War For North Bule is just the start of this new project I hope we can go as far as 7 chapter or maybe 8 for giving a rich story Nothing that carries the name the one piece should be lazy, even my mere fan fiction
Not trying to be rude but Aramaki didn't join the marine until after the war of Marineford after the military draft ordered by Sakazuki but this is an amazing chapter I can't wait for chapter 2
I will make sense of this part by the "end" of my story but if I break few of canon rules to make a better story, I might do it thanks for being a careless reader mate. chapter comes in 3 days
I think every written line of the story is every good but I need to appreciate you and your youtube channel specifically content you are making every one this days are making type of videos but only one only you some variety of videos not just videos your theorys like figarland and doflamingo theory this are amazing now need more this type of youtubers in one piece community
I know ... but for the sake of adding more canon characters ... I ignored the canon I might do a tiny bit change to canon later on. this is not gonna be accurate so ignore few % of Oda's canon for sake of (I hope) better storytelling worth it p.s you are a goat for noticing it
means very much I'm trying to be a writer for 12 years ... since I'm not English speaking I can't deliver a rich narration. but dialogue ... I can do :)
Brother you can do this things in future 1 Confirmed ben beckman has conquer haki or not 2 fight scene with shanks and beck 3 can you give some spot light on god valley because shanks was found in god valley and garling was king of that time
ROcks I have a theory that the signal is coming from dragon and dragon knew that when vegapunk dies the message will be shown across the world. It makes sense because that’s why shaka vegapunk told dragon that he will die soon. So that he could alert dragon that the message would be shown to everyone soon when he dies
I had a thought Every yonko has a traitor/spy. Big mom was bege and 2 of her daughters. N jinbei. Kaido had drake n apoo who wanted to team up n kill luffy n kaido when the fighting is over. Wb had blackbeard. Luffy had kanjuro who wasnt a member but he was un the group. Buggy. Well mihawk n crocodile said they would sell him out to save thekselves. So who is the red hair traitor/spy
thanks for you support mate about Shanks spy ... I think 2ndry allies of Red Hairs should be a nominee it's really sad if Shanks has a spy but at least I'm hope no person among crew will do this. the more we get to know Shanks kingdom we can find our spy
I didn't mention it directly ... but as you can see peter is damaged in this chapter he fought his way to gain that knowledge few weeks ago p.s thanks, a lot of these are new to me, will do a better voice acting in next chapters
Advice , make different emotion faces of these characters at different angle , keep switching in between , it takes 2 units of hard work and gives u 7 units of results
16:30 My strict expectation is making it so that the plots connect in exponential ways , I want the story to be so dense that people make theories just like real one ouece🎉
strongest or the weakest sea , it doesn't have great figure like hero of marine , the pirate king 😂, I think it is the weakest but the crime is high that why it is called strongest
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War For North Bule is just the start of this new project
I hope we can go as far as 7 chapter or maybe 8 for giving a rich story
Nothing that carries the name the one piece should be lazy, even my mere fan fiction
Wow, each line is profound and good ! It’s been a pleasure to listen to that video, keep it up man !
means a lot
I Gotta Tell You It Was Perfect Perfect everything Down to the Last Minute Detail
thanks
The way you have written the dialogue is amazing . Keep the good work
Thank you so much
Not trying to be rude but Aramaki didn't join the marine until after the war of Marineford after the military draft ordered by Sakazuki but this is an amazing chapter I can't wait for chapter 2
I will make sense of this part by the "end" of my story
but if I break few of canon rules to make a better story, I might do it
thanks for being a careless reader mate. chapter comes in 3 days
The vid is good but next time u could add a back grownd musice it wold help with the narrator ❤
I failed to found the right one for this one ... but sure, will try to find it
thanks for being here
love the dialogues. i can see how hard you work on it. such a high effort video. ngl this work deserve tons of views. keep going bro ❤️❤️
Glad you enjoyed!
I think every written line of the story is every good but I need to appreciate you and your youtube channel specifically content you are making every one this days are making type of videos but only one only you some variety of videos not just videos your theorys like figarland and doflamingo theory this are amazing now need more this type of youtubers in one piece community
means a lot
Loved it bro❤❤
really means a lot
Quick side note: Aramaki was not a part of the marines until the timeskip due to military draft by Sakazuki
I know ... but for the sake of adding more canon characters ... I ignored the canon
I might do a tiny bit change to canon later on. this is not gonna be accurate so ignore few % of Oda's canon for sake of (I hope) better storytelling worth it
p.s
you are a goat for noticing it
@@RocksReviewLong I really love how natural everything else feels, the dialogue and worldbuilding are superb 👍
means very much
I'm trying to be a writer for 12 years ... since I'm not English speaking I can't deliver a rich narration. but dialogue ... I can do :)
Brother you can do this things in future
1 Confirmed ben beckman has conquer haki or not
2 fight scene with shanks and beck
3 can you give some spot light on god valley because shanks was found in god valley and garling was king of that time
I'm making this project even if I lose a lot of money :)
will do my best
So nice of you
Great Job, I really liked the way dialogues are written.
