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I always wondered how Adrien would have reacted if he saw who Ladybug was back in The Dark Owl! This was so good Haze, and I can’t wait for the next chapter 🥳
Your voice is so nice haze, compliments the well written story amazingly. If I were to theorise this is going to merge into an Adrienette fic! And I am all here for it. Also the characters are so accurate to canon, it’s so nice and refreshing when the author doesn’t completely disregard how the characters would actually act! I love that you didn’t! I’m actually just fangirling so hard rn. I love this
It’s definitely going to be Adrienette focused! Ahhh thank you! When I write miraculous fan fiction I try to keep them in keeping with how they are in the show :) I’m so happy you liked it! 🥰🥰🥰
Amazing writing Haze! I love how you are addressing the way Alya acts with Lila. It would be nice to see the show address it now that Alya knows Marinette is Ladybug
Such a beautiful story haze ! I loved it I enjoyed every second of it . The plot was so amazing. Hope you do these more. I rlly want the 2nd part .I dont usually watch the fix but this is over the top ! Byeee have a nice day :D
The peaceful music in the background, the heartwarming story, the beautiful art and your soft narration is amazing Haze. This is the third or fourth time I came back to listen to it. I love love love the story, and I'll wait patiently for the next chapter❤❤❤
This is so good - pawsome! You write the characters so accurately, and I love the 'What if?' type of fanfics! I can't' wait for the 2nd chapter, but I know from from experience that quality content like this takes time, so I will wait patiently:)
I'm watching this now because it's amazing, the person who did the art did a incredible job and thank you Haze for making our days with autio fic and videos also screaming sessions I can't forget memes too 💞 I'm crying right now and happy at the same time ❤🥺😭
While waiting for the ending of Macarons and Mandarin I figured I’d check out this audio fic and I’m so glad I did. Other than having a hard time sleeping I’m finding listening to your voice relaxing. I did always wonder what Adrien’s reaction would be if he found out his princess and his lady was Marinette so early on in this movie series. Like in some of the episodes Adrien in subconsciously protective of Marinette anyway and no doubt he has no idea why until he eventually finds out that Marinette is Ladybug but hopefully by then Adrien will realize that he loves Marinette and he’s not just in love with her Ladybug side.
I just loved this story. The plot and how we get to see a different side to both of them from what we see in the show. Very well written. I can’t wait to hear what happens next. 😊
That was amazing Haze 😌, I didn't even realized it was 20+mins. long. The way you narrate the story.. I can clearly see every details in my mind 😌. But I feel bad for Marinette because of how Alya treated her 😔, I'll be waiting for part 2 I hope Alya make up with her.. Can you also do some AU of Oblivio like after the 'miraculous ladybug' their old memories returned but they didn't forget what happened, like they remember everything, that would be amazing!🤗
It was so cute. I see that you went with a what if Adrien opened his eyes in Dark Owl. I was wondering what kind of story it would be. Now it makes me upset that he didn't. Cute story. Can't wait for more. Love the artwork, too.
This is beautiful, Haze! I can't wait to get the rest of the story! Since you read it, i just closed my eyes and painted all the scenes in my mind. I just love it! Looking forward to the next chapters! 🥰
@@hazeclarke thats completly fine! I understand! And theres no way that an actuall real Human person on Earth- Could’nt. Like. This. Fanfiction. Like this was like better than any Miraculous episode ever realesed!💓💓💓 Bestie Got talent ✋🏼
Loved the story, and the new found dynamics between Marinette and Adrien is an interesting twist. You did a great job especially as it can be nerve racking doing the narration aspect of an audiofic. Can't wait for part 2. 😊
I finally found time to start it ! I'm 7 months late.. but I'm enjoying at the fullest! This is amazing, Haze! I absolutely LOVE it! ❤ Your voice, the well written dialogues, the writing in general... Everything is amazing! Great job on this! What a shame I couldn't listen to it sooner 😅
Amazing! I really enjoyed it. I love the idea of Adrien trying to know more about Marinette before saying he is in love with her just because she is Ladybug. The lab scene was so cute and the puns are exactly what would Cat Noir say :D Good job Haze
I think we all agreed that your fanfic was beautiful!! I love you captured the emotions and sadness in your story! First off, I love you added a little bit of tikkixplagg moments because we actually need some scenes, especially on the show. Second, I think it made feel heartbreaking is that Marinette feels lonely while Lila is basically taking away all her friends and Adrien is the only one who believes in her which it's very sweet. It basically proves that he stills loves Marinette more than a "friend". Anyway, I'm really excited to see the next chapter! Btw, I just want to say that you did a beautiful job capturing the characters which it's very accurate to the show. 👏❤
Omg thank you! Oh gosh I love Tikki and Plagg scenes! Adrien is definitely falling for already, even if he’s not aware yet 😌 and thank you! I tried to stick as close as possible to them!
