Ok ima write an entire essay abt each part that needs work (Im aware this might be seen as "mean" or wtv but Im genuinely trying to help.) (sry for grammar errors I aint rereading through all of this) PART 1 -0:04 dont spam velo like that, ur not flea and its not 2020 anymore 💀 -first clip doesnt have p/c (p/c in pretty much zoom in and zoom out so that stuff dont feel static) and shakes + velo need work -second clip doesnt even have shake 😭 -Third clip once again shakes and velo need work. Also needs p/c -fourth clip once again shakes and velo need work. Also needs p/c -fifth clip: if u r gonna have flicker dont do it like that with the audio. This clip also has the same problems as before (velo, no p/c, and shakes) -sixth clip: ok pls stop with the velo spam 😭😭. Also get better 1 framers, the inverted color feels off with the rest of the edit. Also learn how to properly use 1 framers, u cant just randomly put them in wherever. (I dont if I have to say this but the whole clip has the same problems as all the other ones: Shake, p/c, velo, ect.) -Clip spam thing: it feels outa place and if u really did wanna still do it it could've been executed way better. In summary just work on basics and maybe take a bit of inspo from edits with good basics to see what they r doing. (If u want I can send u a few edits that have good basics just for reference) Discord: Kowow (DM if u have any questions) I might make another comment for part 2
Ctrl r find part you want slow , surround in speed points and drag out. Find other points you want slow and do the same, then speed up in between the slow parts and line up with song
Can you make a tutorial soon please bc I need to learn davinci resolve, (and get better) but it's hard. This was heating up my room tho (aka fire). TUTORIAL PLS IM BEGGING!!!
Time for part 2... 🥲 (also Im just gonna say this now so i dont have to keep repeating myself but shakes, p/c, and velo need work across the entire part) PART 2 -3D part: Rendering is ass, also work on camera movement (idk how to rly help u with this cuz i havent learned blender yet) -Typography part #1: Whole thing has verry linear and janky camera movement, also have random typography doesnt rly fit the rest of the edit -First clip: Oh god were do I start... First of all that cc needs hella work. Second, once again as a said in the last rant dont do the random flicker thing. Third, the p/c with the tilt is kinda weird and is also way too linear. Fourth, p/c and shake need work + they r way too linear once again. -Second clip: pretty much exact same problems as the first one. Also stop using the same presets on every kill its giving me a headache -Third clip: Same as last clip -Typography part #2: Camera movement is once again janky and linear. Whole thing in general feels out of place and outdated -Fourth clip: First of all wtf was that sfx 😭. Second, that lighting overlay needs to stay in 2021. Third, stop using maxi type presets in 2024. The whole clip is just a mess -Typography part #3: Same issues as the other typography part -Fifth clip: First of all, pls dont do the 2021 sniper transition thing 😭. Second, the p/c on it is very linear. Sixth clip: Same issues, just work on basics. Also why tf is the cc so red now??? Seventh clip: Can I just be done already 😭 Eighth clip: U get the point work on basics Overall pls learn basics and stop using dated af effects and overlays, its not 2020 anymore...
So basically don’t do anything, and make the the zooms better, thanks! I honestly appreciate the criticism tbh, I stopped seriously editing for like a year or so, and I am getting back into it because of the amount of people that want to watch it. I’m gonna try to use some of this to improve my edits so if you could hit me up on discord to help me out that would be great 👍
@@kyogre342 I think he is right about that it would help you to work on basics and graphs. but I also like that you are using old school effects. It’s nostalgic in a way. Takes me back to the time when I started editing. I wouldn’t completely give up this style if I was you. But maybe you can bring your own unique aspects into it and develop something that is similar but new. Also from personal experience all this obsessing over basics might limit your creativity or motivation. So pls keep your style and try to improve it instead of doing some clean, boring/ effectless modern style. It’s not impossible to have a creative style and good basics
@@skapeedits I agree but disagree with this. Basics don’t limit creativity. It’s like saying telling a child to color in the lines limits their creativity. Just because someone has good basics doesn’t mean they have to do only “clean edits”. It just makes their “creative edits” even better
@@kowowvfx Yeah kinda true, what I’ve been trying to say (but didn’t really make clear) is practicing only basics in an edit isn’t that helpful. I lost motivation and it didn’t really help on my vfx edits cause it’s a different form of basics. You should rather make normal edits and just focus more on basics imo
That is so good, very clean!🔥
yo ur edits are crazy keep up the good work and can u plssss make a tutorial on skin glow on davinci resolve for free
runway ml
best outro fr
my names in there but not me💀
no hate
actually?
