Dude, he literally had a whole group of people willing to do ANYTHING for him. Man, he could've had them buy him whatever the hell wanted, including the tuition for any college. They could be like his own personal attendants.
The thing is, finding out people have been stalking you for your entire life is shocking and horrifying. Everyone would react like him, at least at first, because you'll be scared as fuck. People you don't even know stealing your possessions, taking pictures of you, your family. It'd be a nightmare. Of course having some mindless followers would be useful (as every dictator would agree), but let's not act like the poor guy reacted dumbly. You'd be all freaking out, too.
I could pick out my mom from a crowd and in old photographs. I know her features and voice better than anything. "A Mother is God in the eyes of a child." - Silent Hill
I love how you layered the voices of the chat - it really added to the atmosphere. That’s something you can’t get from simply reading a creepypasta. Keep up the good work, MCP. :)
Yeah, but they had been keeping track of his every move since he was a born. Imagine if you were looking through the photos, and saw one of you from right outside your window like 2 seconds ago? And from people you don't know, no less. It'd be extremely creepy, imo. Although given the chance to process it, I guess it could be very nice to have.
SqueakerSquad I knew when he said "a used potty stool like the one I had as a kid" that was some foreshadowing like the way a tsunami wave shades you before it drops on your head. I mean does this guy really remember his potty stool in such a way he can recognize it instantly?
Zinnah TheZebra yes but if they were really obsessed it'd be more likely they'd just "stalk quieter", although I agreed with the using to his advantage point
I remember listening to another creepypasta about a deep web "veteran" who got super creeped out by a video of some pool balls in a video that were acting strangely. They were moving in strange directions when hit, and not doing what you would expect them to. Like, come on now, theres worse things than that on the REGULAR web! You never heard of video editing!? It's very obvious everyone who writes stories about the deep web has never actually set foot there haha
I mean, if everything you've seen has been distant and disconnected from you, and then suddenly then the world falls on you all of the sudden, you'd be scared too.
Staying awake while working the graveyard shift is always hard. Lucky I'm an MCP subscriber, or I would have been fired for sleeping on the job. I keep my workstation well lit and make sure to investigate weird noises, all the while looking over my shoulder to make sure a skinwalker or a goatman or a wendigo isn't following me.
MCP, would you ever consider doing a reading of some of H.P. Lovecraft's works? I've always heard that they've been instrumental in the development of the horror genre, but after all these years, I have a hard time really appreciating fully appreciating a horror story not read by someone like you--who does such a great job at making the whole experience that much more immersive. Anyway, keep being great!
As someone who listens to these audio stories for most of the day, I want to share my appreciation for the amount of effort you put into your narration having emotion. It’s definitely much better and more pleasing to listen to when there’s more than a monotone voice behind the microphone. Excellent work, I always enjoy a good story with an even better narrator.
Oh I would love this so much Anyway I have questions for like alternative endings What if the person say becomes famous irl like as a celebrity, would their cult/deep web fandom hate the new fandom? Would they merge into one? Would the person favor their old fandom more? Would the old fandom kill the new fans in attempt to keep 'perfection' all to themselves? Do they write fanfic like x readers? Do they have fan accounts? Do they male edits? Is there anything 'perfection' can do to make them hate him? If he ever gets a girlfriend, would they kill her or praise her too? Is there toxic fans in their fandom? What _is_ a 'toxic' fan to them? What a their fandom name? Are they going to win an award for best fandom?
I was wondering what the heck this had to do with the SAR stories until I read the description. This left me feeling so violated and paranoid. Ugh! P.S. thank you for putting all of these videos in a playlist. I’ve watched all 10 of them over the last day and not having to find and open the next video made my life a ton easier. I love your style of narrating :)
4:02 Not gonna lie, the chat sounds automated. 1: All normal names (no creative usernames. ex. SombreroPickle06), 2: All positive comments towards something, 3: Very active, Those are all red flags that the "chat" is part of a scam. ESPECIALLY ON SOMEWHERE LIKE THE DEEP WEB. Aren't ya' supposed to be tech-savy? Sorry for my rant.
i just had to facepalm when he started messaging people on the deep web..... never message anybody unless u wanna be a part of the community unless you wanna get hacked.
Weird story, but you are a great reader! Very expressive and you make it feel like the story is true. Honestly it’s reassuring to hear you read after the whole foot lettuce meme and that guy’s terrible reading.
