Why don't you love me? Lyrical Oneshot (Marichat. Reveal. Angst) Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic/Audiofic

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  • Опубликовано: 13 дек 2024

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  • @Princess-yj7ko
    @Princess-yj7ko 2 года назад +77

    Thomas Astruc said that there are stuff he can't include in the show, but he would love to, and that lucky for us there are fanfics, and I was like “thank God there is Dawn Chorus” Beautiful as always

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +8

      Awww bless you, that is so sweet!! 💖😊

    • @Sof_rha
      @Sof_rha 2 года назад

      agreed!

    • @myladynoirr853
      @myladynoirr853 2 года назад +1

      Ahh Totally agreed! The fanfictions are sooo cute and I know that they can't include things like this (you get me i guess 😅) in the show. So there goes Dawnn our everyday hero😂💕

    • @SweetSpotPA
      @SweetSpotPA 2 года назад +2

      Who would be anyone to disagree?! Ever since season 4 ended my impatience reached it's limits and I used fanfics to help me stay patient. Channel to channel, texting stories and written stories. Not one channel has come close to Dawn Chorus Writes. Not one channel has been so realistic, include audio, and overall write this good whether it's Jheqia or Dawn. To this day when I want fanfictions, Dawn is the first channel I can even think of. Before I would type "Miraculous One-Shots." Now I type "Dawn Chorus Writes." Dont know if I would stay patient without ya, Dawn! Thank you for your amazing content!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад

      @@SweetSpotPA Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me!! 💖😊

  • @toxic7nitemare
    @toxic7nitemare 2 года назад +50

    I like that Marinette got to tell him everything he put her through both as Adrien & as Cat. 🥺😭 I loved it. Its was so perfect.

  • @wingedcreature126
    @wingedcreature126 2 года назад +36

    “child soldier” or something like that. I LOVE how the author described the trauma and struggles of Marinette/Ladybug and Adrien/Cat Noir. 👏❤️

  • @khamiliaangel7045
    @khamiliaangel7045 2 года назад +5

    Nah yall dont understand😩 I was litterally about to cry on the SCHOOL BUS✋🏽😭 *ON THE SCHOOL BUS* 🤡 I *CANT* with the amount of love and passion that went into this story❤🤧👍🏼

  • @leifjbj
    @leifjbj 2 года назад +12

    Plagg slapping Adrien was one of the best things I have heard in a long while. Also character development!

  • @elizabethphillips2001
    @elizabethphillips2001 2 года назад +18

    This was amazing. The argument hurt my heart 😭 but enjoyed the end💗

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +2

      I know what you mean but it felt good for them both to vent their emotions so they could get to that place... I think that is what the show is missing. 💖

    • @QueenKittenGirl
      @QueenKittenGirl 5 месяцев назад +1

      fair point.. i heard from somewhere idk where .. that sometimes it's good to argue once in a while to let out what needs to be said and then come to an agreement by compromise or finding a way to resolve something

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 года назад +22

    That was so good!!!!!
    This needs to happen in the show!!!!!
    Amazing writing as always Jheqia and Dawn your narration was perfect!!

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 года назад +17

    Let's just say something, Dawn, you are stealing my sleep! 🤣 I litterally can't sleep through the night without waking up with some profound revelation about a new step in the mlb love dynamic, and it's driving me insane! 😊 In a good way. Love your work Dawn, and Jheqia, It gives me so much inspiration! 💖

  • @brighterthansunshine4355
    @brighterthansunshine4355 2 года назад +8

    This art is soooooo cute! I would listen to this fic just because of the thumbnail - it's that good!

  • @aistrakvitochka2326
    @aistrakvitochka2326 2 года назад +2

    What's wrong with you, kitty?! Mari, don't be so Ewell! You hurt him! Save him, please!

  • @danioceanangel
    @danioceanangel 2 года назад +3

    Wow that was definitely very emotional. I was crying, but such a great story. And such a cute ending.

  • @Dances_in_the_kitchen
    @Dances_in_the_kitchen 2 года назад +3

    „He knew it was too good, too perfect to last but….“ 💕💖✨🐞🐾

  • @catdownthestreet
    @catdownthestreet 2 года назад +2

    Emotional is an understatement, lady!
    Seriously I’m sobbing, this has no right to be as amazing as it is AND make me cry like a baby. The wholesomeness is too much for my feeble heart 😭💕

  • @snodly94
    @snodly94 2 года назад +3

    Definitely an emotional roller coaster..in a very good way, beautiful story.

  • @sarahhairston8796
    @sarahhairston8796 2 года назад +11

    This was so well read! The narration was excellent! Oh, the feels!!!

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 года назад +3

      That was simply amazing! The emotion you put into the narration!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +4

      aww shucks, giving the bashful look... its nothing!! 💖

  • @milanieflores6360
    @milanieflores6360 2 года назад +3

    This is really beautiful!! I loved how their identities have been revealed to them...

