He wouldnt have a light up fist as a trainee. None of them would. It only goes to one selected warrior who earns the right to fight for it. Small detail that messes with your story
Wtf I literally grew up with a Justin Waters who was an actor type, that’s funny, I prefer your names even though I haven’t seen the original movie. Your story was compelling and your character did have a good character arch. Submit your script to Disney….don’t just wait and hope to get found.
STIMULUS is what he is, he knows about the marvel characters but he has creative freedom and he decided to change the names of those characters, also he is an aspiring writer
The Iron Fist is a product of its time from someone who capitalized on orientalism and the whole kungfu/Bruce Lee exploitation era. Even in your story (which is COMPLETELY better than Netflix's version) there's ALOT of cultural mistakes that's being made that makes no sense... but overall a good try 7/10 lol.
He wouldnt have a light up fist as a trainee. None of them would. It only goes to one selected warrior who earns the right to fight for it.
Small detail that messes with your story
well yeah, I took some liberties with that. I mean, I even changed all the names of the characters
Great video, thanks for posting. Love how you provided the tracks but I don't see the one you use starting on the 32 second mark
oh that's just some synth chords I added
nice to see you uploading man, great content ;D
I don’t know if this was exactly what I was looking for but I enjoyed it none the less.
I can't even ... man thanks so much for sharing :)
Wtf I literally grew up with a Justin Waters who was an actor type, that’s funny, I prefer your names even though I haven’t seen the original movie. Your story was compelling and your character did have a good character arch. Submit your script to Disney….don’t just wait and hope to get found.
This is the best thing I've seen this year
I'll take it
You'll take it??? What more do you want???
I mean it's better. Still, the lore is all messed up. Don't know if this is some kind of joke or not.
bro, c'mon
We miss your stimulations!
Watchmen is FANTASTIC!!!!!
Did you read the original?
@@STIMULUSVIDEO I have.
So to be better you need to play with yourself
This was funny as shit!!!! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Well done man....
Great attempt! 🙌🏽🙌🏽
You have great content, to grow a channel you need to collaborate with other youtubers, good luck.
why this guy has no Instagram??
I do it's stimulus.video
actually diddnt know iron fist at all. But really ejoyed listening to your story :D
NandoVMovies best you to it 😂 but still dope
This was amazing
I appreciate the attempt.
God no I think this guy doesnt know iron fist and actually is writting it awfully
STIMULUS is what he is, he knows about the marvel characters but he has creative freedom and he decided to change the names of those characters, also he is an aspiring writer
The Iron Fist is a product of its time from someone who capitalized on orientalism and the whole kungfu/Bruce Lee exploitation era. Even in your story (which is COMPLETELY better than Netflix's version) there's ALOT of cultural mistakes that's being made that makes no sense... but overall a good try 7/10 lol.
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