Woah, this is set in/post Dark Owl? The premise is really cool, and I really like Adrien acknowledging that he could be projecting what he felt about Ladybug onto Marinette and so he really thinks that through. Man, I can't see what will come next. It really does feel like if Miraculous was a novel! Stellar job! And the art is really cool as well!
Lmao I was like okay I need Mari and Adrien to work together on something, okay science…. What equipment would they use in French schools? Kim would set his hair on fire these children should not have access to Bunsen burners
I really love it. I can't wait for the next three chapters!!! I was thinking maybe a AU one shot Fan Fiction or maybe some chapters either, be about Bridgette /Ladybug or Felix/Cat Noir has a disability (from the PV Miraculous Ladybug) or either Adrien/Cat Noir or Marinette/Ladybug with a disability. It would be interesting. Maybe the story can be about how the characters got their miraculous (origins)? It's up to you. :) It would be interesting to see how the other characters would react. I always like to share the idea of writing characters representing different disabilities or illness because I believe everyone can learn something new everyday. It demonstrates that it doesn't matter how people are born anything is possible. Anyone can be a hero in their own way. I heard that originally Adrien would have a disability with a cane during the creation of the show, but they changed the idea.
AHH THIS IS AMAZING!! This is one of the BEST things I have EVER WATCHED! You are SOOOOO TALENTED HAZE! I can't wait for the next part! And I loved it sooooooooooo x100000 much! Also, in this are you leaning towards a mean Ayla? (Yes I love to see two sides of her) If so, here is an idea on maybe how you could redeem her? (If you are looking to redeem her later one) Maybe there will be aologies and so on yada yada yada, but then maybe we can have some Alya - Adrien moments, not as a ship of course, however Adrien going to Alya to ask about Marinette, and then there could be another ice breaker for those two so the redemption of Alya could take place. Of course you don't have to use this!! And again this video was so amazing I loved every bit of it, and you are an awesome narrator haze! Happy 10k
I’m so happy you liked it! 🥰 ah so in the fic, I’m definitely aiming for Mari to be really sad and isolated from everyone and you’ll see it progress more with Alya in the next chapter - by the end of chapter 2, Mari literally will only have Adrien there for her and Alya completely abandons her at the start of chapter three. But I won’t say anymore!
This is all we needed sooooooo long ago and it’s setting my expectations for the post reveal in the show so high!!!!! Loved it 😍 can’t wait for the next part!!! Flirting Adrienette is just unbearably adorable 🥰. I feel am not going to be able to live without the nest part, please!!!!
Just barely got around to watching chapter 1 of ur story right now, been really busy lately, I have to say I really liked it, ❤️ made me tear up a little bit, if only the real show can put scenes like that in it, can’t wait to read chapter 2 😀
Yes.... Grace thanks for creating thw fanart for this wonderful fan fiction. Yay!!! I was so excited for this sorry I am commenting a bit late but I had to do a long piece of homework and because of that it took long for me to see this but I am absolutely loving it so far. I actually visioned it as like a real miraculous episode and the Adrienette is so cute. I really can't wait to see more of this. :') Did you cry when making this?
wow, you're really good at this. Didn't exspect that your voice fits that well with audio fics. I really enjoyed that video! I look forward for another fanfiction
Such a cool chapter Haze. I just love reading fanfiction stories about Miraculous Ladybug, especially ones with identity reveals, Lila getting exposed, Chloe redeeming herself, Marichat moments on the balcony, Marinette becoming Princess Justice, the class apologising to Marinette for believing Lila over her and ones with Adrien, Luka, Kagami and even Chloe defending her and helping her with the Lila fiasco. Plus this fanfiction story reminds me of my future fanfiction comic based on Miraculous, and that how I'm making what I have for it's script so far to be as perfect as possible, and to try and tie it in with the main series as best as possible. I promise you when it's done you'll want to read it over and over again. Let me know if you want me to reveal one of the lines from the current script in the RUclips comment section as a sneak peek okay? Double plus, I'm now more excited than ever for the permanent identity reveal in the show. I just hope that Cat Noir discovers that Ladybug is Marinette first, alongside her crush on his civilian self before she discovers that him and Adrien are the same person. Then I want to see them get married, have the 3 kids, the dog, the cat and the hamster named whatever.
