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I'm Just a normal kid who wants to be a big creator and an youtuber even though they both are the same] THANK YOU.
HEY GUYS , WHATS UP ITS YOUR BOY SHOURYAAA
THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR WATCHING
IF YOU ENJOYED IT,
MAKE SURE TO LIKE
AND SUBSCRIBE TO MY CHANNEL
LETS HIT A WHOPPING 100 SUBSCRIBERS AT THE END OF THE YEAR
YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME
BYE,
OH,AND ALSO
JOIN MY CHANNEL CHAT
1.so first you log into zoom
2.then you give me your e-mail ID
3.and I will send you a request
4.accept it and then I will add you in the group
yeah exactly
[seems a bit complicated but its fine]