I'm just trying to figure out who exactly was stalking him. At first I thought it was the friend who introduced him to the dark web and later on taught him how to find websites near his location like he was dropping clues to lure him in, but then again the person or people who did all this has to be grown since they started taking pictures when he was a baby. Maybe the friend was just apart of this group.
wait wait wait wait at the start he says he was hospitalized and held back in third grade and says his friends graduated the year before him, are we supposed to believe he kept all his friends from 3rd grade, and made absolutely none in the 4 years of being in highschool?
One of the best scary stories ive heard on the internet. As opposed to the "I found a murder forum, threatened to call the cops, someone posted my info" bullshit. Ive seen like 3 of those only slightly altered
!["The Showers" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/HHL2UOGCscU/mqdefault.jpg)
Dude, he literally had a whole group of people willing to do ANYTHING for him. Man, he could've had them buy him whatever the hell wanted, including the tuition for any college. They could be like his own personal attendants.
Sylveon Valentine ikr he wouldn't have to spend a dollar in his life heck he could have hired them as security for all I know
Sylveon Valentine that's what I was thinking too!
Ian Hernandez why can't this ever happen to me
Not to mention if he ever got too paranoid about them doing anything, he could easily convince them to Heaven's Gate themselves.
The thing is, finding out people have been stalking you for your entire life is shocking and horrifying. Everyone would react like him, at least at first, because you'll be scared as fuck. People you don't even know stealing your possessions, taking pictures of you, your family. It'd be a nightmare. Of course having some mindless followers would be useful (as every dictator would agree), but let's not act like the poor guy reacted dumbly. You'd be all freaking out, too.
I would've been like
*yes my children, worship me. Thank you for this kindness.*
Maddy Dumont me too i was kinda pissed he was so mad id be a God and love it
I’d ask for something like lunch, and see if they would do the pesky micro transactions
Nothing better to start the day then a deep web horror story.
or just before bed
So true
Nothing better to end the day with one as well
DUDE SAME!!!
Skinned Locust I fall asleep to these stories, that and the other creepypasta channel
Ever since 2017 the thumbnails have been scarier than the actual stories
7lameboy the creepypasta are getting smarter and more unsettling, buy less creepy
7lameboy Pfft...pussy.
I guess it is, when I first came to creepypasta on RUclips, I was so scared of the thumbnails, but now I'm used to it so yea
*YeEy*
Everyone is getting desensitized to the stories.
It's a shame how obvious this twist was...
Yep
terrablue owo yeah I was pretty confused but I got it about 5 minutes in
sleepycryptidx lol it’s a shame how cringy u are. quit trying to act like u figured it out right off the hop 😂😂😂
Charles R no you didn’t.
@@drey4209 bro it was obvious relax he's not the only one who figured it out easily
I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING BECAUSE THIS GUY DIDN'T KNOW WHO'S HIS MUM WAS.
sHe LoOkEd FaMiLiAr
I could pick out my mom from a crowd and in old photographs. I know her features and voice better than anything. "A Mother is God in the eyes of a child." - Silent Hill
I wonder how the greatest gas station attendant ever is doing.
Gammin yeah can't wait for the next installment
www.reddit.com/r/libraryofshadows/comments/7hivav/finding_vanessa_part_one/ this user has been posting his experience with the gas station
WHYYYYY?????? Why did you have to say something.. now I will not be able to keep myself from going and reading ahead!!! LOL
Gammin if your into the gas station stories you should listen to “Welcome To Nightvale” it’s really similar and really good.
winterwolf211 yeah, I understand. Nightvale is a little more lighthearted, it’s good to listen to both.
I love how you layered the voices of the chat - it really added to the atmosphere. That’s something you can’t get from simply reading a creepypasta. Keep up the good work, MCP. :)
Dude had his own cult. Just imagine the possibilities. Id love that.
Andrew Ebert me too
Yeah, but they had been keeping track of his every move since he was a born. Imagine if you were looking through the photos, and saw one of you from right outside your window like 2 seconds ago? And from people you don't know, no less. It'd be extremely creepy, imo. Although given the chance to process it, I guess it could be very nice to have.
Found the guy with the God Complex 🙄
There's nothing cool about Cults or Stalking, dipshit.
