POOR NIC:C it made me cry when nic was like "run Jen" he was like ready to sacrifice for her... But Jen....did not even stop his boy from killing nic...
Not being rude at all, But I think Jen was pretty much stupid, she shouldn’t stop her “boyfriend” to kill Nic, like he said “run Jen!” If i was Jen I’ll probably broke up with Ryder... (Kind of my opinion sooo-)
@@racquelchua3277 yea, besides, I felt like Ryder liked her for her looks cuz in the beginning when they just met he was like “wow you’re more beautiful in person” I still loved it them just not the part when they killed them ;-; and also when nic said “your so useless” made me mad-
I honestly don’t think Jen deserves a happy ending because one second she’s with that Red haired guy the next second she replaced him and just betrays him.. edit; why did I not expect people ranting about my comment
I mean like the title is not actually related to the storyline so that’s something you can work on. Other then that, I think this mini movie is really impressive. 😁
Grace: NO, you can’t hate me, your my only friend! Nic: we were never friends Me: wait..... if she considered nic as her friend then why did she call him a loser? 😑🤷♀️
Me the whole time after Ryder pronounces his love: “WHAT ABOUT FRICKING NIC, WHAT ABOUT HIS FEELINGS” Also Me at the end reveal: “Well crap, that was unexpected” Non important edit: WHY IS THE THUMBS UP BUTTON AT 100, THAT NOT SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH
I Wish There was a part 2 and the Red head Boí revived and the purple girls boyfriend Cheated so she and the Red head Boí get together !! Lol but you decide :))
Sorry but can you plis read my comment I’m not asking you to like it I just want to clear a phew things up but it’s up to up to you you don’t have to read it if you don’t want to
I honestly think it was good at first and all of a sudden it got ruined because the red haired guy was so nice and purple hair girl just smiled while he died and the people were really kind to her
I honestly rlly like it when Gacha has these plot twists at the end but at the same time most of them get on my fooking nerves bec the 2 main stars never end up together it makes me so mad I feel like I’m not even a alive anymore 😔😭😃😁
How tf did she forget about him and date another dude?! I'm so mad rn imma forget i ever watched this video, its all that dumb vampires fault he ruined my ship😭🙄
My criticism towards this: • I really liked the story at first but then it just got complicated towards the end. For example, If Grace's character was meant to be bad-good-bad, I think you should've transitioned her changing slowly and not so sudden so that it comes out more realistic. (Though I would've loved a spoiled brat being bestfriends with a mature girl.) Another example.. For me, the sort of love triangle between Nic, Jen, and Ryder would've have been interesting. (Being myself though, I wish she ended up with Nic 😭😭. You showed us more of Nic and Jen than Ryder and Jen which of course made us ship Jen and Nic more because we saw more of their point of view.) • Though some authors make unexpected plot twists that sometimes make the viewers hate on them for a short while, they end up loving the story anyway because it was really interesting and one of a kind. Unfortunately, I leaned on not liking this more. I really think you should work on your plot/storyline developing. • I think you should've thought of a better title since the story doesn't really revolve on "the poor girl" only. Side comment: • Don't worry though, I do appreciate the fact that you put in great effort and time to make this video for your viewers to be entertained. It's not easy to make a gacha video nor think of a story worth watching/reading. It's good to add your own touch of style in your stories but please do think what's best for your viewers. *Note: Don't go hating on me in the comments. This is my opinion. Some would agree and some would disagree. I commented this so if the author would ever see this, she would know what to improve on and would help her to become better than she already is.*
I really thought she liked nic but her boyfriend-_- killed him I did not like her boyfriend. I liked nic more,. no I do not like him like as my boyfriend ,because i am lesbian!😑🙂🙃
I love this,I loved the twist,cuz in a lot of gacha lifes,at this type of situation,I mean like killing ur ex crush,the girl will always back off and actually try to save her ex crush but in this one,the girl actually killed him,I love this a lot thx
I saw the two first comments say stuff about nic and Ryder and I’m laughing, could you make a part two of Jen and Ryder or is something gonna happen between them or what?
