Alright team, what are the thoughts on potentially making Design Season 3 told in third person? The narrative does rather demand it, but it's so different from the previous two seasons (and everything else I've ever done) that it may just be out of place. Let me know what you think on my Facebook page: facebook.com/ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
Scary Story Time With Liam I don't want to spoil anything for those who haven't read the Design series yet, so I'll ask my spoiler-filled question below so people can't mistakenly see it: Hey Liam, I never clearly understood in season 2 if Julie died or not. I know she got basically torn apart, but since subjects don't die easily, did the obliteration of her body truly kill her?
***** Haha, thanks for being so considerate! I shall answer your question bellow! It is very true that it is incredibly difficult to kill a subject. As seen, Julie had her head severed from her spine, and yet was still able to function. That being said, she was absolutely, beyond a doubt, killed by 104. 104 is unaffected by the negative feedback response, meaning she could directly affect Julie's Left Hand parasite. When Julie was torn apart, 104 also flattened her parasite and essentially vaporized it. The obliteration of her body didn't kill her, but that did.
Scary Story Time With Liam another spoiler filled comment: Ah, damn it. I really liked her character. It sucks that she won't be coming back, but oh well.
I don't know what it is, but for some reason this reading scared me more than most. I love the wording and descriptions of this story and I was getting really paranoid for a minute there, good work!
Going through Liam's old shenanigans since Murder Drones needs time Notes about this tale: I seem to enjoy the stories where the danger is uncertain far more. Mah girl simply wanted to watch some TV before going to the afterlife,what is wrong with that? Ok, jokes aside,I think this particular story could've focused more on the stench,it should be far more overwhelming than the sight of the corpse. Other than that,I personally like this one, especially since it doesn't exactly pull off the 'but there was nothing theeeere" trope. The ending is a little ambiguous which helps the story a lot.
Excellent. Natenator is great. He's one of the first creepy pasta narrators I heard. I've listened to almost all of his stories. Thanks for the story, it was excellent for sure
Bro's instinct to not look away was on point, usually its a bad idea to not check your surroundings specialy when killer could be nearby but here it probably saved his life.
So, either the corpse moved itself and the only reason it didn't come out the door was because he was watching it the whole time (And had locked it), or the killer moved it. I think I'll go with the former. Creeepy! Very well described, but I did notice you said 'coughed' rather than 'stammered', which would have fit better with what you were saying. :)
I shouldn't have watched this before bed, great story and narration as always, I wonder what would have happened if he looked away from the door or even didn't lock it.... _I can't wait for another video_
First three words long black hair...well I m scared can't handle it at 9pm...all alone trying to shower NOPE!! Will revisit tomorrow morning surrendered by people at work
hey I just wanted to say I love your voice :-) & even though you have a few Thousand sub"s I really think you Deserve a lot more & be way up top :-D I will certainly share your stories around my family & friends here in the UK :-p keep up the excellent work your doing & looking forward to your next post XxXx
Alora Simkins the body followed him as he ran out the door. The body didn't go outside, but when the police came they couldn't get in because the body was leaning against the door. The police said, "Nothing but the cadavre inside." And "cadavre" means "corpse" in French.
You know what? I’ll bet he killed someone, either someone he knew such as a family member or a woman he met out in public. For whatever reason he doesn’t remember but my theory is that he killed someone.
I hate it when that happens. If I've learned anything from Archer, it's that when they're alive, they're called call girls; but when they're dead, they're called hookers. But look at the bright side. If you buy a rotisserie, get a nice fire going, and add a little spice to her, you could eat for at least a week. Maybe more if you portion the meat correctly.
I dont remember this video, or it being on channel, perhaps its the one with.. well it would be a spoiler. Either way, maybe i just forgot how preview looked. weeeeelll. If i am correct its about the corpse sitting on sofa and dude being scared of it, then he called cops or something, kinda scary to get it popping up in my recomendation.
