The fact they didnt run up to the "old" guns and quickly arm themselves with some juicy MG-42 or a good ol grease gun, or even an emergency axe in a glass hold.. Youd think from all the "technology" theyd have some fireaxes..
@@duckfromhellI mean even if they were still properly maintained until the fall of the bunker, almost 30 years sitting in a musty damp bunker exposed to the elements is not gonna do the guns any favors. The reason most milsurp vintage rifles are in such good condition today is because of constant maintenance
@@gmrules100 What elements? It was literally blocked off,they had to hire someone to dig for them. Has ventilation on the top water animals cant go through it, also the bunker was suppostu be a 1000 years firm yada yada.. Im pretty sure even the germans knew every like 100 feet there would be a fire axe imbeded in glass or a gun etc.. Also the fact that the Dr was a huge monster how did it fit through the Doors? They even said his experiments made thrm into unmovable blobs of jello aka the white death, i get the immortality part of it keeping the brain alive and the brain keeping it alive but I mean.. too many flaws if u think about it.. Also after he shot the doctor wouldnt they put him in a cage it wasnt just the guy from the diary and the doc. It was like 70 people left about 30 40 yrs old.. And it did not mention what happened to all of them we are suppostu think after he shot thr doctor and realised his meds and food kept them from being harmed by the white death that they all became balloons and died or eaten by the doctor.. Story is hella stupid but intresting.. Also some bunker that stand today have power in them but the rare abandoned ones.. And a good question is how would thry keep the power on for a 1000 years if they never knew what nuclear reactors are.. some gas powered generators? Nahhh . Damn i made this way too long, anyway enjoy ur day/night 😃
1) fireaxes don't exist in Germany as they do in the US. A firetruck might have 1 on board, but they aren't stashed in buildings. 2) you'd be lucky if you can distinguish a german from a soviet rifle under all that rust if its been sitting for 80 years
I think one thing that pisses me off about people in these stories is you hire a professional to do a job and they go we really shouldn’t do that and just wait til later. But they’re like na we’re gonna do it now or wait till your gone and then do it. It’s like why hire a professional if you aren’t gonna listen to their damn advice
It's like they're trying to speed run a gruesome supernatural death, it's insane especially when half the time Danica's reasoning is "✨😭I've already missed out on so much✨😭"
Imagine being so obsessed with going into somewhere that you ignore a probably bear sized animal, signs its violent, the fact it probably came from inside where you wanna go in and likely is coming back, it can probably climb and jump considering the hole, and you left your homie in there and it’s your fault he’s in there injured. All you got for him is a “sorry it’s my fault teehee” 😂
It is actually her fault. She was told to wait, and deserved what she got. But her colleague died because of her decision. I have little empathy for her.
So I really want horroble things to happen to the main character, but im afraid they'll happen and she won't ever realize it's all her fault. Like if she dies or gets maimed, but DOESN'T learn a lesson, then she got off too easy. She's unbearable.
Stories about leftover horrors from WWII and space are always my favorite. I always find it amusing that no one in a horror story/movie has ever seen a horror movie... 😂😂😂
That was pretty interesting! I can’t imagine what it would be like to discover a bunker built into the side of a mountain that has stood there since the Second World War. And how were they getting the information? How did the one guy who on his deathbed tell them that Hitler had died? And why did they not share said information? If they’d gotten the heck out of there they may have stood a chance of survival. But then there’d be no story. That’s why probably. Makes sense to me. Thanks MC!
My grandfather was a part of an intelligence agency in Montana and they researched another “Roswell” style craft. It’s always in the most remote places that these people use for their “work”
Wtf, who wrote this? What is the reason why Anslem sacrificed himself for Danica ?? Please explain that… he chose to die so she could live? A woman he not only just met a day before, but didn’t even want to be there in the first place and she had already caused the death of his friend Enzo.. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. Yeah, main character is a selfish pos, but what are the motivations for the supporting characters ?? Why did they all suddenly become so willing to die, especially for someone so selfish
I helped creeps doing edits and he's actually a bigger dude. Around 510 and 340 pounds. Really funny guy tho. His health is getting worse but his deit change has been helping. You got this jarimy
Does the author teach a masterclass on how to write a very hate-able MC? I dislike stories that accelerate that storyline by making the MC just unbelievably stupid
I would think they don't because they clesrly have no idea what makes a good story and author. Just why do they always think they're great when its just such a cop out
Also I don't know if it's just Creeps or what has actually been written but being like Zugspitz when it should be the Zugspitze. If it's the author how stupid can you be to not do enough research to not do that mistake. It just screams that the story is unbelievable in your face when thst shouldn't be your goal in writing
Great story. The main character was insufferable, she genuinely didnt care about anyone but herself at the end of the day but sadly thats how driven people tend to be so it aligned with her character. Was hoping she'd have a horrible end but oh well you dont always get the dning you want😅
This has been a thing lately, this is the first I’ve seen this one but between me creeps, lighthouse, dr creeper, Vidith (the later 2 both had the wife/closet story as a recent example lol), and lastly creepsmcpasta it’s been a thing. Like the other mentioned I could see only so many good stories
I dunno, I've come across some good stories that no one else has done, but don't like the way stories narratored, but highly recommend dark somnium🥰,amazing narrator 💯
The Dark sumnium. he posts tons of unique stories of good quality all nearly over an hour long only downside is he doesn’t upload like every day like once a week but he gets other people to voice the various characters and all would recommend checking out
Holy pooper batman that story was heartthuddingly terrifing jebus trying to go to bed after a 12 hr shift now I gotta watch Kung fu panda or something to even out the nerves lol
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I like these stories and no they don't always make sense but why do people come to listen if they want to pick them apart just go listen to science podcasts
They are called flashlights not torches. At least here in America where it matters. I’m just kidding folks please don’t go off on me. With the direction America is going I would rather live in a more civilized country, basically any country other than America.