Aw, I thought she was gonna be with Nic, since Nic loves her so much TwT But I also ship R to her, and I ship Grace to no one QwQ This GLMM was good BTW
What the heck did I just watch- the storyline doesn’t make any sense, first we have the clichè of the poor girl with the ill mum hired as the rich boy bodyguard, but it continues because the mom dies and the dad appears out of nowhere, asking her daughter to live with him, and PLOT-TWIST: the dad actually lives with vampires and their job is to murder people. Why- Grace is useless for the plot, and doesn’t have any significant role. And the fact that Jen AGREED to murder the boy that she made the best memories with is heartless. Nick feelings are thrown in the trash. She totally forgot about him, she was the fakest of the friends. Not to mention that you can clearly see that one of the vampires is an uwu soft boy. Work on the logic of your storylines, darling.
Not trying to be rude at all but I having a fill the vampire dude might hurt Jen and nic never died and then Jen gets together with nic: you should make a part 2!!!
Eh I kinda don’t like it cuz u ruined my ship :( I was hoping for a love triangle like she likes Nic & The Vampire Boy (Forgot name) and it’s like a love triangle Edit: THIS IS MY OPINION SO PLEASE DONT HATE ON THIS COMMENT
Jen: I love mic!
Me:ship!!
Jen: I love Ryder now!!
Me:o-oh ok..
Jen:LETS GO KILL NIC AND HIS FAMILY!!
Me:WOAH WOAH AGRESSIVE MUCH?!
Yeah
XD
I was like d-dude srs AND JEN DIDNT EVEN CRY FOR THE EX LOVE OF HER LIFE
yeah >:( like she really left them for him....
:-:
IKR RIGHT I WAS LIKE OH I’M GETTING MY SLIPPER
dads account (i’m young)
I feel like Gachatubers are against me because my ships never sail-
*AT ALL-*
SAMEEEE ¯\_ಠ_ಠ_/¯
Fr tho
IKR
FOR REALLLLLL
IKR
POOR NIC:C it made me cry when nic was like "run Jen" he was like ready to sacrifice for her... But Jen....did not even stop his boy from killing nic...
and MAYBE bc he called her WEAK XD
yea
Maybe because he when right once he meet her he called her weak and can’t be his bodyguard
@Camila Valladares no
@Tawanda Bolden nic is not poor, he rich boi
"That robot was expensive"
That's exactly what I said when she decapitated it. That's just money gone down the drain..
Me to.......
@@Shellshocker60 get it in
I didn’t really like how they killed the Millers-I wanted Jen to be with the boy that said he loves her-BUT the storyline was nice!
Yea I didn’t like that eitherrrr
Same
Same
same i didliked it
I didnt like the fact she killed nic-
And by a turn of events people.... Nic is ded. He died from the love of his life. WHAT A TURN OF EVENTS COME FOR MORE SO!
I am sad-
Me see comment *
Clicks off
Nic ded? Ok
It’s funny how she’s like did you hear dat when she pulled his hzor🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
i know right part two pls i want r to cheat and nic to aake from deafpls
When she kissed him (Ryder) MY HEART BROKE!
She didn’t end up with Nic.. 😔😭
yesh ik.-.
@@i_Speak_Facts Me or the Creator?
Not being rude at all, But I think Jen was pretty much stupid, she shouldn’t stop her “boyfriend” to kill Nic, like he said “run Jen!” If i was Jen I’ll probably broke up with Ryder...
(Kind of my opinion sooo-)
true
Ikr!
I don’t like that vampire boy, it was practically FATE for Nic and Jen to be together
@@racquelchua3277 yea, besides, I felt like Ryder liked her for her looks cuz in the beginning when they just met he was like “wow you’re more beautiful in person” I still loved it them just not the part when they killed them ;-; and also when nic said “your so useless” made me mad-
gacha logic lmao
ROsE NOTICED Me
Hiii😊✨
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Eeee
Why we sayin eeeeee
hqnako -kun cuz why not?
