Hey man, just giving feedback because I want you to grow and knowing what your viewers see is a great way to know how to experiment and see if changing certain things will grow your content. 1. Slow down: examine other youtube pages that have similar content to yours, you're talking wayyy too fast, if your current speed is 100% go down to 70%. 2. try a different thumbnail, not sure what it is about it but it just doesnt seem that appealing to me personally since the desire you are wanting to create with a thumbnail is curiosity 3. this isnt tiktok, you dont have to have scenes that are only 2 seconds in length, that have the next 4 scenes be just as or almost as short, people need to take in information you can change it up were one scene is 5-6 seconds long, than the next can be 3-4 etc. 4. look at your audio settings to see were I can hear your voice more sharp, i havent changed the volume of my laptop and your voice sound quality (clarity) is not quite there, i see you have a good mike so you just need to fine tune your audio settings 5. 0:23 - 0:28 this was a good use of editing, i find the type writter sound effect was a little to prominent and can be softer in tone or simply removed, i found it more distracting me from listening with my full attention to the point you were driving at 6. first 5 seconds were alot to take in, way too much happening at the start hope these help you out, sorry if i didnt watch the full video, i saw your video in my suggested fyp and wanted to check it out since it seemed like you were a new channel, love the effort you've put in, keep up the good work and look at what other channels are doing to boost your quality up! so for example watch a video that has alot of views and break down the elements you would need to edit in order to produce that same type of video: - jot down the scene time duration in three sections (1 most used, second most used and thirst most used) so that could be the majority of the scenes were 4-5 seconds in length - sound design, what kind of background music to the topic being shown - b-roll types - the flow of topic from how the script is spoken to different hooks that could be used like "this is one of the reasons you need to have to eat salmon every 2nd day" or "ill explain what i mean but first let me go back for a moment to cover one important topic"
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Hey man, just giving feedback because I want you to grow and knowing what your viewers see is a great way to know how to experiment and see if changing certain things will grow your content.
1. Slow down: examine other youtube pages that have similar content to yours, you're talking wayyy too fast, if your current speed is 100% go down to 70%.
2. try a different thumbnail, not sure what it is about it but it just doesnt seem that appealing to me personally since the desire you are wanting to create with a thumbnail is curiosity
3. this isnt tiktok, you dont have to have scenes that are only 2 seconds in length, that have the next 4 scenes be just as or almost as short, people need to take in information you can change it up were one scene is 5-6 seconds long, than the next can be 3-4 etc.
4. look at your audio settings to see were I can hear your voice more sharp, i havent changed the volume of my laptop and your voice sound quality (clarity) is not quite there, i see you have a good mike so you just need to fine tune your audio settings
5. 0:23 - 0:28 this was a good use of editing, i find the type writter sound effect was a little to prominent and can be softer in tone or simply removed, i found it more distracting me from listening with my full attention to the point you were driving at
6. first 5 seconds were alot to take in, way too much happening at the start
hope these help you out, sorry if i didnt watch the full video, i saw your video in my suggested fyp and wanted to check it out since it seemed like you were a new channel, love the effort you've put in, keep up the good work and look at what other channels are doing to boost your quality up!
so for example watch a video that has alot of views and break down the elements you would need to edit in order to produce that same type of video:
- jot down the scene time duration in three sections (1 most used, second most used and thirst most used) so that could be the majority of the scenes were 4-5 seconds in length
- sound design, what kind of background music to the topic being shown
- b-roll types
- the flow of topic from how the script is spoken to different hooks that could be used like "this is one of the reasons you need to have to eat salmon every 2nd day" or "ill explain what i mean but first let me go back for a moment to cover one important topic"
Thanks for all the tips, Johnathan! The goal is always to improve so I appreciate you taking the time to write this out!🫡