Why? Dude got his justice and avenged his departed wife. Now he gets to live a quiet life in the Ozarks. I'd call that a good story. What part 2 to this would actually add anything to it? Not being a smart ass here. I'd genuinely like to know what your argument for a part 2 is. If it holds water hell I'll join the call for a part 2 and cast my line to fish for it, if it don't I'm cutting bate and moving to a new spot on the river bank.
The ONLY channel where I not only welcome long stories but actually wish many were longer lol!! If anyone is new to LLC, I promise they are second to none when it comes to any kind of story they put out there;)!
Something similar happened to my brother! She should have remembered that she also promised to obey her husband! another case of her girlfriends misleading a wife! Wives need to learn to obey their husbands and not be misled by her friends!
I love it when people not from the South try to write or speak in a Southern accent. It's like the stilted Southern accents in the old movie 'Sergeant York'. Still, it was a good story.
Hi. Well, my thoughts are that this was a pretty good story as far as it went. It's simply begging for a continuation though, so c'mon LLC, chop chop. Hop to it and get the rest of the story uploaded. Time's a wastin'. Do us a favor and turn Travis aka Maliciouslogic3740 loose on this. It's right up his alleyand he's proven that he's fully capable of doing this partial story justice 👍🏻👍🏻
Ok there's a conflict of were this story originated it started in Arkansas then to a base in us to Mexican cartels but he's speaking a mix of British and I'm guessing south or arkansas.sad that jenny was killed over with the start she had.
This story is crying out for a part 2
Why? Dude got his justice and avenged his departed wife. Now he gets to live a quiet life in the Ozarks. I'd call that a good story. What part 2 to this would actually add anything to it? Not being a smart ass here. I'd genuinely like to know what your argument for a part 2 is. If it holds water hell I'll join the call for a part 2 and cast my line to fish for it, if it don't I'm cutting bate and moving to a new spot on the river bank.
This is another one that could be continued on.
Good job LLC
The ONLY channel where I not only welcome long stories but actually wish many were longer lol!! If anyone is new to LLC, I promise they are second to none when it comes to any kind of story they put out there;)!
Great story, thanks LLC
I have to agree with all the other comments I wish it was longer or I wish there was a part two great story
Please get a part 2 out great story like this one needs it please
Something similar happened to my brother!
She should have remembered that she also promised to obey her husband! another case of her girlfriends misleading a wife! Wives need to learn to obey their husbands and not be misled by her friends!
If you listen to the story the driver turned down the wrong street by mistake! She wasn't mislead by anyone!!
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Great story needs a part two 👏
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Good story!! Maybe some room for a part 2??
Good story thank you very much🙏 with the storyline maybe a second or third part
Listening for a second time
Darn good writer
True! El Paso is a high crime area. Been to FT. Bliss twice.
Is it really? I always see it ranked in the top 10 for safest large cities in the country.
i wish it was 2+hrs
Nice story.
Interesting. A life of an army soldier who seek revenge.
Short sweet sad and could be a little bit more cause it's a nice story line 😔 it felt unfair for the ending
This needs a longer storyline. The Cartel will not leave this alone and he will be the first suspect.
This one really broke my heart, because he dosen't have his sweet angel anymore😢😢😭😭 Its so sad!
Well sad storry ... i wish to be bigger ....
Ole Paw is a real piece of work ain't he 😂
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I love it when people not from the South try to write or speak in a Southern accent. It's like the stilted Southern accents in the old movie 'Sergeant York'. Still, it was a good story.
Hi. Well, my thoughts are that this was a pretty good story as far as it went. It's simply begging for a continuation though, so c'mon LLC, chop chop. Hop to it and get the rest of the story uploaded. Time's a wastin'. Do us a favor and turn Travis aka Maliciouslogic3740 loose on this. It's right up his alleyand he's proven that he's fully capable of doing this partial story justice 👍🏻👍🏻
@Maliciouslogic3740 you there???
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Ok there's a conflict of were this story originated it started in Arkansas then to a base in us to Mexican cartels but he's speaking a mix of British and I'm guessing south or arkansas.sad that jenny was killed over with the start she had.
A good story but could have been better.