I am just finish this episode and i don't have any word to describe it... its super AMAZING, you are so talent, i can't wait for part 2 and i wish this is a book so i can buy it🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰
Gurll you did outdid urself. This was stunning. Please keep in mind I have no intention of hurting you and that this is my first audio fic. I have one suggestion maybe try to give more emotions to the sentences. Otherwise I absolutely loved it. Your voice was sooo calming. I want this on Spotify ASAP. The story line was absolutely beautiful.
Omg Haze, this was beautiful! I loved the Sugarcube part, I could really picture that scene in my mind as something really happening in the show :D but oh lord, if only Adrien weren't so dense in the show, like he actually connected the dots in this fanfic! Thank you for easing my frustration! XD Anyway, all in all this was a lovely fanfic bestie, can't wait for the next parts :3 Oh and I forgot to say, your voice is sooo soothing, almost fell asleep there :D
Haze! I Haven't Heard It But I am So Excited To!💖 As You Know By Now, I am Also Writing Fanfics So Did The Person who did The Art Do It For Free Or? Also, I Will Put My Thoughts On It After I Read It, Okay?
Lol Tikki eating ice cubes of frozen blood! 😂 Also, Alya, how could you do that to me! I've read enough salt fics, but I don't like Adrien, or Alya salt at all! I thought you belived Marinette! But this paves way for Adrienette though....you know, one of my favourite salt fanfictions has Alya salt, but lots of Adrienette. Also, go Adrien! Help your lady with Lie-la! I'd looovvveee to see her exposed! In all, I loved this so much! It was really amazing! Can't wait to see the next parts! The fanart is sooo beautiful! I love that too ✨🥰
@@hazeclarke XD, she's super cute! Can't wait to see her go crazy in a few days 😂 Yeah...but I don't think cannon Alya would ever stoop down this much :)
Thank you for a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it. Maybe even more if you would read it just a little bit slower, like reading a fairyctale to a child. I only listened to the story without reading the text myself. And I admit you lost me once or twice. But please don't take this wrong. I really look forward to the next parts!
Ah okay! Thank you for the feedback! This was my first time doing anything like this so the feedback is appreciated. I wasn’t sure how fast or how slow I should be going. I’ll slow down for the next chapter!
It was really beautiful❤️❤️ i’m excited for next part!! And i just wanted to give advice so i thought maybe u could give a little bit of pause while speaking like according to the punctuation marks used. Like if there’s a question mark or a full stop then maybe stop for a second and then speak the next sentence😅😅 idk i just thought that i’d let u know.. & i dont mean to criticise or anything .. nd yeah that’s it. I loved it❤️❤️❤️
I’m glad you liked it! And thank you for the feedback! This was my first time doing anything like this so I really wasn’t sure! I’ll do it for the next chapter:)
Honestly, I think Adrien did a fairly good job of not acting out of the ordinary with Marinette. I mean, if I just found out the love of my life is also my just-a-friend, I’d be a blushing grinning mess around them.
Was it okay? I’m super nervous to hear what you all think! Constructive criticism is 100% welcome! (But not mean comments 🥰)
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HAZE BESTIE IT IS SO GOOD!
Is is amazing
Awww thank you besties!
100% of perfection
The Adrienette was amazing in this I loved it! 😭
Also I love the Plikki that made my day! 🥰
I always wondered how Adrien would have reacted if he saw who Ladybug was back in The Dark Owl! This was so good Haze, and I can’t wait for the next chapter 🥳
Thank you so much! 🥰
Omg I just finished it and I love how it ended. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also Haze I love your style of writing.
Thank you so much! 🥰
@@hazeclarke can you give us a hint if Lila going to get what she deserves
Your voice is so nice haze, compliments the well written story amazingly.
If I were to theorise this is going to merge into an Adrienette fic! And I am all here for it. Also the characters are so accurate to canon, it’s so nice and refreshing when the author doesn’t completely disregard how the characters would actually act! I love that you didn’t!
I’m actually just fangirling so hard rn. I love this
It’s definitely going to be Adrienette focused! Ahhh thank you! When I write miraculous fan fiction I try to keep them in keeping with how they are in the show :)
I’m so happy you liked it! 🥰🥰🥰
Amazing writing Haze! I love how you are addressing the way Alya acts with Lila. It would be nice to see the show address it now that Alya knows Marinette is Ladybug
I’m glad you liked it! 💖💖 ah yeah I’m wondering why Mari and Alya still haven’t discussed that
Imagine if he thought, "SHE'S JUST A FRIEND!"