The image of the monster carefully writing that last diary entry cracks me up
The fact they didnt run up to the "old" guns and quickly arm themselves with some juicy MG-42 or a good ol grease gun, or even an emergency axe in a glass hold.. Youd think from all the "technology" theyd have some fireaxes..
Yeah a lot of old WW2 shit still kinda holds up, some of it is even still really good equipment
@@grasswithaknife Yeah exactly, some of the relics shown these days still work and fire like theyre brand new from the factory
@@duckfromhellI mean even if they were still properly maintained until the fall of the bunker, almost 30 years sitting in a musty damp bunker exposed to the elements is not gonna do the guns any favors. The reason most milsurp vintage rifles are in such good condition today is because of constant maintenance
@@gmrules100 What elements? It was literally blocked off,they had to hire someone to dig for them. Has ventilation on the top water animals cant go through it, also the bunker was suppostu be a 1000 years firm yada yada.. Im pretty sure even the germans knew every like 100 feet there would be a fire axe imbeded in glass or a gun etc.. Also the fact that the Dr was a huge monster how did it fit through the Doors? They even said his experiments made thrm into unmovable blobs of jello aka the white death, i get the immortality part of it keeping the brain alive and the brain keeping it alive but I mean.. too many flaws if u think about it.. Also after he shot the doctor wouldnt they put him in a cage it wasnt just the guy from the diary and the doc. It was like 70 people left about 30 40 yrs old.. And it did not mention what happened to all of them we are suppostu think after he shot thr doctor and realised his meds and food kept them from being harmed by the white death that they all became balloons and died or eaten by the doctor.. Story is hella stupid but intresting.. Also some bunker that stand today have power in them but the rare abandoned ones.. And a good question is how would thry keep the power on for a 1000 years if they never knew what nuclear reactors are.. some gas powered generators? Nahhh . Damn i made this way too long, anyway enjoy ur day/night 😃
1) fireaxes don't exist in Germany as they do in the US. A firetruck might have 1 on board, but they aren't stashed in buildings.
2) you'd be lucky if you can distinguish a german from a soviet rifle under all that rust if its been sitting for 80 years
One thing I don't like about stories like these is strong-willed people that do stupid stuff that they should know better than
I think one thing that pisses me off about people in these stories is you hire a professional to do a job and they go we really shouldn’t do that and just wait til later. But they’re like na we’re gonna do it now or wait till your gone and then do it. It’s like why hire a professional if you aren’t gonna listen to their damn advice
I hate when the stubborn idiot that caused everyone to die survives.
An odd situation + headstrong person + stupidity = Every story ever
@@mganguly7 yeah you can say that again 👍🏾. I mean don't get me wrong I enjoyed the story overall it's just sometimes in my head I'm screaming WHY!?
It's like they're trying to speed run a gruesome supernatural death, it's insane especially when half the time Danica's reasoning is "✨😭I've already missed out on so much✨😭"
Imagine being so obsessed with going into somewhere that you ignore a probably bear sized animal, signs its violent, the fact it probably came from inside where you wanna go in and likely is coming back, it can probably climb and jump considering the hole, and you left your homie in there and it’s your fault he’s in there injured. All you got for him is a “sorry it’s my fault teehee” 😂
It is actually her fault. She was told to wait, and deserved what she got. But her colleague died because of her decision. I have little empathy for her.
How is this doctor getting medical supplies for like 50 years?
It’s a bunker meant to last for 1,000 years they would have been very well stocked with medical supplies and equipment.
Amazon?
It’s in the script!
