While the words "Quantum" sounds cool it can be overused and used for the wrong things. There was also a lot of mispronounced words. Despite the above it is a good story. I give it a 5 out of 10.
It is a short story. You are trying to shove too much into it, including another Chen. Not known to most is that good short story writing is one of the most difficult kinds of writing. You can't ramble on and just keep adding new things. It devolves into a rambling mess by 12 minutes.
Here a Chen, there a Chen, everywhere a Chen, Chen. Old McDonald had a Chen Ei, Ei oh.
While the words "Quantum" sounds cool it can be overused and used for the wrong things. There was also a lot of mispronounced words.
Despite the above it is a good story. I give it a 5 out of 10.
Yeah, quantum isn't breaking physics.....
@@TheLunacyofOurTimes To true. Oh how do you say that; Quaint - tume or something? . . :-)
Ramirez (rah meer rez), was pronounced as (ram er ez).😂😂😂
I'm going to use it.😂
No Pets?
Not bad, but predictable
Too much dependency on the black hole
It is a short story. You are trying to shove too much into it, including another Chen.
Not known to most is that good short story writing is one of the most difficult kinds of writing.
You can't ramble on and just keep adding new things.
It devolves into a rambling mess by 12 minutes.