😂😂😂😂
Such a beautiful story haze ! I loved it I enjoyed every second of it . The plot was so amazing. Hope you do these more. I rlly want the 2nd part .I dont usually watch the fix but this is over the top ! Byeee have a nice day :D
I’m glad you liked it so much! The second part will be up as soon as it’s done!
Awwww. Tysm for telling me
I LOVE THIS!!! For a girl who has ADHD this is amazing that you are doing it in a audiofic, you’re doing great❤️❤️🐞
Ahhh I’m so glad you liked it! 💖💖
The peaceful music in the background, the heartwarming story, the beautiful art and your soft narration is amazing Haze. This is the third or fourth time I came back to listen to it. I love love love the story, and I'll wait patiently for the next chapter❤❤❤
Omg 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 I’m so happy you liked it. Honestly I’m surprised by how many of you said you like my voice. Is this a sign to start an asmr channel 😂
@@hazeclarke i will unsub if you do that 😂 asmr is soo annoying
You manged to get me all teared up bestie 😭😭😭😭💖💖
Omg bestie 🥺🥺💖💖
I really like the story so far! Now I'm excited for part 2
Thank you so much! 💖
This is so good - pawsome!
You write the characters so accurately, and I love the 'What if?' type of fanfics!
I can't' wait for the 2nd chapter, but I know from from experience that quality content like this takes time, so I will wait patiently:)
Thank you! I really try hard to stay in the voices when I write for miraculous! And thank you for understanding 🥰
This is one of the best Fan fic ever good job Bestie.
Thank you bestie!
I'm watching this now because it's amazing, the person who did the art did a incredible job and thank you Haze for making our days with autio fic and videos also screaming sessions I can't forget memes too 💞 I'm crying right now and happy at the same time ❤🥺😭
The art is amazing! Awww thank you so much for being here bestie 🥺🥺💖💖
@@hazeclarke Your welcome bestie you deserve all the love for the Audio Fic ❤❤❤❤❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰
Oh, Haze, I loved it so much! I love how relaxed you sounded and I love the narration speed. I find Ladybug audiofics soothing and relaxing.
I’m so happy you liked it! 💖
While waiting for the ending of Macarons and Mandarin I figured I’d check out this audio fic and I’m so glad I did. Other than having a hard time sleeping I’m finding listening to your voice relaxing. I did always wonder what Adrien’s reaction would be if he found out his princess and his lady was Marinette so early on in this movie series. Like in some of the episodes Adrien in subconsciously protective of Marinette anyway and no doubt he has no idea why until he eventually finds out that Marinette is Ladybug but hopefully by then Adrien will realize that he loves Marinette and he’s not just in love with her Ladybug side.
aww i'm glad you like my voice! i think adrien would be so loving and caring with her if he found out earlier!
Oh my goodness, this was adorable 🥺💞 I can't wait to hear more!
Thank youuuu 🥰🥰
I LOVE this!!!
Amazing job, Haze!❤️Can't wait for the next part!
Thank you! 🥰💖
Hazey, girl you are the BEST!
Can't wait for another chapter!
Ahhhh thank youuuuu 💖💖💖
@haze clarke 💖💖
I NEVER KNEW "ALYA" COULD BE SO EASY TO DECEIVE" BUT I AM ALL THE WAY TO SEASON 4 MIRACULOUS LADYBUG, SOOOOO
It’s been a wild ride so far
I love your story from Adrien's point of view. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank youuuu 💖
I just loved this story. The plot and how we get to see a different side to both of them from what we see in the show. Very well written. I can’t wait to hear what happens next. 😊
Oh my gosh thank you so much! 🥰 it’ll be out soon!
That was amazing Haze 😌, I didn't even realized it was 20+mins. long. The way you narrate the story.. I can clearly see every details in my mind 😌. But I feel bad for Marinette because of how Alya treated her 😔, I'll be waiting for part 2 I hope Alya make up with her..
Can you also do some AU of Oblivio like after the 'miraculous ladybug' their old memories returned but they didn't forget what happened, like they remember everything, that would be amazing!🤗
I’m glad you liked it!
Ooo that’s an interesting idea!
Ooh that’d be interesting. Even the identities?
@@deematmok8156 yes like how would they react and what would happen between them after the unexpected revelation
OK! I just Finished it And OMG HAZE YOU ARE SO TALENTED...MY FANFIC U READ DOESN'T EVEN REACH NEAR YOURS! I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT PARTS AHHHH-✨❤
Awww thank you! Your fan fic was amazing!