Jesus thats a good one, still creepy, great writing, to be fair, later ones, that are bigger, like 40 minutes or so, go to the point where they lose me completly. They become not scary, boring even, i am not sure why exactly, some there are repits of old ones, however they are still kinda good. Honestly i werent fan of Creppy pastas, still kinda cringing from them. But having chronical pains i wanted to get some adrenalling and feelings go on, and this storys sometime are able to provide it. Like not only writing good, naration is great, guests too! But also. Sometimes there is editing with pictures, visuals, might not be much, but its enough.
Kimberly Millay Two officers went inside from the back door, while the other two went in from the front (standard procedure when a suspect is potentially still inside).
I was looking at it from a supernatural bent I guess. I never believed there was a killer, at least not a recent one since the body was described as being dried out or whatever.
Ema Skinner Sure sure! SPOILER --- Haha, the officer inside the house announced that the cadaver was leaned against the front door. This implies that the corpse moved from the couch at some point in an attempt to catch the protagonist as he ran from the house. Make sense? :3
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Corpse: "Hey, I was watching that!"
*gets irritated and chases protagonist*
Are we sure it was a corpse and not just an extremely lazy couch potato?
Having a body on your sofa is better than having a body on your bed *shrug*
The info commercial killed her
I was soooo sure the cops wouldn't find anything in the house; boy was I wrong! Amazing story! I love it
Thanks so much! :3
I was thinking the same thing! But holy crap, the actual ending was WAY worse (in a good way). XD
That would almost be worse. Like when you see a spider and look away and it's gone.
Alright team, what are the thoughts on potentially making Design Season 3 told in third person? The narrative does rather demand it, but it's so different from the previous two seasons (and everything else I've ever done) that it may just be out of place. Let me know what you think on my Facebook page: facebook.com/ScaryStoryTimeWithLiam
Scary Story Time With Liam I don't want to spoil anything for those who haven't read the Design series yet, so I'll ask my spoiler-filled question below so people can't mistakenly see it:
Hey Liam, I never clearly understood in season 2 if Julie died or not. I know she got basically torn apart, but since subjects don't die easily, did the obliteration of her body truly kill her?
***** Haha, thanks for being so considerate! I shall answer your question bellow!
It is very true that it is incredibly difficult to kill a subject. As seen, Julie had her head severed from her spine, and yet was still able to function. That being said, she was absolutely, beyond a doubt, killed by 104. 104 is unaffected by the negative feedback response, meaning she could directly affect Julie's Left Hand parasite. When Julie was torn apart, 104 also flattened her parasite and essentially vaporized it. The obliteration of her body didn't kill her, but that did.
Scary Story Time With Liam another spoiler filled comment:
Ah, damn it. I really liked her character. It sucks that she won't be coming back, but oh well.
That wasn't a spoiler
ray p spoiler or not, I'd rather be safe than sorry with these topics
And I thought open- casket funerals were terrifying
That was genuinely scary, which is something not easy to do in my opinion without visuals. And you've done that without much cliche.
Well thank you so much! :D
I don't know what it is, but for some reason this reading scared me more than most. I love the wording and descriptions of this story and I was getting really paranoid for a minute there, good work!
Mikhail Strubler Thank you so much! So glad I could build up some tension for you! :3
I'm alone in my house with the lights off watching this ill see how well that goes
this was absolutely awesome
Uptomyknees So glad you think so! :3
this is why i dont watch tv sounds irelevant but this happens to me all too often
''you got the cadavre lying against your door'' O_O wasn't it on the sofa a few minutes ago?!
Benoit Chantal yes. Let that sink in.
Going through Liam's old shenanigans since Murder Drones needs time
Notes about this tale: I seem to enjoy the stories where the danger is uncertain far more.
Mah girl simply wanted to watch some TV before going to the afterlife,what is wrong with that?