Thank you very much!
The dialogue Is what i would expect from a Professional mangakar
thanks ... I'm trying to be a writer in last 12 years or so
ROcks I have a theory that the signal is coming from dragon and dragon knew that when vegapunk dies the message will be shown across the world. It makes sense because that’s why shaka vegapunk told dragon that he will die soon. So that he could alert dragon that the message would be shown to everyone soon when he dies
obivously vegapunk would be smart enough to not put it in egghead so he gave signal thing to dragon
this is a nice theory
tho since all 5 Gorosei are here I expect even more from a historical event
I had a thought
Every yonko has a traitor/spy.
Big mom was bege and 2 of her daughters. N jinbei.
Kaido had drake n apoo who wanted to team up n kill luffy n kaido when the fighting is over.
Wb had blackbeard.
Luffy had kanjuro who wasnt a member but he was un the group.
Buggy. Well mihawk n crocodile said they would sell him out to save thekselves.
So who is the red hair traitor/spy
thanks for you support mate
about Shanks spy ... I think 2ndry allies of Red Hairs should be a nominee
it's really sad if Shanks has a spy but at least I'm hope no person among crew will do this. the more we get to know Shanks kingdom we can find our spy
@@RocksReviewLong I suspect rockstar
among 2ndry options ... he is THE only one atm ...
This is so good. I kind of hope the Germa shows up in later chapters. Imagine Ben Beckman talking down to Judge😂😂😂
means very much
Bounty Hunter, North Blue, Holy Knights
3 groups I want to cover in here
Very proud of to see this video make it on here
thanks for being my alpha reader
@@RocksReviewLong anytime rocks sensei, I’m always happy to alpha reader for any project you may have
Such a high effort video! Keep going bro 🙌🔥
Thank you so much
Please tell me what lord watt looks like
How many chapters are coming this story
more :) at least 10 more
Thanks
You should rebuild your discord. Im on a few servers and see ur videos being promoted n discussed all the time.
wow. didn't know. I will do my best soon
right now I'm just 1 man with 3 channels
10:43 Wait am i missing the point or is the story set after the formation of the red hair pirates.
Nice story btw loved the references.
this is before it ... 2 years after death of Roger when Benn was a bounty hunter and Shanks was a nobody
p.s
thanks
@@RocksReviewLong Oh lol why did i think zoro was the swordsman marine hunter, now i get who it is and i look so stupid considering...
lol, it happens sometimes ... thanks for reading the story means a lot
He know about Holy knights. You give him too much knowledge📚. But mind bending chapter and nice voice acting. 🔥❤
I didn't mention it directly ... but as you can see peter is damaged in this chapter
he fought his way to gain that knowledge few weeks ago
p.s
thanks, a lot of these are new to me, will do a better voice acting in next chapters
This guy is supposed to be the liberator of North blue , he is fairly strong
It is pretty nice
Advice , make different emotion faces of these characters at different angle , keep switching in between , it takes 2 units of hard work and gives u 7 units of results
my artist is already working on it
W video, how long till next episode?
7 to 10 days
don't want to rush it
Daddy rocks I'm going to kiss u if you release the next chapter
working on it
8 views and like is 14th after i did it , it shows the quaility of your mind & content
:)
my community is the best one in the world
16:30 My strict expectation is making it so that the plots connect in exponential ways , I want the story to be so dense that people make theories just like real one ouece🎉
I'm not Oda :) in quality nor style
Can we get more video like this?
I like doing this WAY more than any other type of video
if this video do fairly well
maybe that would be my thing in this channel
doing what I love
Daddy rocks please give me hint on what lord watt looks like please daddy❤❤❤❤😘😘😍😍😘💋🙏🌹🤑🤑😐😋🤨🤑🥵🤧Also does he have a mythical zoan
I'm still working on the design
❤
Awesome ❤🔥
means a lot
Wait...why are there so many spelling mistakes ?
AI + Me
p.s
the worse of all is my saying the name of Green Bull wrong
@@RocksReviewLongbro💀
I did not even know u were talking about green bull 💀
@@RocksReviewLonguse grammarly free versions or use AI
What is lord watt devil fruit
all I can say is ... we gonna see him in next chapter
Nice
thanks
Voice acting should be bettee
it was my first attempt to do voice acting
surly will improve it
strongest or the weakest sea , it doesn't have great figure like hero of marine , the pirate king 😂, I think it is the weakest but the crime is high that why it is called strongest
Ok
That ending about shanks was damn good ❤
I almost didn't add that to first chapter
but at the last moment realized this is what chapter 1 needs :)
means a lot that you noticed it
Rocks what is ur opinion on lgbtq🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈
we should ask Oda about this one.
Do u have a discord server we can join
the one I have is not super active anymore - my fault - I might rebuilt it