Show, Don't Tell -- an example from Bloodwitch

[@CaughtBetweenPages]

It's fascinating to see this in action, and actually getting a concrete example of WHY it works (both showing v telling and occasionally vice versa). Thanks, Sooz!

[@gabbisunshine]

Thank you for sharing this! It’s incredibly helpful to see the balance at work :)

[@spirited154]

This is so insanely helpful, thank you so much!

[@billyalarie929]

Okay but can you please explain how you decide on an action like "saffis toes curled in her boots" after a line of dialogue?

[@bobwiggle4533]

y am i here
oh i remember i was looking for the bloodwitch videogame