Ok, jokes aside,I think this particular story could've focused more on the stench,it should be far more overwhelming than the sight of the corpse. Other than that,I personally like this one, especially since it doesn't exactly pull off the 'but there was nothing theeeere" trope. The ending is a little ambiguous which helps the story a lot.
I can't trust corpses anymore.
ClaydolTheGreat
Who would trust corpses in the first place
I felt tense as hell the whole story. It's so easy to imagine it all, I kept hoping mc would make it. Pardon me now, going in for more.
this is first I've heard of natenator but I will def be checking his stories out now.
Excellent.
Natenator is great.
He's one of the first creepy pasta narrators I heard. I've listened to almost all of his stories. Thanks for the story, it was excellent for sure
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
I am in love with your stories. You are amazing at writing, dude.
Aww, thank you so much! :D
Bro's instinct to not look away was on point, usually its a bad idea to not check your surroundings specialy when killer could be nearby but here it probably saved his life.
Im willing to bet hes the one who killed her and subsequently forgot for whatever reason.
Already found nate77 but thanks to your guest readings I also found Let's read! guy as well. Lovin' the guest readers though - cool idea.
Shouldn't be watching these with a dark, empty hallway behind me...
That's the only way to watch them, actually XD
So, either the corpse moved itself and the only reason it didn't come out the door was because he was watching it the whole time (And had locked it), or the killer moved it. I think I'll go with the former. Creeepy! Very well described, but I did notice you said 'coughed' rather than 'stammered', which would have fit better with what you were saying. :)
Good narration man. I really enjoy how you read stories, very natural it seems. Keep up the good work.
ReadingOfTheCreep Thanks a lot! :D
I shouldn't have watched this before bed,
great story and narration as always, I wonder what would have happened if he looked away from the door or even didn't lock it....
_I can't wait for another video_
Oh shit! Dead lady chased him, he shouldn't have turned off the TV.
This is one of my favorites of your stories!
This is awesome voice acting and narration 5 stars!
Is I Cool Yet Senpai Liam? ~~:3~~
Btw Awesome CreepyPasta ~~
HAXMiningGiant You could never be uncool, good sir
Nate did an amazing job with the 'Merican accent! Three thumbs up!
SO AMAZiNG THIS IS AWESOME. I might not sleep tonight but that's sooooo worth it!
Well shit... I fucking love this creepypasta!
The Zombologist Haha, great to hear! :D
I actually shared in on my facebook page i loved it so much ;)
Still my favorite narration by Liam. And my fave, Natenator, is on this, too.
Twist ending was nice it really made the story pop
Jack Jack Thanks! :D
OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCK
No, you weren't paranoid sir.
Finally in the under 301 club :)
In all seriousness, finally, a crossover between Natenator and Liam!
You and natanator are my top 2 narrators. And i am terrified of corpses...
Omg. This gave me chills. Fantastic!
Lindsay C. Thanks! :3
Good story.
The chills! All throughout it!
I live in Co Littleton isn't too far from me, that's creepy as hell
man i really dug this one, impressive stuff, youre definitely in my top favs:D perfect4inducing nightmares@.@
First three words long black hair...well I m scared can't handle it at 9pm...all alone trying to shower NOPE!! Will revisit tomorrow morning surrendered by people at work
Wow that twist was really good!!!
I want to give the video a thumbs up. However its at 69 thumbs up. I can not defile that perfect number!
Yea I am childish at times...
Why is it always in god damn Colorado. Never, ever going there. Ever.
Wanted to find this again thankfully found it on first try
hey I just wanted to say I love your voice :-) & even though you have a few Thousand sub"s I really think you Deserve a lot more & be way up top :-D I will certainly share your stories around my family & friends here in the UK :-p keep up the excellent work your doing & looking forward to your next post XxXx
Aw! Well thank you so much, I really appreciate it! :D
I mean better than having a sofa on your body
I'm new to this channel but I subscribe
TheGamerLengend Thank you so much! Welcome to the team!!!!! :D :D :D :D
Man im steal waiting for the scary part in this one. I felt it didn't have a conclusion.
bro it chased him when he ran😨
also there's a wocket in my pocket XD
An even spookier story XD
Wait I didn't get the last part. What happend to the front door?
