voice to match.

  • @DuelTwilightChaser
    @DuelTwilightChaser 9 лет назад +64

    Aww well she's dead guess its over wow that was a short one huh

  • @panic1742
    @panic1742 9 лет назад +57

    Another webcomic I've got stuck in.

    • @jingk.1716
      @jingk.1716 9 лет назад +10

      The emo guy sounds like eridan

  • @laikadatrikke
    @laikadatrikke 10 лет назад +18

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE! ALL the voice actors are fantastic for the part, and the animation is great! PLease continue!

  • @Angelique-ot5nf
    @Angelique-ot5nf 8 лет назад +25

    you're voice is beautiful if you voiced Ava!

  • @rostalolman
    @rostalolman 10 лет назад +11

    Wow, this was a huge improvement since chapter 1! Makes me excited to see future chapters. :)

  • @Ahhahann11
    @Ahhahann11 8 лет назад +100

    Homestuck, Ava's Demon, Undertale. What have I done to myself.

    • @ElinaXT
      @ElinaXT 8 лет назад +9

      Add Steven Universe to that equation and you'll go wondering how you got in do many different type of fandom every day.

    • @inesahamed3917
      @inesahamed3917 8 лет назад +3

      +ElinaXT and hetalia

    • @spicynashos1065
      @spicynashos1065 8 лет назад +1

      I'm in all of those fandoms holy shiet

    • @felineleijon8065
      @felineleijon8065 8 лет назад +1

      I'm in all of these fandom rip

    • @sergentpugsley5137
      @sergentpugsley5137 7 лет назад

      Ice Cream me two

  • @Ghostel3591
    @Ghostel3591 10 лет назад +13

    Some IMHO time. You can consider it or ignore it.
    Props to the team which did special effects. Well done. Exactly right amount of special effects compared to previous chapter.
    Ava's and Wrathia's dub actors did well... Well may be "I'm sorry-i'm sorry-i'm sorry!" part should've been faster... To pass on to the people Ava's "I immediately regret my decison" moment - in dub it should've been done in this pattern:
    "Wrathia finishes her speech"
    *fast cut, to the next image (not medium speed fade out)*
    "Ava "regrets" her decison... A lot. Apologizing at the speed of 2 "I'm sorry!" per second"
    - Here you go! Comic effect of "Instant fail" that was in a comic.
    Odin's and Maggie's VO... Is it just me or they still not up to speed? C'mon actors who did Nevy and Gil talk faster than them and their characters are that of a calm and easy-going people who is allowed to take their time if they want to. Any other character talks faster... Why serious man who doesn't care about his stuttering (said so in character sheet courtesy of Michelle herself) speeks so slow... It's good voice tone for Odin but slowdown on some moments especially wr-wr-wr-wrench sequence and once again in the urgent situation... C'mon he was about to be wrenched to the face or crashland on the planet - he supposed to deliver his thoughts FAST despite his stuttering habit (cause he doesn't care about it)... But instead it seems that Odin didn't sleep for 3 days stright (thought to be fair he took his adrenaline pills compared to last part of the dub).
    Same goes for Maggie... Why she slowly asks Odin about situation? She is impulsive person - anything she does is done in the matter of seconds. As in "One, Two, FACE TO THE FLOOR!" not "O-o-one, Two-o-o and now you're gona hit the floor, dear, hit it hard". Voices are good, executon is good.... But voice tempo still doesn't fit the situation they are in.
    Overall Comic Dub quality increased compared to last part.
    Special effects - WELL DONE.
    Voice actors and Script writer - guys you do well but to prefect this you need to better read the situation and mood. Always remember what SITUATION and what CHARACTERS are facing it. Combine this well and you're gonna make miracle happen.
    Overall - Still the BEST dub of Ava's Demon you can find on the net. Still needs work to become the BESTEST. So A- this time. but i believe some day it will be SSS rank for ya)

  • @aspenotdental
    @aspenotdental 8 лет назад +5

    Gil and Nevy are my children. I love them. I love them so much. I adore these smol kids.

  • @mooniemun8450
    @mooniemun8450 10 лет назад +8

    Nevy's voice is so cute!
    Good job!