@@ShadyRandomLolfound the guy who isnt in controll of anything in his life
@@iliahgranovsky3400 I mean... You aren't wrong, but I don't need to be in control of my life to have a semi-decent moral standing my dude.
I found perfection on the deepweb too. The cops didn't agree with me though
TheIceLurker Was It Hentai?
GavinThe ComicNerd why would hentai be on the deep web
Hentaihaven is free hentai legally, at least I think it is legal
Misty Diablo *LOLIS*
TheIceLurker not funny, that’s really fucked up.
no bully?
This is the ideal male body. You may not like it, but this is what peak performance looks like.
Apricotluma 😩👌
What's that from sounds familiar
It's a meme you dip.
make*
*watches video to the end* ......Damn
ikr I loved this one
German lets player *writes what she is doing* why just why
:o *anticipation intensifies*
Is it scary?
Im listening to it now !!!!!
Honestly it was kind of predictable but, that might be just me.
I could tell the ending 5 minutes in lol
Predictable? herhaps, narrated to perfection? yes..
SqueakerSquad I knew when he said "a used potty stool like the one I had as a kid" that was some foreshadowing like the way a tsunami wave shades you before it drops on your head. I mean does this guy really remember his potty stool in such a way he can recognize it instantly?
Nah, not just you. Some of the foreshadowing came on too strongly.
Still pretty good though
No it's not just you and the story served more cringy than the perfection chat room
Are there "perfect" memes in the deep web?
Danny-Elite beyond our imaginations
Ugandan Knuckles and Spaghet was the closest we got
Danny-Elite i can show you de wey
Danny-Elite my brudda I can show u da wei
Danny-Elite your not perfect
Why couldn't he have just ordered them to stop stalking him? Or used them to his advantage?
Right. Missed the opportunity to be the greatest cult leader
If I had some crazies obsessing over me, I'd make sure to turn them into a personal mini army
Kuro Heart clearly you've never been stalked if you think it's as simple as "ordering" them to stop
Zinnah TheZebra yes but if they were really obsessed it'd be more likely they'd just "stalk quieter", although I agreed with the using to his advantage point
Kuro Heart I know right like having them fight amongst themselves to see who would get the "honor" of taking him to the new avengers movie 😂😂😂
*reads title* No..... Just, No
Pussy
German lets player mummified monk
I see you found perfection as well. I'd like to talk.
Zane Addington you adore perfection?
DONT TRIP Bitch I LOVE perfection
Saw it coming from about 4 minutes in. Don't understand their motive still
A deepweb veteran gets extreme drama queen over some people stalking someone? Come on now.
I remember listening to another creepypasta about a deep web "veteran" who got super creeped out by a video of some pool balls in a video that were acting strangely. They were moving in strange directions when hit, and not doing what you would expect them to. Like, come on now, theres worse things than that on the REGULAR web! You never heard of video editing!? It's very obvious everyone who writes stories about the deep web has never actually set foot there haha
It's different when that person is you though.
I mean, if everything you've seen has been distant and disconnected from you, and then suddenly then the world falls on you all of the sudden, you'd be scared too.
First time in a long time that a deep web story gave me the creeps. I approve!
Staying awake while working the graveyard shift is always hard. Lucky I'm an MCP subscriber, or I would have been fired for sleeping on the job. I keep my workstation well lit and make sure to investigate weird noises, all the while looking over my shoulder to make sure a skinwalker or a goatman or a wendigo isn't following me.
You work in a graveyard yet your name is Psychotic Jedi?
Isn't your name Super Tactical Droid Kalani
LOL I don't work IN a graveyard, I work the graveyard, or overnight, shift at work. 11pm to 7am. It's not much but it pays the bills.
crazedmonk Its. Not. An. Actual. Graveyard.
MCP, would you ever consider doing a reading of some of H.P. Lovecraft's works? I've always heard that they've been instrumental in the development of the horror genre, but after all these years, I have a hard time really appreciating fully appreciating a horror story not read by someone like you--who does such a great job at making the whole experience that much more immersive. Anyway, keep being great!
As someone who listens to these audio stories for most of the day, I want to share my appreciation for the amount of effort you put into your narration having emotion. It’s definitely much better and more pleasing to listen to when there’s more than a monotone voice behind the microphone. Excellent work, I always enjoy a good story with an even better narrator.
Fuck it, just replace "Perfection" with "Senpai" and this story gets better.