+Da Noobstas Remember the narrator ran to the front door. That's where the dead body had moved to. It followed him when he ran.
Holy shit, awesome ending!
Good story
So, about the ending. Was it just playing dead, or are we talking demons?
Alora Simkins the body followed him as he ran out the door. The body didn't go outside, but when the police came they couldn't get in because the body was leaning against the door. The police said, "Nothing but the cadavre inside." And "cadavre" means "corpse" in French.
Gripping! This is my worst nightmare.
that was super good
this was a good one nice job:)
Thank you! ^_^
This is some dank shit m8 great job!
***** Wow, to hear that from THE Henry, Lord of all things Dank . . . I'm honored!
Scary Story Time With Liam I forgot to ask you when the next Q&A will be coming, looking forward to it!!
Well, my skin is crawling now.
Who put their body...ON MY SOFA?..
You know what? I’ll bet he killed someone, either someone he knew such as a family member or a woman he met out in public. For whatever reason he doesn’t remember but my theory is that he killed someone.
NICE!
I hate it when that happens. If I've learned anything from Archer, it's that when they're alive, they're called call girls; but when they're dead, they're called hookers. But look at the bright side. If you buy a rotisserie, get a nice fire going, and add a little spice to her, you could eat for at least a week. Maybe more if you portion the meat correctly.
I dont remember this video, or it being on channel, perhaps its the one with.. well it would be a spoiler. Either way, maybe i just forgot how preview looked.
weeeeelll. If i am correct its about the corpse sitting on sofa and dude being scared of it, then he called cops or something, kinda scary to get it popping up in my recomendation.
Oh phew, yeah its that story.
Jesus thats a good one, still creepy, great writing, to be fair, later ones, that are bigger, like 40 minutes or so, go to the point where they lose me completly. They become not scary, boring even, i am not sure why exactly, some there are repits of old ones, however they are still kinda good.
Honestly i werent fan of Creppy pastas, still kinda cringing from them. But having chronical pains i wanted to get some adrenalling and feelings go on, and this storys sometime are able to provide it.
Like not only writing good, naration is great, guests too! But also. Sometimes there is editing with pictures, visuals, might not be much, but its enough.
Oh boy. I wouldn’t want to be that guy
You can't end it there want no we need more
I was confused by the ending. How were there officers inside already?
Kimberly Millay Two officers went inside from the back door, while the other two went in from the front (standard procedure when a suspect is potentially still inside).
Oh duh thanks lol. So the body against the door meant it was chasing our hero i guess. :-P
Kimberly Millay Or somebody (the killer) moved it... ?
I was looking at it from a supernatural bent I guess. I never believed there was a killer, at least not a recent one since the body was described as being dried out or whatever.
We know what happens when we seek truth, but what happens when truth seeks us.
I dont get who that corpse was. Was it just random for the sake of the story? Btw its just like the scp: it moved because he stopped looking at it
Do you makes these stories or u just read them from websites?
im confused and couldent make out the last thing he said xD could someone explain?
Ema Skinner Sure sure! SPOILER
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Haha, the officer inside the house announced that the cadaver was leaned against the front door. This implies that the corpse moved from the couch at some point in an attempt to catch the protagonist as he ran from the house. Make sense? :3
oooh now it does, thanks!
Ema Skinner Yay! Thanks for watching! ^_^
Yay😀😀😀
Uh, i didnt catch the end..???
Chris Markham The corpse moved from on the sofa to behind the front door. By itself, presumably.
+Chris Markham The dead body moved to the front door, which is exactly where the narrator ran to.
The dead body followed him as he ran.
+Zyrus Smith that's so fucking scary