  • @blehbleh7400
    @blehbleh7400 10 лет назад +2

    Really beautifully done ! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work guys. This was really fantastic.

  • @matcat4701
    @matcat4701 6 лет назад +1

    I just finished the latest chapter of the series and it left a hole in my heart now I need to fill it with something until the next chapter

  • @ScaryDinosaurRawrr
    @ScaryDinosaurRawrr 9 лет назад +1

    i LOVE LOVE LOVE wrathia's voice, perfectttt

  • @c.d.harris2486
    @c.d.harris2486 10 лет назад +3

    Even better than the first, and that's saying something! Keep up the good work!

  • @chibirainbowsx3698
    @chibirainbowsx3698 10 лет назад +6

    WOOOOOOOOOW!!!!! WHOA! YES YES YES YES YES YES YEA YEA YESSSSSSSS! I've been waiting soo long fur this, and it looks fucking amazing. Great jobs and high five all around

  • @yukarilolz
    @yukarilolz 10 лет назад +4

    I never realized that she got impaled by the Titan statue...

  • @elishawilliams5460
    @elishawilliams5460 9 лет назад +3

    this is . . . words can not describe *eyes tear up* finally people who take pride in there work!

  • @Saiavinn
    @Saiavinn 10 лет назад +3

    Woah. You all put some serious effort into this! Props.

  • @isa5435
    @isa5435 8 лет назад +1

    NEVY'S VOICE IS SO CUTE OMG

  • @shootingstar8199
    @shootingstar8199 10 лет назад

    Ok ... 1) I love your art , I mean your painting are AMAZING !
    and 2) I love the story ^^ hope to see Chapter 3 soon :3

  • @user-yz3th2bc2z
    @user-yz3th2bc2z 9 лет назад +2

    REALISTIC STABBING NOISES JFC

  • @BGxSaga
    @BGxSaga 10 лет назад

    I love available demon. can't wait for more. the voice audio could be a little better over all. very good.

  • @rikuuwu9618
    @rikuuwu9618 9 лет назад

    I really love the voices ! The animation is done well also ! Great job !!

  • @handle69420cheese
    @handle69420cheese 6 лет назад

    YAY ANOTHER THING I'M ADDICTED TO NOW

  • @Frickll
    @Frickll 5 лет назад

    Maggie getting odin and shushing ava was the first and last time we saw them somewhat work together beyond flashbacks. Enjoy it folks!

  • @cheekmouse6407
    @cheekmouse6407 6 лет назад

    Holy crap this is AWESOME!

  • @sweetlikepapaya442
    @sweetlikepapaya442 5 лет назад

    The editing in this is amazing!

  • @Francuster1
    @Francuster1 9 лет назад

    Keep the amazing work going! This history is awesome :D

  • @teddykawaii1019
    @teddykawaii1019 8 лет назад

    Love the voices

  • @milanjam
    @milanjam 9 лет назад +3

    Wait a minute... did the Author change their dialogue a few years ago? I just got into the fanbase and the story was a lot... cleaner than this.

  • @kirishimasimp6632
    @kirishimasimp6632 4 года назад

    *in my best billy mayes voice* BUT WAIT, THERE’S MORE!

  • @hal3yamazing
    @hal3yamazing 10 лет назад

    i require more of this in my life

  • @Emi-yw7vk
    @Emi-yw7vk 4 года назад

    I came here because my favourite Undertale Character is muffet...I’m now addicted to Ava’s demon

  • @honeycone7448
    @honeycone7448 6 лет назад +1

    Hi I'm Kendra Milton and I think Ava's demon is really good and I was wondering if you could make more please

  • @OPASNAYA_KOLBASA
    @OPASNAYA_KOLBASA 10 лет назад +1

    Amazing! I love it :3

  • @olymposhiraeth1559
    @olymposhiraeth1559 8 лет назад

    I wish I had that kind of talent.

  • @Bettersucksaul
    @Bettersucksaul 9 лет назад +7

    I absolutely love the effects, its more life like than in the comics. The voices are lacking unfortunately. Its read either very monotonous or with a lot of exaggeration. And I don't like Maggie's accent, nor Ava nor wrathia. I imagined them as younger, since they are pretty much around the age of 15. Wrathia just sounds too deep in this one but at least she puts emotion and care into it.