Thanks
Cool story bro
As soon as I saw this, I've never clicked away from the deep web faster ... wait
God damnit Batman. What did your parents say about going on the deep web? Oh wait..
Batman WoW EdGy
They kept his shit? For real? Really?
Burry Pups but the collecting and hoarding of ALL of it though?
Burry Pups along with all of the other stuff
In the thumbnail dude has anus eyes
Oh my god, I love the emotion you put behind your reading. You get me so invested, it’s like I’m actually there.
Are you proud, of me, perfection?
-inhale-
*you* are my perfection.
-exhale-
L O V E M E L O L
I'd be pretty happy to be seen as perfection and have people just obsessing over me
Cynical Sam Dream on
Oh I would love this so much
Anyway I have questions for like alternative endings
What if the person say becomes famous irl like as a celebrity, would their cult/deep web fandom hate the new fandom?
Would they merge into one?
Would the person favor their old fandom more?
Would the old fandom kill the new fans in attempt to keep 'perfection' all to themselves?
Do they write fanfic like x readers?
Do they have fan accounts?
Do they male edits?
Is there anything 'perfection' can do to make them hate him?
If he ever gets a girlfriend, would they kill her or praise her too?
Is there toxic fans in their fandom?
What _is_ a 'toxic' fan to them?
What a their fandom name?
Are they going to win an award for best fandom?
Five minutes in, and I predict that HE, the narrator, is Perfection!!!
I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!! I WAS RIIIIIIGHT AND I DID NOT EXPECT THAT.
Lul
MrCreepyPasta is perfection
dressing like Carmen San Diego isnt really a great way to "blend in" and keep a low profile...
Didn't know I was on the deep web.💀
Kane 😂😂💀.
BIIIIIIIITCH 😂😂😂😂👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Sarah I can tell I already love you.😂😂😂💀
*C O U G H* well, who does?
JULI BEANS :3 yes lil mo is perfection
Ah, the deep web. Always gets the views and is interesting.
MCP you always have the best creepypastas and the best narration/music. Thank you! 😀
Oh look that's my art :')
Omega Black talented
In the thumbnail? That's really good.
That's really, really good! I hope to be as good as u one day:')
noice
Oh my lord! That’s amazing.
Your the only creepypasta narrator that can completely entrance me with your dramatic voice and send chills down my spine! I love your work
just woke up. Watched this. I'm ready for my day now
ok im obsessed w your narrations you're so talented wtf
I’m at 5:47 and I’m calling it: The narrator is “perfection”.
7:11 I started theorizing around this point that Perfection was the narrator I'm going to watch until the end and find out.
Yikes..
lol you're gay
lol what
BlueBrush Draws ur mum gay
Michael Mouradian no u
If I found out I had a bunch of stalkers I would accept being their queen and overlord.
I would make them call me lord tachanka and set up turrets and protect their lord
You put everything you have into these performances. That's why you're one of my favorite RUclips narrators!
Replace "Perfection" with "my Queen" and "Are you proud of me" with "Do you know de wey" or even just clicks and this story gets 10000000X better.
"I felt a little angry. The whole -self- insert thing was cringey enough, but this is all so fucking over the top."
Mademow YEEEEEY
It gets worse, actually.
No
@Mademow You spelled worse wrong
He had cult worshipping him. That's terrifying and Intriguing at the same time.
I found perfection in the basement of a laboratory located in a mountain
you probably found the leftovers of happy puppet syndrome
Your username gave away the joke.
Hey lsd
I was wondering what the heck this had to do with the SAR stories until I read the description. This left me feeling so violated and paranoid. Ugh! P.S. thank you for putting all of these videos in a playlist. I’ve watched all 10 of them over the last day and not having to find and open the next video made my life a ton easier. I love your style of narrating :)
I love deep web stories
They're a lot more interesting than the actual deep web
I love how he takes stories, he sounds like it's his story and he has so much emotional! It's beautiful and terrifying
You found perfection you say? Walk up to a mirror and look at it. Have a great day. :)
ironically in the story he's "perfection"
I loved this story! Perhaps it's not super original or anything, but the way you narrated it made it a million times scarier! Great job on the pacing!
We found perfection my bruddahs! *Cluck cluck cluck*
*_we have found de wae_*
The perfect way to get yourself into Hell maybe
4:02 Not gonna lie, the chat sounds automated.
