New channel? Looks promising. A couple of things though (with most respect): the content and editting looks good, the script is good, but your reading of it... let's just say it reminded me of the first text to speach modules from windows xp 😂. You seem a little stiff, and like it was all done in one uninterrupted sitting regardless of result. Take your time, edit out the mistakes, do vocal warm up exercises before recording. Don't make it look like a kid reading his presentation in front of the class. Look at the camera in segments where your face is visible. A good example for me is the Technology Connections channel. And (although not everyone likes it) think about adding a soft background music with VERY LOW VOLUME (don't make a tiktok of it). Keept it up! 👍
Thanks for the constructive criticism. Yes, my delivery is pretty weak, and is one of the reasons why I make these videos; to improve my speaking. I've got a LONG way to go, but believe it or not, it used to be a lot worse!
Very interesting!
Love the dandelion ~ lit up in that shot ~ so pretty. Great review, so detailed and entertaining. Thank you!
Thank you!
New channel? Looks promising.
A couple of things though (with most respect): the content and editting looks good, the script is good, but your reading of it... let's just say it reminded me of the first text to speach modules from windows xp 😂. You seem a little stiff, and like it was all done in one uninterrupted sitting regardless of result. Take your time, edit out the mistakes, do vocal warm up exercises before recording. Don't make it look like a kid reading his presentation in front of the class. Look at the camera in segments where your face is visible. A good example for me is the Technology Connections channel.
And (although not everyone likes it) think about adding a soft background music with VERY LOW VOLUME (don't make a tiktok of it).
Keept it up! 👍
Thanks for the constructive criticism. Yes, my delivery is pretty weak, and is one of the reasons why I make these videos; to improve my speaking. I've got a LONG way to go, but believe it or not, it used to be a lot worse!