my bad@@HatchFN.
@@kyogre342 all good been loving the videos❤
@@kyogre342 i also just sent like 9 clips so if you want you could use some of them
DANGGG🔥🔥 You deserve more, this is fired edit broo!🐐
Thanks for putting my clip in bro. Edit was fire deserves all the love it gets man ❤
thanks for putting my clip in the montage
This dude honestly the next Flea
this is so good best editor oat
Teach me your ways!
This montage hit harder than September eleventh live event
WHAT
W Kyogre this is so clean 🔥🔥🔥 btw do you do free or paid montages?
No
@@kyogre342 Wdym no 😭
@@ZELLQR commissions aren’t open rn submit your clips in the discord for a chance to be in a video
@@kyogre342 ohh ok
Typography turned out pretty good, add some whoosh sfx on ur 3d scenes to add more immersion
love the kendrick song
The new Faze Flea
Hopefully maybe I wish flea came back
sigma
W edits but what editing software do u use
I saw him use DaVinci Resolve
Wait I’m in it at 0:20😂
Best edit bro💯💯
Yooo this fire af
Ok ima write an entire essay abt each part that needs work (Im aware this might be seen as "mean" or wtv but Im genuinely trying to help.)
(sry for grammar errors I aint rereading through all of this)
PART 1
-0:04 dont spam velo like that, ur not flea and its not 2020 anymore 💀
-first clip doesnt have p/c (p/c in pretty much zoom in and zoom out so that stuff dont feel static) and shakes + velo need work
-second clip doesnt even have shake 😭
-Third clip once again shakes and velo need work. Also needs p/c
-fourth clip once again shakes and velo need work. Also needs p/c
-fifth clip: if u r gonna have flicker dont do it like that with the audio. This clip also has the same problems as before (velo, no p/c, and shakes)
-sixth clip: ok pls stop with the velo spam 😭😭. Also get better 1 framers, the inverted color feels off with the rest of the edit. Also learn how to properly use 1 framers, u cant just randomly put them in wherever. (I dont if I have to say this but the whole clip has the same problems as all the other ones: Shake, p/c, velo, ect.)
-Clip spam thing: it feels outa place and if u really did wanna still do it it could've been executed way better.
In summary just work on basics and maybe take a bit of inspo from edits with good basics to see what they r doing. (If u want I can send u a few edits that have good basics just for reference)
Discord: Kowow (DM if u have any questions)
I might make another comment for part 2
Bro is releasing disstracks on him💀
nah but good ops fr
W in the discord
Holy this is crazy
0:10 0:31 0:39 1:09 (im the default)
im super happy to be in there !
(my name was not on there 💀but im still so happy)
@@rsngzyfo yeah I got too lazy to type all the names 💀
@@kyogre342 LMFAOOO its fine, dw. i just saw the "a". it was my fault
What an edit
Dam.
Thank you for putting my clip in ❤
Bro u we’re really cookin
My clip was in the video
i just got an epilepsy attack☠
fire
Fire
crazy
could you do a tut on the velocity at the start
Ctrl r find part you want slow , surround in speed points and drag out. Find other points you want slow and do the same, then speed up in between the slow parts and line up with song
WOW nice
Nah bro 8a actually crazy wtf
Can u teach me how to edit like that
Can you make a tutorial soon please bc I need to learn davinci resolve, (and get better) but it's hard. This was heating up my room tho (aka fire). TUTORIAL PLS IM BEGGING!!!