1: All normal names (no creative usernames. ex. SombreroPickle06),
2: All positive comments towards something,
3: Very active,
Those are all red flags that the "chat" is part of a scam. ESPECIALLY ON SOMEWHERE LIKE THE DEEP WEB. Aren't ya' supposed to be tech-savy? Sorry for my rant.
I wish I could be perfection.
Here its not fun
i just had to facepalm when he started messaging people on the deep web..... never message anybody unless u wanna be a part of the community unless you wanna get hacked.
Looking at screen and im like," ima have a wonderful seizure"😃
Madness! You tell it so well! Keep em coming bro 👌
It's like the queens perspective with Ugandan knuckles
Everyone clap for da queen. *click click click click click*
Never a dull read never a dull moment the pasta family in the editors phenomenal all the way through
I love you spook daddy
IloveWaffles#zenolove HE IS PERFECTION
Das rayciss
Only one good thing about being to busy to listen to you for two months. I come back and I have a bunch of videos to binge listen to. Lol.
*He is our Queen*
*He will show us da wae to perfection*
Autumn Holtz BRUDDAH? *clicks tongue*
Autumn Holtz *clicking noises*
leave
@@bottleomemes do Ya know da way from can- Uganda
The deepest pit of hell is simply not enough for your kind.
We will have to dig deeper.
Sincerely, Satan
This sent chills through my body
What happened to the search and rescue stories? Will they continue?
This was sooooo good! Wish there was a part 2 or extended version. Thanks!
Is everyone RAGING that they totally saw the ending coming? Does it make you UNREASONABLY ANGRY, angry enough to create The Purge irl?
Yes it does sir.
YOURE SUCH A GOOD READER
This was too predictable. I figured out who “perfection” was before it was even revealed . I’ve listened to way too many creepy pastas. Good job tho
williams arabga i agrée, predictable. I don’t see how these people just so happened to see this guy as perfection.
Holy shit!!! YOU are one he'll of a narrator!! The only one that actually mentally put me in the the event!!☆☆☆☆☆ You have a sub 4 life♡
He did he finally cussed again you made mrcreepypasta you made it
Not a lot of creepypastas really scare me, but this one realllllly got me omfg...
Anyone else picture mrcreepypasta as lawr3nce sontag from funhaus? Love you MrCreepyPasta
Weird story, but you are a great reader! Very expressive and you make it feel like the story is true. Honestly it’s reassuring to hear you read after the whole foot lettuce meme and that guy’s terrible reading.
Ok but this is literally the “The girl reading this” meme.
Very nice read!!! You really are amazing thank you for your work ❤️❤️❤️
This sounds like a really good one
This will be a P E R F E C T addition to my collection.
Really missed out on that opportunity of a LIFETIME. Ehehehe.
I'm just trying to figure out who exactly was stalking him. At first I thought it was the friend who introduced him to the dark web and later on taught him how to find websites near his location like he was dropping clues to lure him in, but then again the person or people who did all this has to be grown since they started taking pictures when he was a baby. Maybe the friend was just apart of this group.
this is cliche, but its alright.
wait wait wait wait at the start he says he was hospitalized and held back in third grade and says his friends graduated the year before him, are we supposed to believe he kept all his friends from 3rd grade, and made absolutely none in the 4 years of being in highschool?
Well, the twist was very predictable.
....That is a WHOLE new level of OBSSESED!...Feel so bad for him...
I would tell them to do stuff for me. Like rob a bank?Rob many banks?Become hitmans?Too ez. When they say.
Are you proud of me?
One of the best scary stories ive heard on the internet. As opposed to the "I found a murder forum, threatened to call the cops, someone posted my info" bullshit. Ive seen like 3 of those only slightly altered
HE IS DA QUEEN
Holy crap. This story blew my mind.
If i was perfection, i would be very creeped out, but id start to like being the center of fame... ( i dont know wtf is wrong with me)
The narration is so good man, good job
So the main character is basically every 4 Chan user ever.
His voice acting gives me live
Bro your their god you could make them do whatever you want them to
This is actually good... subed....
So Cell was on the deep web?
Dragon Ball Z joke hahaha
Or ULF kars
I figured it out as soon as they said, "Are you proud of me?"
I love you....perfection
Man I forgot how amazing these are
Love ur vids man
Dude missed an opportunity to have an easy life
I like @MrCreepyPasta's voice. In my opinion you/they
bro i love ur narration its so good