Science
he used science to make more science for medical science, it's all in the science if you were sciency and smart like me you'd be know, trust.
Danica, your voice is so deep.
Nahhhh!!! My Boy Enzo deserved better! 😪... honesty everyone did actually!
Imagine three people sacrificing themselves for the same idiot who could have spared them all a painful death if they had just been patient
MC just sits and holds this SUPER IMPORTANT CRAZY info to herself and also still goes in like i guess she just wanted to die
So I really want horroble things to happen to the main character, but im afraid they'll happen and she won't ever realize it's all her fault. Like if she dies or gets maimed, but DOESN'T learn a lesson, then she got off too easy. She's unbearable.
Thank god, I'm not the only one thinking that.
Neither of you are, it’s the classic dumbass protagonist. They just keep doing the stupidest things and everyone else pays the price.
She's Definitely a shite person, probably too ignorant to learn any lesson if it was laid out for her, word for word
Like Jesus christ, every single Fiber of this entire story was her fault
Glad I wasn’t alone in this feeling.
Stories about leftover horrors from WWII and space are always my favorite. I always find it amusing that no one in a horror story/movie has ever seen a horror movie...
😂😂😂
'I Got A Job, Gathering Up Bigfoot Stool Samples For Scientific Examination
...WE'RE GONNA NEED A BIGGER SHOVEL!!!"
This would go so hard 🙏
"ancient rifles" work pretty well for their intended purpose. Ive personally seen it
my first though would have been "imma just grab one of these here, just might come in handy"
Something big, enough to get out a , steel door. Yaa let's go in...
Got my tea, my blankets and my cat. Time to slip away to dreamland. Thank You! ✨🖤✨
Pet the kitty!
Life is good! 👍❤️🥰
Where are you living where it still needing blankets?
I'm like 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
Are you a spinster?
“We were on the wrong side of history” is an answer only someone living in a completely isolated bunker would think.
You know it's a good evening when Mr.Creeps uploads.
Why can’t authors write their protagonist with decent common sense?
Thumbnail Image- An explorer discovers a WW 2 German fortress in a mountain. Contrary to the explorer's belief, it is NOT abandoned.
That was pretty interesting! I can’t imagine what it would be like to discover a bunker built into the side of a mountain that has stood there since the Second World War. And how were they getting the information? How did the one guy who on his deathbed tell them that Hitler had died? And why did they not share said information? If they’d gotten the heck out of there they may have stood a chance of survival. But then there’d be no story. That’s why probably. Makes sense to me. Thanks MC!
8 minutes in and I fully believe the mc is the dumbest person alive
My grandfather was a part of an intelligence agency in Montana and they researched another “Roswell” style craft. It’s always in the most remote places that these people use for their “work”
Thanks Mr Creeps!
enzo is my turtles name lmao
Well. When you are told no, don't proceed.
This was one of the best ones I’ve heard in awhile great story and narration creeps!
i hope he reaches 1mill subs soon
Me too😊
Good premise but I can't stand stupid main leads. It has to be the main story killer
Yea but look at the stuff people do in real life all the time people are stupid
Black Volumes is a future 🐐. Love his stories and narrations
Yessir
Really liked the premise of this one, and had just the right balance of horror and uncomfortable disgust.
Damn why she killed everyone?😭 It’s all her fault. Why did she survived? Nooo
wow ty
“There’s a voice in my head that I don’t recognize, it whispers…Gary”
Man I'm subscribed to your channel and listen to you every night to go to sleep but your videos never pop up in ny home video feed.
I swear she freaking should have said everything she found before they went anywhere
Honestly tho. Doesn't matter how unpleasant talking about it would be, it's far more unpleasant to meet the thing unprepared
Tune in next week for "When You Pee Into The Wind. Run If It Asks For More."
Huh
@@bigmoist2876just ignore it
Golden shower time 😂😂
lol.
I don't even watch the videos anymore. I only come here to see these comments!!!
I love listening to your videos, but the MC repeatedly doing the stupid things at the start made it all feel off. Not gonna stop me from listening tho
Imagine how awful it would be if this story was true.
Wtf, who wrote this? What is the reason why Anslem sacrificed himself for Danica ?? Please explain that… he chose to die so she could live? A woman he not only just met a day before, but didn’t even want to be there in the first place and she had already caused the death of his friend Enzo..
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. Yeah, main character is a selfish pos, but what are the motivations for the supporting characters ?? Why did they all suddenly become so willing to die, especially for someone so selfish
I helped creeps doing edits and he's actually a bigger dude. Around 510 and 340 pounds. Really funny guy tho. His health is getting worse but his deit change has been helping. You got this jarimy
The audio jumps at 22:12
Does the author teach a masterclass on how to write a very hate-able MC? I dislike stories that accelerate that storyline by making the MC just unbelievably stupid
I would think they don't because they clesrly have no idea what makes a good story and author. Just why do they always think they're great when its just such a cop out
Also I don't know if it's just Creeps or what has actually been written but being like Zugspitz when it should be the Zugspitze. If it's the author how stupid can you be to not do enough research to not do that mistake. It just screams that the story is unbelievable in your face when thst shouldn't be your goal in writing
How really really sad story and very well written. Movie material.