@@hazeclarke did u just...u didnt just compliment my fanfic didnt u? omg my heartt
It was really good! Don’t talk down on it! 💖💖 you should be proud of whatever you write 🥰
Probably the best thing ever, omggggggg 🤩🤩 I loved it🐞🐈⬛
Part 2 plssss
I’m so happy you liked it! 🥰
BESTIE JUST CONGRADS FOR 10K YOU DESERVE THEM ALL!!!!!
THANK YOU BESTIE 💖💖💖
Omg, I straight-up liked the video for adrien’s science puns ‘black holes’ made me chuckle
thank you!
It was so cute. I see that you went with a what if Adrien opened his eyes in Dark Owl. I was wondering what kind of story it would be. Now it makes me upset that he didn't. Cute story. Can't wait for more. Love the artwork, too.
Thank you so much! 💖
Hazee THIS A MASTERPIECE ✨💖💖
Omg thank you! 💖💖
This is beautiful, Haze! I can't wait to get the rest of the story! Since you read it, i just closed my eyes and painted all the scenes in my mind. I just love it! Looking forward to the next chapters! 🥰
Oh my gosh thank you!
@@hazeclarke you're welcome! and Thank You for making this! So many of us have truly enjoyed it! 🥰
Best fan fiction ever!
Aww thank you! 🥰
EEEEEKKKKKKK!
Nice work, most audio fics I listen too are from 2-10 minutes. No wonder this will only has four parts.
I honestly didn’t intend for it to be this long 😂😂
OMG YOOOo- NEXT PART WHEN?!!! THIS WAS SO GOOOD! OMGGG TALENTED BESTIEEEE 💓💓💓💓💓😘😘😘😘
I’m not sure when, sorry! But I’m super happy you liked it! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
@@hazeclarke thats completly fine! I understand! And theres no way that an actuall real Human person on Earth- Could’nt. Like. This. Fanfiction. Like this was like better than any Miraculous episode ever realesed!💓💓💓
Bestie Got talent ✋🏼
Loved the story, and the new found dynamics between Marinette and Adrien is an interesting twist. You did a great job especially as it can be nerve racking doing the narration aspect of an audiofic. Can't wait for part 2. 😊
Thank you so much! I wasn’t sure how people would take the narration so I’m glad you liked it!
Lady Haze !! i NEED the next part !!
knowing that you too love marichat excites me for the next chapters
Chapters 3 and 4 are Marichat filled 🥰
@@hazeclarke
SPOILER !! 🔥🥳🚨
I finally found time to start it ! I'm 7 months late.. but I'm enjoying at the fullest! This is amazing, Haze! I absolutely LOVE it! ❤ Your voice, the well written dialogues, the writing in general... Everything is amazing! Great job on this! What a shame I couldn't listen to it sooner 😅
ahhh thank you bestie! I'm working on my next audio fic rn actually!
@@hazeclarke Aw that's awesome! Can't wait! 😁 Will it be a series of chapters like My Lady or will it be a one-shot? (And no problem bestie 💓)
There is only one word that can describe this.✨ Masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!✨
Omg thank you! 🥺💖
Oh my goodness Haze....... This is a Masterpiece!
I realized how much i missed these Miraculous Ladybug Audio fics, can't wait for you to continue it!
Omggggg thank you! It’ll be up soon! 💖
Amazing! I really enjoyed it. I love the idea of Adrien trying to know more about Marinette before saying he is in love with her just because she is Ladybug. The lab scene was so cute and the puns are exactly what would Cat Noir say :D Good job Haze
Awww thank you! 💖💖
That was an amazing story, I hope you make a second part soon, I'm really in front of my seat just thinking about it.🤩🤩🤩
It’ll be as soon as it’s done!
I kind of wish this is how the reveal went!
Aww thank you bestie 💖 chapter 2 of this fic is out!
I think we all agreed that your fanfic was beautiful!! I love you captured the emotions and sadness in your story! First off, I love you added a little bit of tikkixplagg moments because we actually need some scenes, especially on the show. Second, I think it made feel heartbreaking is that Marinette feels lonely while Lila is basically taking away all her friends and Adrien is the only one who believes in her which it's very sweet. It basically proves that he stills loves Marinette more than a "friend".
Anyway, I'm really excited to see the next chapter! Btw, I just want to say that you did a beautiful job capturing the characters which it's very accurate to the show. 👏❤
Omg thank you! Oh gosh I love Tikki and Plagg scenes! Adrien is definitely falling for already, even if he’s not aware yet 😌 and thank you! I tried to stick as close as possible to them!
this is so good!! you did a great job bestie!