"I'm still a piece of garbage"
Yes, we all are😌✨
Fax😂✨💓❤️🦋
Uh huh xp
@@rosiehere2815 did u mean fack---- um
jenna ʕ•.•ʔ indeed we are :)
@@val-gal it means facts lel
Fax
Who else wanted her to go out with red head 😭😭
ME!
ME I LITERALLY HATE BLUE DUDE
Me when it finished: "... Okay then.... That was a lot for such a short title... wasn't expecting that...
Bruh one minute she likes Nic and then the next she likes Ryder
Me: wait a damn minute-
EXACTLY!!!! IT IS SO STUPID! Me: JUST PIC ONE DAM
I stole ur Tangerine like wtf
Lol yeah
lol ik she could've picked Nic.
I dont know in my opinion.
Well they were apart for a year and during that here she fell in love with Rider so it can't make sense
Wow that was a lot of plot twists I love it
Kinda feel bad for nic tho-
You know it’s a good story if you sympathize with a character 😌
Celeste Fiery Hiii Celeste!!!!how have you’ve been?
Hii! I’ve been good 😊
How about you?
Celeste Fiery I’ve been good😊😊😊
Good to hear :)
Yes so true so true🙂😐😎😌
I honestly don’t think Jen deserves a happy ending because one second she’s with that Red haired guy the next second she replaced him and just betrays him.. edit; why did I not expect people ranting about my comment
Well to be fair it was a year and a year is plenty of time to move on from someone
@@geothegrimreaperlucarioshi6319 yea, but she literally just left him for another guy without even saying anything
@@basiclybops5017 fair point 🤣
Bruh, ikr
They were never dating you idiot
That was a HARSH ending... O.O They all ded now... so damn complicated... my head is gonna go “KABOOM” Oh nevermind it just went KABOOMS
Wait but she liked him now she likes someone else so quick in my opinion that’s a little rude but like
you were right
U right
Didn't it say that she caught feelings over a year idek if that long but..... heh
It didn't say how long they have been living together could be a year Wich is a good time to move on
IKR I don’t like her anymore :(
Me at the first: wow I ship them
Me at the end: wow what a plot twist at the end you have there 😂
Same
Agreed
Dg the EU and
I mean like the title is not actually related to the storyline so that’s something you can work on. Other then that, I think this mini movie is really impressive. 😁
True
@Kiera Glaza This person wasn’t criticising the creator at all, they were just telling the pros and cons so no need to be rude.
@Kiera Glaza Uhm... It's called constructive criticism.
@Kiera Glaza Sorry if I came off as rude, 😞 but next time, think before commenting.
@Brown Suga Oh okay then-
Me:did jen just kiss his mask-
Also me: what about nic
*Not hating
Grace: NO, you can’t hate me, your my only friend!