The name in the story reminds me of Jake and Amir lol, loved the creepypasta.
Great story.
Need more hour + creeps about mars lol
Bro how cool would this be if this was a concept In the metro games
Danika would have been dropped in the hole and left
Head first.
I heard this last week on another channel
fr who would've thought there isn't an infinite amount of amazing writers, makes me sad
That is not possible in the least
Great story. The main character was insufferable, she genuinely didnt care about anyone but herself at the end of the day but sadly thats how driven people tend to be so it aligned with her character. Was hoping she'd have a horrible end but oh well you dont always get the dning you want😅
What’s with my 3 favourite RUclipsrs all posting the same stories, I’m not happy.
Good stories are hard to find?
This has been a thing lately, this is the first I’ve seen this one but between me creeps, lighthouse, dr creeper, Vidith (the later 2 both had the wife/closet story as a recent example lol), and lastly creepsmcpasta it’s been a thing. Like the other mentioned I could see only so many good stories
I dunno, I've come across some good stories that no one else has done, but don't like the way stories narratored, but highly recommend dark somnium🥰,amazing narrator 💯
Me neither.
The Dark sumnium. he posts tons of unique stories of good quality all nearly over an hour long only downside is he doesn’t upload like every day like once a week but he gets other people to voice the various characters and all would recommend checking out
MR CREEPS FTW!!!
Hnnnnng
Holy pooper batman that story was heartthuddingly terrifing jebus trying to go to bed after a 12 hr shift now I gotta watch Kung fu panda or something to even out the nerves lol
Holy CrapBalls Batman 😅
Wow!!! 🎉
God a can’t stand the main character. So stupid and unbearable. Can’t put myself through anymore.
FOR THE LORE
Hello Creeps and company 🤩🤩🤩🤩
The pronunciation of Zugspitze Broke my German heart man.. atleast try to pronounce it correctly lmao
How are you supposed to say it?
Like Zoog Shptizah? Or Shpitezah
@@tylerthegrimm Z is pronounced like tzz the U is pronounced like a longish uh so zuhg s like (shh like when you want someone to be quiet)pitze
🙌🙌
TSOOOOOOG-SHPIT-ZUH
Wait, was Enzo hott??
Bruh
@@pipthewarrior3738 Rewrrrrr *hiss* swipe swipe Rewrrrrr
@@emilianoorona9890 😞
@@pipthewarrior3738 🧑🦼🦖
@@pipthewarrior3738 🧑🦼🦖
Since when is something 80 yrs old ancient?
>> WWII Germany narrative
>> primary antagonist is named Klein
Checks out
Dyotlav pass??
Spoiler:
I'm glad that she is turning into one of them. Seeing as the whole incident was her fault
Historical fiction is always the best.
Worst protagonist ever.
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August 3rd..@ 36:54 - 'Pic of Dorian Gray Stashed Some
Where in His Room'..!!
* ÖK Fellöw Listener's, Where is Dorian Fröm.
- NO Lööking it Üp.??
Thank Ü Kindly Mr. CP for Your StoryTelling..
Fröm Yöur 👾 Ont, 🇨🇦
Curiosity and 🐈🐈 s huh 😂🤣😂🤣😂
WW2 zombies
Anybody else get vault-tec vibes?
I like these stories and no they don't always make sense but why do people come to listen if they want to pick them apart just go listen to science podcasts
The fewer?😅
Just one of the good handful of words he refuses to, or can't, pronounce properly lol. "Nucular" and "weapontree" are also hard for him
"How do you write women so well?"
"I think of a man. Then, I take away all reason and accountability."
Melvin Udall
Man the character in this story really annoyed me, is strong willed but does very stupid shit over nothin
Writer has a martyr complex at the end. The idea of the story was neat but the actual main character was unbearable.
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First one !
They are called flashlights not torches. At least here in America where it matters. I’m just kidding folks please don’t go off on me. With the direction America is going I would rather live in a more civilized country, basically any country other than America.
Your not well traveled my friend 😅
@@karlbultrowicz932 "WHAT THE FUCK IS A KILOMETER!!!!?"
Ridiculous lame propaganda driven story.
How so? Am like 20 mins in but curious what you mean?
@@davidh7177 to start germans werent forbidden to practice christianity
Women bosses 🙄😂
Thanks Mr Creeps!