On what parts?
my clip is the last yet again 🗣🗣🗣
Minecraft
Time for part 2... 🥲
(also Im just gonna say this now so i dont have to keep repeating myself but shakes, p/c, and velo need work across the entire part)
PART 2
-3D part: Rendering is ass, also work on camera movement (idk how to rly help u with this cuz i havent learned blender yet)
-Typography part #1: Whole thing has verry linear and janky camera movement, also have random typography doesnt rly fit the rest of the edit
-First clip: Oh god were do I start... First of all that cc needs hella work. Second, once again as a said in the last rant dont do the random flicker thing. Third, the p/c with the tilt is kinda weird and is also way too linear. Fourth, p/c and shake need work + they r way too linear once again.
-Second clip: pretty much exact same problems as the first one. Also stop using the same presets on every kill its giving me a headache
-Third clip: Same as last clip
-Typography part #2: Camera movement is once again janky and linear. Whole thing in general feels out of place and outdated
-Fourth clip: First of all wtf was that sfx 😭. Second, that lighting overlay needs to stay in 2021. Third, stop using maxi type presets in 2024. The whole clip is just a mess
-Typography part #3: Same issues as the other typography part
-Fifth clip: First of all, pls dont do the 2021 sniper transition thing 😭. Second, the p/c on it is very linear.
Sixth clip: Same issues, just work on basics. Also why tf is the cc so red now???
Seventh clip: Can I just be done already 😭
Eighth clip: U get the point work on basics
Overall pls learn basics and stop using dated af effects and overlays, its not 2020 anymore...
So basically don’t do anything, and make the the zooms better, thanks!
I honestly appreciate the criticism tbh, I stopped seriously editing for like a year or so, and I am getting back into it because of the amount of people that want to watch it. I’m gonna try to use some of this to improve my edits so if you could hit me up on discord to help me out that would be great 👍
@@kyogre342 Ty for not being cringe and responding with some dumb shit like "I aint reading allat" I have respect for u bro. Gl in improving btw :)
@@kyogre342 I think he is right about that it would help you to work on basics and graphs. but I also like that you are using old school effects. It’s nostalgic in a way. Takes me back to the time when I started editing. I wouldn’t completely give up this style if I was you. But maybe you can bring your own unique aspects into it and develop something that is similar but new. Also from personal experience all this obsessing over basics might limit your creativity or motivation. So pls keep your style and try to improve it instead of doing some clean, boring/ effectless modern style. It’s not impossible to have a creative style and good basics
@@skapeedits I agree but disagree with this. Basics don’t limit creativity. It’s like saying telling a child to color in the lines limits their creativity. Just because someone has good basics doesn’t mean they have to do only “clean edits”. It just makes their “creative edits” even better
@@kowowvfx Yeah kinda true, what I’ve been trying to say (but didn’t really make clear) is practicing only basics in an edit isn’t that helpful. I lost motivation and it didn’t really help on my vfx edits cause it’s a different form of basics. You should rather make normal edits and just focus more on basics imo
W
chicken leg
Bro never came back with the milk.😞
?
I MADE IT IN WWWW VIDEO🔥🔥
sheesh
we getting a seizure with this one
can you edit a montage for me
When I wake up will I be at 600 subs 😂
u still got stuff to learn
U can godbridge?????
pls check other vids coments
pls learn basics 🙏🙏
(pan crop, velo, shakes, ect)
U got any presets?
@@kyogre342 dont use presets (for the most part). Each shake and p/c should look different to give variation or else everything will feel repetitive.
sick but why waste your editing skills on fortnite bro
What should I edit?
Bro no way this took 10 hours this is some garbage your 10 minute one was better
yeah ik 😢
yo u got discord?
yep
crazy