    • @MyHungryWidow
      @MyHungryWidow 9 лет назад +2

      afezelia I actually love all the voices, but Odin is a little lack-luster. He sounds like he's listening to a college lecture which bores him, really. But all of the characters sounded just like I pictured, even though that one guy sounds bored. Good job.

    • @ThaMissET
      @ThaMissET 9 лет назад +2

      afezelia I love your voice acting! You did an amazing job :3

    • @Angelique-ot5nf
      @Angelique-ot5nf 8 лет назад

      +ThaMissET agreed

  • @ThatOneLadyOverHere
    @ThatOneLadyOverHere 3 года назад

    Well... i wasn't expecting that.

  • @bradenreily2737
    @bradenreily2737 6 лет назад

    HAHAHAHHAHA YOU THOUGHT AVA WAS THE MAIN CHARACTER? NOPE ITS GIL LOLOLOL

  • @rose_lemonade_1110
    @rose_lemonade_1110 8 лет назад +4

    *ahem* MMM WATCHA SAYYYYY

  • @clorbdorb1245
    @clorbdorb1245 8 лет назад

    Gil's voice.... *swoon*

  • @tayloroneal3333
    @tayloroneal3333 9 лет назад +1

    When are you going to make more of all this :-)?

  • @dymon1019
    @dymon1019 10 лет назад +1

    PLEASE CONTINUE if any help is needed id enjoy helping i went and read throw the site also

  • @simonsteagall2300
    @simonsteagall2300 8 лет назад

    someone needs to start a dub for colorless!

  • @karlajade1998
    @karlajade1998 8 лет назад

    omg more more !

  • @clairenime
    @clairenime 7 лет назад

    MOAAARREE!!!

  • @didinos665
    @didinos665 6 лет назад

    Omg omg omg omg omg no I’m shaking I am not okay

  • @bradonbyrd8061
    @bradonbyrd8061 3 года назад

    I love it

  • @bradonbyrd8061
    @bradonbyrd8061 3 года назад

    This is interesting video

  • @watnoisy1995
    @watnoisy1995 9 лет назад

    Talking about like the wrong girl. AVA you betta come through 😠

  • @nameless1767
    @nameless1767 5 лет назад

    Maggie the meanie

  • @AngryNerdBird
    @AngryNerdBird 9 лет назад

    Hahaha, excellent.

  • @ayam7085
    @ayam7085 10 лет назад +1

    When is chapter 3 coming up??

  • @tayloroneal3333
    @tayloroneal3333 9 лет назад

    When are you doing chapter six because I want to know what happens next:-)?

  • @bleghchamel
    @bleghchamel 9 лет назад

    lol "Uh what the fuck"

  • @ghostingbonbon1186
    @ghostingbonbon1186 6 лет назад

    THIS IS MY SHIT

  • @amylinkangle3647
    @amylinkangle3647 3 года назад +2

    блин на английском мне их голоса больше нравятся

  • @elliemitts7788
    @elliemitts7788 9 лет назад

    i just realized.. odin has a brother.......... omg

  • @lapis5001
    @lapis5001 8 лет назад

    when Is chapter 18 coming out?!?!

  • @invictakaizeros7821
    @invictakaizeros7821 8 лет назад

    Odin didn't stutter what was his real aim for Maggie

    • @hollytaylor7520
      @hollytaylor7520 8 лет назад

      if you are up to date with the comic it kinda hints towards why

  • @mimikai13
    @mimikai13 9 лет назад

    what's with the added in F-bombs? those were not in the original comic.

  • @tayloroneal3333
    @tayloroneal3333 9 лет назад

    When are you going to make chapter three because I like this and I want to know where I can find this? Ava's Demand is it a move or something because I like this?