Thank you bestie!
Woah, this is set in/post Dark Owl?
The premise is really cool, and I really like Adrien acknowledging that he could be projecting what he felt about Ladybug onto Marinette and so he really thinks that through. Man, I can't see what will come next. It really does feel like if Miraculous was a novel!
Stellar job! And the art is really cool as well!
Yes! I’m glad you liked it 🥰
We really out here being given the classic British Bunsen Burner and safety goggles experiments, bet Alix burned the end of a pen
Lmao I was like okay I need Mari and Adrien to work together on something, okay science…. What equipment would they use in French schools? Kim would set his hair on fire these children should not have access to Bunsen burners
@@hazeclarke😂😂😂
I really love it. I can't wait for the next three chapters!!! I was thinking maybe a AU one shot Fan Fiction or maybe some chapters either, be about Bridgette /Ladybug or Felix/Cat Noir has a disability (from the PV Miraculous Ladybug) or either Adrien/Cat Noir or Marinette/Ladybug with a disability. It would be interesting. Maybe the story can be about how the characters got their miraculous (origins)? It's up to you. :) It would be interesting to see how the other characters would react. I always like to share the idea of writing characters representing different disabilities or illness because I believe everyone can learn something new everyday. It demonstrates that it doesn't matter how people are born anything is possible. Anyone can be a hero in their own way. I heard that originally Adrien would have a disability with a cane during the creation of the show, but they changed the idea.
Ooo interesting! I’ll think about it :)
Wow I love this so much it was so cute
Thank you so much! 🥰
This is a really beautiful fan fiction....can't wait for the next one.
Thank you so much! 💖
Dammit Haze!!!! This Audio fic made me squeal out loud..... THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL CONTENT!!! You are very talented!!!!
Ahhhh I’m so glad you liked it!
Wow... I really love your story... I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Thank you so much! 💖
Wow..just wow 👏😍
Puns were funny...
but ALYA
Best fanfic I have ever read
Eagerly waiting for rest of it...❤
Omg thank you! 💖
@@hazeclarke no problem!!
omg its amazing we need a part 2!!!
It’ll be up as soon as it’s done!
Omg love love love it! Can't wait for more!
Thank you! 💖
Wow... Just wow. As soon as you get your PhD, Zagtoon should start a series of books and hire you as a writer.
Omg that would literally be a dream 🥺
Haze this is perfect! I’m really looking forward for the next chapters, and congrats for 10k!!! (now 11k 😆)
aww thank you so much! 🥰🥰💖💖
AHH THIS IS AMAZING!! This is one of the BEST things I have EVER WATCHED! You are SOOOOO TALENTED HAZE! I can't wait for the next part! And I loved it sooooooooooo x100000 much! Also, in this are you leaning towards a mean Ayla? (Yes I love to see two sides of her) If so, here is an idea on maybe how you could redeem her? (If you are looking to redeem her later one) Maybe there will be aologies and so on yada yada yada, but then maybe we can have some Alya - Adrien moments, not as a ship of course, however Adrien going to Alya to ask about Marinette, and then there could be another ice breaker for those two so the redemption of Alya could take place. Of course you don't have to use this!! And again this video was so amazing I loved every bit of it, and you are an awesome narrator haze! Happy 10k
I’m so happy you liked it! 🥰 ah so in the fic, I’m definitely aiming for Mari to be really sad and isolated from everyone and you’ll see it progress more with Alya in the next chapter - by the end of chapter 2, Mari literally will only have Adrien there for her and Alya completely abandons her at the start of chapter three. But I won’t say anymore!
@@hazeclarke Ah I am so excited! I loved it so much, can't wait to hear more!
Great job haze love ur work
Thank you so much! 🥰
AHHHHHHH I love this, Haze!! Great work!!!
Thank youuuu 💖💖💖
This is perfection😍
Aww thank you 🥰
Brilliant love that I wish that was an episode well done Hayes 😇
Awww thank you so much! 🥰
Lol I love how when I need something miraculous related to watch haze always comes up with something.
I am here to provide 💖
This is beautiful Haze
Thank you 😘
This is all we needed sooooooo long ago and it’s setting my expectations for the post reveal in the show so high!!!!!
Loved it 😍 can’t wait for the next part!!! Flirting Adrienette is just unbearably adorable 🥰. I feel am not going to be able to live without the nest part, please!!!!
Awww I’m so happy you liked it! God if the reveal in the show doesn’t live up to my expectations I will be so sad! It’ll be up as soon as it’s done!
