Hey CR! I'm not one to usually critique music but I would like to help a fellow artist out. Don't get me wrong, most of the time you're doing great with making your music, but, I'm unsure if you're unaware, at some parts in your songs it's PAINFULLY obvious how out of key a part is. It takes the viewer out of the experience, and I suggest sticking to one key so it all sounds nice. Again, I don't like to make comments like this (usually cause i also suck at music lmao) but I wanna help you out, cause there are some good things in this song. For example, at 1:37, when the drums kicked in, I really liked them. Like, REALLY liked them. I'm unaware if you used a loop or simply made them yourself, but if you made them yourself than great job! I also have the question of this; how long have you been making your own music? I feel a bit lazy right now to find out, but I saw the "sans. cover" video was made four months ago. You're doing pretty great for someone with only 4 months. If you've gone on for longer, that'd be amazing! Apologies for the long comment. This cover is really great but I just wanted to point out a MAJOR flaw you seem to have with every one of your songs. I myself am still trying to overcome some hardships in music making, but after all this time I'm finally beginning to make it out and actually make decent stuff. Thank you for reading (if you cared enough for it) and have a good day! I hope you take into consideration with my advice!
![Charabyss: Frisk. [Undertale]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/5_HUeQyZK-Y/mqdefault.jpg)
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Meus parabéns, o vídeo tá perfeito a música, a tumb meu , muito bom 💀🍷
Hey CR! I'm not one to usually critique music but I would like to help a fellow artist out.
Don't get me wrong, most of the time you're doing great with making your music, but, I'm unsure if you're unaware, at some parts in your songs it's PAINFULLY obvious how out of key a part is. It takes the viewer out of the experience, and I suggest sticking to one key so it all sounds nice.
Again, I don't like to make comments like this (usually cause i also suck at music lmao) but I wanna help you out, cause there are some good things in this song. For example, at 1:37, when the drums kicked in, I really liked them. Like, REALLY liked them. I'm unaware if you used a loop or simply made them yourself, but if you made them yourself than great job!
I also have the question of this; how long have you been making your own music? I feel a bit lazy right now to find out, but I saw the "sans. cover" video was made four months ago. You're doing pretty great for someone with only 4 months. If you've gone on for longer, that'd be amazing!
Apologies for the long comment. This cover is really great but I just wanted to point out a MAJOR flaw you seem to have with every one of your songs. I myself am still trying to overcome some hardships in music making, but after all this time I'm finally beginning to make it out and actually make decent stuff. Thank you for reading (if you cared enough for it) and have a good day! I hope you take into consideration with my advice!
It sounds pretty good.