  • @madilovessinging
    @madilovessinging 2 года назад +1

    This literally made me cry. Thank you so much for your hard work. I always love reading to what you post and I’m always wishing that it could happen in the actual show.

  • @SophieFrancesRadley
    @SophieFrancesRadley 2 года назад +2

    This is to perfect I mean Purrfect !! I absolutely love how the story ❤️🥺.

  • @jennyfleuren5411
    @jennyfleuren5411 2 года назад +3

    Incredible. Absolutely in-credi-ble. I am at a loss for other words. Well done is not even close to a description of how I feel right now. ♥️

  • @SweetSpotPA
    @SweetSpotPA 2 года назад +4

    AMAZING, as usual! I love how emotional this is! It definitely has everything people can imagine. Although, I love to say I have almost the purrfect idea for a series myself. I'm mid-writing it now and this reminds me of it. They both have a little of everything and something quite more. They're both definitely strong, even if it will be my first fanfic. Although I do think I have a good plot idea, nothing competes with this! THIS IS AMAZING.

  • @stelerElk
    @stelerElk 2 года назад +1

    This is my all time favorite reveal, and I have read and or listened to a lot of reveals.
    It's because of the realism that a kids show would hide as to not scar the children watching that this is my favorite.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      Yeah I agree, it is that release in emotion and to show that's its not perfect to start with. 🤔💖

    • @stelerElk
      @stelerElk 2 года назад

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I was also referring to the more rated R side of things you can't have notable death in a kids show after all.

  • @sesskag1000
    @sesskag1000 2 года назад +1

    This is truely amazing! You and your team captured the emotions so well. This is one of the best stories that i have found so far.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      Thank you and this is a one woman team creating the stories with the help of a great writing friend in Jheqia. Glad you enjoyed the story so much.

  • @Phoenix-vc7gp
    @Phoenix-vc7gp 2 года назад +1

    How are all of these videos so good?

  • @bondark2346
    @bondark2346 2 года назад +3

    This is the epitome of perfection

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 года назад +2

    ooh, I'm excited, but I accidentally read the comments and now I'm scared it's going to throw my emotions into turmoil, I'll just have to wait and see

  • @karisabellanfante6256
    @karisabellanfante6256 2 года назад +2

    Adrien . This makes me cry. Love it

  • @QueenKittenGirl
    @QueenKittenGirl 5 месяцев назад +1

    i love this video they should make this an episode in the show maybe

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 года назад +2

    Amazing I cried and laughed great story again as usual

  • @damarissiminic2126
    @damarissiminic2126 2 года назад +1

    I am in tears of joy😢❤i love it😍❤

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 года назад +2

    Why don't you love me
    Ah....Are you there NOT "doing IT' already...
    Thumbnail

  • @VilmaSantos-pd5hl
    @VilmaSantos-pd5hl 2 года назад +2

    I love this! It was so awesome and great. It would be awesome if something similar happened in the show.

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 года назад

    Beautiful! I didn't want it to end!

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 года назад +4

    I've read/watch/hear a lot of places where Chat/Adrien would propose, but the sewers... That's a new one 😂 I absolutely love this, it has the Ephemeral vibe at the beginning

  • @amberflores19
    @amberflores19 2 года назад +1

    Wow this is amazing!
    Was Marinette never good enough for the famous adrien Agreste the great Cat noir?!!
    That hit!

  • @rebeccaatkins2514
    @rebeccaatkins2514 2 года назад +1

    I love this so much, its just so powerful

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 года назад +3

    AHAHAHAHAHAAHHA
    But ton would be too busy planning the wedding to ask questions
    AHAHAHHAHAHAAHHAHA

    • @QueenKittenGirl
      @QueenKittenGirl 5 месяцев назад

      i could not stop laughing during that part of the video 🤣

  • @alibali7184
    @alibali7184 Год назад +1

    epilogue of the proposal is a necessity at this point
    am I right or am I right?

  • @damarissiminic2126
    @damarissiminic2126 2 года назад +1

    😭sooooo beautiful

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 11 месяцев назад

    😢❤❤beautiful, I loved it 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

  • @BlondieLadybug
    @BlondieLadybug 2 года назад +1

    Such a lovely story thank you! 😍

  • @adrien3868
    @adrien3868 2 года назад +1

    Lesson learn, Always listen to plagg when he is serious at least

  • @bappida3091
    @bappida3091 2 года назад

    OMG I started crying.🥺😥. And I am still crying😢😭😭

  • @Liz_Lizzie123
    @Liz_Lizzie123 4 месяца назад

    Me reacting to everything Adrien does in this audiofic : are you actually stupid Adrien. V.s me reacting to marinette during this : tell him girl tell him!!! I am here for you