    • @strawbeebie3451
      @strawbeebie3451 9 лет назад

      It's a web comic !! And I highly suggest reading it Because the voices are way off :3

    • @topmamma1
      @topmamma1 9 лет назад

      *~wea yea ra hymme spiritum~*
      it wont let me go on it says theres an error

    • @topmamma1
      @topmamma1 9 лет назад

      alright i tried but sadly you dont have the fourth chapter yet and the clifhanger is killing me!:/

    • @topmamma1
      @topmamma1 9 лет назад

      thank you
      also i read what happened to the author thats very unfortunate really:(

  • @EpickEmber
    @EpickEmber 9 лет назад +2

    Song at 2:28 please?

  • @justas423
    @justas423 7 лет назад

    What did I missed I know nothing about anything is there a chapter 0

  • @easypeasypiano6118
    @easypeasypiano6118 8 лет назад

    Where did you get the music? Did you compose it yourself, or did the makers of Ava's Demon do it?

    • @AvasDemonDub
      @AvasDemonDub  8 лет назад

      Hello! We have two composers on hand that create our music for us. Be sure to look at the credits to see who helps out with the dub! Thank you for your support!
      ~aerie

  • @chillylilith265
    @chillylilith265 8 лет назад +3

    if this was a book I will be the first one to buy it

    • @pyroinc4859
      @pyroinc4859 7 лет назад

      Chilly Lilith I think the created gave some comics by surporting thier patroin

  • @taloreliz981
    @taloreliz981 9 лет назад

    god...

  • @yesmar1640
    @yesmar1640 9 лет назад

    We'er did Odin get the duct tape?

  • @Vanvanroo
    @Vanvanroo 8 лет назад +2

    I kinda ship Nevy and Gil

  • @ninajakastam2364
    @ninajakastam2364 8 лет назад

    lol, probably michael's dad is from poland :P

  • @teddykawaii1019
    @teddykawaii1019 8 лет назад

    Omg what ava died??!!!!??!?!?!?!?!? No way what?!??!!?!??

  • @jamescameron5090
    @jamescameron5090 6 лет назад

    Ow.

  • @penelo2000
    @penelo2000 10 лет назад +1

    Is Michelle Czajowski Polish? His last name sounds like he might be but not his first name.

    • @BlazeinTheMorningDew
      @BlazeinTheMorningDew 10 лет назад +12

      Michelle is female. Not sure about the Polish bit though.

    • @StLouchet
      @StLouchet 10 лет назад +2

      In a stream, Michelle says she has Polish ancestry

    • @penelo2000
      @penelo2000 10 лет назад

      Oh okay Junko Commissaire

  • @gadielgonzalez2755
    @gadielgonzalez2755 7 лет назад

    chapter 5&6. please?

  • @terkz3566
    @terkz3566 7 лет назад

    i was wonder why the drawer was in her chest...it's because that's where she was impaled...now she has a completely flat chest though...poor ava

  • @wolfiegirl16love44
    @wolfiegirl16love44 7 лет назад

    QUISTION: how is wrathia herself is she a real person?

  • @lynisemorelos7949
    @lynisemorelos7949 8 лет назад

    OMG AVA DIED?!?!

  • @avasdemon9592
    @avasdemon9592 6 лет назад

    Крута!!!

  • @hooply-guacamole8507
    @hooply-guacamole8507 8 лет назад

    It's kinda weird. The microphone sounds different per character. Th

    • @AvasDemonDub
      @AvasDemonDub  8 лет назад +1

      +Hollly- Guacamole Hello! The microphones are different per character, as this is a webcomic dub and a few voice actors have different high quality mics.
      It's quite divided between Blue Yeti and Samson C01U!
      ~aerie

    • @hooply-guacamole8507
      @hooply-guacamole8507 8 лет назад

      +AvasDemon oh. Okay. Good work btw. I hope you keep making these. Your efforts are not in vain.

    • @hooply-guacamole8507
      @hooply-guacamole8507 8 лет назад

      +AvasDemon you have my support all the way

  • @eridegago2050
    @eridegago2050 9 лет назад +1

    the voice acting for ava really needs improvement (its bothering me so much)

  • @varlamovaelena7788
    @varlamovaelena7788 7 лет назад

    я ничего не понимаю памагити!

  • @Polina-ye3wh
    @Polina-ye3wh 5 лет назад

    How I met your mom