Nic: we were never friends
Me: wait..... if she considered nic as her friend then why did she call him a loser? 😑🤷♀️
That's normal, I call my best friends losers :>
@{Pøtatø Head} I do the same with my friends it's a joke between us
Hatred
I CALL MY BOOTIFUL FRIENDS LOSERS SO WHY SHOULD SHE NOT U-U
@@sashapoopypants1616 I DO DA SAME GURLLLLLL Ú
Me the whole time after Ryder pronounces his love: “WHAT ABOUT FRICKING NIC, WHAT ABOUT HIS FEELINGS”
Also Me at the end reveal: “Well crap, that was unexpected”
Non important edit: WHY IS THE THUMBS UP BUTTON AT 100, THAT NOT SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH
Same
Meh too-
Bruhhh Same
Lol I was the same
the likes for this comment is at 130 and i dont wanna mess this up
I Wish There was a part 2 and the Red head Boí revived and the purple girls boyfriend Cheated so she and the Red head Boí get together !! Lol but you decide :))
Sorry but can you plis read my comment I’m not asking you to like it I just want to clear a phew things up but it’s up to up to you you don’t have to read it if you don’t want to
That's what I wanted too sama
I love that ending part where it says I am still a piece of garbage
Jen and Ryder: kisses*
Dad: WoOoAaAaH HELL TO THE NAW
there was so many plot twists omg I can’t😭😭 but why you gotta do nic like thattt
I honestly think it was good at first and all of a sudden it got ruined because the red haired guy was so nice and purple hair girl just smiled while he died and the people were really kind to her
This is the best glmv I’ve ever seen! And I wish I had her outro
The intro music doe so relaxing 😌
“I’m sorry but we’re going to use you”
“It’s okay”
Ok wtf-
Uhhhhhhhhhh
What time
Yeah- using ur own CHILD to kill a innocent MAN/TEEN yes, such a good father, very good. ;-;
I would've said no and run away
@@im.just.a.girl. 19:10
Loving the out-tro! ❤ just for that, I'll sub! 😊
I feel bad for Nic...
Like if u agree.
I-i-i-i-im mad.
I WANTED STRAWBERRY TO BE WITH PURPLE HEAD>:(
WHY DID SHE LOVE SOMEONE ELSE NIC AND HER WAS THE PERFECT SHIP 😭 WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
*no offense*
you're right
*Ryder and Jen are together*
*overprotective dad mode on*
WOAHHHHH WOAHHH STOP RIGHT THERE YOUNG MAN
Me: 😂😂
THIS IS THE FIRST GACHA THAT IS ACTUALLY REALLY REALLY AWSOME
*Im not crying, nope.*
yea neither am i....
[Vamp•ire] 🥺😅
@@rosie_playz2006 IM SO SAD.. THAT THAT NIC DIED AND DIDN'T END UP WITH HER I HATE HER TOO BECAUSE SHE DOESNT LIKE HIM IMMA CRY
I honestly rlly like it when Gacha has these plot twists at the end but at the same time most of them get on my fooking nerves bec the 2 main stars never end up together it makes me so mad I feel like I’m not even a alive anymore 😔😭😃😁
Oml same :'DDDDD
I know how you feel 😔
Is it bad to say this is how my nightmares are CREATED ;-;
Mae Jade Conde nope
Ik I'm lost @n@,
Wait-sk SKKSKSKSK so I shipped Jen with the wrong person the whole time-honored wOaH-
OML THIS IS SO AMAZING DUDE ITS SUCH A ORIGINAL IDEA ;^;
ISTG- TEACH ME HOW'S YOUR MIND SO CREATIVE AAAAAAAAAAA
I don’t agree with THAT story
Same
Agreed my ship was ruined and in the end they didn't even be friends atleast NIC DIEEEEEEDDDD TnT
NIC DIED THAT WAS THE MOST TRAGIC PART
@@XXXTenatcion4life Yup;-
@@XXXTenatcion4life The Part when nic died i was so triggered ;-
The video its soo super good so im goin sleep good night for you!
Good night
@@user-li3yy2be7v good night
I mean...I should be sleeping rn but...
WOOOOOAH THIS WAS JUST- I CAN'T EVEN EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS GLMM I-
Me the whole way through: What? Huh? Okayyy.. I'm confused? 👁👄👁
No hate 🙂✌🏻
Same
Me too
HEY I THINK IT'S AWASOME!!! i respest that you don't like it and that's ...ok
Leda Korsukewitz she likes it she was just confused :)
@@tsukkithedino6368 ye
Shes homeless and she has a phone*
Gacha logic: IM HERE BABY
I actually shipped nic with jen but at the same time MY OTHER SHIP SAILED
Tysm for da like :D
Haha true they deserved it
I shipped nic and Jen and I still do ;-;
{[𝓐 𝓼 𝓱 𝓵 𝓮 𝔂]} what did I say on my comment, get your crap off of comments
There story concept is amazing! And also I love the characters!