I know!!! If that happens I will refuse to accept it as canon and l’ll take your one instead😉😉
We can totally do that bestie 🥰
this is so good Haze!
Thank you so much! 💖
I LOVE it haze, this is awesome. I just can't get enough of it 😆😆
Awww thank you!
Bestie I loved this so much!!!
Already anxiously waiting for the chapter 2, omg
Omg thank you bestie! 💖💖
An outstanding work, Haze! Bravo.
Thank you!
🎊🎉Congratulations on 10.1k 🎊🥳 :)
Thank you! 💖
Just barely got around to watching chapter 1 of ur story right now, been really busy lately, I have to say I really liked it, ❤️ made me tear up a little bit, if only the real show can put scenes like that in it, can’t wait to read chapter 2 😀
Oh my gosh thank you so much! 🥺🥺💖💖 chapter 2 is already up!
AHHHH
AMAZING!
Yes.... Grace thanks for creating thw fanart for this wonderful fan fiction. Yay!!! I was so excited for this sorry I am commenting a bit late but I had to do a long piece of homework and because of that it took long for me to see this but I am absolutely loving it so far. I actually visioned it as like a real miraculous episode and the Adrienette is so cute. I really can't wait to see more of this. :') Did you cry when making this?
Don’t worry about it! I didn’t cry, but I really enjoyed making it :)
wow, you're really good at this. Didn't exspect that your voice fits that well with audio fics. I really enjoyed that video! I look forward for another fanfiction
Aw thank you!
Awwww this was so cute!!! I feel bad I'm a week late on listening to it!!! It was amazing!! Can't wait for the next one!!
Aww thank you bestie! It’ll be up soon! 💖💖
Such a cool chapter Haze. I just love reading fanfiction stories about Miraculous Ladybug, especially ones with identity reveals, Lila getting exposed, Chloe redeeming herself, Marichat moments on the balcony, Marinette becoming Princess Justice, the class apologising to Marinette for believing Lila over her and ones with Adrien, Luka, Kagami and even Chloe defending her and helping her with the Lila fiasco.
Plus this fanfiction story reminds me of my future fanfiction comic based on Miraculous, and that how I'm making what I have for it's script so far to be as perfect as possible, and to try and tie it in with the main series as best as possible. I promise you when it's done you'll want to read it over and over again. Let me know if you want me to reveal one of the lines from the current script in the RUclips comment section as a sneak peek okay?
Double plus, I'm now more excited than ever for the permanent identity reveal in the show. I just hope that Cat Noir discovers that Ladybug is Marinette first, alongside her crush on his civilian self before she discovers that him and Adrien are the same person. Then I want to see them get married, have the 3 kids, the dog, the cat and the hamster named whatever.
Of course I’d love to see some! I’m glad you like my fic!
The book was wonderful I love it can wait for the next one ❤❤❤
Thank youuuu 💖
@@hazeclarke Your so welcome and it was wonderful it was enjoyable ❤
I am just finish this episode and i don't have any word to describe it... its super AMAZING, you are so talent, i can't wait for part 2 and i wish this is a book so i can buy it🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰
Omg thank you! 💖💖 (I have written a book, it’s linked in the description box!)
@@hazeclarke thank you so much
This is so beautiful I wish this happened
Aww thank you!
@@hazeclarke yr welcome
Gurll you did outdid urself. This was stunning. Please keep in mind I have no intention of hurting you and that this is my first audio fic. I have one suggestion maybe try to give more emotions to the sentences. Otherwise I absolutely loved it. Your voice was sooo calming. I want this on Spotify ASAP. The story line was absolutely beautiful.
Omg thank you! As more emotion when I read it out, or more emotion in the writing? I’m so glad you liked it!
@@hazeclarke More emotion in the reading. Your writing spoke for itself and it was amazinggg after all you are a published author I srsly look up to
Got it! My book is linked in the description box 💖
@@hazeclarke ahhhh thanksss
Can't wait till chapter 2
It's so satisfying to see Lila get what she deserves
Haze this was the best audio fic I’ve ever seen adrien is being so cute in it and it’s realistic as well
Thank you so much! I always try to keep the characters similar to in the show :)
;)
When are you doing the next ? I understand that it must take a while to make
I don’t have an exact date yet sorry!
That’s fine bestie you must be so busy
I love this soooo much, cant wait for the rest!
Thank you so much!