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 года назад +2

    I think I'm going to cry, 😥, Oh, looks like I already did. 😭

  • @Sof_rha
    @Sof_rha 2 года назад +2

    SO CUTEEEE

  • @rebeccajolley4582
    @rebeccajolley4582 2 года назад +1

    Lovely story

  • @emmatimpson7896
    @emmatimpson7896 2 года назад +2

    yep, emotional turmoil, that's all I can say

  • @adrienbrown438
    @adrienbrown438 2 года назад +3

    4EVER 🧡 MARICHAT 4 LIFE

  • @PassiveHydra972...
    @PassiveHydra972... Год назад

    Dawn can we just both admit that mlb if it wasn't a kids show would be one of the best emotional tramitizeing series's ever

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 года назад +2

    This is one of the best I have listened to in my entire life Thank you😍😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾2029 I’m still pouring tears of joy

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      💖💖😆🎇 Love it!!! Just about to Upload Romeo and his Marinette for tonight - Utter fluff!!

  • @mindlessperson
    @mindlessperson 2 года назад +5

    Kissing in the sewers must be so romantic 🥺

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад

      lol 😆 yeah the smell really adds to the feels

    • @sarahhairston8796
      @sarahhairston8796 2 года назад

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Couldn't we assume they are like... storm sewers or something? And come on! One of the most romantic scenes in the show happens in the sewers! "You and me against the world, milady!"

  • @nothereanymore...
    @nothereanymore... 2 года назад

    This was soo fudging good, I cant stop squealing 😁😁😁

  • @ashthegreat1371
    @ashthegreat1371 2 года назад +1

    Ph I cant wait to wach after school 💖

    • @ashthegreat1371
      @ashthegreat1371 2 года назад

      Omg this gonna make me cry that's how you know it's good writing ✍ when it makes you feel there emotions

    • @ashthegreat1371
      @ashthegreat1371 2 года назад

      I'm not ok lol nah but the end is so sweet

  • @Honor-tt3hs
    @Honor-tt3hs 5 месяцев назад

    I love your comics

  • @NucdnicdCduhjcdnnjdc
    @NucdnicdCduhjcdnnjdc 8 дней назад

    Watch at 2x speed XD it was WAY to much emotion in 30 minutes on regular speed but 2x speed?! WAY TOO MUCH in 15 minutes

  • @marichat99
    @marichat99 2 года назад +1

    😭😭😭😭😭 love it

  • @catsrule3377
    @catsrule3377 2 года назад +2

    Amazing video love me some marichat! ✨💖 Also I wanted to ask is Dawn your brith name or a stage name? because it’s really pretty and I just wanted to know

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад

      Thank you and Dawn is my middle name I go by, apparently I was born at dawn and been up at that time ever since and now I use that time to write. 😊🎇🌞

  • @depressoespresso5904
    @depressoespresso5904 2 года назад

    i need fluff after reading this umay gulay

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 Год назад

    All true😍

  • @WijdeneSkhab
    @WijdeneSkhab 5 месяцев назад

    Well the thing is I personally think both did something wrong because yeah adrien never saw mari as more than a friend but mari never saw car noir as more than a Friend either and cat noir is definitely the true adrien

  • @adenialuthfiarifah7184
    @adenialuthfiarifah7184 2 года назад

    why hasn't the story of Señorita I asked for been released yet?it's been more than 4 months. Was it because Ladrien was hated and disliked that you weren't released? I'm a bit lazy with Marichat.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      I have a list of requested lyricals and a constant playlist of the songs I listen to all the time. I haven't gotten to Senorita yet isn't because it's Ladrien but the whole story hasn't come to me around the lyrics yet. That is how I write. I will be releasing more requested ones during March.

    • @adenialuthfiarifah7184
      @adenialuthfiarifah7184 2 года назад

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I understood.

  • @leifjbj
    @leifjbj 2 года назад +1

    For the algorithm

  • @jeremiahscott2032
    @jeremiahscott2032 2 года назад

    Such a good story!!
    Also ever notice she says he/she when it’s she/he??
    I’m not making fun, just never noticed

  • @archknight20
    @archknight20 Год назад

    how exactly is this marichat?

  • @BudgetBuildingNetwork
    @BudgetBuildingNetwork 2 года назад

    Gosh animate this please

  • @monicasud1
    @monicasud1 2 года назад +1

    5 minutes!

  • @druroojahmed2369
    @druroojahmed2369 2 года назад

    Thats not true ladybug is not just fraction of marinette side its her whole side andwhat about cat noir
    90% of this book is wrong and not true bht good story btw

    • @druroojahmed2369
      @druroojahmed2369 2 года назад

      She loved adrien not cn why cn was adrien true side underneath and don't say anything about his flirting marinette has been a crazy stalker over Adrien too!
      Marinette had everyone but adrien didn't had anyone to talk to
      Both suffered equally

  • @isabelakendall4652
    @isabelakendall4652 2 года назад

    ? ???????

  • @DigimonGaara
    @DigimonGaara 2 года назад

    too much worshiping of marinette in this fanfic :(