This story is the best out of all that I have seen in the gacha world 👉🏻👈🏻
How tf did she forget about him and date another dude?! I'm so mad rn imma forget i ever watched this video, its all that dumb vampires fault he ruined my ship😭🙄
SAME!
meh it was a good story
My criticism towards this:
• I really liked the story at first but then it just got complicated towards the end. For example, If Grace's character was meant to be bad-good-bad, I think you should've transitioned her changing slowly and not so sudden so that it comes out more realistic. (Though I would've loved a spoiled brat being bestfriends with a mature girl.) Another example.. For me, the sort of love triangle between Nic, Jen, and Ryder would've have been interesting. (Being myself though, I wish she ended up with Nic 😭😭. You showed us more of Nic and Jen than Ryder and Jen which of course made us ship Jen and Nic more because we saw more of their point of view.)
• Though some authors make unexpected plot twists that sometimes make the viewers hate on them for a short while, they end up loving the story anyway because it was really interesting and one of a kind. Unfortunately, I leaned on not liking this more. I really think you should work on your plot/storyline developing.
• I think you should've thought of a better title since the story doesn't really revolve on "the poor girl" only.
Side comment:
• Don't worry though, I do appreciate the fact that you put in great effort and time to make this video for your viewers to be entertained. It's not easy to make a gacha video nor think of a story worth watching/reading. It's good to add your own touch of style in your stories but please do think what's best for your viewers.
*Note: Don't go hating on me in the comments. This is my opinion. Some would agree and some would disagree. I commented this so if the author would ever see this, she would know what to improve on and would help her to become better than she already is.*
but she was the poor girl and everyone around her was rich so the title was good
The end had me laughing 😂😂😂😂😂 I love her dad. His face said "There shall be no kissing in front of me boi"
This was amazing!!!! I’m gonna sub!
AHHH FIRST °sniff!° i wish
First!!
To like my own comment 🤫
🤣
XDDDD
Lol
Good job
👁👄👁👌
These are one of the best GLMM I’ve watched!
is it just me or do i like videos before i even see or watch them 😭✋
i love the end “I’m StILl PeACE Of GaRbAGe
Same 😌😎
I really thought she liked nic but her boyfriend-_- killed him I did not like her boyfriend. I liked nic more,. no I do not like him like as my boyfriend ,because i am lesbian!😑🙂🙃
Nice
Got my respect
🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈🏳️🌈
Cool! I respect You :d
I dont see much people doing lesbian comments on straight videos...
But its awesome to see comments about it! ♡
Im a lesbian
This is the best glmm I have seen in years
i liked the story line cuz i thought it was gonna be like every gacha story but ye this was amazing and love ur outro love
Legend says that the "father" chased him for years and years until they roam da whole planet °>°
R: "Sorry love"
Jen's mind: "AYO PA WE GOT A KEEPER"
ive seen your tiktok edits but didnt know you had a channel im so happy :)
I love this,I loved the twist,cuz in a lot of gacha lifes,at this type of situation,I mean like killing ur ex crush,the girl will always back off and actually try to save her ex crush but in this one,the girl actually killed him,I love this a lot thx
I like how blondie and red hair where fighting and then all the sudden
"Hey wanna get coffe"
Or somethin
And her
"Sure!"
oop-
me: volume all the way UP
the glmm: no sound the whole way
the ending: IM STILL A PIECE OF GARBAGEE!!!
me: HOLY CRAP-
How beautiful is your intro🥺💗
IM IN LOVE WHIT THIS OMGGGGG THIS IS SOOOOOOOO GOOD U GOT A NEW SURCRIBER THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!
I saw the two first comments say stuff about nic and Ryder and I’m laughing, could you make a part two of Jen and Ryder or is something gonna happen between them or what?