Omg Haze, this was beautiful! I loved the Sugarcube part, I could really picture that scene in my mind as something really happening in the show :D but oh lord, if only Adrien weren't so dense in the show, like he actually connected the dots in this fanfic! Thank you for easing my frustration! XD
Anyway, all in all this was a lovely fanfic bestie, can't wait for the next parts :3
Oh and I forgot to say, your voice is sooo soothing, almost fell asleep there :D
Lmao I usually write Adrien as a bit more intelligent. Like he can speak mandarin! He’s not stupid
I’m glad you liked it!
@@hazeclarke ikr, the directors just want to drive us insane istg lol
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK I AM SO EXCITED I AM SURE ITS GONNA BE AMAZING 🥳❤️🥰💕
I hope you like it!
@@hazeclarke ITS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGG AHHHH I LOVE IT 💕💕🤩
Haze! I Haven't Heard It But I am So Excited To!💖 As You Know By Now, I am Also Writing Fanfics So Did The Person who did The Art Do It For Free Or? Also, I Will Put My Thoughts On It After I Read It, Okay?
I’m paying them for it :)
@@hazeclarke Thannks! Haze
100th like :)
Also this is amazing
Edit: I NEED PART 2!!!
Thank youuuu 💖
Oh, I love it❤.
Lol Tikki eating ice cubes of frozen blood! 😂
Also, Alya, how could you do that to me! I've read enough salt fics, but I don't like Adrien, or Alya salt at all! I thought you belived Marinette! But this paves way for Adrienette though....you know, one of my favourite salt fanfictions has Alya salt, but lots of Adrienette.
Also, go Adrien! Help your lady with Lie-la! I'd looovvveee to see her exposed!
In all, I loved this so much! It was really amazing! Can't wait to see the next parts!
The fanart is sooo beautiful! I love that too ✨🥰
She 100% munches on blood 😂😂 Ah yeah it’s set in season 2 rn where Alya is on Lilas side! I’m so happy you liked it!
@@hazeclarke XD, she's super cute! Can't wait to see her go crazy in a few days 😂
Yeah...but I don't think cannon Alya would ever stoop down this much :)
Ah yeah she definitely wouldn’t :)
I'm pretty late about this but congrats on 10K Subs! I just hit 2K so I wish I hit that goal but love the inspiring content! 🙌✨
Thank you! And congratulations! 💖
Thank you for a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it. Maybe even more if you would read it just a little bit slower, like reading a fairyctale to a child.
I only listened to the story without reading the text myself. And I admit you lost me once or twice. But please don't take this wrong. I really look forward to the next parts!
Ah okay! Thank you for the feedback! This was my first time doing anything like this so the feedback is appreciated. I wasn’t sure how fast or how slow I should be going. I’ll slow down for the next chapter!
Congrats on 10k!!!💕💕💕
Thank youuuu 🥰💖
It was really beautiful❤️❤️ i’m excited for next part!!
And i just wanted to give advice so i thought maybe u could give a little bit of pause while speaking like according to the punctuation marks used. Like if there’s a question mark or a full stop then maybe stop for a second and then speak the next sentence😅😅 idk i just thought that i’d let u know.. & i dont mean to criticise or anything .. nd yeah that’s it. I loved it❤️❤️❤️
I’m glad you liked it! And thank you for the feedback! This was my first time doing anything like this so I really wasn’t sure! I’ll do it for the next chapter:)
i just realized the shipping container scene could have contained a SHIP.
😂😂😂
@@hazeclarke I just got to the chemistry experiment part. A LOTTA CHEMISTRY HAPPENED. 😂
Ooooo it did! 😂
This is the best fic i have ever seen
Omg thank you 🥺
@@hazeclarke Your Welcome
I am excited to watch it Fan fic bestie.
I LOVED THIS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you! Chapter 2 will be up soon!
and omg i just saw that you wrote a book in the description!!! it sounds so interesting i'll see if i can order it
@@zvkny omg thank you so much! it would mean so much to me!
@@hazeclarke no problem! also i'll be sure to tune into your livestream today, can't wait!
I don't believe it, yesterday (friday) I did an experiment with Bunsen Burners in Science
Lmao 😂😂😂😂
Honestly, I think Adrien did a fairly good job of not acting out of the ordinary with Marinette. I mean, if I just found out the love of my life is also my just-a-friend, I’d be a blushing grinning mess around them.
Oh god yeah I wouldn’t be able to talk
It was really great 👍 Good job girl 👏🐞
Thank youuuu! 💖
@@hazeclarke 💖
Love this soo much
ur so talented
Aw thank you! 🥰
@@hazeclarke 🥰🥰🥰
I hope you'll make more comics in future