:O idk
:O idk
Aw, I thought she was gonna be with Nic, since Nic loves her so much TwT
But I also ship R to her, and I ship Grace to no one QwQ
This GLMM was good BTW
IKR IT TOOK A TURN
Wow i really love how the vampires cares about their health against corona virus so heroic *SnIFF*
I can,t watch this with out tears I-
If you want can you do like bloopers if there is none then that’s fine but like it would be funny👄
I feel lots of pity for nic because he loves her while she treat him like a garbage at the end.... But nice story but sad NIC:(
Ooh I like your intro and your video new sub
Edit:I guess I’ve been subscribed but I love your videos
Bruh this is like A GIGANTIC PLOT-TWIST LIKE FR THO📌📍
What the heck did I just watch-
the storyline doesn’t make any sense, first we have the clichè of the poor girl with the ill mum hired as the rich boy bodyguard, but it continues because the mom dies and the dad appears out of nowhere, asking her daughter to live with him, and PLOT-TWIST: the dad actually lives with vampires and their job is to murder people. Why-
Grace is useless for the plot, and doesn’t have any significant role. And the fact that Jen AGREED to murder the boy that she made the best memories with is heartless. Nick feelings are thrown in the trash. She totally forgot about him, she was the fakest of the friends. Not to mention that you can clearly see that one of the vampires is an uwu soft boy. Work on the logic of your storylines, darling.
At least the “UwU soft boy” didn’t literally dress in skirts!
The.Og.GachaGurl • yes, I guess you’re right ahaha ;)
Early can u pin me for no reason pls :> ILYSM!
Alec_Robloxroleplays GLMM YT I heard if you type three you tubers name you will get pinned
@@thecowcarton4744 i dont believe things like that
Oop
Oh
Owo
Love your outro gurl😍!
Haiii!!! You are really AMAZING i subbed like three or something years idk but yeah :) 😊
Not trying to be rude at all but I having a fill the vampire dude might hurt Jen and nic never died and then Jen gets together with nic: you should make a part 2!!!
I really didn’t like the girl she is just idk I just don’t like her
same
The poor one
cause she just killed the boy and didn't even felt guilty ._.
-,-
Wow!! Just wow 💖💖 so goodd! New sub.!! 👏👏
Part 2 like boom they survive or something idk it would be so cool!
me: nic come on confess your love to jen
Jen: bye i dont love you anymore
R: your mine
me:I hate you R you ruined my ship wirh nic and jen
Eh I kinda don’t like it cuz u ruined my ship :( I was hoping for a love triangle like she likes Nic & The Vampire Boy (Forgot name) and it’s like a love triangle
Edit: THIS IS MY OPINION SO PLEASE DONT HATE ON THIS COMMENT
I guess but it’s her choice just because things don’t go your way
Dude I’m crying from how funny this is and it’s 4am
Me: gurl I feel you I'm also poor but not like that
Btw your the only gachatuber that I watch that isnt cringy😃👍
NOOO PART 2 PRETTY PLEASE OMG NO I LOVED THISSS
Ahahaha i like the last part "Im still a piece of garbage" XD
pt 2???? :PPPPPP dis is great, I love it. xD
You don't have to tho
do it in 1 years maybe? XD[I've waited 1 years before for just ONE ep of a series I was watching to come out ;w;
I love this video, kinda wish it was a series 😂
It's just total story twist, but I liked it as it was not the same type of theme among other glmm❤️💙❤️💙
I'm super late watching this, but I'm just gonna say I love your content wish you all the best Rosie 😁
I am addicted to your storys
I feel dad for nic😭😭😭😭but I loved the video 😘
Me with kids: eat up or the food will eat you (another death threat blabla)
The kid: 👁️👄👁️
Omg why am I...
Crying with tears of sadness and joy lol
OK HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH SUCH A GOOD PLOT TWIST LIKE VUHJBK